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PART 16

PARTY HALL

Riddhima and armaan were standing together with poonam and prem on each sides of them.

Ar:basket pllz ..maine kaha na....😕

Ri:armaan pllz ..mujhe ab tumse koi baat nahi karni hai.😡

Ar:arre maine kaha na I'm sorry.😕

Pr:buddy ..maaf kardo bechare ko.😊

Ri:buddy pllz ..tum iss baremein kuch mat bolo.😡

Poo:but still armaan tum kya apne emotions control nahi kar sakte ...thode der baad hi phone kar lete.😡

Ar:yaar pony tum meri dost ho ya basket ki.😕

Poo:umm...riddhima ki bhi aur tumhari bhi..😊

Ar:theek hai apne prem ko bolna emotions control karne apne pagphere ke time.😡

Poo:armaan!!!😡

Ri:armaan plllz mujhse tumse koi baat nahi karni hai.😕

Intern gang enters.

Gang:hey guys ..kaise ho?😃

Ar(murmurs):bahut bura. 😡

Ra:kuch kaha armaan.😊

Ar:nahi ..nahi toh ..waise guys tumlog kahan reh gaye the.😊

Mus:woh kya hai na armaan humhe teri tarah chutti nahi milithi isiliye late hogaye.😡

At:haan yaar maloom tu aur ridz nahi ayi isiliye humhe kitni sari duties karni padi.😕

Anjie:waise armaan ..humhe tumse kuch baat puchni thi.😊

Ridzie got alarmed with this.

Ri:guys main abhi aayi.😊

Mus:kya abhi aayi ..yahin ruk😊(whispereing to her)dekh ab tera armaan kaise sab kuch batayega.😃

Ar:kya hua muskaan..jaane dona basket.😊

Mus:arre yaar main keh rahi thi ki reception party tum dono ki shaddi ki hai toh dono ko saath mein rehna chahiye hai😊...(turning to gang)hai na.😃

Intern gang:haan haan.😃😃

Ar:yaa right😊. (in his head) yeh mere dost aaj mujhe riddhima ke saath rehne de rahe hain..jaroor kuch gadbad hai..let's see.😕

Ar:haan bilkul sahi kaha tumne😊...(holding ridzie)basket tum pllz mere saath hi raho.😃

Ri:haan haan sure.😡

Ar: (in his mind) yaar basket toh abhi tak bahut hi zyada gussa hai.😕

Mus:accha armaan tera din kasie guzra aaj.😊

Ar;:bahut bura.😕

Ra:huh.

Ar:bahut accha raha.😊.aaj naya project start karke complete bhi kardiya.😃

At:accha..very good mere bhai..proud of you.😃

Ar:thanks 😊

Anjie:aur kuch batao na.😊

Ar:haan bata ta hoon...aaj pura din main prem ke saath tha..uska bahut sir khaya..usne bhi mera bahut sir khaya.😊

Aise karke woh sab batata hai (excluding phone convo aur ridzie's anger)

Poonam aa kar ridzie ke saath baat karne lag jaati hain.

But ridzie ka sara dhyaan itern gang aur armaan ki bataon pe rehta hai😆😆

Anjie:accha armaan woh...humhe tumse kuch aur bhi puchna tha...actually inn ladkon ko.😊

Ra:huh..haan ..woh tujhse kuch puchna tha .woh terea kal ka din kasia tha.😊

Ar:bahut accha tha ..apart from tumlog ka mere room mein chipna.😡

Ra:kya yaar..yeh mera idea bilkul nahi tha...in ladkiyon ka tha.😕

Ar:I know ..i know..meri pyaari saaliyan😡

Mus:aur phir.😊

Ar:aur phir kya...😕

Anjie:phir kya kiya .😊

Ar:phir kya😡 (in his mind) oh..so inhe yeh jaan ne mein interest hai ki aage kya hua 😊(he looks towards ridzie whoz all tensed)yeh basket itne tension mein...oh ho...samjh gaya.😃

Ar:phir ..wahi jo humesha karte hai.😊

Gang:kya ...batana.😃

Ar:yaar pura din itna tiring tha toh so gaye..aur kya.😊

Gang:huh.😕

Here riddhima did a imaginary victory dance thinking :yes mujhe pata tha mera armaan kuch nahi kahe ga ..yes ..guys dekh liya mere armaan iss cho chweet..love you so much armaan.😳😳

She was feeling ki abhi jaake usse jor se hug karoon..nahi main ab bhi armaan se naraaz hoon..uske wajah nani aur muma ne kitni tang khichai ki meri...huh😡.

she goes aaway from there

Tabhi pure hall ki lights dim hojati hain and our mr.armaan mallik starts singing.

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun


Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai

Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu

Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Mera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai

Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane

Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla....

Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa De Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota.....
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo

Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane

Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaun toh Kaha????
Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera

Teri Yaado Main Rahoo

Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi
Teri Aankho Main Milu

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo

Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai

Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

By the end of song ridzie armaan ko hug kar rahi thi .

Ar:so am I forgiven now.😊

ridzie nods her head.😳😳

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Mus:yaar yeh armaan ne toh sach mein kuch bhi nahi bataya .😕

Anjie:ab kya karenge.😕

Ar:haar maan jao guys 😃

Gang:huh.😕

Ar:or nahi toh kya..ab mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki tumlog ko kya maloom karna hai..toh main toh woh nahi bataonga.😊

Ra:aise kya kar raha hai yaar batana plllz.😕

Ar:guys tumlog ko sharam nahi aati aisi baat karne mein.😡

Anjie:kyun tumhe batane mein sharam aayegi.😡

Ar:aayegi ...ofcourse aayegi...main tumlog ki tarah besharam thode hi hoon.😃

Mus:oye khudki jhooti tariff mat kar samjha.

Ar:and waise mujhe ab samjhmein aagaya hai ki agar maine tumlog ko batadiya ki ..you know..toh basket mujhse naraz hojayegi..aur mujhe kissi pagal kutte ne nahi kaata hai jo main aisa karoon.😃

Anjie:matlab..agar ridzie gussa nahi hoti toh tum humhe batate right.😃

Ar:wrong...waise tumlog ko yeh sab jaanne mein itna interest kyun hai ..tumlog mein se toh kissi ki shaddi nahi ho rahi hai.😃

At:prem ki ho rahi hai na.😊

Mus:haan ..tu prem ko toh batayega na.😃

Ar:jee nahi uski koi zaroorat nahi hai..woh karega usse jo karne hai'main kyun apni very personal love life usse bataon ..i'm sure usse jaana bhi nahi hoga.😃

At:accha waise yeh very personal love life kya hota hai ?😕

Ar:woh jo tumlog besharamo ki tarah puccha rahe ho.😡

Ra:accha toh humog sirf personal love life ke baremein pucch te hain.😃

Ar:pucchna.😊

Mus:accha tune ridzie ko kuch gift kiya kya?😃

Ar:haan kiya na.😃

Anjie:kya?😃

Ar:woh uski left hand mein jo dikh raha hai woh.😃

At:woh bracelet..yaar mast hai ..bahut accha hai.😃

Ar:maloom hai.😃

Anjie:ab kaise tumne yeh baat batadi.😕

Ar:agar acche bachon ki tarah acchi batein puchoge toh koi bhi batadega.😃

Mus:accha humlog abhi ridzie ko jaakar puchte hain.😊

Ridzie prem aur poonam ke saath baat kar rahi thi.

Ri:guys tumlog itne jaldi jaa rahe ho.😕

Pr:buddy yeh tumhe jaldi lag raha hai.😲

Ri:ofcourse...kal hi toh shaddi hui hai ..araam se chale jao.😊

Poo:yaar ridhu hospital ka kaam hai mujhe.😕

R:phir humlog kitne dino tak nahi mil payenge na.😭

Pr:oh ..mera buddy sad hogaya😊 ..nahi aisa kuch nahi hai..main tumhe roz phone karonga pakka promise😊...lekin aisa time batake rakhna jab tumhare armaan ko romance karne nahi sojta.😉

Poo:aisa time toh shayad hi hoga ..haina riddhu.😆😆😆

Ri:poonam!!!!😳..lekin phir bhi..aur waise buddy ne boldiya phone karega...tu mujhe phone nahi karegi.😕

Poo:main tujhe kyun phone karoon😕..main apne dost armaan ko phone karongi..tujhe tera buddy kar raha hai na phone.😡

Ri:haan haan karlena bus.😃

Itne mein wahan anjie aur muskan aajate hain.

Mus:oye ridzie humlog ko tujhse kuch pucchna hai.😊

Ri:kya pucchna hai guys..wapas wahi wai baat toh nahi na.😊

Anjie:nahi ridzie..humlog puchna hai ki armaan ne tujhe koi gift diya kya?😃

Ri:haan diya na yeh braclet di.😳(in memory of ms.braclet😆)


Mus:yeh baat toh jhat se batadi.😕

Ri:guys !!!😡

Mus:achca accha theek hai bye.😊

Anjie:poonam tum humare saath chalona zara.

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RP(RIDZ N PREM)

Pr:oye buddy mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha.😊

Ri:kya puchna tha.😃

Pr:tum poonam ki freeind ho na .😊

Ri:tumhe ab tak doubt hai.😕

Pr:nahi I mean best friend.😊

Ri:buddy.😡

Pr:I mean tum usse bachpan se jaanti hona.😊

Ri:buddy tum directly bologe ke nahi.😡

Pr:accha ...matlab.. toh tumhe pata hoga na ki usse kaise gifts pasand hain.😃

Ri:kyun tum nahi puch sakte usse.😕

Pr:yaar tumne likes and dislikes puchne bola tha ..yeh nahi ke kaunsi gift acchi lagti hai.😕

Ar:kya chal raha hai guys.😃

Pr:yaar yeh buddy nahi bata rahi ke poonam ko kaise gifts pasand hain.

Ar:guess karna .😊

Pr:kya guess karoon main ..mujhse nahi ho raha guess.😕

Ar:phir bhi try kar yaar.😊

Pr:armaan😡..maine bola na nahi ho raha😡

Aise woh log argue karne lagte hain.

Ri:guys 😡...ab main kuch kahoon.

Ar:ofcourse basket kahona.😃

Ri:armaan tumhe pata hai kya ki mujhe kaise gifts pasand hain.😊

Ar:umm..haan..nahi..i ..i don't know.😕

Ri:right 😃..tum mujhe jo kuch bhi gift karte ho mujhe bahut accha lagta hai..toh waise hi buddy tum apne hissab se poonam ko kuch bhi gift karo apne choice ka..and I'm sure usse woh pasand aayega ..bahut pasand aayega..pata hai kyun?😃

Prem and armaan shake there heads negatively.😆😆

Ri:kyunki tum usse gift kar rahe ho..yehi bahut hai.😃

Pr:thanks buddy.😊

Ri:rakho apna thanks apne pass.😡

Pr:kyun?😕

Ri:jarahe ho na kal sham ko wapas.😡

Ar:what!!!😲
ri:haan ..kal yeh dono wapas delhi jaa rahe hain.😭

Ar:yaar aise thode hi chalta hai.😡

Pr:yaar armaan ab tu mat shuru hoja ..waise bhi thode din toh tumlog delhi aa rahe ho.😳

Ar:oh ho shaddi ke liye na😉..haan haa...basket samjha karo bechare ko apni shaddi ki tyaari karni hai.😉

Ri:theek hai.😊

LOVE

SAMMY

Edited by sammy4u - 15 years ago
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the part was fantastic armaan was very nice 😆😆 i loved the part thanxs for the pm
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choooooo cute thnx fr d pm n cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
gr8 part
loved it
armaan bal bal bach gaya
acha hua sab kuch nahi bataya
thnks for pm continue soon
TC
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Posted: 15 years ago
HeyDear,
Awesome part yaar amazing!
I am so happy that everything is fine between AR!
And hope that after this no more fight hehe,
Also not between Prem + Poonam
And ya i hope that poonam likes the gift heheh,
Once again loved the part=)
Update-Cont Soon / PM Me=)
LoveSurat.
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Posted: 15 years ago
chooooo chweet....loved it....amazing.....👍🏼 cont soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Chweet part
Thanks for the PM
Take care

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