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Sammy beta achcha kiya koi gadbad nahi ki nahi to Kalyan tak aane mein time hi kitna lagta?😆😆Bohot achcha part tha loved it
par jo baadmein likha ki ye sirf shuruat hai n all agar koi gadbad ki to remember Kalyan paas mein hi hai mere dost 😆😆😆 I'm loving it aapko darrane mein kitna maza aa raha hai.1 aur baat bataun?Mere jaan-pehchaan ke log bhi Kalyan mein hi rehte hain.😆😆😆
Bachke rehna 😆
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heyyy dear,
awesome part
continue soon


thanks for PM.


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey superb work sammy, nice part, i loved Ridz nd Prem's convo very much
huh finally problem solve hogayi, aur cant wait for AR's shadi, pls do cont soon, btw thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sammy

great part. finally the secret is out and all the misunderstandings are cleared. looking forward to the next part.
thanks for the pm and continue soon.

loads of love..
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superb updt!!!!
thanx for the pm!!!
plz cont soon😊
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PART 13

GUPTA HOUSE

22ND JUNE 2008

Sham ka time hai,armaan aur prem intern gang ke saath behas kar rahe hain.

Ar:guys kya hai yaa pllz janedo.😭

At :bilkul nahi armaan 'not allowed 😃

Pr:array par yeh kaisa kanoon hai.😕

Ar:exactly yeh kaisa rule hai tumlog ka jo do doston ko aur buddies ke milne nahi de raha hai.😕

Ra:doston ko aur buddies ko ya armaan riddhima aur poonam prem ko milne nahi de raha hai.😉

Ar,pr:array par humlog thode hi riddhima/poonam se milne jaa rahe hain..mujhe pony/buddy se milna hai😡

Anjie:oh pllz armaan n pem .humlog acchi tarah jaante hain ki tumlog ko kis se milna hai..apne friends ko milne ke bahane apni fiance se milne jaana hai tumlog ko so sorry .😃

Mus:and get out.😡

Pr:kya??😲

Ar:oye kya get out 'main pony se miley bagair nahi jaane walla .😡

Pr:aur main bhi buddy se miley bagair nahi jaouga..thats it.😡

The gang thinks for sometime.

Anjie:theek hai main poonam ko nani ke room mein bhejti hoon phir prem tum chale jaana apni buddy se milne aur tum (pointing towards armaan)apni pony se milne.😡

Ar,pr:fine.😡

The gang goes to call poonma


AP (armaan n prem)

Pr:ab toh hogaya poonam ko milna mushkil 'kya karenge ?

Ar:sochta hoon yaar.

Ar:idea!!!!😃

Armaan prem ko kuch toh bolta hai (uske kaan mein)

Pr:nahi yaar ..i..mean main akele karoon samjhmein aayega but buddy saath mein..shayad difficult hoga.😕

Ar:theek hai toh plan change .😊

He again says something a have smile on their faces

Ar,pr:aaj toh basket/poonam ke haath ki mehndi dekhe bagair nahi jaane wale 'chahe kuch bhi hojaye😃

INTERN GANG

Ra:guys ..yeh armaan aur prem kuch zyada hi sharif nahi lag rahe aaj.😊

Mus:haan 'but ek baat confirm hai..aaj armaan riddhima se aur prem poonam se bilkul nahi milenge.😡

Anjie:and wasie bhi ridzie aur poonam ne humari baat manli hai.😡

At:aur..unke room mein jaane waala pipeline route block karne ke liye 'sab ko lawn main wahin bitha ke rakha hai'.haha haa😆😆😆

They go and tell ponam ki armaan usse milna chahta hai so nani ke room mein chale ja.

RIDZIE'S ROOM

Ri:aaj armaan yahan aane ki himmat nahi karega 😊'di,rahul,muskaan,atul..koi bhi aane hi nahi dega😃'phir bhi who poonam se milna aaya hai toh pakka uske dimag mein kuch toh chal raha hai.😳

Prem entes:hey buddy.😃

Ri:huh..buddy tum yahan kaise.😕

Pr:woh maine bhi tumse milne chala aaya'chalo na.😊

Ri:kahan?😕

Pr:areey chalo toh sahi.😊

Ri:lekin..😕

Pr:stop arguing and chalo.😊

Prem takes riddhima on terrace.

Armaan also takes poonam to the terrace'none of the intern gang member saw them.

TERRACE

Ri:buddy batao toh kya baat karni hai.😕

Pr:tumhari mehnidi acchi bani hai na'mujhe nahi dekhni hai bas pucchna hai.😊

Ri:huh..buddy yeh tum.😕

Pr:lo aagaya.😃

Ridzie turns and finds armaan n Poonam there.

Ri:armaan.😲

Ar:hey basket 😉(coming towards her)

Prem goes to poonam and takes her to other side of terrace.

Ri;armaan tum yahan kya kar rahe ho'kisine dekha toh bahut satayenge.😕

Ar:main apni basket ki mehndi dekhne aaya hoon😃'.nahi dekhaogi.😕

Ri:armaan woh toh tum kal bhi dekh sakte ho.😳

Ar:naah'mujhe din khatam hone se pehle dekhna hai😊..aur kal toh main bahut busy rahonga (with a naughty smile)😉

Ri:armaan😳'accha lo dekhlo.😳😳

PREM N POONAM

Poo:prem tum yahan ..i mean unlog ne (intern gang)tumhe aane diya.😊

Pr:nahi'but yeh mere aur armaan ka plan tha ki unlog ko buddhu banake tumse milne aajaon'so can I have a pleasure to have a look of ur mehndi.😃

Poo:tum yahan isiliye aaye ho?😳

Pr:haan😃'so can I.(taking her hands in his)

Poonam was blushing badly.

Pr:not bad bahut acchi mehndi hai😃'.but tumse zyada nahi.😉(looking in her eyes)

In no time they were in there dreamland.busy staring eachother .same was the case with AR.

Tabhi intern gang wahan aajati hai.aur woh log prem aur poonam ko dekhte hain.

Ra:yeh prem aur poonam yahan 😲

Anjie:prem toh ridzie se milne gaya tha😕

Mus:aur armaan poonam se milne 😕

At:matlab AR'😲

The intern gang serches the whole terrace and find AR on the other side.

Anjie:lo..yeh log yahan hai.😡

Meantime.

Pr:uh'well I guess ab mujhe chalna chahiye hai'kisine dekhliya toh chodenge nahi.😃

Poo nods her head still blushing.

Pr:waise tumhe ek baat bolna bhul gaya😃'I love you.

Poo: I love you too.😳😳

Aur woh dono wahan se chale jaate hain.

AR

AR abhi take k dusre mein khoye rehte hian aur Intern gang who log ghur rahi hoti hai (sharam nahi aati)😆

At: coughs

Mus :coughs

Finally getting fed up.

Anjie:armaaan tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.😡

AR leave eachother.

Ar:woh ..woh riddhima ki ankh mein kuch chala gaya tha main woh nikal raha tha.😊

Ra:itna ghuske.😉

Mus:aur humlog yeh nahi puch rahe ki tu kya kar raha hai'yeh puch rahe hain ki tu yahan kyun hai.😡

Ar:kyun hai ka kya matlab hai 'main toh poonam se milne aaya tha ..usne bola terrace pe milne usse kuch kaam tha..mujhe thode hi mallom tha ki riddhima bhi yahin hai.😊

Ridzie gave him a look (ready to kill him'😡😡jhoota)

Ar:so ab main chalta hoon bye.😃

Armaan wahan se bhaag jaata hai.

Outside prem was waiting in car.

Pr:kahan reh gaya tha mujhe laga chala gaya ?😊

Ar:aabe tu kahan tha 'maine tujhe kitna dhonda.😡

Pr:woh sab chod chal chalte hain.😊

NEXT DAY

23RD JUNE 2008.

Shaddi ka mahurat 4.00 baje ka tha and here was our hero at 12.00 with baaraat.

Still ab aa hi gaya hai toh swagat toh karna hi hoga.

Armaan was surrounded by his friends.

anjie:well lagta hai,jiju se raha nahi jaa raha tha.😉

Mus:haan isiliye 2 ghante pehle hi baaraat le aaya.😆😆

Ra:wasie kis baat ki jaldi hai tumhe.😃

Ar:oye rahul chup kar tu.😡

At:array yeh toh ridzie ko dekhne aaya hai aur prem ko bhi toh poonam se milna hai'haina.😉

Anjie:par kal hi toh shaam ko aake gaye yeh dono.😃

Prem paani peraha hota hai ..uske muh se paani nikal jaata hai.

Pr:what 😲..yeh tumlog kya keh rahe ho?😊

Mus:oh please prem..humne tujhe aur teri poonam ko terrace pe dekha tha..lekin baadmein aaye toh tu gayab ho gaya tha.😡

Pr:woh actually.😕

Ar:chod yaar ..maine yeh log explain kar diya hai.😊

Later on AR shaddi takes place.

Bahut tang khichai karte hain sab armaan aur prem ki kyunki intern gang sab ko bata deti hai terrace wala incident.😆😆😆

Atlast bahut rone dhone ke saath armaan aur riddhima apne ghar chale jaate hain.😃

Wahan prem ki family riddhima ka swagat karti hai...phir kuch rasamo ke baad AR are allowed to go in their room,par intern gang ke rehte aisa ho sakta hai ki armaan shanti se apni basket ke saath reh sake.😆😆😆


AR'S ROOM

Ar:finally ...main ab apni basket ko dekh sakta hoon without disturbance😃(he holds her only to be pushed away by riddhima)

Ar:basket ..kya hua?😲

Ridzie points towards the balcony jahan se hasne ki awaaj aa rahi hoti hai.

Ar:oh 😡

Armaan wahan jaata hai balcony ki door kholta hai aur unlog ki taraf dekhta hai.

They are none other than our intern gang.

Ra:dekha tum dono itna hass rahe the isiliye isse pata chal gaya.😡

Mus:oye humhe kya bol raha ,khud hi joke crack karta hai phir bolta hai ..humhare wajah se.😡

At:right yaar aise nahi chalta.😡

They all start arguing

Ar (pissed off):GUYS !!!!!get out.😡😡😡

Aur woh unn sabko room se dhake marke nikal deta hai.

Ar:ho..ab toh finally I'm alone with my basket'kyun mrs.mallik.😉

Riddhima simply blushes and they get busy in their own world.

Aage aap log imagine kariye (mujhe sharam aati hai😳)



PRECAP:not yet decided.


here's next part.enjoy!!!!!!!!

LOVE

SAMMY

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Edited by sammy4u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb!!!!!!!
Bohot achcha tha......
Loved AR and PP
Thanks for the PM
Take care....

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Dear,
As usual really nice Part,
loved the scene bewteen AR at the end of the part hehe finally
they are alone together anywayzz i hope in the next par more AR romantic:).
Upload & Cont Soon/PM me as always.
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Posted: 15 years ago

awsummmmmmm as usual!!

liked AR scne very cute

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 part
thnks for PM
continue soon
TC
GAURAV

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