Kaisa ye Pyar hai - part 16 page 60 16/05/2010 - Page 2

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awesome cs n mindblowing update!!!!
all the characters were awesome......
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nice start..!
i'm def up for reading mayur...
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Now aage

RV and sheena are Nupur's class mate ,and RV likes Nupur always has an evil eye on her.

Nupur is very beautiful aur wo bahut hi traditional hai,very simple aur sabki bahut help karti hai

She is intelligent aur study me bhi bahut achhi hai isliye sheena usase bahut jalti hai,Suhani bhi nupur ke jaisi hi hai bahut hi simple aur traditional wo dono bahut ache dost hai aur unhe kisi aur ki jarurat hi nahi padti hai .

Diya,gunjan aur benji bahut ache dost hai.Gunjan ke do suhani ko bhi jante hai aur nupur aur suhani in 3 ko.

This 3 calls nupur and suhani as Di.

Suhani aur nupur class me hai jab RV unke pas aata hai :Aur jane man kya kar rahi ho

Nupur : behar hoga agar tum apna kam karo mujhe tumase bat karne me koi dil chaspi nahi hia

RV: par mujhe to hai na,aaj dekhata hut um mujhase bat kiye bina ghar kaise jati ho

N is scared she knows agar bhai ko pata chala to for sure RV is gone

And she is scared kyonki RV se ulajhane ki himmat kisi me nahi hai,he is bigadi aulad of the big industrialist.

Suhani ko samajh aa gaya hai ki nupur kis uljhan me hai.

Suhani calls mayank : Bhai aaj aap humlogo ko college se pick kar loge kya?mujhe thodi tabiyat thik nahi lag rahi hai

Mayank : haan suhani main pick kar lunga par tujhe kya hua hai?tabiyat thik hai na main abhi nikal raha hut um tension mat lo

Suhani : nahi bhai kam khatam karke aana main thik hu

Mayank : kam tumase jyada important nahi hai main bus thodi der me nikal raha hu

SHEENA and RV (friends –EVIL) they are talking in front of Nup and Suhani

Sheena :RV achha kiya tumane mujhe to vaise bhi ye gawar middle class ladkiya pasand nahi aati hai ,ye nupur aur suhani they are so middle class u know

RV - haan babe bat to sahi hai par nupur ,man to karta hai ,,,,,,,and he gives a evil smile

Sheena : mujhe to ye suhani bhi pasand nahi hai bus mayank ki wajah se ise jhelana padta hai (As i told ki sheena mayank par fultoooo fida hai ,they were neighbour b4,par mayank use bilkul pasand nahi karta hai)

RV :par tumhe suhani se kya issue hai

Sheena: as such kuch nahi par jab bhi main mayank se kuch kahti hu pata nahi kaha se aa jati hai bich me wo adopted bahan and they laugh

But they are unaware ki Gunjan sab sun rahi hai

Suddenly Gunjan comes in front of them

G:oh sheena to kya kah rahi thi tum Di ke bare me

Sheena :maine kya kaha sach hi to kaha she is not ur own sister ???

G:wo faisala mera ya mere parivar ka hai ina meena aur kisi sheena ka nahi,to better hoga ki tum apni bakwas mujhe na hi sunao.

S:oh come on Gunji tum us middle class ke liye mujhase bahas kar rahi ho

G: sheena aakhiri bar kah rahi hu agar apni salamati chahti ho na to mere ghar par apni najar bhi mat dalana,aur haan mujhe pata hai ki tum bhai ke piche padi ho par main tumhe bata du ki bhai meri aur Di ke alawa kisi ladki ko dekhata bhi nahi aur tumhe to bilkul bhi nahi,khaskar is bat ke janane ke bad kit um Di ko kya kah rahi thi

S tries to console G:Sorry gunjan main aage se dhyan rakhungi plzzzz mayank se kuch mat kahana

Gunjan : tumhari bhalai isi me hai aage se dhyan rakhana agar maine kabhi bhi tumhari wajah se Di ko hurt hote dekha na to tum mujhase nahi bachogi and she calls diya and benji and goes from there

Sheena gives a devil look but helpless

All goes out

Gunjan ,benji and diya gossip

Nupur and suhani waiting for mayank

This is the first time nupur will meet mayank.par she heard a lot about him and respects him.

They go to each others home but she did not meet mayank even a single time

They are going towards parking area

In middle RV comes :

No one in the parking lot except Nupur and suhani

RV : ab bachkar kaha jaogi janeman maine kaha tha na ki tumhe mujhase koi nahi bacha sakta

N:dekho RV main tumhare munh nahi lagna chahti chale jao yaha se

S:RV tum yaha se chale jao agar mere bhai ne dekh liya na to bahut bura hoga

RV : kyon tera bhai WWW champion hai kya?

He goes near nupur and tries to hold her hand itne me

Uske shoulder par kisi ka hath dikhai deta hai

RV turns :he is none other than mayank

M : problem kya hai teri,ladki kah rahi hai na ki usase dur raho

(is while suhani consols nupur)

RV : teri rishtedar hai kya?tujhe kyon problem ho rahi hai?

M:mujhe koi problem nhai ho rahi hai par ab tujhe jarur hogi agar tum isi waqt yaha se nahi gaye to

He goes and opens the car's door and asking to sit both of them

RV comes from the back to hit mayank par wo aisa kar nahi pata kyonki mayank car ke mirror me use dekh leta hai aur turn hota hai and thats it one punch RV zameen par pada hua milta hai

M : maine pahle hi kaha tha kit um inse dur raho tumhe samajh nahi aata hai kya

S:bhai main Gunji ko bhi bula leti hu

M:thik hai use call karo

G:wow bhai aaj to maja aa gaya main abhi aa rahi hu and she goes and sits next to mayank

But sudden G:nupur dir o kyon rahi ho?

Suhani tells her whole story G:oh to RV ne kiya ye sab

M: dekho nupur (bit awkward but still) wo chala gaya hai aur ab wo tumhe pareshan nahi karega

Aur suhani kab se chal raha hai ye sab

S:aaj hi bahiyya wo her din nupur ko pareshan karta tha par aaj to had hi kar di,nupur apne bhai ko bata nahi sakti nahi to shayad uski padai hi na ho paye aur haan gunjan tum benji ko kuch mat kahana thik hai na?

G:thik hai di par ab nupur di ko chup karao unko aankhen dekho kitni red ho gayi hai

M:thik hai nupur kaha rhati ho tum?

N:bahut mushkil se (Ji bandra me )

Chalo thik hai main tumhe drop kar dunga ,par uske pahle hum sab ice cream khane challenge hai na gunjan

G:jumps and hugs mayank ,wow bhaiya aapne to munh ki bat chin li u r such a sweetheart

N looks to gunjan and smiles a bit atlast (she is really a kid)

They all have icecream and then go to there respective home

At Shergil's house

Samrat apne room me mirror ke samne practice kar raha hai

Samrat : bhai mujhe aage padne ka man hai

Kitni bar rehearsal kar chukka hu par jab bhi bhai se kahne jata hu pata nahi kya ho jata hai lagta hai jaise munh se awaj hi nahi nikalane wali

Diya : Sam bhai kaha ho?

Samrat : main yahi hu diya

Adhiraj : chalo sab dinner par aa jao

Samrat : aata hu bhaiyya

Kya karu ab bhaiyya se bolu ya nahi,bol de samrat bhai hai tere liye achha hi sochega.

At dinner table :

Samrat : Bhai main ye soch raha tha ki bhai

Adhiraj : tu kuch bolega bhi ya nahi ,

Samrat looks at sabji

Adhiraj : oh to sabji chahiye to iske liye bhai bhai kya kar raha hai sabji bolna

Diya (kuch to gadbad hai bhai kuch bolna chah raha hai par bol kyon nahi raha hai)

Diya : gets up and goes to samrat ,kya hua bhai sabji achhi nahi bani hai kya?

Samrat : nahi sweety achhi hai,tum banao aur khana kharab bane aisa kabhi hua hai kya baby,he pulls her cheek

Adhiraj : samrat tum diya ko ya kya baby aur sweety kah rahe ho

Samrat : bhaiyya kya main apni sweet sis ko sweety nahi kah sakta

Adhiraj : par pahle kabhi nahi kaha na

Sam: to aaj se shuru karta hu na thik hai na sweety

Diya :tumhe jo man kare wo bolo bhai mujhe koi fark nahi padta hai

Adhiraj : Samrat ,tumane apne career ke bare me kya socha hai?

Samrat : bhai mujhe aapse is bare me bahut din se bat karni thi,par aap pahle promise karo ki aap naraj nahi hoge

Adhiraj:main tujhase kabhi naraj hua hu kya?

Samrat :but bhai precaution is better than cure

All are laughing

Adhiraj : thik hai natak company ab bol promise main naraj nahi hounga

Samrat : Bhai main oxford jana chahta hu ,waha finance me ek bahut achha course hai one year ka aur mujhe wo karna hai

Adhiraj (in serious tone) : kya kaha tune?

Samrat (itni mushkil se to ek bar bola hai ab aur kitni bar bolu) :bhai aapne kaha tha aap naraj nahi hoge

Adhiraj : haan par course details nahi batayega ye bhi promise ka hissa tha kya?

Samrat : (lagta hai bhai man gaye hai) then he tells all about course

Adhiraj : looks interesting ,thik hai kab hai admission

All excited Samrat :bhai next month

Diya :to bhai ne tumhe jane ki permission de di hai aur main

Samrat : dekho diya tum meri bahut achhi sis ho na he puts his hand on her shoulder

Tears start forming in her eyes

She has not stayed without sam for a day also

And finally she hugs Sammy and tells : bhai sirf ek sal usase jyada nahi thik hai na

Samrat :haan baba thik hai cha lab so ja

He takes her to the room,Adhiraj is looking both of them and smiles (ye dono bhi sach me abhi bhi bachhe hi hai)

At Bhushan Mansion :

Purab has come to Bhushan's place

Nupur : hi purab kaise ho aap?

P : main thik hut um kaisi ho?

N :achhi hu,main abhi bhaiyya ko bulati hu par haan aap dinner karke jayega

Uday : Hi purab kaisa hai ,aur bade dino bad yad aai meri

Purab :aisa kuch nahi hai mujhe actually me tujhase kuch puchana tha,infact teri permission chahiye thi.

Uday :ye kya kah raha hai tu mera sabse achha dost hai aur tu mujhase aisa kya formal bate kar raha hai

At that time only nupur called :bhaiyya dinner ready ahi

U:chalo khana khakar bate karte hai

All are having dinner ,and benji is asking nupur Di mujhe tumhari kuch help chahiye

N:thik hai pahle khana khale uske bad main tere kamre me aaati hu thik hai na

B: love you d

N: Love you too

Khan eke bad only u and P are there

P: looking surprised,nupur ko aise bat karte to maine kabhi nahi suna

U:purab itna mat soch ye dono aise hi bat karte hai,benji nupur kodin bhar me 50 bar love you to bolta hi hai,wo use bachpan se aise hi pyar jo karte aai hai.

Benji ko kabhi bhi maa ki kami mahsus hi nahi hui wo nupur ko apni maa,bahan,friend sab manta hai

Uske liye nupur nahi to kuch nahi.

Aur mere liye bhi to nupur hi ,,,,,,,,,,,

Khiar main kuch jyada senti ho gaya hu

Tu bata kya kah raha tha tab?

P:agar tumhe kuch galat na lage to main ye kah raha tha ki main nupur se shadi karna chahta hu.

U is all happy :P tu nhai janta ki tune kya kah diya hai?main bahut khush hu agar N ko koi problem nahi hai to par main use puchkar hi tujhe bata paunga

P:thik hai uday mujhe tere phone ka wait rahega

U : ok P cha lab rat bahut ho gayi hai aur thanks main shayad tujhase achha ladka dund bhi nahi pata tha

Now it is night and all went to sleep

To be continued

Guys i know starting is bit bore but no other go ,ab sabko milane se pahle thoda drama karna hi padega

Plz bare with me and plz comment

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awesome parts yaar...pls continue soon.....mayank and nupur r so cute in this ff...
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awesome update....
mayank was supercool!!!!
continue soon
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wow dear very nice ff...plz add me in ur pm list...
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PART 3
In the morning

Bhushan's masion

Uday : nupur mujhe tumase kuch bat karni hai

Nupur : haan bhaiyya bolo kya hua hai?

Uday : wo purab kal aaya thaw o mujhase kah raha tha ki wo tujhase shadi karna chahta hai

Nupur : (surprised) Purab?

Uday : han nupur par tu apna decision khud le sakti hai main tujhe force nahi karunga

N:main janti hu bhaiyya aap mera achha hi sochoge par main abhi panda chahti thi aur job bhi karna chahti thi (all sad)

U :tu uski tension mat le nupur main purab se bat kar lunga meri pyari bahan ki har khushi ka dhayan rakha jayega

N:thik hai bhaiyya aapko jaisa lage wo karo and she goes to kitchen

U :kitni achhi hai nupur meri kahi bate kabhi nahi talti hai

He calls and tells P that nupur is agreed but has few conditions.and they both are happy.

In college :

N:suhani main tumhe ek bat batana chah rahi thi

S: haan bolna nupur

N:wo meri shadi pakki ho gayi hai ,bhaiyya ke dost ke sath (Purab)

S:wow nupur ye to bahut khushi ki bat jar par tu to job karna chah rahi thi

N: haan aur miane bhaiya se kaha to bhaiyya bhi man gaye hai

S: ye to bahut achhi bat hai vaise tu Interior designer ki job hi dekh rahi hai na

N: haan ,mujhe ghar sajane ka bahut shouk hai tujhe to pata hai na?

S : haan baab pata hai,ek kam kar vaise bhi exam hone wale hai tu mujhe apna CV de de thik hai

N : thik hai are ,par tu uska kya karegi

S:kya karungi matlab mera bhai construction ki field me hai aur unki pahchan bhi hai to tumhe vacancy ka pata to chal hi jayega

Aur vaise bhi tum apne business tycoon bhaiyya ke bina apne pairo par khaid hona chati ho rt?

N:haan bilkul sahi chal thik hai ab class ke liye late ho raha hai

Sharma Mansion

Suhani :Bhai mujhe kuch bat karni thi

M : haan to ab permission lekar karegi kya?

S : nahi bhai main sochi kit um busy ho?

M : main itna bhi busy nahi hu suhani ki tumhari bate sunane ka waqt na ho

Yaha aao aur baitho mere pas

S (Happily sits next to Mayank) : bhai wo us din aap kah rahe the na ki aapko kisi interior designer ki jarurat hai

M : haan par abhi tak koi mila nahi jo kisi ke makan ko ghar me badal sake aur use aise decorate kar sake,par achanak tujhe kya sujha?

S : bhai wo nupur hai na ,wo baht achhi interior designer hai

M : kaun ,wo achha wo teri friend?

S: haan bhai ,vaise to use job ki jarurat nahi hai par wo apne pairo par khadi hona chahti hai,aapko pata hai uske bhai Uday Bhushan........

M : haan wo to bahut bade business man hai

S:par wo nahi chahti ki unke name par use job mile

M:samajh gaya main tum mujhe uska CV fwd karo main dekhata hu

S:thik hai bhai ,love you bhai and hugs him

He too hugs her and kisses on her forehead

M : tujh par bhi gunjan ka bhoot chad gaya hai

Gunjan is watching and nautanki starts

Haan ek main hi hu jise koi pyar nahi karta hai

M : ab tub hi aa ja (she runs and he hugs her also)

S : aap ho hi itne ache ki koi bhi aapse pyar kiye bina rah hi nahi sakta hai hai na gunjan

G : Haan Di ,love you both and they ll start laughing

M : bus ab maska mat maro ,mujhe Coffee ki jarurat hai maske ki nahi

S : abhi lai

After some time S calls N

S to N : Nupur bhaiyya ne tumhe bulaya ha unke office me aur haan time par pahunch jana bhaiyya ko late comers bilkul pasand nahi hai ,kal dopahar ko 3 baje thik hai na

N : bilkul thanks suhani

S: ab jyada formal mat ho

Next day in Mayank's office

Nupur reaches on time

She is wearing the white suit (anarkali ) and her hairs are open she neatly dressed and looking beautiful as usual

N: may i come in sir

M : haan nupur aa jao

Nupur is damn nervous and M got to know

M:nupur plz baith jao aur tension mat lo maine sirf discussion ke liye bulaya hai tum to aise dar rahi ho jaise ki main tumhari ragging le raha hu

N: smiles a bit and drinks water

M : haan to nupur ye batao ki tum ye job kyon chahti ho tumhe paiso ki to koi kami nahi hai?

N : main apne bal bute par khade hona chahtoi hu air main ye sirf paiso ke liye nahi kar rahi hu mere kuch sapne hai aur main unhe pura karne ke liye hardwork karne ke liye tayar hu,

M : kya tumhare bhaiyya ko ye pata hai?

N : haan main bhaiyya se kuch chupati nahi hu

M : thik hai par main tumhe appoint karne se pahle tumhare knowledge ko bhi dekhana chahta hu

N : matlab?

M : matlab ye ki main tumhe 2 din ka samay deta hu tumhe mera cabin design karna hai,

N: khushi ke sath ,no problem main kab se ye start karu

M : kal se ya chaho to aaj se

Aaj Tuesday hai tumhare pas thursady tak ka waqt hai aur bhi chahiye to bata do

N: nahi sir do din kafi hai

M : mujhe mayank hi kaho plz formal hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai

N :ok

She does all the designing with dedication and after 2 days

Still Thursday has not come wed eve she is done with her work

She comes to M's cabin : maine aapka cabin design kar diya hai magar aap chahe to dekh lijiye

M : itne jaldi ,chalo dekhate hai

N : takes him and closes her eyes just to listen what will be his reaction

M :He is totally lost in arrangements and shakes nupur holding her shoulders

M : Nupur tumane bahut hi ache se desing kiya hai

N : sach me (they did not realise ki mayank is holding her shoulder she is happy and laughing)

M :haan main shayad kabhi apne sapne me bhi itna achha design nahi kar pata ,tum kal se join kar sakti ho

N : thanks a lot Sir ,i mean mayank ,ab main chalti hu

M :thik hai (still not realised ki uske shoulder par M ke hath hai)

N : Mayank wo and suddenly mayank looks at his hands

M : Sorry nupur

N : koi bat nahi hai mujhe bura nahi laga

Nupur is thinking ( aaj pahli bar aisa hua hai ki mujhe kisi ka chuna bura nahi laga aur wo bhi kisi ladke ka)

Mayank (mayank ye to achha hua ki Nupur ne kuch socha nahi ,par tum aise khsh to kabhi nahi huye jaise aaj aur wo bhi ek ladki ke kandhe par )

But they will take it easy and start working together.

After 2 weeks time

Nupur is talking almost every day with Purab (she just started liking him)

Mayank : Nupur ye naya project hai aur hume ise jald hi finish karna hoga ,par mujhe lagh nahi raha hai ki hum ye itni jalid kar payenga

N : tension mat lo ho jayega

M : par next week tumhari engagement bhi to hai na aur main nahi chahta ki tumhe kam karna pade isliye soch raha hu ki ise cancel kar deta hu

N : mayank ye deal bahut badi hai,engagement to bus 1-2 din ki bat hai aap iske liye tension mat lo

M : thik hai nupur ,par iski wajah se tum plz stress mat lena

N : ok Boss (she became friendly with mayank,she knows he is very good at heart)

One day it is raining heavily

N : bhaiyya aaj to bahut barish ho rahi hai main thodi der bad office se nikal jaungi

U : thik hai nupur main aa jati hu tumhe lene

N : nahi bhaiyya bahut jyada barish ho rahi hai aap aate rat ho jayegi

(Mayank is passing and he over hears that )

Mayank takes phone from nupur and talking with Uday

M : hi uday main mayank bol raha hu

U : hi mayank ,main janta hu tum nupur ke boss ho

M : are bhai maine abhi ye batane ke liye phone nahi kiya ki main uska boss hu,par agar tumhari permission ho to main nupur ko drop kar sakta hu

U (thinks ki achha insan hai ye) : koi bat nahi hai mayank tum plz nupur ko drop kar dena

M :thanks Uday ab tension mat lo mujhe pata hai ki bahan ghar par na ho to ek bhai ki kya halat hoti hai?

U : thanks dude ,tum bahut ache insane ho

M : smiles and tells ,my pleasure lo nupur se bat karo

N : haan bhaiyya

U : tum mayank ke sath aa jana nupur

N : ok bhaiyya

M &N leave from office and they are into car

Mayank starts driving and in half of the way it starts more heavily and he is not able to drive now

Nupur use stuggle karte dekhati hai aur kahti hai :M aap thodi der car side me kar lijiye bahut tej barish ho rahi hai aage kuch dikh bhi nahi raha hai

M :nahi nupur tumhe ghar drop kar du phir koi bat nahi main drive kar lunga

N (Thinking) : sach me bahut hi responsible hai Mayank suhani ekdum sach kah rahi thi mayank ke bare me

Par bad luck car bich me kharab ho jati hai

Aur mayank is gettine angry on himself he calls service station but no response :

N :aap tension mat lijiye sab thik ho jayega

M : tension ki bat hai nupur vaise hi rat bahut ho chuki hai aur tumhe ghar pahunchana bahut jaruri hai

N calls Uday but it is not reachable

M : nupur main car side me laga deta hu aur dekhate hai ki kuch solution milata hai ya nahi

N : she is getting down suddenly mayank says her

M : tum andar hi raho dekho bahar nikalogi to bhig jaogi

N : thik hai

Mayank goes out and tries for lift and he ask them help

Nupur car se bahar aane ki koshish karti hai par uska pair sleep kar jata hai and uske pair me mocha a jati hai

She tries getting down but she is crying in pain mayank ye sab dekh raha hai aur wo nupur ke pas aata hai

M : kya hua hai nupur,seeing her leg oh tumhe to bahut moch aai hai

Aao main tumhari madad karta hu,par wo chal hi nahi pa rahi hai then he takes permission from her and takes her into arm and makes her to sit in the car

(in mean while someone taking there snaps and they are not aware)

At nupur's home : Mayank calls uday and benji but again it is not reachable

Bechare mayank ko nupur ko phir se usi position me lekar jana padta hai

He feels it bit awakard and nupur feels toooooo shy

Then knock the door and Uday opens it

Uday : mayank nupur ko tumane aise kyon utha rakha hai

M :maine tumhe kai bar phone kiya uday par tumhara koi reply hi nahi aaya,actually nupur ke pair me moch aai hai aur wo chal nahi pa rahi hai isliye mujhe ise aise uthakar lana pada.Sorry uday aur koi rasta nahi tha

Uday : matank tumhe sorry kahne ki jarurat nahi hai infact mujhe tumhe thanks kahna chata hu

M : koi formality nahi ab apni amanat sambhalo main ghar jar aha hu taxi mera wait kar rahi hai

U : thik hai mayank par parso nupur ki sagai hai usme tum jarur aana

M : ye bhi koi kahne ki bat hai chalo bye ,good night ,nupur kal office mat aana aur take care

N: bye mayank

U : kitna achha insane hai ye nupur?

N : haan bhaiyya ,mujhe bhi aisa hi lagata hai

After two days in Nupur's engagement

Nupur is very happy and Same purab too

She wore orange color lahnga and put a very light makeup

She is looking gorgeous and beautiful at the same time

Purab and his family came

Suhani got nupur down

With suhani gunjan,diya were there

And Shilpa aunty ,Mayank and benji ,samrat ,Adhiraj were at the hall

They are sitting together.

Benji : aap Diya ke bhaiyya ho na Samrat aur aap Adhiraj right?

S and A : par tumhe kaise pata ?

B : diya pure din aapki to bate karti rahti hai .now looking at mayank

B : aap gunji mera matlab hai Gunjan aur Suhani Di ke bhai hai na

Mayank : haan

Looking at shilpa aunty :Namaste aunty and he touches her feet

SS : are par tumnae mujhe kaise pahchana

Benji : aunty jaise gunjan aapke bare me batati hai aap bilkul vaise hi ho Sweet si.

SS : khush raho beta ,aur tum bhi bahut sweet ho

By now this gang of guys started talking and SS also joins them.

All are liking the company and soon they became friends

When nupur was coming down all started looking at her and every one was mesmerized with her beauty

Mayank also feels ki she is really beautiful.

But Adhiraj is looking at Suhani and Samrat staring gunjan.

Suddenly they came to there sense as Uday did the announcement

Both of them came to the stage

Nupur and Purab they were abt to exchange the rings but suddenly some one shouted

Guess who

Yeah he is our villain RV : he says ,are purab jisase shadi karne ja rahe ho uske bare me kuch jan to lo

M is looking at him and goes and grabs his coller : tum wahi ho na jo us din nupur ko college me pareshan kar raha tha

RV : main to kam se kam logo ke samne use chedta hut um to uske sath akele me chiiiii

And he shows those snaps to Purab

Purab looks them and looks at nupur :

P :Uday mujhe nahi pata tha ki nupur mere sath aisa karegi

U : par purab ye sach nahi hai main mayank aur nupur ko ache se janta hu,aur us din nupur ke pair me moch aai thi

Purab stops him in middle :main aur kuch bhi nahi sunana chahta uday aur main ye rishta todata hu

Nupur is crying and suhani is trying to console her

RV gave devil smile and (whisper into mayank's ear ' agar nupur meri nahi hui to main use kisi ki hone bhi nahi dunga mayank Sharma) left

Nupur is crying and benji goes to her : she hugs him tightly and broke off Uday also consols her

SS to M : mayank ye kya ho raha hai

(M tells her complete story)

SS :Mayu ye bahut bura hua beta,ab is society me kaun uska hath thamega ,aur wo RV mujhe bahut hi badmash lag rha hai hai wo next time bhi aisa kar sakta hai

Suhani ,Gunjan,Diya takes Nupur to her room

In mean while

M to SS :maa par maine nupur ke sath koi badatmiji nahi kari hai (uday hears it)

U :tumhe safai dene ki jarurat nahi hai mayank par meri bahan ka ghar to basane se pahle hi ujad gaya

M : I am sorry Uday main samajh sakta hu kit um par kya bit rahi hai

Gunjan and Suhnai comes down and calls M : Bhai tumase ek bat kahu?

M : haan bol suhani

S & G: kyat um nupur se shadi nahi kar sakte?

M : par main kaise kar sakta hu

G and S: bhai nupur bahut achhi hai

SS joins them and says : she is with them

M : par maa nupur kya sochegi ki main us par daya kar raha hu

S to M : tum uski tension mat lo bhai main usase bat kar lungi

(guys i know u must be thinking ki ye decision M ko hi lena tha par M is thinking he was responsible for all the things which happened so i plotted this)

M to U : uday agar tumhe koi aitraj na ho to kya main nupur se shadi kar sakta hu

U :mujhe kya aitraj hoga mayank,par main nupur se is waqt bat nahi kar sakta

M :kya main usase bat karu agar tumhe koi problem na ho to?

U : thik hai

S &G :Bhai chalo

Now only M & N are there :Nupur main tumase yaha kuc kahne aaya hu

N : crying and trying hard to speak ,kahiye

M :agar main tumase ye kahu ki main tumase shadi karne ko tayar hu to kya ?

In middle only

N : nahi mayank mujh par daya karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai

M : plz nupur isne daya karne ki koi bat hi nahi hai ,main tumhe 1 month se janta hut um bahut achhi ladki ho,aur jaha tak main janta hu purab tumhe pichale 20 sal se janta hai par uska vishwas tum par 20 din purana bhi nahi hai.main janta hu ki ye meri wajah se hua par nupur kya purab ne ek bar bhi palatkar tumase bat karne ki koshish kari ,yahi bharosa tha uska tumpar?

Nupur started thinking in diff direction and slowly stopped crying

M : main janta hu ki ye bahut tough situation hai par yakin mano purab tum jaisi ladki ko deserve hi nahi karta,agar main uski jagah hota to kam se kam apni hone wali patni se ek bar to jarur puchata ki kya hua tha us din par sorry purab ne to sidhe decision hi suna diya

Nupur is listening him very carefully and by this M comes in front of her.

M : kaho nupur kya main galat hu ,tum chaho to is shadi ke liye mana kar sakti ho main tumhe force nahi karunga

N is not looking into his eyes ,but he is also mayank he holds her face and makes her to look into his eyes

Nupur uski aankho me sirf honesty hi dekhati hai aur suddenly she feels a force which is pushing her towards him and she hugs him tightly and mayank also hugs her back

Both of them do not know ki kya ho raha hai

At last mayank breaks the hug and by now nupur is ok

M : to nupur kya jawab hai tumhara

N : haan

Uday listens there conversation and happy to have mayank in Nupur's life

Both of them come down and exchange the ring

Gunjan and Suhani hug Mayank : Congrats bhai

SS give them blessing : Nupur beta tum bahut khubsurat ho aur samajhdar bhi.

Adhiraj and Samrat also congratulate mayank and hug

And all of them make fun of MAYUR

Nupur turns all red like tomato

Guys it was a really long update i hope ki thodi kam bore ho

Plzzzzzzzzzzzz comment

Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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what are u saying babe?ofcourse the whole update is awesome.keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
wow yaar tom to rocket speed me ja rehi ho.mn engaged...........................par jarur gadbad hogi.anyway loved ur tino update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: premana

wow yaar tom to rocket speed me ja rehi ho.mn engaged...........................par jarur gadbad hogi.anyway loved ur tino update.

Thanks dear haan kyonki iske bad mere pas time nahi hai so i m going in rockect speeed

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