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Posted: 15 years ago
love it
awesome update
loved the AR scene and the convo betwwn cutie and mr love
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
sammy yaar... u made my nig8
was so sad with this gissa pitta track... but AR ki parts padke man kush huwa...............


mein talli
hogayye

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Dear,
Wow realy nice part!
And I am happy its not short hehe
loved all the scenes between AR,
and it was just hilarious when Ridz was talli
heheh.
Cont Soon.
LoveSurat.
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Posted: 15 years ago
soo cute!! riddhima had 6 shots! whoa!! impressive! lol! brilliant work!~
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome n a hilariou part
loved it
cont soon
n thx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks 4 the awesome update
loved it
love the talli ridzy
who is at the door
cant wait 2 know
con soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sammy

nice parts yaar. the last one was cute.riddhima and talli..that was fun to read. finally they are getting married and who is at the door now..

looking forward to the next part...
thanks for the Pms and continue soon..

loads of love..
Mel..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!
Loved AR n Ridz being talli
Hosh mein rehkar koi ladka uske bolne par bhagega to nahi par uske talli hone par zarur bhag jayega 😆😆😆
Loved it
Continue soon
n thanks 4 da PM 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part.But plz put more scenes 4 poonam-prem
Edited by jasminerahul - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 11

GUPTA HOUSE

JUNE 14TH 2008

Riddhima darwaja kholti hai and iss shocked to see the person infront of her

Ri:tum!!!!!😲😲😲

Shashank free hojate hain aur padma aur nani ko join kar lete.

Ri:tum yahan.😲

Poo:tum yahan kya ....khud hi kehti hai shaddi pe aana😊 aur abhi khud hi puch rahi hai.😡

Riddhima is still shocked.

Pr:girls main bhi ..infact humlog bhi yahin hain.😃

Poo's mom:nahi beta rehne do inn dono ka aise hi hai..jab riddhu aati hai tabhi poonam bhi aise hi behave karti hai.😆😆😆

Prem's dad:array bhai saheliyan hain ..itne din baad mil hain toh aisa hoga hi.😊

Ri:sorry ..aap sab andar aaye na.😳

They get in and are sitting

Ri (hugging poonam):idiot bataya kyun nahi ki aaj aa rahe ho ,receive karne aa jati.😃

Poo:rehne de madam..abhi nashta kar rahi hai,lagta hai bahut late uthi.armaan sone nahi deta hogana ,sapno mein.😉

Ri:poonam pllz😳😳

Everyone laughs

Ri:main aap sab ke liye kuch lati hoon.😊

Ri(thinkig):aacha hua atleast inlog ko nahi maloom maine kal kya kya kiya tha ...god that was so embrassing.

She serves them something to eat.

Poo:array yeh aunty,nani aur baki sab kahan hain.😊

Ri:di aur papa toh hospital gaye honge shayad ,nani aur mumma ..maloom nahi.....ek minute main puchti hoon.

She calls shashank.

Shanky:hello riddhima ..so neend puri hogayi tumhari.😆😆

Ri(embrassed):dad woh actually ..i'm soory.

Shanky:kya hua ?😆

Ri:woh actually prem aur poonam apni family ke saath aaye hain..

Shanky:arey haan main toh bhul hi gaya tha .......accha tum lunch ki socho main padma aur nani ko aane mein thoda time lagea mandir mein hain.😃

Ri:theek hai.

Ri:woh mumma ,papa aur naani mandir gaye hain abhi aa jayenge.😊

Prem'bhabhi:wasie kiss baat ke liye sorry bol rahi thi.😉

Ri:woh aaj duty pe nahi gayi na ..isiliye.😊

Prem(hesitating):umm..riddhima ..woh actually tumhe pata hoga na ki armaan kahan hai.

Ri (with same hesitation) :woh ....armaan actually hospital mein hoga duty time chal raha hai.

Pr:oh.😊

Inn dono ko maloom hi nahi hai ki yeh dono kitne aache friends hain aur abhi baat karne ko hesitation ho rahi hai.😆😆😆

They all are talking having fun .they were having cold drinks.

Phone rings ,riddhima was sitting near it ,so lazily presses the speaker button.

Ar:hey basket kasii ho?😉

Riddhima ke muh se juice nikal jata hai.😆

Ri:ar..armaan.😕

Ar:kya hua basket ......abhi tak head acche theek nahi hua kya..jo aise baat kar rahi ho.😊

Ri:armaan tumhari duty nahi hai kya ?...kyun phone kiya hai.😡

Ar:yeh kya basket ..main apna profession dao pe lagake tumhe phone kar raha hoon dr.keerti ko pata chala toh sanjeevani se nikal degi aur tumho ki....

Ri:armaan pllz😡

Ar:kya pllz.....maine phone kiya kyunki I was missing my basket velly much.😃

Ridzie kuch bol hi nahi pa rahi thi.she thought of disconnecting the call or receiving it on receiver.

But poonam ne uska haath pakd rakha tha.😆😆

Ar:kya hua basket kuch bol kyun nahi rahi ho.....abhi tak naraz ho kya kal ki baat ke liye

Ri thinking:oh no armaan plz abhi kal ki baat leke mat baitho yahan sab ..kya sochenge yeh log.

Lekin armaan ko riddhima ki mann ki baat sunai de toh na.😉

Ar:basket plz yaar ..maine kuch kaha kal ke liye,sir ne kuch bola ,kissine nahi bola na ....aur wasie bhi galti tumhari nahi thi who toh anjie aur muskaan na......arrey haan its not only me missing you gabar bhi tumhe aaj bahut miss kar rahi thi..humlog ne unse kaha ki tumhaari tabiyat theek nahi hai..isiliye nahi aayi.😉

Ri:very nice.

Ar:kya basket tum toh kuch bol hi nahi rahi ho..waise maine tumhe compliment nahi diya kal ke liye......well mujhe nahi maloom tha ki meri basket itni bahdur hai ki anjie aur muskaan ke bolne pe gusse mein aake six shots ....I mean six shots hard drink pilegi.....that was great ..phir bhale hi mujhe pura bandra darshan karna pada ho..but still loved it.love you basket.😃

Ri:armaan tum.😡

Ar:I know main wapas wahi baat leke baith gaya ..but just wanted to compliment you.....arey haan main toh bhul hi gyaa aaj pony aur prem aane wale hain puri family ke saath tumhare ghar ,kab tak maloom nahi but aayenge pakka ,sir ne bulaya tha.😃

Abhi tak ridzie sharam se pani pani hogayi thi

Ri(whispering):woh log aa chuke hain.

Ar:kya bola ..sunai nahi diya.😕

Everyone:humlog aa chuke hain armaan.😆

Armaan ke haath se phone gir jaata hai.😆😆

Ar (fumbling):woh aap .....great main thodi der ..i mean bye basket mujh duty pe jaana hai ..bye .

Poo:I love you nahi bologe armaan.😉😉

Ar"bye bye.😕😕

Disconnects the call.

Everyone was smiling trying hard to control there laughter.

Ri (pouting):aapko hasi aa rahi hai toh hass li jiye no problem.

All had a roll of laughter.

Itne mein shnky,padma aur nani aa jate hain.

Shanky: aap sab aagaye I,m sorry mujhe important kaam tha aur mandir bhi chale gaye.😊

Poo'dad,prem's dad:its ok bhaisahab hota hai.😃

Ri:papa yeh(pointing towards prem and his family members one by one)prem,prem ke papa,bhabi,aur bhaiya.😃

Padma:arey yeh anjali aur armaan ayenahi abhi tak.😊

Shanky:haan unki aaj duty jaldi khatam hojayegi.😃

Poo:rehne dijiye uncle armaan free bhi hogaya toh atleast yahan aane himmat toh nahi karega.😉😉

Nani:kyu..aye riddhu tune wapas ussse jhagada kiya.😡

Ri: (pissed off):haan haan mujhse jyada toh usss armaan ki fikar rahegi na abhi aap sabko.😡😡😡

She goes away from there.

Shanky:isse kya huwa?😕

Poonam explains them everthing ki kaise unlog ke samne armaan ne kal ke incident ke baremein abta diya.

Nani:aaj toh armaan gaya.😆😆😆

Shanky:kyun bhai usse yahan aana hi hoga..shaddi ke baremein discuss karna hai,aur kapoor sahab,Mehta sahib sab aaye hai usne milana nahi hai kya?😊

Sometime later armaan aur anjie aate hain.

Armaan ka sir jhuka huwa hota hai sharam ke mare.😆😆😆

Pre'dad:armaan beta kya huwa hai.😃

Poo's dad:haan aise sir latka ke kyun rakha hai.😉

Ar:nahi main theek hoon.

Shanky:armaan.😡

Ar:jee sir.😕

Shanky:kya hai sir upar karo.and relax riddhima kuch nahi kahegi ,kahegi toh mujhe bata dena,main uski khabar lunga.😊

Ar:jee sir.😊

Later it was decide ki prem armaan ke saath jayega kyunki uske liye alag room nahi tha (ajji yeh toh bas bahana tha...prem ki family aur riddhima ne milke aisa kiya tha so that thoda prem aur poonam bhi ek dusre ko milne ke liye tadpe😆😆.)

21ST JUNE 2008

ARMAAN HOUSE

Prem and armaan were marching up down apni apni ladkiyon se milne.

Inn kuch dino mein thanks too armaan n riddhima prem aur poonam kafi close aagaye the.do dinse unhe (armaan riddhima and prem ponam ko milne nahi diya ja raha tha)

Ar:idea!!😃

Pr:kya😊

Ar:pipe se chad kar jayenge?😃

Pr:yeh kaam tujhe aata hoga,😡mujhe nahi aata yaar.😊

Ar:tu try toh kar😃 poonam ke liye itna nahi kar sakta.😡

Pr:theek hai.😃

GUPTA HOUSE

Anjie,muski:yaar humlog keh rahe hai na ajj armaan kuch jaroor kareaga ..riddhima se mile bina reh thode hi sakta hai who.😆😆😆

Ra,at:nahi kar sakta hum sab hai na .😃

Ra:aur waise bhi,prem ki sangat mein rehke shayad kuch good manners seekh jaye.😕

Prem's bhabhi:armaan ki toh pata nahi par prem toh jaroor kuch seekhega armaan se .....aur haan woh armaan ko rokega nahi ,woh khud hi poonam ko milne ke liye pagal ho raha hai.😆😆😆

Intern gang:let's see😃

AP (armaan n prem) reach at riddhima's place.

Armaan jaldi se upar chad jata hai.

Ri:armaan tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.😲

Ar:apni basket se milne aaya hoon.😃

Poo:so main chalti hoon.😉

Ar:arey nahi ruko tumhara majnu bhi aa raha hai.😆😆

Ri:what?😲

Yahn prem chad raha rehta hai tabhi koi niche se uspe phool phekta hai

Niche dekhta hai toh shocked reh jata hai.

Niche humari inter ngang khadi hoti hai.😆😆😆

Muski:oye prem yeh kya chal raha hai.😊

At:array muski maloom nahi poonam uss room main hai.😃

Anjie:nahi nahi yeh toh pipe ki measurement le raha hai..hai na prem.😆😆

Ra:prem tum iss idea se jaa rahe ho to I guess ki......😕

At,anjie,muski:armaan already upar hai.😆😆😆

Prem nods his head.

Muski:oye ab dekh kya raha hai continue! continue.!😉

Prem jaldi se uar chad jata hai.

Intern gang aur prem poonam ki bhi acchi dosti hogayi thi.

Ar:itna time kyun lagaya yaar.😡

Pr:array woh teri saliyan aur rahul ,atul unlog ne pakad liya.😕

Ri,poo:what!!!!!!😲

Pr:haan but jaldi chod diya .....they are so understanding.😃

Ar:yeh understanding mere time kahan chali jaati ,saale mere sare dost na,prem par itni meherbaniyan ,mujhpe nahi.😡😡

Four of them get busy in there romance (bole toh staring)ek dusre ki ankho mein khojana.😆😆

There's a knock on the dorr.

Prem aur armaan poore room mein bhagne lagte hain,phir parde ke picche chup jate hain.😆😆

Prem's bhabhi enters.

Prem's bhabhi:armaan ,prem chalo dono ko dono bahar aao mujhe maloom hai ki tumlog yahan ho.😃

They both come out smiling sheepishly.

Prem's bhabhi:so kya chal raha hai yahan.😉

Ar:bhabhi woh actually 😳😳

Pr:actually.😳😳

Prem's bhabhi:actually tumlog se raha nahi jaa raha na riddhima aur poonam ke bina.....well prem kyun na AR ki shaddi ke din hi tumhari aur poonam ki bhi kara doon.😉😉😉

Pr:kya bhabhi aap bhi.😳😳

Prem's bhabhi:accha armaan romance khatam hogaya ho toh jara tum dono darwaje se sharifo ki tarah entry mar lo maine sabko bola hi kissi kaam se tum dono ko bulaya hai.aur kaam sach mein hai wahan se entry marne ke baad no romance.😉

Ar,prem:jee bhabhi.😳

Phir woh dono darwaje se entry marte hain.😆😆

At:array armaan ,prem tum dono yahn se kaise.😉

Muski:haan apna humesha ka rasta bhulgaya armaan.😉

Ar:guys 😡

Pr:guys pllz kyun pareshan kar rahe ho.😕😕

Ra:relax yaar 😆

RP(riddhima n ponam)

Poo:nahi yaar riddhima pllz mujhe samjhmein nahi aa raha hai ,main kahon ki nahi kahon ,prem ko bura laga toh,usne shaddi todi toh.😲

Ri:relax yaar abhi batayegi toh accha rahega,nahi toh humesha issi tension ke saath jeena padega.😕😕

Poo:haan ..par still I'm confused.😕

Ri:woh toh hoygi hi..meri friend jo hai.😃

Poo:but still yaar ..i love him a lot.😕😕

Ri:relax poonam😕

Riddhima goes down searching for prem actually usne poonam ko bataya nahi hota hai lekin prem ko sagai wali baat batane jaati hai.

Fully tensed ek toh prem se itna baat nahi karti aur upar se aisi baat batane jaa rahi hai.

Finally finds him doing some work.

Ri:umm..prem woh.😕

Pr:haan riddhima.😃

Ri:woh tumse ek important baat karni thi.😕

Pr:sure.😃

Ri:yahan nahi chalo mere saath.😕

She takes him on terrace.

Pr:so kya baat hai.😃

Ri:prem woh actually tumse bahut jaroori baat karni.😕

Pr:mujhse kya baat karni hai?😕

Ri:actually woh..pehle tum promise karo ki ekdum se kuch nahi bologe.😕

Pr:theek hai.😕

Ri:prem woh..woh ..tumhari aur poonam ke sagai ke din tumne jissse sagai ki thi woh poonam nahi main thi.😕😕

Prem is shocked

Ri:actually ..😕

Pr:tumne ?😲

Ri:haan woh poonam ..hospital mein emergency thi ,toh usse jana pada.😕😕

Pr:bataya kyun nahi.😡

Ri:humlog darr gaye the.😕

Pr:abhi kyun bataya 😡

Ri:kyunki jhoot bolke na main shaddi kar paungi na poonam.....prem tum iss baremein mein kuch toh bolo.😕😕

But prem kuch bol hi nahi raha tha totally expressionless.

Riddhima toh aur bhi darr gayi thi.

PRECAP:ab kya hoga prem ka reaction?kya woh riddhima ki baat samjhega?kya iss baat ki wajah se AR shaddi pe koi asar padega?kya inki dosti (armaan-prem,riddhima-prem ,armaan ....poonam) salaamat rahegi?kya poonam aur prem ki shaadi hogi?

Well iss baremein aapko next part mein pata chalega.

PHEW guys here's next part .enjoy it.

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Jasminerahul:tanks dear ..will surey do from next part.

LOVE

SAMMY

Edited by sammy4u - 15 years ago

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