~ff-when the dorks met morons(part17,pg95)du c:-)~ - Page 13

k guys before starting the update i have to tell u something imp

ohhh...!! m the first one.........

awesome part !!
superb!!
do continue soon!!

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here i go again
third post once again

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wow that was so gud⭐️
teriffic mayur scene👏
i like them this way
fighting like tom and jerry😆

and sajan was also great yaar😳😳
but what is all this locket situation???😕😕
i mean gunjan ka G toh samajh aa gaya par yeh S??????😕

love u!!!!for such a wonderful update!!!!!!!!!
muah!!!!!!!!!!!😳


ab shikayat sunn😆........................

u were the one who wanted an update from my side
and i have already updated but u have still not read
maate pm toh padha karo🥺

awesomeeeeeee updt dolly devi... as usual..😉
mindblastingggg.. superbbb..
luved it..
d cont soon...

hey dolly!!!

that was just a mindblowing update...just lovd it to core!!

sant wait to read further..
do cont soon
thans for the PM ..do PM in future tooooo!!
do cont soon
m waiting
muuah!!!

Originally posted by: dolly18

k guys before starting the update i have to tell u something imp

i have been recieiving many pms lately saying that i had said this ss is on both sg n mn.. but that is really happeing here.. i am sorry for that guys

i knew loads of sg stuuf is going on in the ff now

but hang on a lil bit more,, mayur mystery n love story is goling to start preety soon

n now a quicky update , its longer then b4 hop u guys will like it

loads of lov doll

n special lov n hugs to simi, sanu n sush

my beautiful mystc n angelic three s's

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Part 3

(FLASHBACK, YESTERDAY)

(BY SAMRAT)

Apparently I was too fast nn my car, my vintage bug skidded across the lane at a dangerous speed..

At least the baby girl would be safe'

It will just kill me''

N then the hell broke loose..

I saw my run skidding straight towards a girl who was frozen terrified on the side lane'

"damm it I wasn't going to die alone'."

i gasped''the distance between was closing on real fast' no god pls don't let her die because of me'.

I could see her clearly now, she was just few meters away,, she wore spectacles n kinda looked nerdy'yet still I noticed that she was too beautiful to be 4 real'

She was mystic, refreshing and angelic'..

It would feel great if I ever got to kiss her'

jeez samrat!! Are u even for real?????you r abt to kill her n die urself n this is what u r thinking '.abt kisses???? pta c pta c mainu !!!!! koi sidha kam nahi kar sakda eh munda !!!!!!! Dungerr mar reha hai bt fer v suchrega nahi !!!!!!!

Boys will always be boys'.. 100% correct !!!!!

I shook myselfn acted instantly(thereby not giving any time to my mind to pry in gutter n think stupidly of kisses n other girl boy stuff)

I pulled of the lurch of my window in a rather hasty manner..

As the door to my right flew open I leaned out of it n shouted at her'

"CHASHMISH PLS'.PLS MOVE "

Her eyes were fixed on the bonnet of my skidding at dangerous speed car n the only reaction she showed to my shouting my lungs out at her were shuddering a little' apart from that she didn't react..

Well may be there was hardly any time for her to react'.. obvious itna chillaega to bechari kaise react karegi !!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

What happened next was a quick bluurr.. I was thrown out of my bug as I had leaned rather heavily over the window'.and I rolled over the road, feeling bruises building up across the length of my arms but not feeling the pain of them yet'..a hot ,spiked pain raced across my forehead n I heard her agonized shriek

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SCENE 2==

(PRESENT)

(BY narrator)

(nupur is in kitchen , icing the chocolate birthday cake that she had made herself for gunjan's surprise birthday party,,,,, n mayank is at a jewellery n accessory shop just across the street' both r talking over the phone'.) gadhe !!!!!!

N=(while writing gunjan's name on the cake in white icicng)of ho mayank' itni der se tum ek gft nahin khareed paye??? Insaan ho ya bail gaddi????? hehehehehehehehehehe !!!!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 Hats off to nupur !!!!!!

M==nupur mein aaj gunjan se pehli baar milne vaala hun'.aur upar se its her birthday tonight, to uske liye kuch khaas khareedne mein time to lagega na??? ooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!!!!!

N=(banging the icing cone on the counter in sudden anger).. acha badi parwa ho rahi hai mr shergill ko gunjan ki' mayank majra kya hai????

M=(highly amused at nupur's angry tone) tum kis baat pe itna gussa kar rahi ho????? nehle pe dehle !!!!!! Mayu roxxxxx yaar !!!!! Muah !!!!! Love him !!!!!

N=mein???....... mein kahan gussa kar rahi hun??? 'vo to mein bas' vo to bas' haan vo to bas mein yeh keh rahi thi k tum jaldi gift khareedo n ghar aajao varna aisa na ho k birthday girl birthday guest se pehle phadhar jaye'.aaj kal k ladke ek bhi kaam time par nahi kar sakte by god'.

M=(holding his mobliephone close to his ear wedged between his shouldern n head, while using both his hands in checking out 4 some watches for gunjan'')bas bas miss morena express, aa raha hun mein ,,, aapko mujhe apne updesh sunane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai'..

N== updesh to tum pehle ghar aao to dungi tumhein' by god mayank aagar ab tum late huye na to promise tumhare chotte chotte tukhre kar k cake mein bake karne vale hun''

M== chee nupur bilkul tasty nahin lagega'..yucky yuck BY GOD'.. sudhar ja dolly sudhar ja !!!!!!! Yahaan bhi khaane main vo !!!! Tujhe pta hai ke tu use kal se khaane ki dish samajhkar baithi hai ?????? 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

N== TUM KO TO MEIN'.

M= acha acha suno gusse ka level thoda kam karo bas mein do minute mein pahunch raha hun.. ok???

Nupur banged the phone on from the other side of the line.. ..

M=(massaging his ears, as nupur had been literally yelling t him)by god''..yeh ladki hai ya phullan devi??? Mujhe pta hi tujhe achanak kaun yaad aaya !!!!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Chotu (a worker in the shop)starts giggling,, apparently he had been hearing mayank n nupur's telephonic conversation'..

Moreover his ears were becoming red ' because it had been real hard 4 her in the last few days,''.

M== tu kyun itna has raha hai?????nautanki chal ri yahan pe???? Yahaan pe bhi vo yaad aaya !!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Chotu nods his head in denial n still was having a hard time controlling his giggles n laughter hysteresis..

M=(handing chotu a watch)yeh le ,, gift wrap karde ise,,,, n Colgate ki koi add nahin karni hai tujhe, isiliye yeh apne daant dikhane band kar'

Juat then munshi ji (the true owner of the shop enters , he is one one of his daily evening rounds to his shops)

Munshi ji= are mayank baba aap aa gaye,'. Aapka locket tyaar hai'. (turning his face to shop helper) jare chotu jake locket le aa'

M=(confused) locket????? Kaunsa locket munshi ji??

Munshi ji= vo aaj subha samrat baba aaye the ek locket theek karvanne k liye dene.. us locket ki chain tut gayi thi'. Mujhe laga aap vahi locket lene aaye hain'.

M(getting more confused)= samrat aaya tha??? Par uske paas to koi bhi locket nahin hai''aur usne to mujhe kuch bataya bhi nahi..

In the meantime.. chotu comes back to the counter with the locket n handed it down to mayank'

Mayank takes the silver locket n toys with its pendent'.

A strange premonition told him that he had seen that locket somewhere b4'..

The pendent was encrusted with beautiful little diomonds' it was in the shape of two alphabets entwined together'. The two alphabets were S n G'.

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SCENE 3>>>

?(FLASHBACK, YESTERDAY)

(CONCERT HALL_)

[guys m skipping the accident part from the flashbacks for the timebeing.. will reaveal what happened during that accident a little later' now mm starting with what happened just after the accident'.

In this scene, samrat is running down a muddy lane just some distance away from the backdoor to the concert hall..his shirt is torn n messy with loads of wrinkles here n there n mud n blood stains all over it'

Its sleeves are rolled up reavealing nasty cuts n bruises across the whole length of his arms'.

His blue denim jeans are messed up to n so is the the case with his hair'it is standing in all directions with some of his messy hair sticking to his forehead n cheeks due to sweat'n last but actually not the leastthere is this small yet deep gash just above his right temple,, due to it that side of his face n neck is covered with blood'..] Bet !!!!! Is haalat main bhi vo cutest lag rha hoga !!!!!!

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(by samrat)

Her face never left my eyes'. It kept on popping inside my brain even while I was running n stumbling on my way to the concert hall'.

Chashmish saved me'.i owed whole of my life to her..

Hadn't it been for her today ,, I would have totally , completely messed up big time'.

She saved me even though I gave her a zillion wounds tonight in return..

I gasped n winced for breadth ,, my legs felt like jelly.. it looked as if I had been running for hours rather then 4 just a few minutes'

Just there u r almost there dude''.

I hastily plucked my ear phones back into my ears n dialled mayank's no while still running'..he picked up my call on the first ring it self'..

M== where the hell r u twin???? jahannum main !!!!!!! aana hai ????? 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

S= I am almost there , I can already see the back door of the hall,, mayank pls start the concert go on stage n distract the audience ,, I need few minutes to get ready,, I look like shit n feel like one too

M== r u running???? I can hear u gasping for breadth??? What the hell had u been doing??? kaan kheench ke poochna mayank is se !!!!!!!!

S== now is not the time pls mayank go'.

By this time I had finally reached the back door n I pushed it open using all my energy'. There were loads of people present backstage, all running here n there, n all stopped on my entry n started gawking at me instead of running amock

M== I told u I am not going to go without u'. vehla !!!!!

I closed my eyes,, mayank could be a real turd sometimes'.

S== u have to go ,, pls a lot is at stake to night ,,, we cant mess up this show bro' someone really sacrificed loads for it'.

Saying so I clutched the broken locket that was in my hand more tightly..

It felt very warm against my cold n sweaty skin'..

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thats it guys

lov

dolly