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Posted: 14 years ago
gosh it was so touchy seriously without friends their life is incomplete i hope adi and aditi will do something for them to reunite them once again and thanks for pm do continue soon
Posted: 14 years ago
wow!! lovely!!

lovely kids!! adi and aditi!!
n now they got to know bout thier frnds:)

welll do cont soon
muah!!!!
me waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
really great update keep it up!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

hey wat shud i comment.plz excuse me 4 sum tym............but y rnt u rpyin my comments via QUOTES............lyk u used 2 do earlier...............

oopsssssss ook karoon ge ab yaar bus was a bit in hurry alwayss aik updates llikhneeyy mein itna tym lagta hai n bhaeeee..u knoooww....
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy amazing part..lovely..cont soon n thnks 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww.. Adi and Aditi was seeing sg wedding album and they saw da pics of they frnds.. Poor sajan.. They cried.. I l uv da hug of family..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 89
samrat was getting ready in room when adi aditi enterdd.......
ad:daaddddddddddddddddd...........samrat smiled at them n turned n lift him.......
s;yup dad k jaan,....samrat kissed adis cheek...n sit on bed.......
a:dad u r going to office
s:yupp
ad:but whyyyy its holiday na noo busineess trip
a;han apney hmarey sath wqt guzarney ka promise kya tha phir kaam kuin
s;mere sweet se princcess n prince..i am soory mein ney pora try kya tha avoid karna but wo log agree nahn kar rahe the unhey apk dad sey milna hai.....
ad:kuinn
s;unho ney apk dad ko nahn dekha na wo curious hain yeh jananey k lea k kon unk company ka owner kon hai jis k lea wo kaam kartey hain dad nahn aye na kbhe india is lea.....
a;par ap oficce trip thori ho na
s;i am sooo sooryyy mein jaldi aney k koshish karon ga
ad;nahn hm apk bina boor ho jaein gey......gunjan came in roomm to call for breakfast when saw adi aditi in samrats lap plaeading not to go......she smiles n goes to them n sit next to samrat.....
g:kya huwa??
before samrat could reply n ask her for help........
kids:mom dad ko ruko na aj mat jaein plzz kahoo na wo apk har baat mantey haiin....seeing their cutee request she melts......
g;samrat adi aur aditi itna keh rahe hain mat jao na plzz.....samrat looked at thrice the most imp persons in his life n he smiled n noded he cant refuse them.......
s;tekh hai mein nahn jata.......
kids:waoooo.....chalo hm carton dekhtey hain
s;emin ney yeh to nahn k hm cartoon dekhien gey
adi aditis smile gone while gunjan staring at him trying to know whats going on his mind
ad:mtlb??
s;mein nahn jaon ga balkeyy hum jaein geyy
a;kuinnnnnnnnnnnnn
s:kuin apko merey sath nahn jana kya
ad;office nahnnnnnnn
s:hmm tekh hai phir mein chala jata hon...gunjan smiled knows he was teasing them
g:adi aditi dad apko office k bad ghumaney bhe le k jaein ge
a;pakkaaaaaaa
s:hmm pakaaaa.....adi aditi hugged him
kids;okk hm bhe apk sath jaein gey.....
s;soo tyar ho then we wil goo......after shergills got ready they left for office.....in the way adi aditi saw ballons n asked to buy them,.......sajan smiled n compelted their wish n adi aditi got pink n blue ballons.....
g:samrat mjhey bhe lena hai wo red wala.....samrat saw in surprise to her innocent wife who was acting like a child........
s:chahsmsih are u in senses???
g:samrat plzz na wo red wala bohaat acha haii.....
adi aditi smiled seing their mother acting like them........
s;chashmish bache thori na ho.......
g:plzz
s:nope............gunjan glared at him n crossed his arms around waist........samrat smiled seeing her cute angry face.......she didnt talk to him....samrat put arm around her waist.n pulled her near she tried to resist but his grip was tight even more........
g;sarmat leave me
s:i didnt held u to leave u......they shared a lovely eyelock..she make a sad face.she cant even remain angry with him for a min....samrat smiled seeing her melting..n kissed her cheeek....
s:u r looking so cute in red nose dur to ur anger....gunjan look at him sadly....samrat made her smile with fingers........u look great while smiling.......gunjan couldnt help in smiling n put head on his arm.....n he kissed her forehead......
they reached at office...driver open the door n sajan n adi n aditi came out.....they were in front of a large building written sg enterprises......adi n aditi loved that building it was same as before they owned 2 years ago which were taken from them by unfair means..........but now it was again theirss just coz of their love.....sajan looked at each other n samrat gave her side hug n both smiled......
a:waoo its soo cooll
ad:ya osamm..dad...yeh to apk swizertland wale office sey bhe acha haii...samrat smield
s:hmm so andar chaleiin
ad:yaa....they entered in n gate kepper greeted themm..he was surprised n equally happy to see them he knows sajan v wel known...n was too depressed coz of their sudden leave....sajan were those who respects others n gain respect love n place in their hearts...sajan too smiled at him...as sajan enterd somone having back at them giving instructions to others.......gunjan held samrats hand n samrat held her by shoulders they were shocked they soon overcome their emotions as dont want adi n aditi get distrubed n they look at each other n assured each other.....aat last a person seeing them said that man to turn to saw them.he turned n as he saw samrat his eyes get filled.....sajan held each other even more....adi n aditi was see each other n couldnt belive on their eyes..they were seeing ..............................MMMMAAYYYAANNKKK...........adi whispers to aditi...
ad:di maynk mamo.....sjan had heard it n saw them......they looked at each other.....they werent able to know what they should doo.......sajan n maynnk looking at each other........n thrice knows how they were feeeling...not able to saw tears in each other eyes.....but something was stoping them from wiping each other tears to hug each other to creases each other to pull legs of each other to express care about each other but something was there which was stoping them sajan jsut wanted to go n hug mayank as tightly as they could they dont want to care about anything....maynk too wanted to go n hug them to break all the promises.....to dont care about dam...that reason due to whcih they wree soo away from each other.....
maynk forwd to hug but stop himself n his tears with his utmost try then he forwded hand.....
m:welcom mr.shergill......sajan was hurt n maynk too.......even of their utmost wishes n desires they cant hug each other they cant tell each other how much they felt alone without each other how much they felt pain,missing each other......
sarmat with great difficulty shaked hand with him as boths hand shivering before shaking but as soon as they get in contact it seemms these hands were waiting for this touch......
m:nyx to meet u mrs.shergill....gunajn held samrats hand even more stronglyy.......they had all tears but just then as hearing someone coming tthrice get over their emotions wiping their tears......
m:aye sir.......however they wre hurt but they know they had to do it..for the sake of themseleves for the sake of their children for the sake of their friends..........
maynk turned to another person.....
m:sir yeh hain sg k owner.......
p:whattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt??????tm??log yahan samrat??????
s:hi mr.buhshan......samrat was again now confident he just want to see this expression he knows he was expexting it......u have manged v well......maynk hide his smile....gunajn too was now comfortable...she didnt show any nervous or anything...adi n aditi wree totally confused seeing sajans n maynks behaviour as they wre keen observer just like their parents.....
a:dad yeh itna ounchaa kuin cheek rahe hain aur apsey batamizi sey kuin baat kar rahe hain??
ad:inhey baatt karney k maaners nahn haii???they said soo inocently n cutely that everyone had smile n had difficulty to control their gigle.....
s:hmm yup manners are very necessary na.....i think yahan k mangment ko change karney parey what u say princess..
a;u r always right dad.......
b:ill manred to kudh hain apney sey barey sey asey bbaat k jate hai bilkul apney baap pey gae haiin.....he mumrd but enogh to hear to maynk n sajan.he acutllayy couldnt take off eyes from boht as they wree soo beautifull innocent cute that noone could turn his face on tthem or moved his gaze from themm..maynk at that tym want to hit his head with file in his hand but controll himslef..sajan smiled at their jealousyy........
g:reallyy mr.buhshann
b:gunajn tmhey zara tamezz aur lehaz nahn raha apney baap
g:baapp....she laugheed scaristicallyy...really.....i am an orphan...n i am proud of it....she smiled with an utmost confident that everyone was shocked that could anyone be so brave..the girl who dont want to know to lift gaze in front of anyone n now she is saying with that too much confident..
g;mr.sharma why not u saw us our cabin??
maynk hide his smile n showed them ppath
m:ya sure mam come.......adi n aditi dont know whats going on....sajan saw their kids a bit confused..n distracted..they know they shouldnt bring them here but....they knows when they wil explain their kids everything..their kids will underestand them.......
as entered in cabin n maynk closed the door.n bolt it....sajan n maynk looked at each other...n it was the nxt moment that thrice were in each other armsss...........tears just flowing like flood..it seems friendship again get alive.their breaths their hapines their gigles their laughes their smiles get back life....it doesnt matter that they had not seen speak to each other since 2 yearrsss but friendship n love doesnt effect distancess..true friendship n love never endss however evil try their best ...afteer a long n tight group hug they distract they dont need word to tell each other or explain they knows what they are doing what they had to doo....as after hugg sajan looked at adi n aditi who were seeing them with confused eyes that they are supposed to be angry as they had tel them they left them then whyy noww????????????maynk saw adi n aditi n then sajan .....n sajan smiled reading the question in his eyes.....n they noded n maynk had tears of joyy....maynk bent on kness n hugged both of them..they didnt react first but seen their parents smilng they hugged him back they wre feeling good as they had always get sajan s love n sajan had never feell them alone or the lonliness without any relaitves...but still its natural that when u see ur loved one a blood relation u cant back off...adi n aditi hugged him ......maynk broke hug kiss their foreheads......
ad:maynk mamo
a:nahn mayank chahcooo.....sajan smiled.......
ad:nahn merey mammoo
a:par meerey chachoo..hana ap merey mayank chahchoo ho na
ad:nahn ap merey maynk maamoo ho na??
a:ap bolo na kuch mom dad yeh kuin nahn bol rahe humsey??
maynk wre just smiling at their innocence n cuteness....
samrat goes to them n too knedd down n put hand on mmaynks shoulder both passed each other a smile
s;yup yeh adi k maynk mamoo aur aditi k maynk chachoo haiin.....tekh haii
m:samrat yeh log kitney barey ho gae hai na....aur kitney innocent haii....he said smilng n his smile got faint
m:samrat tu inhey kuin laya mana kya tha na mein ney???agar.......sarmat held his shoulders
s:bus bohat ho gya maynk bohatt seh lya hai hm ney bohat door rahe hain hm log par ab nahn we ve to show them we are not helpless jo unho ney 2 sall pehley kya tha aj unhey usk saja bhugtane ho ge har hall mein..
ad:dad
a;dad hmein smjh nahn a raha hai ap kya bol rahe ho aur ap itna gusey kuin ho aur ro kuin rahe hoo
ad:dad bataoo na kya huwa hai ap log maynk mamo sey naraz the na phir ab bataoo na dad.......samrat dont know how to explain.....gunjan moved to them n wipe their tears......
g:kuch nahn adi aditi everything is fine.....sab tekh ho jae ga but apko aik promise karna haii
kids:kyaa??
g:ap chahtey ho na k ap k mom dad ka aur unke friends phir sey dost baney sath mein rahein..thye noded....to ap ko promise karna ho ga k ap kise ko nahn batao gey k hum apney friends sey narz nahn hain
ad:par
g:no par war ...ap ko mein baqi baad mein smjhaoon ge ab apney dad ko pareshan mat karoo..ook aur remember ur promise...aur kise bhe sorat ap log unk pass nahn jao gey??
a:kin k??
g;woh.....
m:woh jinho ney bhar apk dad sey batamizi k the
ad:oh okk we to dont like him
a:ya how could he talk to our dad like that....its soo bad na......
ad:ya he is soo rude.......
s:adi aditi asey nahn boltey hain aur aney bhar bhe asey bola tha dont say it again..he was polite but was serious n adi aditi lower their heads
kids:soory dad we promise aenda nahn karein ge
s:gud...ab ap log batao k kya kahoo ge ao k maynk chachhoo ney apk lea kuch khass magwaya haii
kids:kyaa??maaynk chahcho do naa....
maynk smiled n take out two choclates from pocket n gave them
m:abhe k lea yeh baqi badd mein.......
kdis:thanks maynk chachoo...they kissed his cheeks.....sajan smield....maynk n gunjan huged each other
g:bhae kuin kya ap log ney aesa
s:plzz chahsmsih...yeh hm sab k bhale k lea tha aur plzz bbhool jaoo...he held her by shoulders wipe her tears.....dekho meri jaan plzz hm log sath mein hain na tu kuch bura nahn ho ga ab n i promise u k mein phir sey wapis janey ko nahn bolon ga.....gunjan hugged him
g:samrat i dont kow bus tm apna dehayan rakhna
s:i wil dont worryy aesa kuch bhe nahn ho ga jo pehley huwa haii....hemsha unho ney kehl kehla hai but ab humare barii haii...gunjan just hugging him.....after soemtym....door knocked..sajan mayur looked at each other ...n in next moment sajan were siting on the sofas.....having adi n aditi nxt to them who were buzy in playing with i phone......maynk opend n find a cute girl of age 6 years....
n:dad..mom ney bola hai k ap unk call recive karo aur dad yeh apka lunch mom keh rahe the k wo shahrukh unhey tang kar raha tha islea nahn aein aur mjhey behja pka lunch laney k lea......sajan who had seen that girl n heard it get up from there seats...n as maynk pulled her in n again closed the door.....sajan had tears of joy n goes n huggs her........n showers kisses on her face..she was a bit surprised
g:samrat natasha
s:chahsmsih nats.hmare nats.......
n:dad yeh..............samrat chahcoo gunjan phoophoo..she hugged themm.....ap log kahan gae mein ney apko bohat miss kya......adi n aditi saw her n remember in pics in which natsaha was always in sajans arms..........they recognize her......sajan turned to their kids who too came too her smiled
a:yeh natasha di hain na??mom
gunjan noded smiling.....aditi forwed hand
a:hi me aditi....ADITITI SHERGILL......sajan n maynk smiled...she was always like she loves her surname.........thats why she always introduce her by full name
n:hi natasha...natasha sharma..
ad:ya ap di maynk mamo k beti hoo
n:maynk chahciooo adii.....
n:hi adii.......
ad:hi dii.....sajan n maynk smiled seeing their kids.......thrice moved to a side n sajn maynk could hear voice friends forever.......they looked at each other..n smiled..just like us they thought
s:back to plan maynk ........
m;yup gunjan dont wory sb tkeh ho jae ga
gunjan noded n samrat gave her side hug.....
m:natasha.....
natasha turned
n:ji papa
m:come here u have to go back to home apki mom apko yaad kar rahe hain
g;bhabhee
s:chahsmish plzz relax n pateint we will met everyone but we had to work out first okk plzzz....gunjan noded......
n:bye adi aditi tm log hmarey ghar ana
kids:ya.......byee.......maynk natasha left.........
precape:not yet decided rather a bit falshbacks.....hope sajan meet whole gang...n adi aditi comes to know about their cuzzn n new friends........
soory guys story mein change a gya hai thora.....as pehley kuch aur socha tha par phri beeter idea mil gya islea story k arrangment nahn tekh i know mein kbhe bhe events arrange nahn kar stkte meri storyline change he htoe rehte haii soo soory hope u wil bear itt..but hope u will love to see our gang backk..as friendshipp never could be ended...even u r far awayy..feel free to comment n tel me viewss.......do rate it worst worse bad good v good superb excellent or mindblowing.......itney options dey hain kuch acha sa chose karna..just kidding do comment whatever u think........i really appreciate ur critisizezz........
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NICE UPDATE......SORRY I HAD EXAMS...............
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: roknstarz_mjht

NICE UPDATE......SORRY I HAD EXAMS...............

its ok thank u for reading n comentingg..
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Posted: 14 years ago
RES ***edited***
hmmm just read part
i liked it emotions of frndz are described very well yar....
n loved sajan mayank n adi n aditi....
do cont asap want to knw more.
plzz
Love
Radhi...
Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago

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