Every story dont have happy endings(MN.Prt 5#pg10) - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
haaye...!!
so mayu luves nups...!!
aww....!!

grt updt yaar...!!

do updt soon...!!

luv
radz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
It was so niceeee
I loved it...😳
Is it really gonna be sad ending????😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Yes guys.....
its going to be a sad ending...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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komal really sweet update thank u 4 pm meeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 15 years ago
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komal plzzzzzzz don't do it sad ending and mayur plzzz make happy ending ok atleast try
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Hi komal
Awesome start.
loved every bit of it.
so maynk loves nups
Wow thats great.
now waiting to know about nups feelings.
lovely part
update next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Fantactic update yaar....
WoW....
Mayank love Nupur....
Cont soon...
LOve
Sana.... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really sweet start

Loved to the core
Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Part 2............
[Mayur are at the Principal's office.................]
Principal : First of all congratulations............
Mayur : Thank you sir........
Princi : Accha ab woh baat akrte hai jiske liye maine tum dono ko yahan bulaya hai........s tum log academic meet ke liya gaye hue the...tum logon ne apna ek exam miss kar diya.........
Mayank : Sir but.............
Princi : Mayank let me finish..........So isiliye tum logon ke woh exam kal hoga library mein.........So mein bas itna kehna cahta hun ki be prepare for tommorow...........
Nupur : Par sir kounse subject ka?
Princi : Oh yeh toh mein batana hi bhool gaya..........Economics...............
Mayank : Ok sir............
Princi : You may leave now.........
[They left Princi's office.............MAYANK IS VERY EXCITED ABT THE EXAMS.......Nupur wa also but a bit.............The day passed...........Its mid-night and Mayank get a call from Nupur.......]
Mayank : Bolo Nupur itni raat kaise phone kiya??????///
Nupur : Mayank mein bohot badi problem hun.............
Mayank : Kyun Nupur kya hua?(worried)
Nupur : Mayank mujhe kuch yaad nah iho raha hai......
Mayank : Ufffffff.............Nupur tum bhi na....tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya tha........mujhe alga ki koi serious matter hai...........
Nupur : Mayank yeh bhi serious matter hi hai......bolo na mein ab kya karun?
Mayank : Dekho Nupur dhyan laga ke padho....tab yaad hojayega............
Nupur : Mayank nahi ho raha hai.........(she started crying)
Mayank : Dekho Nupur roo mat.....Mein tumhe rote hue nahi dekh sakta.....Accha tum mujhe 15 min do..mein kuch karta hun................
Nupur: Par Mayank..............
Mayank : 15 min ok?????/
Nupur : OK.........
Mayank : And plzz rona mat............
Nupur : Ok.............
[Nupur was waiting for his call like for 20 mins............But he didnt call]
Nupur : Bola tha ki 15 min............or hoga 20 min.......Mayank tum kaha ho......
[Then she heard her door bell ring...........She got worried as it was 12:30 and someone is at her door..........She was alone........Someone is continuosly ringing her door bell.....She saw a flower vase ..she hold that i her hand..........then slowly - slowly moved forward to the door.........She was going to hit the flower vase as she opened the door........but stopped when she was Mayank over there........'Mayank' she took out his name and hugged him tightly...........Mayank felt good but dont to show that by his facial expressioins...........Then she break the hug and looked into his eyes....And invited him insied.............he entered.............]
Nupur : Tum itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Mayank : Waah Nupur pehle khud batati ho ki problem hai or jab koi problem solve karne ke liye aata hun toh bolti ho ki mein yahan kya kar raha hun......................
Nupur : Par Mayank itni raat ko......?
Mayank : Kuch nahi hota......ab chalo tumhari problem par concentrate karte hai.......Batao kya problem hai....kya samajh nahi aa raha............
Nupur : Kuch bhi nhi............
Mayank : Yeh rahe in sab ke notes yeh sab tumhara bohot help karenge padhai mein..........
[They studied till 2'o clock ...............Then Nupur had done her studies...........And Mayan kwas ready to leave..........]
Nupur : Kaha ja rahe ho?
Mayank : Woh kya hai na mein yahan nahi rehta shayad yeh baat tum bhool rahi ho........Mein ghar ja raha hun...........
Nupur : Haan par itni raat ko........Kuch hogaya toh..........
Mayank ; Mujhe kuch nahi hoga Nupur............
Nupur : Nahi Mayank tum aaj nahi ruk jao..........
Mayank : Nupur but............................................
Nupur : Nahi Mayank mein kuch nahi sunugi...........Tum yahin rahoge...........
Mayank : Accha??? Or mein sounga kaha?
Nupur : Are woh dusra room hai na wahan.............
Mayank ; Thi hai.................
[Then both of them went to sleep...................
Next day...........Mayu woke up and was going to use bathroom but when he entered he accidently saw Nupur in towel and was staring at her........she saw him and shouted like hell and then turned around.....Mayu also turned around...............]
Nupur : Mayank tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??????//
Mayank : Woh toh mein bathroom use karne aaya tha////////////
Nupur : Ek baar knock toh kar diya hota.............
Mayank : Mujhe kya pata tha ki tum already ho..........
Nupur : Par ab toh pata chal gaya na ki mein hun..........
Mayank : Haan...........
Nupur : Toh bahar jao.........
Mayank : Oh sorry...............
[Then he went outside and Nupur closed the door...............
After that they went to the college..............and gave their exams...................]
Mayank : So exam kaisa gaya????????//
Nupur : Bohot accha............Thank you Mayank agar tumne meri maddad nahi ki hoti toh.........
Mayank : Bas Nupur..............
[Then Sameer enters............]
Sameer: So guys how was your exam??
Mayur : Bohot accha..........
Sameer : Good..........Accha guys tum dono aaj shaam ko ready rehna.......
Nupur : kyun????///
Sameer : Woh aaj meri sis ka birthday hai.........toh usne tum logon ko bhi invite kiya hai...
Mayank : Hum logon ko???????
Sameer : Hmmmmmmm...........woh kya hai jab tum log usse mile the na..........tabse tum logon ne uspe kuch zyada hi impact kar diya tha.........So i hope ki tum log aaoge.......
Mayank : Par..........................
Nupur : Are ayenge zarur ayenge...............
Mayank : Thik hai............
[They are at the party........Nupur wasnt there..............Sameer and Mayank was talking around.....Then Mayank noticed Nupur..........and get lost into her beauti again............Then sameer said........]
Sameer : Waah,bhabhito kamal lag rahi hai............
Mayank : Chup kar bhabhi hai.......respect kar...............
Nupur : Hey guys............
Mayank : Hiiiiiii............
[Mayur were chatting......Then Sameer introduce them with his cousin Nihal..........Nihal is handsome,good looking,gentlemen type guy...............Then mayank observe that Nihal i having a special interest in Nupur..........Nihal and Nupur were talking alot.....And Nupur totally ignore Mayank.......Mayank flet bad and left..............He was standing in the balcony all alone......Then suddenly Nupur enters...........]
Nupur : Mayank tum yahan akele kya kar rahe ho.................??
Mayank : Kuch nahi...............Tumhe bakiyon se fursat mil gayi???
Nupur : Are sab bohot bore kar rahe hain...........Isiliye socha ki mein iss party mein bhi sirf tumhare saath rahungi..........
Mayank : Matlab mien tumhe entertain karta hun..........
Nupur : Aise baat nahi hai..........Tumhare saath time spend karna mujhe accha lagta hai.........
Mayank : Yeh jaan kar accha alga,..............
[Then A girl enters and talked to Mayank swetly.........Then left........]
Nupur : Tum isse aise kyun baat kar rahe the?
Mayank : Matlab........
Nupur : I mean ki yahi woh ladki hai na......jisne tumhare baarein mein kitni saari afvaye udai thi..
Mayank : Toh kya hua???Mein toh yeh kehna cahta hun ki bhale isne mere saath bura kiya tha par ab toh pyaar de rah ihai na............
Nupur : Kya??
Mayank : Mein bas ek chiz bolna cahta hun ki 'pyaar cahe jahan se mili cahe thoda hi sahi par kabhi bhi use nazar andaz nahi karna cahiye......kyunki shayad woh pyaar tumhe kabhi na mil vapash paye..........
[Nupur looked into his eyes....................]
The End.................
In next part Mayank will rpopose Nupur....Bu there is a twist............😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Komal
Fabulous update.
awwww mayank is so sweet.
He arrived nups house at midnight just becoz to help her.
haye mayur r rocks
i loved mayank so much
and them mornings scene was so sweet.
loved the party sequences.
so both mayank and nupur felt jealous when they talked to other.
wow superb.
so mayur gonna to propose her
but whats the twist- kahi nups mayank ko refuse tou nehi karega?
kahi wo kissi aur se tou payar nehi karti?😲
GOD knows - what is cooking in ur mind
i m really scared about it.
fantastic update.
try to update next part soon

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