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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi everyone
I've been a silent reader for a long time now and thought of starting
a new FF.
In my FF Armaan is a 17 year old boy and Riddhima is a
15 year old girl.....
Note:- The basic storyline is on true life incidents.
So some of the things will be real but I will add many fictitious
things as well
Hope you all like it
WARNING:- DO NOT POST MY FFS ANYWHERE ELSE WITHOUT MY PERMISSION OR ATLEAST GIVE CREDIT FOR THE HARDWORK.

*Is it love?*

"Oye ! Kya kar rahi hai? Marna chahti hai kya?"
She was horrified at what she was about to do...........

NOTHING !!!

She was angry at her best friend now😡
"Muski !! Main kuch nahi kar rahi thi.Kyu bekaar mein darra rahi hai?"
Muskaan had now burst into peals of laughter😆
"Arre! Tu kar to rahi thi...tu soch rahi thi.Agar tu apne
itne chote dimag par zyada zor degi na to phir to....khachaak!!!!"
She indicated with her hands as though she would be dead. 😆

Riddhima Gupta and Muskaan Chaddha were best friends.
The whole class knew about them and though they pulled
each others legs no one would dare mess them when they were
together.😃
By now even Riddhima was smiling.😊
Ri:Muski,tujhe pata kaise chalta hai ki main kab upset rehti hun?
Mu:Madam ye jo aap apne sir par haath rakh kar baithe ho
to kai bachcha bhi bata de ki duniya ki biggest dumbo
upset hai.Kya hua?
Ri:Kuch nahi yaar,aise hi sar dukh raha tha.
Mu:Theek ...Oye! ye kya?[indicating to the ring on her left
hand] Uh..huh..engangement ?[with a mischevious grin]😉
Ri:Pagal ho gayi hai kya? Ye to aise hi dad lekar aaye the.
Mere right hand mein fit nahi ho rahi thi left mein pehen li,
dad ne bhi kaha ki koi problem nahi hai.Aaj-kal waise bhi kaun dekhta hai?
Mu:Hmmmm......theek hai tu bol rahi hai to maan leti hun.
Waise ring bohot achchi hai.
Ri:Haan.Platinum ki hai with daimond on it.
Mu:Fake to nahi hai na?
With that she dashed out of the class with Riddhima
running behind her....
"Ruk...Main tujhe nahi chodungi...Muskaan..."

Aaj ke liye bas itna...
and yeah your comments are a welcome with appreciation
and/or criticism...
Keep smiling !!!!😊

INDEX
Part 1 - Pg 1 Part 2- Pg 1 Part 3 - Pg 2
Part 4 - Pg 2 Part 5 - Pg 2 Part 6 - Pg 3
Part 7 - Pg 4 Part 7[II] -Pg 5 Part 8 - Pg 7
Part 9 - Pg 10 Part 10 - Pg 12 Part 11 - Pg 15
Part 12 - Pg 19 Part 13 - Pg 21 Part 14 - Pg 24
Part 15 - Pg 27 Part 16 - Pg 33 Part 17 - Pg 36
Part 18 - Pg 40 Part 19 - Pg 43 Part 20 - Pg 45
Part 21 - Pg 47 Part 22 - Pg 50 Part 23 - Pg 52
Part 24 - Pg 54 Part 25 - Pg 57 [Final Part]

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Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 14 years ago

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice......are rahul, atul, abhi, anji, and nikki in here too??

please pm me when u update......I likes!!!😃

Sheena

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver
nice......are rahul, atul, abhi, anji, and nikki in here too??

please pm me when u update......I likes!!!😃

Sheena

Hey Sheena
Yes the whole gang is here
I'm glad you liked it😊
And I'll try to PM you coz I'm not quite acquainted with things here
Thanks
Love you😊

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hawwwwww
36 views par sirf Sheena ka reply?
Itna bura hai kya?
Agar hai to criticise to karo....

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Aishwarya sharma

@Ishia

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hi jaan ne man.. first part toh maasha allah.... very nice yaar
aur second part..... man...kedo... wat was acctually that.. kuh kuch samaj mein ah raha tha..

lekin yeh riddhia kyun ro rai thi

Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 2

Next day....
Mu:Hey Ridz ! Good mor...kya hua?

She saw her best friend crying.Her red nose and swollen eyes
showed that she had been crying for a long time.😭Sapna was
trying to pacify her.

Sa: Kuch nahi yaar.Madam ki aankh mein kuch chala gaya aur
iska water tank leak ho gaya.
Mu:Specs hote hue bhi kuch chala gaya? [typical Muskaan
style] hehehe😆
Waise main chata laun?
Ri,Sa: Huh? Chata? Kis liye?😕
Mu:Arre,ab jab iska water tank leak ho gaya hai to bechaare
neeche ke cheetiyon aur keede-makodon ka kya?Makeup
waale baarish ki aadat to I doubt unhe hogi.Tch tch
[looking down] Main tumhare saath hun.Himmat mat haarna.
I don't know duplicate products ki tumhaare liye acid bhari
baarish kaisi hogi par...
Before she could continue Ridz had started laughing and hitting
her.😆
Ri: Stop it yaar par...achcha tha
Mu:Kya? Bichaare keedon par daya aati kya? [mimicking her]
"achcha tha"....
Ri:Yaar Muski jab tak tu mere saath hai to mujhe kisi aur ki
zarurat nahi.
Mu: Hey Bhagwan !!!!!!! Ye ladki mujhe lesbo bana degi.Phir
mujhe bhi bolna padega "lesbo main,lesbo,dil mera lelo
dil dene aayi,lelo ji lelo".....
Sa: Hello! Yahaan main bhi hun.
Ri,Mu:Do we know you?Aap kaun hai?
Sa:What?
Ri:Chill yaar! And thanks[winking at her]😉
Sa:My pleasure.
Mu:Kya? Ye sab kya chal raha hai? Haila Ridz! Sapna ko aankh
maar rahi hai? Beshram ladki Ram ram
Announcement:Std Xth students to proceed to the lab.
Sa: Chalo bulava aa gaya.
********
Near the lab....
Their whole gang is there.Anjali,Nikita,Nupur,Gunjan,Dia,
Atul,Rahul,Abhimanyu,Mayank,Samrat,Uday and Benji.
[phew! A big gang .He he I love them all]
All: Hi guys !
Ri: Hi ! Kya baat hai sab aik saath?
At: Kyun Ridz nahi ho sakte.[in a low voice] Main Anjali se dur nahi
reh sakta.😊
An: Atul tumne kuch kaha?
Ni: Kya Anjali uske peeche padi hai? Chod na.[winking at Atul]😉
Nu: Hello! Ye batao tum sab abhi tak kahan the?
Gu: Haan.Hum tumhara kab se intezaar kar rahe hain.
Mu: Kya baat hai."Tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye..."
Ra: Muskaan tujhe nahi lagta ye gaana agar koi ladka apni gf
ke liye gaye to zyaada achcha hoga?
Mu: Oye chup kar!😳 Kankhajure,tujh se pucha kya?
Ma: Relax! Tum log har waqt ladte kyu rehte ho?
Before anyone could say anything
Announcement: Students from roll no.1 to 15 to proceed to
Science II lab.
Mu: Mujhe yehi pasand nahi.Mujhe is kankhajure ke saath
experiments karne padte hain.
Ra: Lekin mujhe to bohot achcha lagta hai. Chal nahi to daant
padegi.
They went away bickering with each other.
Sapna and Riddhima were discussing something and Ridz once again
burst into tears.But everyone was busy with thier respective partners.
*******
What is the thing that only Sapna knows?
Why has Ridz burst into tears once again?
*******
Well iske liye to rukna padega na....
Hit the Like button and/or give your precious comments.
Keep smiling and encouraging everyone....^_^

Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago

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friendz_4ever

@friendz_4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey spoundz very interesting....would love to read more...do update soon...

Love

Ams

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: friendz_4ever
hey spoundz very interesting....would love to read more...do update soon...

Love

Ams

Thank you Amreen baaji
I think you didn't still recognise me 😭
Anyways
Love you loads

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 3

After awhile outside the lab.....
Mu:Arre wah! Aaj to maza aa gaya.Ma'am ne is kankhajure ko achcha daanta.
Ra:Haan haan rehne de.Sab teri wajah se hua [we all know the reason right?]
Rahul went to the boys while Muskaan went to the girls.
Mu: Ridz! Kya hua? Phir se kuch aankh mein chala gaya kya?
Ri: I'm sorry Muski.
Mu:??? Sorry? Kyun?
Ri: I'm...[turns away]
Sa:Main batao?[asks Ridz]
Ridz nods
Mu: Arre hua kya?Koi mujhe bataye ga?
Sa:Wo Muski Ridz ki engangement ho gayi hai.
Muskaan is standing still not knowing how to react.
Sa:Wo aaj maine bhi Ridz ko uski ring ke baare mein poocha to usne sab bata
diya. Wo usne kal tujhse jhoot bola tha. Aaj bhi jab tune poocha to wo bata
nahi paayi.
Mu: Lekin...
Sa: Wo keh rahi thi usne aaj tak tujhse jhoot nahi bola aur kal se ro rahi hai
ke usne tujhse jhoot bola aur maafi bhi nahi maangi.
Ri: I'm so...sorry Mu... Muskaan.
By now the whole gang had arrived and heard everything.
Mu: Hey it's OK Ridz. Waise mujhe achcha laga jaankar ke tu mujhe apni achchi
dost maanti hai. Ek baat puchu?
Ri: Hmmmm.
Announcement: Students from roll no.15 to 30 to proceed to the lab.
*******
After half an hour in their class. The whole gang sat in a group as it was a free period.
Mu: Main tujh se puch rahi thi ke tere us lucky boy ka naam kya hai?
Ri: Plz yaar mujhe is engangement ka koi shauk nahi tha. Kuch family probs ki wajah se
ye engangement karni padi.
Ud: So Ridz so are a "Balika Vadhu" am I right?
Di: Shutup Do-do.
Ridz smiles a little.
Ri: Uska naam Armaan hai. Armaan Mallik.
All: oooooooooooooo
Ri: Shhhhhhhh. mujhe kisiko nahi batana hai. Tum sab mere achche dost ho isliye
bataya.
Ma: Lekin Riddhima tumhe iske baare mein kab pata chala?
************
Part 4

Ri: Saturday ko.Jab main ghar gayi to mom ne bataya.
Sa: Ridz ye to theek hai par tumne kuch kaha nahi?
Ri: Main shocked thi. Maine bohot kaha ki mujhe engangement nahi karni hai par kisine
meri baat nahi suni.
Gu: Us Armaan ne kya kaha?
Mu: Oye! tu use jaante thi?
Ri: Hum family friends the aur distant relatives.Mujhe pata chala ki use koi prob nahi hai.
Be: Hogi bhi kaise? Itni beautiful fiance jo mil rahi hai.
Ri: Shaam ko wo sab ghar aaye aur engangement ho gayi.
An: OMG! Shaam ko hi?
Ni: How did you overcome the fact?
Ri: The feeling hasn't sunk in yet.
Mu: Wo handsome hai kya?
Ra: Oye tujhe kya karna hai?
Nu: Arre Riddhima ko to bolne do.
Ri:Hmmm. Good-looking hai. Blue eyes.
At: Ridz wo tumse kitna bada hai?
Ri: 2 saal. Abhi XII mein hai.
Abh: Use apni padhai ki fikar nahi hai kya?
Ri: Uski mom,Ananya aunty bata rahi thi ki wo bina padhe hi X mein 94% lekar aaya tha.
At: Wow yaar! bohot intelligent hai.
Mu: To tune photos khiche?
Ri: Hmmm. Ye rahi.[removes it from her bag]
Nu: Riddhima! Tum photos apne bag mein rakhti ho?
Ud: tumhe to kisiko batana nahi tha na?
Mu: Wow bohot handsome hai.
Ra: Dikha..
Mu: Tu kya karega? Tere se to achcha hi hai.
They both start fighting.
Ni: Bachao! bachao! help! Ye log lad rahe hain.[Nikki was a new admission but soon
mingled well with them]
At: Arre Nikki! ye log ladte rehte hain.tum darro mat.
*******
There is some mystery behind Armaan.
How did he have no probs with the engangement?
Find out more of the engangement ceremony in the next parts.
********
Guys,I'm going to my native place today.And I don't know when I'll be back.
Tab tak plz isise hi kaam chala le lena. CHOLLY!!!!
Do hit the Like button and drop your comments...
Keep smiling...
Love you all loadz....

Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago