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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: shivi17
yay apne jale hue namak ko jali hui chini bana di (caramal)
the part was AWESOME but make it lobger next time :)

😃 Thank you 😃
Hope you enjoyed the caramel 😳😆

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Part 10
Monday.......
Ridz came and told every1 of what all happened in the
weekend and soon every1 was on the floor laughing like
maniacs.
Di:OMG! Tumne uspar thanda pani dala?
At:Baarish!baarish!nahi snow!snow!
Nu:By God! Kitna maza aaya hoga na? use aise dekhkar?
Ri:Hmm.Bohot maza aaya.And 1 aur baat batani hai.
Mu:Kya?
Ri:Maine Maya ki photo dekhi.
An:So how does she look?
Ri:Umm achchi dikhti hai.Wo uske saath roz chatting
karta hai.
Gu:Hmm.Tum nahi karti?
Ri:Main kya karungi usse chatting karke?I hardly know her.
Ni:To kya hua?Baat karne se hi baat banti hai.
At:Hey! Ye to Airtel ki ad ka dialogue hai na?
Ni:Tumne bhi dekha?Sharman looks so cute hai na?
Abhi:Tum log kahan se kahan aa gaye ho.And Nikki tumhe
wo kabse cute lagne laga?
Ni:Excuse me! Mera man hai.Koi bhi cute lag sakta hai.
At:Hey! Tum log ladna band karo yaar.
Ma:Chalo Maths class ka time ho gaya hai.
***********
After the school
Mu:Arre yaar! Ye 1 hi sum hai jo mujhe nahi aa raha.
Ri:Haan mujhe bhi nahi aa raha.Ghar jaakar usse puchungi.
Mu:Kya yaar! Bichare ka itna achcha naam hai uske naam
le na.Teri uske saath shaadi thodi na hui hai jo "wo"
"wo" kiye jaa rahi hai.
Ri:Theek hai meri maa! Uska I mean Armaan ka naam lungi.
Mu:Jeeti raho beta!
************
At home
Ri:Hey Rexx! Kaise ho?
After thoda bohot cuddling,she saw Armaan in a corner
looking terrified.
Ri:Armaan kya hua?
Ar:Tum uske saath kaise reh sakti ho?I mean wo hamesha
bhonkta rehta hai.
Ri:Armaan! Agar tum usse friendly nahi rahoge to wo bhi
tumse darr kar tumpar bhonkega.Uske saath friendly
raho phir dekhna wo bhi tumhe pasand karega.
She forcefully drags him towards Rexx and makes him pat
Rexx's back.Rexx in turn wags his tail.
Ri:Dekha.Rexx bhi tumhe pasand karne laga hai.
Ar:Hmm.Par mujhe thoda time lagega.
Ri:Armaan! Mujhe tumhari help chahiye.
Ar:Bolo.
Ri:Hume kuch sums diye gaye the karne ke liye.Mujhe 1
chodke baaki sab aa gaye.
Ar:Theek hai.Tum fresh hokar aa jao.Main dekhta hun.
************
Mu:Oye! Ridzie,sum aaya?Abhi tak Mayank aur Gunjan ka
bhi pata nahi hai nahi to unhi se puch leti.
Ri:Haan Armaan ne samjhaya.
Mu:Maths mein genius hai kya?
Ri:Har subject mein.Apne class ka topper hai.
Mu:Wow yaar! Waise abhi wo sab chod aur sum bata.
She explains the sum the same way as Armaan had.
Mu:Samajh mein aa gaya.Thanks bolna meri taraf se
Armaan ko.
Ri:Yeah sure.
*************
At night
Ri:Armaan meri 1 book tumhari pass reh gayi hai.
Ar:Le lo.[engrossed in his laptop]
Ri:Kya kar rahe ho?
Ar:Maya se chatting.Aao baitho.
MA [ ] And AR [ ] will mean their chatting.
MA [Kahan ho? Tution par bhi nahi aaye?]
AR [At my ex-fiance's home sitting right next to her]
MA [What the hell are you doing with her?You had a
breakup na?]
AR [Had a patchup too.Do I smell something burning?]
MA [Shutup Armaan now don't talk to me.]
With this she went offline.
Ri:Armaan tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.
Ar:Chill! Main usse baat karta hun.
Calls her up.
Ar:Hey! Sorry baba! Mujhe nahi pata tha tumhe itna bura
lagega.
Ma:............
Ar:Good good tum bhi sorry bol rahi ho achcha hai.
Ma:............
Ar:Haan theek hai wait for 5 mins
Disconnects the call
Ri:Kya hua?
Ar:Khud hi jaan lo.Usse tumse baat karni hai.
Starts a video conference.
Ma:Umm Riddhima?
Ri:[looks at Armaan he gives a nod]Haan?
Ma:Hey I'm Maya.
Ri:Hi !
Ma:Wo abhi jo hua uske liye I'm sorry.Mujhe aisa nahi
nahi karna chahiye tha.
Ri:It's OK.I understand.
Ma:Thanks.
Ri:Hey mujhe padhna hai.I'll take your leave.Bye!
Ma:Bye!
As she reached the door she heard Maya say
"She's really sweet!"
With a smile Riddhima left Armaan's room.
**********
Precap:
Armaan goes back.
Someone's breakup.
Riddhima furious.
***********
Hey kaisa laga?
Batana han?
Keep smiling and commenting !!!

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@debby_11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

bohot accha laga update...
riddhima is so sweet...armaan too😳
and precap was a bit dangerous....
whose break up and why is riddhima furious???
will be waiting for the next part...
love
debadrita

Edited by choco_pie92 - 15 years ago

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: choco_pie92
bohot accha laga update...
riddhima is so sweet...armaan too😳
and precap was a bit dangerous....
whose break up and why is riddhima furious???
will be waiting for the next part...
love
debadrita

Hmmmm Parde mein rehne do raaz ko 😆
Agle part mein pata chal jayega
n Thank you 😃

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice part

love
Riddss

Thank you 😃

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Aishwarya sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

acha aab mujhe samj mein aya yeh maya kahan se ayi.
n armaan shirt less woh toh kitan hot hoga na 😍
well i think the break up is between Armaan n maya
love u
riya

Edited by ishwariya - 15 years ago

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Cutee999

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

hey, nice part yaar, thanks for pm me.

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: ishwariya
acha aab mujhe samj mein aya yeh maya kahan se ayi.
n armaan shirt less woh toh kitan hot hoga na 😍
well i think the break up is between Armaan n maya
love u
riya

Hmmmm.Dekhte hain aapka guess sahi nikalta hai ya nahi 😊
Love you too 😊
N thanks 😃