Every story dont have happy endings(MN.Prt 5#pg10) - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
@ everyone : you guys thinking its going to be bad.....but guys it going to be worse.........thats y i said dont curse me in the end of the story...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
1st of all congo dear for the new ff.

but dear this is cheating yaar !! how can we stand a very bad ending. Plzzz zyada bad bhi mat banana yaar. hum nahi sah payenge.
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neway, as of now, nice concept. waiting for the update

loads of love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
bad ending....... ok...... i'll manage....
thx for the warning in advance....
add me to your pm list still......
the concept is fantastic.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Hiii guys!!!
Here is the Part 1..............
[Mayur are at Sanjeevani college were Academic meet is associated...........They had already won 2 rounds....And are preparing for the last....3rd round.........They are sitting in their room......]
Mayank : Nupur chalo jaldi se yeh revise kar lete hain...........
Nupur : Mayank tum bhi na......itne boring ho...........
Mayank : Kya matlab?
Nupur : Mere matlab yeh ki chalo kuch acchi baatein karte hain....Par tum toh sirf padhai-padhai-padhai.............
Mayank : Nupur i promise yeh last round hum jeet jayenge toh mein tumhe padhai ke naam se bore nahi karungi........
Nupur : Promise????
Mayank : Promise.......
[Next day...........The 3rd round started.........Every group had done there part......The largest score was 4/5.......Mayur had to get 5/5 to win.....The host started the round.....]
Host : World's largest diamond producing country is?
Mayank : South Africa....
Host : Absolutely right......Moving on to next qns...
The Eiffel tower was built by ?
Nupur : Alexander Eiffel
[Mayank whispered something to Nupur]
Mayank : Are waah kya baat hai......
Host : Correct.......
The author of harry potter book is ?
Mayank : JK Rowling
Host : Right answer..
The National flower of Italy ?
Nupur : Lily...
Mayank : kiase pata?
Nupur : Mayank padhai sirf tumne hi nahi ki....or wiase bhi Lily is my fav flower...........
Host : And now the last one.....Which will decide there win.....
The largest library in the wrold is?
Mayank : United states Library of Congress, Washington DC
Host : Absolutely right......Here is the winner of Academic Meet 'The Excel College'
[They hugged eachother........Mayu hold her tightly............then Nupur said.]
Nupur : Woh library wala jawab toh tumhe toh pata hona hi tha.........kyunki tumhara dusra ghar toh library hai na.........
Mayank : Yeh tareef thi ki burai??/
Nupur : Jaisa tum samjho......waise Mayank chalo na apni yeh jeet celebrate karte hain......
Mayank : Nupur kal hum Mumbai mein hoge tab kar lenge ok.........
Nupur : Nahi Mayank aaj.......Aaj humara Ahmedabad mein last day..Aaj hi celebrate karte hai plzzzzzzzzzz
Mayank : Ok baba.........Tumhara hukm sar aankhon pe .............
Nupur : Btw kaha chale gen???????/
Mayank : Pata nahi...........
Nupur : Mayank kuch toh socho..........
[He took 5 mins.........Then he came up with an idea....]
Mayank : Shaam ko ready rehna................
Nupur : Par hum log jayenge kaha........?
Mayank : Bas tum ready rehna..............
[Its 7'o clock........And mayu went to Nupur.......When he saw her he totally get lost into her......She was wearing a white coloured,half sleeves suit.....put a little amek up...Left her hair open............mayank noticed her from up and down.........]
Mayank : Wow!!! Tum aaj bohot acchi lag rahi ho......
Nupur : Thanks...Tum hi kamm smart nhi lag rahe ho....
Mayank : Woh toh hai.........chale?
Nupur : Par pehle yeh toh batao hum ja kaha rahe hai..........
Myank ufff.........thik hai hum ja rahe hai.......'Bhikhabhai garden'........
Nupur : kya??///
Mayankn : Yeh ahmedabad ka one of the most romantic jagha hai....jisse mein aaj tumhare liye thoda or romantic bana diya.............chale................?
Nupur : Chalo......
[They went to the garden.....He told Nupz to close her eyes..She did......Then after sometime he tod her to open.....she opened.....and saw that in a specific place of the garden.which was fully in the picnic mood........it was decorated beautifully........with beautiful candles around it........it was very-very beautiful.......]
Nupur : Mayank yeh sab karne ki kya zarurat thi..........?
Mayank : Zarurat thi.......Kyunki Meri best friend ko apni jeet ko celebrate karna tha......so maine socho spcl tarike se hi kyun na manaya jaye.............
Nupur : Par Mayank.......
Mayank : Sssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.........Lets enjoy.............
[He took Nupzz hand and went to the place.........They're enjoying,laughing...............It was realy a sweet night...........Then they went to the hostel were they have stayed during 'Academic Meet'...........Nupur was saying good night to him.......]
Nupur : Mayank aaj ki shaam mein kabhi nahi bhoolungi........Pata hai aaj tak mere liye kisine bhi itna kuch nahi kyia.........Mein bohot khush hoon ki mujhe tum jaisa dost mila..........
Mayank : Ab bas itni bhi tarif mat karo......chalo sone jao.....good night...........
Nupur : Good night and thanks for everything.(touched his hand)
[Then Mayank went to his room.......]
[Next day they are now in Excel College............They met the principal...And then principal annouced their victory all over the Excel college.........Then Mayank's best buddy friend Sameer came and greeted them..............]
Sameer : Congrats guys....you rocked..........
Nupur : Thanks..........
Mayank : Thanks buddy...........
Nupur : Pata hai Sameer humne wahan kya - kya kiya...
[Nupur was telling about everything happened to her in Ahmedabad to Sameer......Then in the end she also told him about the whole last day celebration thing.......Then Sameer looked at Mayank give him very mysterious look.........Then Nupur left as she has been called by the Principal............]
Sameer : So usse kab batayega?
Mayank : KIsse kya batana hai?
Sameer : Nupur ko.........ki tu usse pyaar karta hai..........
Mayank : Dude mein usse pyaar nih karta...........
Sameer : Oh realy......toh woh sab jo ahmedabad kiya ...woh kiss wajha se haan....
Mayank : Yaar woh toh bas ....aise hi i mean agar celebrate nahi karte toh usko bura lag jata...........
Sameer : Wahi toh..........Dude tu kisse yeh baat chupa raha hai uss ladke se jo tujhe bachpan se janta hai.............kya baat hai use bata kyun nahi deta...
Mayankn : Yaar darr lagta hai ki kahin woh gussa hogayi toh.............
Sameer : Nahi dude aisa nah ihoga..........i think she also like you...........
Mayank : Par phir bhi yaar...........
Sameer : Dekh dude jitni jaldi ho sake usse bata de...........in sab chizon mein deri nahi karni cahiye.........Agar der hogayi toh.............
Mayank : Aisa kuch nahi hoga..........Mein Nupur ko apne dil ki baat bta ke rahunga......usse yeh bta ke h irahunga ki ' I LOVE HER'.............
The End...................
Next part will be continue soon..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

first to comment...... yay......
i loved your update.....
fallen head over heels for this ff.....
you write really well......
mayank loves nupur..... wow.......
continue soon......
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
IT was really amazing update loved it to the core hai there fast answers was tooo good and the celebriting woh Mayuu prepared for Nups was really Awesome...................
Do Con Sooon.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
😍 i luved the start...it was so sweet...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
oh...really sweet update....mayank loves nupur..its the time 2 celebrate but what to do yaar...since u said it not going to be a happy ending..i cant enjoy to the fullest....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
loved it pm me when u continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
wowwww....fantastic update....continue it soon...😃

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