Every story dont have happy endings(MN.Prt 5#pg10) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hii guys!!😊 Here is the part 3.................😊
[Mayank had booked a room ina resort for Nupur to purpose her.................And he is giving instruction to the waiters and employees of the resort.]
Mayank : Dekho jab woh iss room mein enter kare mein cahta hun ki saare voilins ek saath bajne cahiye................or jab mein clap karun toh tum woh on kardena jo maine kaha hai ok.............
Employe : Ok sir...........
[Nupur reached at the resort.............Mayank came............]
Mayank : Tum aagayi?
Nupur : Nahi............obviously yaar..............btw tumne bataya nahi ki occasion kya hai........
Mayank : Occasion tumhe baad mein pata chalega............fir haal tum mere saath andar chalo...
Nupur : Accha Mayank mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai...........
Mayank : Baad mein...................
[They entered in te room.............the room was lit with beautiyl candles..............there was a table fully decorated...............rose petals used as carpet on the floor.............the room was like heveanly beautiful..................Nupur was a bit shock........she looked at him and said.........]
Nupur : Mayank yeh sab.................
Mayank : Ssshhhhhhhhhh.........picture abhi baki hai mere dost............
Nupur : Par yeh sab kyun?///
Mayank : Woh tunhe jald hi pata chal jayega...............Now lets start................
[He took Nupur'sa hand and moed forward.......they sat on the chairs.............and had their meals..........then Mayank asked Nupur for dance...............they were dancing on the tune of romantic music........Then they broke it...........]
Nupur : Mayank ab toh bata do................
Mayank : Thik hai...............Ek minute...........
[Mayank took deep breathe.................and was little nervous................]
Nupur : Exam dene ja rahe ho kya............jo aise behave kar rahe ho.....
[Mayank gave a little smile...........and then clapped..................While he clapped the waiter switched on the plug........Nupur turned around and saw........'I LOVE YOU NUPUR' in big letters with lights..........she was shocked by that.........then she looked at Mayank.....Mayank was smiling.........Then Mayank went down on his kness............And take out a ring..........]
Mayank : I love you Nupur.............I know ki tum shock ho but mein or kya karta bas mujhse raha nahi gaya or............I promise Nupur ki mein tumhe duniya ki saari khushi dunga............I love you.............I love you.............Nupur will you accept my proposal?
[Nupur's eyes was fill with tears.............Mayu saw that and stood up and asked...........]
Mayank : Kya ua Nupur?????Tum rooh kyun rahi ho?
Nupur : Mayank i'm sorry.................
Mayank : Sorry??? par kyun???
Nupur : Woh-woh.........................
Mayank : Woh kya Nupur....................
Nupur : Mayank mein tumara proposal accept nahi kar sakti.................
[As soon as Mayank heard that.........he break into thousand pieces........................
Nupur : Kyunki mein pehle se kisi or ke saath commited hun.............
[Mayank felt even bad.................]
Mayank : Kis ke saath?
Nupur : Nihal..........
Mayank : Nihal...............
Nupur : Mein tumhe yeh pehle bata dena cahti thi........par tumne mujhe moka hi nahi diya........I'm so sorry Mayank...............mein tumhara dil nahi todna cahti thi..............
[Mayank was in deep pain..........but he didnt wanted to show her..........as he know that he would she will feel even more bad..................]
Mayank : Koi baat nahi Nupur aisa toh hota hi rehta hai...(smiling...but there is pain inside.)
Nupur : Par Mayank..............
Mayank : Nupur ghar chale.................
Nupur : Thik hai....................
[They left for their home...........mayank dropped Nupur home.........And then he reached to his home.............Sitting in his room.................]
[He was crying.............he was angry but not in Nupur......actually he was angry on no one except himself..........he went to the bathroom and put water on his face.........then looked at mirror........and flshback every single moment he spend with Nupur........then all in anger he hit the mirror with his hand...........the mirror broke into thousands pieces just like his heart...........the blood was coming out of his hand...................he saw the blood and ws crying hardly..........and was thinking about Nupur...........]
Mayank ; Why me???😭
To be continued.................😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

God Why Nups love someone else Cant See Mayuu crying😭😭😭:))))

This song suitable to Mayuu situation😭😭😭
na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani
kahaani adhuri kahaani
na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani
kahaani adhuri kahaani
Con soooon:))))
Edited by ArTiToTheEnd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Nice part . Poor mayu . Doo cont soon . Thanks for the pm .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
loved it dear felling srry for mayu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
nice part!!!!!!but plzz mayur shud b 2gether yaar plzz!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
OMG...
Very saad....
Cont soon...
Cant wait...

Love
Sana.... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
awwwwww such an emotional update yaar !!
poor mayank !! 😭😭
😭but how can nupur love nihal??? abhi to mili thi usse aur itni jaldi
plzzz atleast unhe best friends rahne dena.

& i loved the proposal scene, it was soooo touching and romantic. 😳
thanks for the pm

continue soon

loads of love
vinu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
nice update but plzzzzzzz make mayur 2ther thnks 4 pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Nups love someone
oh no.
mayank was so hurt.
cant c mayank in this way.
pls do something.
superb update.
keep updating
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
awww its rellyy sweet!! jus luvdd dat proposal wala part!! 👏👏bt ab ye nihal kab janey wala h beech me se!!!! 😆
damnn cutee ff komal!!!
luv
vini

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