The Bookstore: An AR Story, Complete - Page 14

I want to bottle your laughter and hang it around my neck,
I want to see your brilliant smile reflecting in my tea cup.
I want to paint a little picture with my pocket full of dreams,
In every stroke of that picture there is a dream of you and me.

wow!!! did u write that urself? its amazing n brought a huge smile to my face.... ur a fabulous writer n i love dis story

edit.

k jst finished the whole ff rite now n i have to say dat i loved it... d story was simple n sweet, n ur writing style was brilliant.... will be looking forward to other stories by u

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Fail. As usual. Why do I even bother.
Now one can argue, even failure is relative Watson. I know - in your mind you are not Waston But this is my reply.😆 So a quick question, does that last bit end with a '!' or '?' or just '.'

Just curious

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Sookie

I had resolved to comment on each and every part.

Obviously I failed :(. because I didnt want to post the normal formal replies here I guess. And my brain is slow so it takes time and mood. :)

Anyways Im trying to make up here...so this one is for Wednesday

This one has to be my favourite after the last one. Why I cant really say, maybe because of the theme...

This one was full of uncertainties. Darkness associated with silence was very...natural and nice.I never noticed it but silence seems like an integral part of darkness. You identified the fear of unknown in human instinct very well. Its sometimes strange how we fear something which can be absolutely harmless, only because its unknown rather than being afriad of known dangers which are taken lightly.

The sharing of unsecurities was touching. Her inability to cross the opposite behaviour of her sister and seek comfort starkly resembles my brother's.

Small behaviours, unintentional comments sometimes go a long way in forming an impression that doesnt fade easily. Sometimes we even forget the incident- but not the pain and fear related to it.

The B grade movie discussion was amusing. And yes even I hate too many gadgets in thrillers. They take all the fun away!

"Thank you for being there with me, in the dark today and thank you for helping me to find the light."

Nice line.

Really liked it.

Nd im happy about the road trip

:)

Sur

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Sookie

So this was the inspiration for infinity? great!

Anyways this was what we can call a library part. so much reference to classic literature!

I'm going to make this my reading list.

All the quotes included were great. I wonder how much research you had to do for this

Autumn is a second spring where every leaf is a flower.

this was particularly good...everything was stimulating, both intellectually and emotionally.

now their views are contrasting even on the matter of business. I think they are different despite many agreements....and they are trying their best to accomodate them.

Your analysis of poetry is surely very deep.Its true that it depends on one's mood what they percieve, not just in the case of poetry but every form of art- be it paintings or music. I Dont have much experience as far as poetry is concerned but music does change with my mood.

Captured a lot of observations in this one

parting lines were great

Sur

Originally posted by: kneeduh2000

aww it was short and sweet...keep up the great work

Originally posted by: olive_green

Originally posted by: scarlett.lady

That was an easy end - almost as a relaxed Sunday after a hectic week ought to be, not much dueling of philosophies and words and/or references, just hints strewn all along of what and where they were headed.

Enjoyed the week long tale telling much Sookie!

(S.L.)