AR FF:Is it love? Final part updated Pg 57

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
nice part
dont want armman to go back

wonder who broke up

also why is ridz angry

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

AWWW you don't want Armaan to go back? 😊
But he has to for the story to continue😊
thanks and you r welcome😊

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG
lovely part

too gud

loved it

cont soon

luvc dhruvika

thank you 😃

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Part 11
Few more days passed and soon it was time for Armaan to
leave.
In school
Mu:To, kaise chal raha hai sab kuch?
Ri:Theek hai.Aaj Armaan ja raha hai.
Sam:Hmm.Shaam me?
Ri:Nahi.11 baje.
Gu:11 to abhi 1 ghante me baj jayenge.
Nu:Gunjan,ab wo itne din raha hai to Ridz ne to use subah
hi bye-bye kar diya hoga nahi?Aur uske wahan na rehne
se koi pahad thodi na tootega.
Di:Haan use bhi pata hoga ke Ridz to school mein hoti hai
us time.Use koi time nahi mila kya?
Ri:Guys!Zaruri hai kya ki main use send off karun?
At:Umm nahi.
Ri:To bas baat khatam wo aaj ja raha hai.
************
At:Hey guys!Kuch dino mein Valentines day hai.
Ni:Hume pata hai Atul.Tum kisi aur ko batana chahte ho
kya?[eyeing Anjie]
At:[knowing fully well what she means]Nahi to main to bas
aise hi keh raha tha.[blushes](hayye!)
Mu:Valentines day se hamara kya lene dena Atul?
She keeps a hand on Atul's shoulder and asks.
Rahul immediately removes it.Muski is about to say
something when Atul continues in his day dreaming way.
At:Muski kehte hain is din hum jisse pyaar karte hain
usse apni feelings share kar sakte hain.
Mu:Achcha?Main to mummyji papaji se pyaar karti hun.
Unse kya kahun?
At:Mujhe nahi pata tha ke mom dad ke saath feelings
hum Valentines day par bhi share kar sakte hain.
Ud:Jitna mujhe pata hai....
Di:Stop it guys!Ye zyadatar sirf gf-bf ka mamla hota hai.
Mu:Phir chod!Mujhe isse koi lene dena nahi.
Gu:Kisine Ridz ko dekha?
Mu:Haan yaar wo mujhe bhi nahi dikhi.
An:Koi baat nahi aa jayegi.
Ri:Hey guys![in a tired tone]
Nu:Tumhe kya hua?
Ri:Kuch nahi.Wo assingments karte karte bohot thak gayi.
Mu:[stands on a chair and says]Oye! kaunse assingments?
mujhe darra mat maine koi nahi kiye hain.
Ri:Chill yaar Muski.Mera nahi Adi ka.Uski tabiyat kharab
hai aur aaj hi dena tha to permission lekar written
work maine kiya.
Ud:Bhai-behen ki kya jodi hai.Dits aaj tak mere liye tumne
aisa kuch nahi kiya.
Ben:Usne aaj tak apne assingments bhi pure nahi kiye.
Di:Shutup Do-do.Shut up Benji.
Gu:Relax!
****************
It is late at night when Armaan calls up Ridz.
Ri:Hi!
Ar:..........
Ri:Armaan?Are you there?
Ar:I broke up with her.
(Kaafi logon ne sahi guess kiya tha)
Ri:With Maya?
Ar:Uska naam mat lo.[in an angry voice]
Ri:[a bit scared because of his anger]Armaan kya hua?
Ar:Hum log Valentines ki tayari kar rahe the.College mein
prom hone wala tha.Jab achanak 1 ladka aaya aur....
Ri:Aur?
Ar:Usne Maya ko propose kiya.
Ridz gasps.
Ri:Phir Maya ne kya kaha?
Ar:Usne haan kaha.
Ri:What?Tumne kuch nahi kaha?
Ar:Hamare group mein kisiko hamare baare pata nahi tha.
Ri:Tumne usse kaya kaha?
Ar:Maine use 1 khaali class mein bulaya aur pucha ke usne
aisa kyun kiya?You know what she said?[pauses]
"I was never serious about you"
Ri:[doesn't know what to say]Ummmmm.......
Ar:Isliye I ditched her.
Ri:[anger at her boiling point now] How could she do this?
I mean... like...how?
Ar:Mom and dad came to know about us and then I told
them we are just college friends now.Hunh "friends!"
Ri:Armaan forget it now.Just think it was a bad dream.
Ar:Worst dream.
Ri:So ab kya karoge?
Ar:Main uske liye thodi na college jaata tha.I'll continue
my life as it was.[pauses then in a low voice] Riddhima tum
usse kai guna achchi ho.
Yahan par hamari Riddhima ka chehra laal ho jaata hai.
Ri:[her face flushes]Armaan?[changes the topic] Phir tum
prom par nahi jaoge?
Ar:Meri 1 friend hai.Uske saath koi nahi jaa raha main uske
saath jaa raha hun.
Ri:Hmm.Theek hai.Abhi bohot der ho gayi hai.So jao.Bye!
Ar:Bye!
************
Next day....
Ridz tells every1 of their late night convo
Every1 is shocked to the core.
Nu:By God! Ye... mera matlab hai....
Di:How could she do this?
Riddhima was furious.
Ri:Meri samajh mein nahi aa raha, kitne aasani se bol diya
"I was never serious about you"!
Gu:Jaane do Riddhima!
Mu:Waise Ridzie,tu itna kyun bhadak rahi hai?
Ri:Armaan mera friend hai.Isliye.
Ni:Jo hota hai achche ke liye hi hota hai.
***********
AR fans ke liye to ye bohot achcha hai haina?
n plz vote 4 AR
Precap:
More shocking for Riddhima.This time she breaks down.
***********
Itna kaafi hai na....😆
Abhi ke liye rejoice guys!
Keep smiling and commenting!!!

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Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago

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@debby_11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#114

ya maya n armaan broke up
lekin why will riddhima break down??
continue soon
thanx 4 d pm

love
debadrita

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: choco_pie92
ya maya n armaan broke up
lekin why will riddhima break down??
continue soon
thanx 4 d pm

love
debadrita

😃 Thank you and raaz will come out in the next part 😃

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ankitajain94

@ankitajain94

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

I am so happy that Armaan & Maya had a break up.

Precap sounds intresting

Continue soon

Thnx for the pm

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#117

Hi "Thappadwali"(kuch yaad aaya) ye part bahut acha tha I mean very good about the break-up🥺. I mean u know she❤️ (your Olive Oil ) is much much better than that that cheat. Plz cont soon😊

Love,

Abhi & Mansi