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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome part .Please continue soon.
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part 19

in sajan room
smrat n gunjan lying on bed.......
s:chashmish tum jag rahe ho???
g:hmmm koe baat karne hai????
s:han...
g:bolo...
s:tum kush ho??
g:tmhey kya lagta hai???
s:han....
g:smrat......she hugged him......jab tum mere sath ho to mein kush he hoon ge na kuin k mere lea kushi ka dosra nahn pehla aur akhri naam smrat hai.....he smiled.....
s:thanks chashmish.......
g:thanks kuin ....mjhe kush karna tmhare adat aur mera tmharey sath kush rehna mere adat soo noo soorrryyy noo thanks in friendship........
s:jo hukam apka g........
g:smrat tmhey nend a rahe hai........
s:nahn tmhey?????
g;nahn.....she get up kuch karte hain.......
he also get up...
s:romance karien chashmish.....he pulled her by her waist n say in meschivious way.......gunjan hit him playfully n place her head on his chest......
g:tmhey to kuch aur sojhta he nahn hai........
s:ab jisk itni achi khoabsorat biwi ho wo aur kya sochey ga usk elawa........
g:acha..........hmmmmm....smrat start trickling on her waist.....
g:smrat .....mat .... karo ....plz...mjhe ....bohat hansi a rahe hai.....smrattttttttttttttttttt......................after five mins he give up.......
g:thank god....now they were lying on bed...gunjan having smrat s hand around waist n under her head .....
s:tm asey he hanste raha karo ache lagte hoooo..........
g:achaaa aur tum bhe asey he shetanya karte raha karo januable lagtey ho........a broad smile apear on his face.he kissed her..n....he put his head on her shoulder...and both went to their dreamland
next morning
gunjan got up but couldnt find smrat she saw a dress a trosuser with a shirt just like damni in this pic but it is purple instead of blue...


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and a note written

chashmish MERE LEA yeh pehan k nechey ao me waiting agar tum comfortable feel karo sirf tab........
sirf aur sirf tmhara smrat(sweettoo)

she smiled n thought...mein yeh dress......par smrat k lea kuch bhe....she take a shower n changed n stand in front of mirror n saw herself
itna bura to nahn lag raha....sahe he lag rahe hoon....ajeb to nahn lag raha...nahn nahn....agar lag bhe raha hai to koi farq nahn parta smrat k lea kuch bhe.....
m for maa,a for avni.sa for sameer,p for prithvi,d for damni,v for varun and r for roshni
she smiled n came down n was just going outside when saw ela..she took her blessing..
g:namastey maa...
m:jeete raho...wah wah ache lag rahe hoo mjhe laga tum sirf shalwar qamez pehnte ho smrat ney jitna btaya tha...
g:gee mjhey western pasand nahn par wo...(she waz felling shy)...smrat ney bola tha islea....
m:jeete raho....kudha tm dono ko kush rakhey aur buri nazar sey bachae....
g:thanks maa she put arms around her....mein jaon ...smrat wait kar raha hai mera bhair...
m:hann jao wo pecheley 2 ghanto sey bhar tehl raha tha pocha to kehta kuch nahn....to wo tmhara intezar kar raha tha ...
g:ohh wo mein abhe jage the......
m:acha ab jao itna intezar mat karao bechara sbha sey uski chahrey pe muskarahat nahn dkhe tmhey dekhe ga to muskarey ga kya behosh ho jae ga....
gunjan smiled n went outside...smrat s back was facing her..she came near her n tap his shoulders..
g:smrat.....he turned n waz memorized by her beauty n act as fanting...gunjan hold him back from his coller....
g:smrat..kya ker rahe ho...gir jatey abhe...
s:tum itni koabsorat lago ge to mera dil to nikal ae ga bhair..
g:thanks...
s:chasmish thanks to mjhey kehna chahey k tum ney mere lea first tym apne life mein......
g:smrat tmharey lea kuch bhe....he hugged her n kissed on forehead....
s:chalo....
g:khahn...
s:minali mein mere sab sab sey phele favourite place...
g:mein btao???
s:tmhey pata hai...
g:hmm..
s:btao...
g:horse ridding wale place pe ja rahe hain na....
s:tmhey kesey pataa..
g:kal maa ney mjhey tmhare sare baatien batae the....
s:hmmm acha chalo wo sarey hmara wait kar rahey hon gey...they went on the distination on bike...
g:smrat ahista chalao....gir jaon ge....dar lag raha hai mjhe...
s:tum mjhey zor sey pakr lo nahn giro ge na he dar lagey ga.....she hugged him tightly by waist.....her fear was gone at once n started enjoying it
s:chasmish ho gya na khatam dar....she opened her eyes n smiled
g:han maza a raha hai.....he smiled n they reached tere n saw other couples waiting for them
sameer:shukar hai a gae ho tm log...tum logon ka romance he nahn khatam hota......gunjan blushed......
s:acha tum to tym pe a gae they...mjhe pta hai tum log last mein aey the aur.....tum log......mein ney dkha tha...this tym they both were blushing.....
d:acha tum log choro yeh chalo smrat ho jaey race....aur i bet tum har jao gey mjsey.....tum itney saloon baad riding karo gey...
s:yeh ap ki bhool hai bhabhe jaan.....ho jaey race.....damni showed him thumb for irritating him...
d:to mere team mein kon hai??/
p:mein..
sameer n smrat in ears...jouro ka gulam....n gunjan avni gigled....
p:kya khah tum ney????he forwded towards them...
s:acha acha soorrry...he step back.....shukar (uski jaan mein jaan ae)......
v:mein bhe damni bhabhe....
r:mein bhe...
s:soo tekh hai smeer avni aur chashmish mere team.....
d:to tmhare team mein sey pehley kon ae ga???
s:ummm sameer r avni...
a:par mein...
sameer:plz avni warna hum har jaein gey tmhey bus pehchey he behtna hai......
a:nahnnn plzzzzzz.......
d:wo nahn behtey ge sameerr .....
a:han plzzzz....
sameer:ab kya karien smrat.....
s:bhabhe yeh asey bhe chaley ga begair girlfriend k ghora...all other gigled where sameer glared him...
d:hann chaley ga he....wasey langor k girlfriend thori hogi..
sameer:bhabheeeee.......avni n all gigled...sameer saw avni angirly.....he moved towards his horse...
a:sameer sameer she also follwed him
a:soorrrrryyyyyyy sameeeeerrrrr......
s:its ok (but still not ok)she kissed on his forehead n cheeks
a;dekhna tmhey jeeto ge
s:thanks smiling..hugged her..she hugged back....
sameer:chalo bhabhe harney k lea tyar ho jaoo...
d:tmharey soch hai sirf.....varni on other horse.....n they start race....
s:bhabhe ap log enjoy karo chashmish aur mein abhe atey hain aur mere fav ghori khah hai?
d:parr...acha...wo wahen apni fav place pe...
s:ok thanks...sajan went there..
g:smrat yahan kuin lae ho...she see smrat with a horse cute ghori..talking to it...tum ney mjhey miss kya??it responces by making voice..she smiled...then smrat turned towards her....
s:chasmish yeh meri 2nd girlfriend hai
g:hmm tm to kehte ho sirf mein tmhare girlfriend hmmm btao she made a stiff face n pointed finger towards him showing she will kill himm if would say that anyone else is his girlfriend...
s:chasmish....he step back n she move forwed...his back touch wall....she came near n started laughing madly...........smrat made a face n pulled her n pinched to the wall...she instantly stopped laughing
s:ab hanso chasmishhh....ab kuin chup ho gae...
g:wo.......smmm...rrrr..aaa...ttttt......
s:ge chashmish geeeee mein sun raha hoon tum mjhey dara rahe the...
g:wo to tum kdhe dar rahey the mein ne to kuch kha bhe nahn...............(she was in his arms she assured herself n calm down herself)
s:hmmmm....wasey mjhey tmhare possessivennesss pasand aey or i love it.......
g:hmm....acha tum lae yahan kuin they????
s:ghori dkhaney islea....
g:achaaa.....hmm chalein..
s:chasmish aik baat karne hai...
g:to bolo na ......
s:wo tum avni k trah to nahn daroo ge??mere sath riding karo ge na???
g:wo.....srmrat
s;plzzzzzzzzzz chasmishhhhh i promise tmhey bilkul dar nahn lagey ga aur mein tmhey girney bhe nahn doon ga.....
g;hmm acha teekh hai par..hum is ghori pe behtein gey??agar tum k girlfriend ko bura lag gya???khabhe kise larki k sath bheto tum is par??
s:han ise pe bhetey ge....nahn lagey ga kuin k wo tmhey janti hai.....tum pehley lucky girl hooo....
g:par wo kasey jante hai mjhey????
s:coz colege k duran jab mein holidays ya weekends pe yahan ata tha to tmharey sath btae huwe harr paal ki baat ani ghori sey share karta that aur isey trah aik din baat kar raha tha jab maa ne suna aur phir mein ney maa ko btaya tha phele dafa.......
g:swwweeeeeettttt.....par mjhey tmhare ghori sey dar lag raha hai????
s:chashmish daro mat chalo ao mein tmhey introduce karata hon...he hold her hand n placed it on its body..first she closed eyes in fear then opened it when smrat embarce her with his other hand.....she rubbed hands on its body....first mare(ghori)(i think yahe kehte hain eng mein)was not respondng good..
g:bus dekha usko bura lag raha hai......
s:nahn lag raha wait a minute...n turned toward it.....meri pyari ghori yeh hai meri pyarii swweett cuttee sey chasmish wohe jis k barey mein mein ney tmhey btaya tha na....yaad hai na.....she smiled where it responces as good sign...bus kha tha na chashmish....soon she was fimiliar with it n it was with her....(mtlb friends)
g:chalo chalein....
s:hmm n they all three went back sajan walking beside it...........
d:a gaey tum log....mil lya apni ghori sey....
s:hann bhabhe thanks bilkul wasey hai.....
just then they saw sameer coming first n varni behind themm...they came...
s:yahoooooooooo.....sameer n smrat hugged...bhabhe dkho hum jeet gaey hain....damni made a face....
d:abhe dkhtey hain wo to varun k sath tha merey sath laga k dekhoo..chaloo smrat tmhare bare hai...smrat n prida sat on horse....
sameer;ab bol smrat teri girlfriend bhe terey pechey nahn behte ge....
d:tum dono langooor jo hooo....both glared at damni...where other were laughing....just then stooped when heard
g:smrat mjhey bhe behtna hai.......all were shocked....first they never thought that she will wear western n then noww on horse...
d;gunjan tum ney pehley kabhe ride kya hai aur yeh smrat k jo ghori hai na kbhe bhe kisi larki ko nahn behtney dete.....roshni aur mein ney try bhe kya tha but os ney gira dya....now gunjan was terified but when saw smrat assuring her...she calmed
g:smrat mein pehchey behton ge to daarrr lagey gaaa....
s:no problem chashmish tum agey beht jao aooo he gave hand n she acceptd n sat on it....it doesnt do anything or jumped as damni naarraated....
d:bare baat hai....waqae smrat tum sach kehtey ho gunjan mein kuch to khasss baaattt hai.....they smiled
v:ap log sath mein bohat achey lagtey hoo...
r:ya han wo ap kya kehtey ho smrat bhae...hmmm......
g:januable....
r:han wohe...they both smiled smrat embarced gunjan n she feel safe in his arms.....they started race n sajan wished prida goodluck....n prida smiled....gunjan was enjoying riding where smrat was just lost in her... her hairs coming on his face and she was trying to push them back... smrat remove hairs n they had an eye lock n their speed was so much slow n prida passed through them...gunjan was first to recoverd...
g:smrat hum haar jaein gey tum mjh pe nahn race pe concentrate karoo...
s:chashmish tm mera lucky charm ho..nahn haroon ga......aur tum jab mere bahoon mein hote ho to mein sirf aur sirf tum pe concentrate karta honn....aur mere ankhein sirf tmhey dkhtey hain.......
g:acha g....par abhe jeetna zarori hai warna damni bhabhe sey tmhey koi nahn chaoa pae ge.......
s:u r right chashmish n he speed up the horse.....gunjan first close her eyes but then open her arms n start enjoying it........they passed the prida....n after agey pechey finale sajan are winners they were super duper happy n gunjan hugged smrat n kissed on cheeks.....and everyone ohhhhhhhhhhhh........while smrat didnot considering anyone important just seeing continously his chashmish......
sameer:maa ka phone aya hai chalo nashtey pe wait kar rahe hain........
s:tum log chalo hum atey hain.......
roshni:aik to ap logon ka romance nahn khatam hota....smrat glared her...n varun pulled her to go with him.........
d:jaldi ana...
s:bhabhe ap preshan mat ho bus adhey ghantey mein a rahe hain.....
p:okkk enjoy......gunjan blushed
s:thanks bhaya.....
they all went...
s:chasmish chalo behtoo...
g;kuin
s:tmhey riding sekhaoonn
g:smrat tum pagal ho gae ho...mein aur horse riding.......
s:mjh pe trust hai na.....
g:kudh sey bhe zyada.......
s:to phr behto...they sit again on horse...smrat give her rope n give instructions....first 15 mins she cant handle it....
g:smrat nahn hoga...
s:tum ney dil sey koshish ke he nahn hai warna ho jata...he starting to come down when gunjn stoped him n hold her ears.....
g:soorrryyyy last tym try karien porey dil sey karon ge paka......he smiled n noded.......they tried n at last she was succeded in handling.....n both was super duper happy...they came down...n went back home...
s:dekha chasmish a gya na.....
g:hann thanks....she hold his arm n entered in dinning room where saw all glaring them.........
s:sooryyyyy maaaa wo gunjan ko horse riding sekha raha tha thats why late ho gae soorrryyy
all:kyaaaaa?????....aur gunjan seekh gae???///
s:han....is mamaley mein mere chashmish bright student hai he gave her side hug.......
m:acha hmm koe baat nahn jao change kar lo itney gandey kaprey kar lea hain....
s:wo maa hum gir gaye they ghoreyy seyyy...
m:kya gunjan tmhey chot to nahn lagee???she become so cared..she hugged her..
g:nahn maa nahn lagey...
s;mjh sey bhe poch lo....mein bhe gira tha...all gigled
m:tu to itney baar gira hai tjhey practice hai par mere phool sey bate to itni nazk hai.....
s:han aur mein to pathar hoonn...
m;chal ja shetan...change kar ao...they both went to their roomss..gunjan was going in washroom when smrat pullled her by her arm n standing in front of mirror.....
g:samrat pehley he dair ho rahe hai choro...he removed her hairs coming on her face.....
g:sammrrraaattt...
....s;chasmish thanks sab kuch jo tmney mere lea kya....
g:tmhare lye kuch bhe samrat.....
s:chashmish tum pe westrn bohat suit karta hai par mere chashmish salwar qameezz mein he zyada ache lagte haii....she smiled n hugged him....he hugged back.......
s:chasmish chalo change karlo....
g;wohe karne ja rahe the but tum ney rok lya....she went to change.but again stopped n smrat made her sit n took aid box from wardrobe
s:tmhey kya laga mjhey batao ge nahn to pata nahn chaley ga
g:smrat choti sey the ise lea..
s:chasmish baat choti ya bare tum mjh sey to share kar sakte ho na ....she noded....he was doing his dressing
s:so nxt tym promise me btao ge mjhe..
g:acha baba promise ho gae drreesing to jaon lao mein bhe kar doon tmhare dressing kudh to btate nahn ho aur mjhey kehte ho...she started doing his dreessing..he smiled...after changing both came down...smrat wearing green t shirt n black pant n gunjan wearing saree lemon green colour...both looking awwesomee....
r:thank god ap log a gae warna to bhok k waja sey mere face ka colour yellow ho jata...all giigleeddd...they sat n all enjoyed breakfast....

at break fast

s:soo bhabhe ap har gaein soo ready for punishment what u say gyus??indicating sameer avni n gunjan...
m:kyaa??damni phr har gae....damni tmhey kitney dafa khah hai mat lagaya karo smrat sey bet hamesha har jate ho...
avni:ya di...smrat iz best...
d:........having a down face moved to halll n sat there...
g:smrat yeh tum ney kya kia hai?? jao damni bhabhe ko mana k lao...smrat feell sooryy for hurting damni..
sameer:aik to yeh larkyan na choti choti baaton pe roney lag jatey hain...
m:sameer???shouted
sameerr got afraid sooorrryy maaa....
p:mein jata hon....
s:nahn prithvi bhaya mein jata hon meri galti hai.....
p:hmm okkk...but agar zyada gusey mein ho to mat insist karna mein kudh handle kar lon ga .....
s:is k zarorat nahn parey ge....
p:i know that.....
smrat moved to damni n sat on kness in front of her n hold his ears ...
s:sooryy bhabhe sachi mein mera apko hurt karney ka koe irada nahn tha mein to sirf masti karney wala tha aur ap ko aur prithvi bhaya ko date pe behjney wala tha i know wo kaam mein itney buzy rehtey hain aur ap ko tym bhe nahn de pate....damni was equaally shocked n pleased n soory mixed emotion...she hugged smrat....
d;smrat tmhey soory kehney k koi zarorat nahn wo to bus asey he.....tmhey pata to hai mein kitney sensitive hon she winked....smrat smiled...
s:thank god ap naraz nahn ho warna aj chasmish to mjhe nahn bakhshatey...
she laughed n said:tum gunjan sey dartey ho??
s:nahn asey koe baat nahn hai he sat on sofa wo cahsmish na is mamley mein bohat strict hai k mere ya usk waja sey koi hurt na ho....
d:tum dono itney sweet hoo k koe tum sey naraz kya gusey bhe nahn ho sakta they laughed in their laugh every one joined who were listening their talks..gunjan wiped the tear which fell from her eyes after listing his talkss....smrat came n give her side hug n asked not to cry....n gunjan to herself tum itney januable kasey ho saktey ho mjsey itna pyar kase kartey ho????as smrat listening her talk his heart replied jasey tum itni januable ho mjh sey itnea pyar karte ho....they all returned to breakfast n enjoyd it with smrat s talk...

after breakfast

all 3 girls toook gunjan with them in a room whose door was opened n boys sitting in font of such that smrat can see gunjan....but cant talk...boys were busy in business talkss n girls in latest fashion..for smrat bussiness was most interested subject but at that tym it was least interesting....same withh gunjan ..missing badly eachother..... almost 4 hours passed....
at lunch they also cant lunch together as 3 children were with gunjan n had requsted to their dear chachi to eat with them...where smrat was like that wanted to kill themmm how how they can do like that with him???smrat to himself chashmish k itni adat ho gae hai ab to mjhsey bardasth he nahn ho raha hai kya karonnn kya karoon???????gunjan to himself ohh goddd khahan phass gae bachey to itney cute hain parr yeh dil na isko to samrat k elawa kuch sojhta he nahn hai..plzzzzzz god kuch karooo....at last there prayer were listned n damni came in gunjan room n asked children to leave as its tym to take rest n also give rest.....gunjan thanked god n was lying having back with bed closing eyes....smrat entered n stoopeed near her n starredd her n sat beside her n touched her hand......
g:smrat....she opened eyees...n both smiled n hugged telling how much they miss each other.....just then gunjan saw a plate of rajma chawal on sidetable....
g:smrat tum ney khana nahn khaya???
s:tum ney bhe to nahn khaya???/
g:hmm mei khilate hoon they both sat down parallel to each other n fed each other...n then rested for few hourss in arms of each other........
precape:sajan buzy in prida s date....surprise for them[/B][/I][B][I][U][/U]
Edited by meerrii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Omg omg wow I loved it so longgg update awesome love to read long updates lol anyways Wow lots of romance scene of sajan wow wow lol der cutee scene in nite wen dey couldn't sleep n den wow wow gunji wore western cloth wow btw dat dress was cutee n den wow horse riding loved sajan Sammy introducing gunji wid his 2nd gf da horse n den aww loved how gunji became frnd wid his mare lol n den woohoo sajan won the race haha dey were romancing during race also too funny n den wow Sammy gunji ko horse riding karna sikharaha tha n she succeed to leArn it awesome gunji is best n den aww damini Sammy convo loved it n den aww sajan missing each other too much n dey were praying god dat sajan get time wid each other lol n den again romancing of sajan loved it lol awesome good job gal do continue soon now
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for liking n reading n commenting also
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tht was sooooooo awesomeeee part
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wow such a fabulous and long update.....sajan were soooo cute......cont soon
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part 20

all jodis sajan,varni n savni in a corner meeting.all were giving plans n it waz huge noise...
s:shutp up guys in an anger tone....where gunjan smiled to irritate him.he saw n glared but still she smiled.he ignored her
s:mein btata hon......varun aur roshni tum log dressess n all that stuff buy karney jao ge
v:okk
s:aur sameer aur avni frst flowers candles etc la k do gey dn khana le k ao gey okk
a:okk
g:aur tum kya karo gey??
s:tmharey sath romance(under his breath)
g:what(as she listened what he said)
s:hmmm woh setting decoration etc okkk now everyone get to work..
sameer:par location...
s:secreat hang out place...
a:ohhh perfect...
s:theme clur
g:red n black
r:wowww
a:okk ab chalo late ho raha hai
they all went expect sajan
s:chalo chasmish
g:han...they reach a beautiful place covered totally by green bushes
g:its so cute...
s:par tum sey zyada nahn hai...he hugged from back n dn kissed on shoulders n nuzziling his nose in her hairs...both lost in each other..just dn mobile ring up...smrat wasnt picking so gunjan turned
g:smrat phone uthao..
s:kya hai na sab ko mjhey aur tmhey akeley nahn chor saktey thorey tym k lea by saying this he accept call where gunjan smiled n place her head on his chest.....smrat also hold her by her waist
s:hii
sameer:smrat mein le aya hon sab go and get it okk
s:okk thanks
sameeer:anytym
he cut call n put in pocket n embarced her in both arms...gunjan seperated
g:smrat jao na le ao wo chezian...
s:jo hukam apka jaan.....he kissed on cheekks and went away...gunjan smiled n touched the place he kissed her..she mumbled pagal
after 2 mins he came back
s:yeh lo chasmish...
g:so start
s:sure they arranged everyting candles roses red carpet n chairs table etc..all was set looking januable as sajna standing between increasing beauty of place....
s:all set...
g:yaa n gunjan hugged him he hugged back n dn broke hug n they were close to each other he made her more close to himself.he made her looking into his eyes which were full of emotions passion n love....he leaned to kiss her...but their badluck moblie ring up...but this tym noone can stop they didnt consider it imp...still bzy in starring and their lips touched...after five mins they let go each other.....gunjan hide her face in his arms and he kissed on hairss...
s:i luv u jaan...
g:luv u too jaan........they both were feeling speacial in each others armz just dn mobile again ring up...he picked it...
s:han bol varun
v:bhar aik confusion hai...
s:kya??
r:di k lea western ya eastern....
smrat asked gunjan...
g:i think damni bhabhe pe western bohat suit karey ga...
r:okk thankss..bye....just after that call it again rang up..smrat waz irritated now
s:han bolo ab kya masla hai
sa:khaney mein kya lein smjh nahn a raha
s:bhae aur bhabhe ka fav aur kya
sa:yar wo totally different hain eastern n chinese
s:to dono le lo simple
sa:okk....smrat put it again in pocket n mumbled kya nna mere sath he kyun hota jab bhe chasmish k kareeb hota honn...gunjan smiled n put arms around his neck
g:kya huwa ???he shaked in negative..
g:to face pe 12 kuin bajee hain???
s:kuch nhan choro he removed his arms n stared moving but she caught his arm n pullled back such that she was in his arms...he stared at heerr..
g:mjhey chor k khahn ja rahey they?.......he didnt replied..he removed her hiars coming in front of her face and then he kissed her on neck....on her ears....on her cheeks.....dn on forehead ...n dn on her hands they had a sweet eyelock...then gunjan kissed him on forehaead...dn on cheeks dn hugged him tightly..his hands on her back n he placed lips on her shoulder..they broke hug but stilll in each other s arms....
gunjan smiled seeing smrat happy..
g:ab lag rahey ho merey smrat.....smrat smiledd..just dn other came n saw decorations their mouths were remain open...all were praising...
s:thanks ho gyae sarey kaam??
sa:han chalo they were in that corner again.....
s:wow impressed tum dono k kafi acha taste hai..chalo unhey set kar detey hain...
sa:han....they put it in round trays.. n give to servants to take them to prida room...servent knocked n damni opened doorr..
d:yeh kya hai...servent forwded a chit.....it waz written
FEOM UR DEVERS N DEVERANIS AT EIGHT O CLOCK AT HUNG OUT PLACE..........
she smiled n moved in her room.....at 8 o clk they were standing outsde that place a carpet between bushes was set with candles n roses along the whole way...it was osam....there waz two cards
a thanku card
thanks for being there for us..thank u...they had slight tearz...
a enjoy card
fulfil ur punishment..have great fun...spend quality tym with each otheerr...
d:they are such a sweeet heartss...
p:ya n they entered in that place
on other side at dining table
maa:damni prithvi ko bhe bula lao
s:wo to apni date pe gae hain....
maa:kya??///n then they told abouut everything...
maa:kudha tmherey pyar ko sada bhar rakhey they all smiled...after fininshing they moved to their rooms
s:thanks guys sab kuch karney k lea....
sa:hey thanks keh k paraya na kar they hugged n bid goodnights.....
in sajan room
gunjan changed clothes n stand near window...smrat came out in room after changing n saw her...he moved towards her n make her turned..
s:whats happening??/
g:tmhara intezarr both smiled.......smrat lifted her in his arms n moved to bed...he placed her on bed n also seetled near her gunjan turned n switched of lamp.....................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow u finally updated missed dis ff a lot anyways wow wow so romantic update man so cuteeee n romantic sajan hayeee mardala n u put me in sajan dreamland lol n aww loved der suprise for damini n prithvi loved dis update do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update......sajan being romantic was superb....and the surprise they had for prithvi and damini was sooo cute.....cont soon

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