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Aishwarya sharma

@Ishia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

mujhe pata tha........
se i guessed right.
aur kitna riddhima royegi aur humbhi rulayegi............. 🤣

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Hello_01
Very nice Part
Sorry for late comment was buzy, a bit.....
Sorry

thanks for the Pm....

Love Maha

Thank you n hey its OK 😊

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: friendz_4ever
hey Munz!!!

Shorry shorry shorry!! Actually i was reading all d parts.....par comment nahi kar pa rahi thi...i was logged on cell tht time!! shorry!!

the story is going great!! i love it!! aur ajka part to mindblowing tha!!Its good tht Maya n Armaan broke up!! Bt the precap was again scary!! do update soon!! will be waiting!!

love u loadz!!

tk cr!!

bbye!!

Hey Amreen baaji
Hmmmm kya kiya jaaye? "Daant" diya jaaye ya chod diya jaaye?Bolo apke saath kya suluk kiya jaaye?😆 hehe koi baat nahi its OK😊 n Thank you
P.S:2nd line ka bura mat maana!Its was all just 4 fun 😊
Love you loadz too 😃

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: KaSh_Deewaanie
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hello I'm Jinil, nah that sounds to formal LOL.

I'm here to say that I love this fic I will eagarly wait for your updates!

Still to formal!

Anyways, I love the way you decribe Muski it is just so ...... her u know what i mean

and atul cho chweet

Im still in amazement bout Maya what a loser no what bout LLoSSeRR!

Anyways i will take your leave now

Bye!

Tootles!

Ciao!

Salut!

Hey it's OK nothings formal
I'm just verrrrrry happy to know that you love this fic😃
Keep commenting!
Love you😊

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
awesome
hate maya but happy they broke up

wonder why ridz has a breakdown

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Thank you😃

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG
lovely part

yay armaan n maya broke up

wat is the next mystery

cont soon

n thx for pm

luv dhruvika

Thank you 😃

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.

love
Riddss

Thank you 😃 n your welcome 😊

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: ishwariya
mujhe pata tha........
se i guessed right.
aur kitna riddhima royegi aur humbhi rulayegi............. 🤣

Yeah you guessed it right 😛
Riddhima bohot roti hai yaar 😆

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#139

Part 12
Even though a few days had passed after Armaan's breakup
Riddhima still used to get furious at Maya's mention.
Ri:Tum logon ko kitni baar bola hai uska naam mat liya karo.
Mu:Ridzie hum log uski nahin baki 1 film ki herione ki baat
kar rahe hain.Tu itna hyper kyun ho jaati hai?
But she never paid heed and used to give every1 a piece of
her mind whenever she heard the name.Eventually every1 started giving a deaf hear to her "lectures".
*********
One night at around midnight
Riddhima's cell beeped.
Ri:Haan Armaan bolo.[in a sleepy tone]
Ar:Arre wah! Tumhe kaise pata chala ki main hun?
Ri:Itni raat ko sirf tumhi call kar sakte ho.Waise bhi mujhe
adat ho gayi hai tumhare late night calls ki.
Ar:Achchi baat hai.
Ri:Tumne phone kyun kiya?
Ar:Kaisi ho?
Ri:Armaan aise boring sawal puchkar mera dimag mat khao.
Ar:Boring sawal?They are called general questions.
Ri:Tum bata rahe ho ki tumne phone kyun kiya ya main phone
rakhun?
Ar:Mom aur dad ko mere aur uske baare mein pata chal gaya.
Ri:[alert now] Phir?
Ar:Kuch nahi.Maine kaha I'm not interested in her.
Ri:Hmmm.
Ar:1 aur baat hai tumhare liye.Lekin promise karo wo sunkar tum
ro ogi nahi.
Ri:Aisi kaunsi baat hai?
Ar:Pehle promise karo.
Ri:Nahi.Pehle batao.
Ar:Maine mom aur dad ki baaten suni.
Ri:Bad boy! Eavesdropping karna achchi baat nahi hoti.
Ar:Wo keh rahe the ki....
Ri:Ki?
Flashback
Mom:Shayad Riddhima exams ke wajah darr gayi hai aur isliye
usne engangement tod di.
Dad:Hmmm.Mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai.
Mom:Lekin wo bohot achchi ladki hai.1 baar exams khatam ho
jaaye phir use bata denge ki ye engangement tooti nahi
hai.
Dad:Haan theek hai.Armaan ko bhi exams ke baad bata denge.
Flashback ends
Ri:[in an unsteady voice]Tumne ye kab suna?
Ar:Jab main paani peene kitchen mein gaya tha tab.Riddhima
plz mat ro.
Ri:I'm not crying!
Ar:Don't lie!Mujhe pata hai tum ro rahi ho.[pauses]Tum mujhe
jaanti ho.Tumhe mere saare secrets bhi pata hai.Main
bhi tumhe jaanta hun.That's more than enough to spend your life with me.
Ri:Tum ye kaise keh sakte ho "That's more than enough to
spend your life with me"!
Ar:Riddhima plz!
Ri:Mujhe neend aa rahi hai.Bye!
Ar:[with a sigh]Bye!
With a heavy heart both went off to sleep.Riddhima because
she had never thought this would happen and Armaan because
he couldn't see her like this.
***********
Next day
Mu:[on seeing Ridz]Yaar!Ab kyun rokar aayi?
Ri:Kuch nahi.
Mu:Haan haan.Phir kal aana,"I'm sorry Muski maine tujhse
jhoot bola tha."
She narrates everything.
Nu:Hey Bhagwan!
Gu:Ye 1 mahina tumhaare liye bilkul roller coaster ki tarah
raha hai.
An:I've never seen anything this complicated.
Ni:Riddhima!
Ri:I've no other option.
Mu:Lekin usne aise kaise bol diya?"That's more than enough to
spend your life with me"?
Ri:Jaane de yaar!Maybe this is my destiny.
Di:[to lighten up the atmosphere] But your destiny is very handsome!
At this Riddhima smiles.
Ben:Sirf wo akela handsome nahi hai.Aaspass dekho aur
ladke dikhenge.
Ud:Haan for example Main!
Di:Yeah right!
***********
Bas yaar!!!!!!! Almost pura din power cut tha.Ab mera bhi
mood kharab ho gaya isliye aaj sirf itna.Sorry!N haan koi meri madat karo mujhe photos bhi daalne hain.Kaise daalte hain plz batao.
Precap:
Riddhima ka sapna.
Kaisa hoga ye kal hi pata chalega.
Keep smiling and commenting!!!!

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Aishwarya sharma

@Ishia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#140

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