DOSTI YA PYAAR? AR-PP a bit on pg 97 - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry i was busy in my assignments so didn't commented before but now m back the part was mindblowing 😊👍🏼 thanxssssssss for pm n continue soon n don't break ar marriage
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome n hilarious part
loved it
bechare AR
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi, sammy...

Very nice story... Both AR and SA are my favorite jodi. More over vivah is my favortite movie... Glad that you came up with something new.. title is nice it self tells a lot about concept.

Plzz add me to ur PM list....

thanks,

Krina
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part..Thx 4 taking my suggestion in2 consideration.Love Prem-poonam in this part
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyyy!!!!!
Koi gadbad mat karna kyunki main Pune mein rehti hun aur Mumbai aakar aapki khabar lene mein time nahi lagega 😆😆😆😆😆
Waise bohot achcha part tha
Continue soon n thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sam, bahut acha part tha, hilarious nd cool part
i enjoyed it, thanks for the pm, do update soon
waiting for that
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sammy
it was a cute part, especially the phone and pipe scene was funny. enjoyed reading it.

thanks for the Pm and continue soon..

loads of love..
Mel..
Edited by Caramel_21 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey nice part...
update asap...
want to know prem's reaction....
Edited by shristi sarda - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 12

Prem abhi tak kuch bol nahi raha tha aur expressionless khada tha.

Ri:prem tum pllz kuch kaho na pllz.😭

Pr:pehle ..pehle kyun nahi bataya.😕

Ri:humlog uss din darr gaye the,tumhe bura...😕

Pr:toh kya tumhe yeh laga ke mujhe abhi batane se mujhe bura nahi lagega.😡

Ri:aisa nahi actually…prem kya tum pllz thoda shanti rakhoge ..main tumhe sab clearly batati hoon.😕

Prem doesn't say anything.

Ri:actually uss din jab poonam ready ho rahi thi tab usse hospital se call aaya ki uske patient ki condition critical hai…maine kaha ki main ya phir armaan uss case ko handle karne chale jaye..but humhe uss case ke baremin kuch bhi maloom nahi tha..humne socha ki sabko bolte hain..tabhi uss pandit ne keh diya ki sagai ussi din hosakti hai..isiliye phir armaan ne yeh idea nikal tabhi sagai mein time tha toh humne socha ki tab tak poonam wapas aajayegi..lekin aisa nahi hua usne case toh handle karliya but traffic mein phas gayi..tab armaan ne kaha ki agar main Poonam ki jagah tumse sagai karloon toh..main bhi maangayi aur poonam ki dress pehenkar aagayi..pir jab poonam aayi toh humne wapas apni jagah leli…mujhe pata hai..infact poonam aur armaan bhi mante hain ki humne tumhe bata dena chahiye tha..lekin humlog darr rahe the..😕

Pr:toh abhi kyun?😡

Ri:kyunki poonam ne pehle hi kehdiya tha ki jhoot bolkar woh shaddi nahi karegi aur main bhi koi baat chipakar shaddi nahi kar paungi.😕


Pr:aur kis kis ko maloom hai iss baremein.😕

Ri:iss baremein koi bhi nahi janta sirf mujhe poonma aur armaan ko maloom hai……prem pllz kuch toh bolo..i know ki tumhe bura laga hai..but uss waqt humhe aur kuch nahi suja.😕

Pr:poonam kahan hai?😕

Ri:prem woh…😕

Pr:mujhe pllz batao poonam kahan hai..agar uski mere baremein aisi soch hai toh usne mujhse shaddi nahi karni chaiye.😕

Ri:prem.😲

Pr:haan agar usse aisa lagta hai ki main uski professional life ko nahi samjh sakta ..ya usne mujhe itne dino itna hi jaana hai .toh usse mujhse shaddi nahi karni chahiye.😕

Ri:what?😲

Pr:haan…riddhima tumlog ko aisa kyun laga ki mujhe iss baat se problem hogi…aur woh armaan woh toh mujhe apna dost manta hai na usse mujhse aake bola nahi gaya..shayad main bhi tumhare plan mein include hojata…well jo hua so hua I'm glad ki tumne mujhe sab kuch batadiya aur poonam bhi itne dinn se mujhse kehna chah rahi thi..ab toh batao kahan hai poonam so that main usse bata sakoon ki mujhe iss baat se koi problem nahi hai.😃

Ri:prem …woh…thanks ..thanks you so much.😃

Pr:waise ek baat kahon..tumse baat karta hoon na toh aisa lagta jaise main apni kisi close friend se baat kar raha hoon.😃

Ri:same here..aisa lagata hi nahi ki humlog sirf do baar mile hain .aur bilkul bhi baat nahi ki hai.by the way kiski yaad aati hai?😊

Pr:hai ek net friend..tumhe.😃

Ri:mere bhi net friend ki..so naam kya hai net friend.😃

Pr:cutie.😃

Ridzie was shocked to hear that.

Ri:😲buddy..mr.love.😃

Pr:huh..tumhe kaise maloom mera id.😕

Ri:prem tum..tum buddy ho.😲

Pr:buddy..that means tum cutie .i mean buddy.😃

Ri:oh god I can't believe it 😃

They hug each other .

Pr:un believeable…accha chalo mujhe poonam se baat karni hai.😃

Ri:jee nahi ..pehle main usse apne new found buddy se milaongi.😃

Pr:as you wish.😆😆

They again hug eachother.

Tabhi armaan wahan aajata hai.

Ar:guys…kya hua any problem😲………basket kahin shaddi karma cancel toh nahi hai na.😉

Ri:uffo armaan tum bhi na kuch bhi bolte ho😡…….well meet my buddy…(to prem)and buddy mera fianc.😉

Ar:basket main prem ko janta hoon😊 aur buddy😡..ek second kahin prem hi buddy.😲

Pr:yeah armaan main hi tumhari basket ka buddy hoon.😉

Ar:that's ..that's great yaar .i mean its wonderful.😃

Ri:haan chalo abhi poonam se milte hain.😊

Ar:kyun?😕

Ri:array woh problem solve hogayi?😃

Ar:matlab?😕

Pr:matlab ki mujhe sab pata hai and I'm cool with it.😃

Ar:that's great so chalo.😃😃

Poonam bechari tension ke mare ek jagah baith nahi pa rahi thi.😆😆😆

Ri,prem,armaan aate hain.

Ri:poonam..poonam.

Poo:kya hai kyun chila rahi hai?😡

Ri:meet my buddy mr.love as in prem.😃

Poo:prem..buddy …prem hi buddy hai.😲

ri:yes😃

poo:that's great.😃

Ri,ar:accha humlog chalte hain.😉


Poo:so tumhi riddhu ke buddy ho?😊

Pr:haan😃

Poo(thinking)accha mauka hai prem abhi hi sab kuch bata deti hoon.

Poo:prem woh actually ..muhje tumse jaroori baat karni thi ki…😕

Pr:ki sagai ke din maine sagai tumse nahi riddhima se karli thi…mujhe armaan riddhima ne sab kuch bata diya hai..aur mujhe iss baat se koi problem nahi…😃but I'm still angry on you😡.

Poo:kyun?😕

Pr:kyunki tumhe mujhpe vishwas hi nahi hai...😕

Poo:(stopping hi from saying further)aisa nahi prem mujhe apne aap par vishwas nahi tha ki main tumse sach keh bhi paungi kya?😭

Pr:sach😃

Poonam nods her head.

Pr: I love you a lot poonam.😃(hugging her)

Poo: I love you too prem.😃


Thode baad armaan aur riddhima wapas aate hain and they all decide ki iss baat ko ab yahin khatam karte hain aur kissi ko bhi kuch nahi batayenge.


Ar:so ab shaddi mein toh koi probem nahi hai na.😊

Ri:hai.😃

Ar:basket.😲

Ri:array poonam ,buddy mere bhi dost hai aur tumhare bhi toh woh dono kiski taraf se honge.😕

Poo:simple main riddhu ke saath aur prem armaan ke saath.😊

Ar:nahi mujhe toh pony chahiye.😕

Ri:aur mujhe bhi buddy chaiye.😕

Pr:so fine is decided ki main buddy ki taraf se hoon aur poonam armaan ke haan.😃

Ar:finally everything is fine …abhi kisi tarah ki problem nahi hogi life mein.😃

Pr,poo,ri:haan.😃


But unhe kya maloom hai ki abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai..yeh toh bas shuruvat hai inki dosti ki abb yeh dosti toh bahut kuch dekhayegi aur karyegi bhi.

PRECAP:AR ki shaddi.

Here's the next part ,do enjoy it.

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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it
so happy pp confessed
hope nothing happens to their friendship
love the precap
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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