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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sammy4u

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<font color="#666633" size="4">hey guys i'm back...but seriously mujhe wahan bikul accha nahi laga..the day humlog wahan pahunche i was like mujhe abhi ke abhi wapis ghar jaana ..missed you guys a lot (IF is very addictive you see). but ab main wapis aagyi hoon and now its time for update too....lekin abhi tak update ready nahi hai..so i promise ki next update of my both the ff's will be up before 14th june.

P'S:iss baar main apna promise pakka nibhaungi.

love
sammy
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Okay no prob sammy take ur time..
And rest well.... :-) :-) No need to hurry dear...

Take care ,
krina
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey guys yeh part regular part se chota hai so plz bear with it.

PART 15

MALLIK EMPIRE

Ar:hooosh'yeh kaam toh pura hogaya 'and ab koi kaam nahi bacha hai 'chal prem basket aur pony ke paas chalte hain.πŸ˜ƒ

Pr:nahi ja sakte hain

Ar:kyun yaar'dekh project ka kaam pura kardiya na abhi jaa sakte hain.πŸ˜ƒ

Pr:nahi jaa sakte kyun abhi tak shaam nahi hui ..time check kar.😑

Ar:kya aba tak shaam nahi huiπŸ˜•'yaar abhi tak to sirf bara hi baje hain.😑

Pr:right ..so ab kya karenge ..yeh kaam toh kuch jaldi hi khatm hogaya .😑

Ar:aur humare barah baj gaye'main ab riddhima se baat kiye bina nahi reh paunga ..yaar kuch toh sochte hain.

GUPTA HOUSE

ANJIE-RIDZIE'S ROOM

Anjie ,muskaan,ponaam milkar riddhima ko ched rahi thi.

Mus:so ridzie batana kya kiya kal tumlog ne .πŸ˜‰

Ri:shaddi ki kal humlog ne..shyad tum bhul gayi.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Anjie:haan par shaddi ke baad kya kiya.πŸ˜‰

Ri:rona 'dhona..kyun dekha nahi kaise mere saath saath armaan rone laga tha bidaai ke samay.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Poo:but still uske baad?πŸ˜‰

Ri:uske baad humlog ghar chalegaye'guys tumlog toh armaan ke ghar aaye the na'remember balcony mein chipe the.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Anjie:uffo ridzie uske aage kya kiya batana.😑

Ri:armaan ne apko muski,atul aur rahul ko dhakein maar kar room se nikaal diya.πŸ˜ƒ

Mus:haan aur uske aage.😑

Ri:uske aage shayad tumlog chalegaye wahan se'RIGHT!!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Anjie:ridzie plllz stop it 😑'aur kya tu please batayegi ..ke ..ki 'how was ur first night?πŸ˜‰

Ridzie:di'first night matlab humlog toh acche bacchon ki tarah so gaye.πŸ˜ƒ

Mus,poo:accha baccha aur armaan😑'please ..you got to be kidding right.😑

Anjie:aur nahi toh kya'ridzie plz batana yaar.😑

Ri:di aapko sharam nahi aati hai kya.πŸ˜•

Mus:kaheki sharam'plllz yaar batana?πŸ˜•

Ri:jee nahi main nahi batane waliπŸ˜•'waise jaankar kya kar na hai?

Anjie:apni first ke kaam layenge'batana.πŸ˜‰

Ri:bahut jald poonam ki first hojaygi..usse puchlena'main nahi bataungi.😑

Mus,anjie:fine mat bata 😑'.humlog armaan se puchlenge.πŸ˜ƒ

Ri:woh bhi nahi batayega.😑

Poo:itna trust πŸ˜‰

Ri:ofcourse,..yeh koi batane wali baat nahi hai.πŸ˜ƒ

Mus:I bet who bata dega 'who bhi tere hi samne hum sabko.😑

Ri:aisa nahi hoga?πŸ˜ƒ

Anjie:aisa hoga ridzie dekhlena.πŸ˜‰

Ri:fine.πŸ˜ƒ

MALLIK EMPIRE

Ar:idea!!!!!!

Pr:kya

Ar:chal khidki se chalte hain.

Pr:bekar idea hai'kyunki abhi toh who sab saath mein baithe honge'koi accha idea dena yaar.

Ar:sale'phir khud koi idea dhund na mere peeche kyun pada hai.

Some time later

Pr:idea!!πŸ˜ƒ
ar:jaldi bol.

Pr:tu poonam ko phone kar ..main buddy ko karta hoon'phir tu buddy se baat kar lena main poonam se karlonga.πŸ˜‰

Ar:saliyan nahi chodengi'unlog maloom hoga ki yeh humari idea hai'last time humne kuch asia hi kiya tha.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Pr:arre ..yeh baat sirf buddy aur poonam ko maloom hai ki hum dono saath mein hain'saliyon ko thode hi maloom hai.πŸ˜‰

Ar:great idea.πŸ˜ƒ

GUPTA HOUSE

Anjie aur muskaan kaam pe chali jaati hai'thode der mein poonam bhi bahar chali jaati hai 'ghar pe sirf rizie,nani,padma rehte hain aur batein kar rhea.

Tabhi ridzie ka phone bajta hai.

padma:yeh zaroor armaan ka phone hoga.πŸ˜ƒ

Nani:badmash riddhu ke bina reh hi nahi paata hai.πŸ˜ƒ

Ri (blushes):nahi yeh armaan ka call nahi hai'.buddy ka hai'

MALL

Poonam thodi shopping karne aayi thi ..tabhi uska cell bajta hai.

Poo:haan armaan bolo kya kaam hai😊

Ar:mujhe riddhima se baat karni hai.

Poo:nahi hosakti 😊

Ar:kyun😑

Poo:kyunki who mere saath nahi hai'ghar pe hai'

ar:achha theek then '.bye''nahi nahi..le prem se baat kar.😊

PR(prem-ridzie)

Ri:buddy who mere saath nahi.

Pr:kya 😲'phir kahan hai ?

Ri:shopping

Pr:accha who saliyan'hain kya?😊

Ri:nahi di aur muskaan duty pe gaye hain.

Pr:that's great ..lo armaan se baat karo.😊

AR

Ar:hi basket'kaisi ho?

Ri:subah hi toh mile the na'abhi kyun puch rahe ho.😊

Ar:yaar main tumse itne pyaar se baat kar raha hoon aur tum ho ki ek baar mera naam bhi theek se nahi le rahi.😊

Ri:mujhe pata hai buddy ke tumhara naam prem hai.😊

Ar:buddy'prem'basket tum theek toh hona 'yaar main armaan bol raha hoonπŸ˜•

Ri:mujhe maloom hai.πŸ˜ƒ

Ar:toh tumne mujhe prem kyun bulaya.😑

Ri:haan haan'nani aur mumma bhi yahin hain.😊

Ar:accha nani aur aunty se bachne its ok 'πŸ˜‰

They talk for long.

Ri:accha ab main rakhti hoon buddy ..bye😊

Ar:nahi ..nahi ..no bye 'shy pehle I love you bolo'.nahi toh main naraj hojaonga.πŸ˜†

Ri:buddy aise nahi karte hain..plz understand.😊

Ar:no'matlab no.😑

Ri:plllz

Padma:nahi nahi its ok'humlog yahan se chale jate hain πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Nani:aur tum shanti se tumhare armaan ko I love you bol do.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Ri:mumma 'who.

Padma:tujhe kya laga mujhe samjhmein nahi aata ki who pagla tujhe phone kiya bina nahi rahega aur kissi bhi tarah phone karega.πŸ˜ƒ

Nani:prem ki mobile se prem banker baat karta hai..badmaash.πŸ˜ƒ

They go away from there.

Ar:basket I love you toh bolo.😊

Ri:mujhe nahi bolna.😑

Ar:kyun?

Ri:mumma aur nani ko pata pad gaya ki tumne phone kiya hai'so mr.mallik bye 'bye.😑

She cuts the call.

Ar:yaar basket toh mujhse naraz hogayi'ab kya karoon.

PP (prem ' poonam)

Poo:prem yeh kya tha?

Pr:idea

Poo:what idea.

Prem explains him ki kaise first time use koi idea diya aur who kisi use ka nahi tha.

Poo:tch..tch'poor you.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Pr:haan haan haso haso..mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni'bye.😑

Poo:array suno toh. But the line was dead.

Poo:yeh toh naraz hogaya

Some time later.

Poonam got a text

"I love you a lot "-prem

Poonam blushed and replied

"love you too"

Precap:armaan ka ridzie ko reception party mein mana.aur kya armaan apne doston ko first night ke baremein batakar ridzi ko aur naraz kar dega.

Edited by sammy4u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
HeyDear,
Totally loved the part and loved the AR phone scene hehe;p
I hope she is not that much angry at him hehe,
And Poonam-Prem are also sweet together =)
In next part plz AR romantic scenes,
Update-Cont Soon / PM me asalways=)
LoveSurat.
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Posted: 15 years ago
phone karne wala idea acha tha but bechara Ammy.
Awesome.
Great part.
Love it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
love the AR phone convo
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey...

awesum part..

cont. soon..

thanks for da pm...

Edited by ryka_27 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi, sammy

Thank u for the update... it was nice n cute update... I think Armaan will not say anything... he will about to .. but he will lost in the thughts or flashbaclk of first night and will upset his friends but make ridzie happy :)

Of course Armaan know how to convince ridzi.. LOL
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyya Sammy puttar
Update karke khush karditta πŸ˜ƒ


Teddy Bear Graphics

Cute part par yaar Armaan ne already Riddhima ko naraaz kar diya ab to wo aur naraz karne waala hai πŸ˜•
Par Riddhima ko zyada time naraz mat rakhna, kyunki Kalyan door nahi hai πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Thanks for the PM
Update soon
Take care

Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiiii
sammy, it was a grt part yaar, bbut small one, try to giv a long nd a romantic update next time, plss

thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
such a cute part.. it was simply awesome!

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