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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
part 15
g:wait wait.....
s:kya huw?
g:coming in 10 mins...
after 10 mins
s:chasmish khahn reh gae the...
g:yel lo tmhare jacket aur yeh bag peche rakh do dkhna mat..ok..
s:par .....
g:bad mein..
they sit in car
s:han to khahn jana hai chasmish.....
g:yahan sey straight then right then left n then straight........
s:hold on aram aram sey batao........
g:okkk
she told n they reached destination smrat was about to come out when gunjan stoped him
G:ABHE NAHN WAIT HERE CLOSE UR EYES.SHE CLOSED HIS EYES BY HER HAND.DONT OPEN
S:OKKKKKKK...........
GUNJAN CAME OUT WITH BAG N DO PREPARATIONS N CAME TO SMRAT SIDE N OPEN DOOR
G;KHOLO
S:YAHAN TO ITNA NDHERA HAI.......
G:TO WAIT KARO NA CHALO...it was a cliff when they came at its edge then smrat was surprised as there were steps on sides of which candles are lighted n there was a round lake n candles are lighted every where n on one side there was umberalla under which a bed sheet was setted with pillow.N ROSES r also spread ther.n further near lake it was written i love u with candles n roses.smrat cant even blink eye it was too much beautilful.he had tears as he cant imagine in his life someone will do for him something relly gunjan had filled light in the darknes of his life gunjn hugged him from back having one arm on his shoulder..
g:do u like it??
he made her in front of him..
s:sirf like..i love it but not more than u....gunjan smiled.....hugged
s:u didnt have to do it?gunjan broke hug n made a sad plus angry face
g:kuin kuin......tum itna kuch kar sakt ho mein itna nahn kar sakte kya ?mein tumsey pyar nahn karte kya??.....she turned n fold her hand.smrat smiled pulled her back and put his hand around his waist..
s:i know u love me..aur tum kar sakte ho akhir kar MRS GUNJAN SMRAT SHERGILL HO..RIGHT...BOTH SMILED...
S:CHALO WAHAN JA KE BEHTHTE HAIN POINTED TOWARDS LAKE....jsut then gunjan held her hand n when he turned back saw gunjan siting on knee.
s:chashmish....
g:will u be my date tonight?he was felling on 9 cloud he cant expressd his happines.he made him stand
s:ya ofcourse they hug.s:chalein
g:han.......
THEy settled their n gunjan in his lap resting her head on his chest....
s:chashmish mjhe thand lag rahe hai tmhe bhe lag rahe hai?
g:to...hmmmm.aik mint
s:khan chale?
she got up n moved towards that bag n come back with a cup of coffee n his jacket..she girst give him cup then smrat give him hand sot hat she can settled again then gunjan wrapped jackt around both....
g:yahan aksar bohat sardi ho jate hai....cold winds kept on blowing..
s:tm yahan aksar ati the?
g:han meri fav place jab khabhe kudh sey baatien karne hote hain ya mom dad sey mein yahen ate the...hey wo dko(she pointed towards moon with 4 stars on sky)wo jo 4 sitarey dkh rahe ho hmarey mom dad hain dkho wo hamein dkh k kitney kush hain we love them a lot right...she smiled n looked on smrat face...he cant describe his feelings that tym as he also felt like that they are looking towards both...
s:han bilkul...his grip on gunjan become a little tighten as expressing his feelings that she is lovable n he love him most.......they drink coffe n share sweeet memoeries with their parents..........
s:chashmish agar mera pyar sacha hai to aj barish haoge
g:abhe
s:han
g:kya???she got up
s:kuin tmhey aj lazmi bolna tha
s:kuin kya huwa
g:ab itni taiz barish hoge
s:woh kuin
g:ab humara pyar itna kam to hain nahn ke sirf chand bondien girein...
s:tmhey yaqen hai hoge ?
g:han woh bhe zyada........
she said start circling with her open arms n just both felt water n saw each other n smiled...smrat moved n huged her n then lift her n they go on circling..gunjan offered her hand for dance they danced with each other....bg music kudaya ve.....he lift her n moved to their sweet roses bed they lied n all the candles bujh jate hain...swae i luv u wale as they are under shade where two lovers lost in each other..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
awesome part
sajan were so romantic..........

do continue soon n add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
tht was sooooooooo awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part i just love it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
fabulous update.........sajan were sooooooooo romantic........cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Wow wow dat was so so romantic wow gunji did all dis how sweet hayeeee u put me in sajan dreamland dey were so cuteee n romantic n wow rain dat also made perfect loved it to core continue soon now
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
awesomeee updt dear
aww sajan were too sweettt😳
loved it to r core..
pllzzz do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
part 16

nxt morning
as sunlight fall on sajan face they opened her eyes n got up n sit n open their hand n yawned n when saw here n there under open sky n then towards each other....they were surprised or say have a great shock........gunjan coorrect her pallu n smrat wear his shirt.n smrat made her wear his jacket. they stand up dnt kw what to say or what to do they packed all stuff.................just then about to move when saw ar...........ahhhhhhhhhhh both shout
a:tum log to asey chala rahe ho jasey bhot dekh lya ho....
s and g:nahn woh.......
r:wasey tum log yahan.....she winked in a tone of pulling their legs she moved towards gunjan n put arm around her...where arman put on smrat s shoulder sajan saw each other...n bulshed red shade on their cheecks....
a:hmmmm bolo tum log kuch.....
g:woh kuch nahn bhae hum bus ja he rahe the ap log yahan to koe nahn ata aksar???
a:han tum he hamesha yahan ate the aur ghonto bhete rehte the jab tak mein na lene ata tha...tumharey janey bad aur after i got married to rhidma we used to come here daily for mornig walk...bus abhe abhe ae the....kasam sey..hum ney kuch nahn dkha......ar smiled..n sajan blushed more..
g:aesa kuch nahn.........
r:hum sey jhot bolo gey..chalo btao.....
s:woh...tum logo k janey k bad hum yahan a gaey the...hmmm gunjn arranged our first date......(gunjan glared him why he told her name n janey ka man to tum ka tha smrat shergill tmhey mein bad mein pochtey hon...)..n u cant imagine its a great date this place iz too much beautiful....that was one of best nght.(he saw gunjan n she was smiling forcely)...
a:hmmmm.........lakin kal to itni barish huwe the to.......
g:isey smrat k waja sey to huwe the.......she slipped out...
a n r:kya?//
g:nahn kuch nahn late ho raha hai humey chalna chahey.....
a n r:ya sure waqae mein..........
r:oh wait tum log kab wapis ja rahe ho
g;hmmm kal...
a:raat ka diner hmarey tarf?
s:sure bye
a:bye
in car
s:chashmish ky ahue mon kuin phulaya huw hai?
g:tmhey is sey mtlab?
s:chasmish kya huwa mein ney kuch galt kya hai kya?
g:ya ya mr.smrat shergill tum ney mera nam keh dya aney ka tmhara man tha aur....
s:mera aur tmhara man aik he to hai....he left her spechless.but she dont want to forgive him easily.she start looking outside.she cant deny him he is sayng truth.....they reached home...they entered n moved quickly to their as they didnt want any1 to know....
in room
gunjan was still angry n she was moving to take shower when smrat held her hand n pinched her to wall
g:smrat ky hai?
s:tmsey pyar hai...he loved to tease her
g:so.....
s:to kya tum ney mjhe good morning bhe wish nahn kya?
g:merey pas tym nahn hai...
s:sach mein....he loked in her eyes...why he is so cute??why i love him so much>gunajn was thinkg that....why she is so beautiful?why i wanted to love her at every time??>smrat thinkg........
g:smrat.....
s:hmm still lost in her.....
g:mjhe jana hai...
s:he came out of her trance par phley.......
g:.........
s:acha jao....he turned n moved but just then gunjan held his arm n came close of her...n then....
g:bye.....n she run
where smrat who was expeting kis from her was now standing their with open mouth...
s:chasmish mein tmehy nahn choron ga.....he lied on bed n slept there...gunjan came out after changing her clothes a pink shalwar qamez..n saw him sleeping....she stared at him....just hear for caling for breakfast it was already 11 o clk...gunjan move dtowards smrat..
g:smrat utho...
s;.......
g:smrat.....
s:.........
g:smratttttttttttt.......loudly....
s:chasmish mjhe soney do ....n placed pillow on his face.....
g:smrat nashta.....
s:tum kar lo mjhe nahn karna.....
g:par...she went from there.
gunjan pov
mein ney khamkha smrat ko tang kya....r wo naraz bhe ho gya hai r nashta bhe nahn kar raha....she was wooried....n came in dining rom
b:beta smrat khana hai nashta kar lo?
g....thinkg(ab mein kya boloun)
g:woh bui hm kha ae they.......halwa puri........sbha sbha.......she doesnt want to tell lie but she has to....
b:acha tekha b khahn hai smrat?
g:wo so raha hai...
b:acha tekh hai....
she sat there n chat a little but her mind was in smrat....
it was 4 o clk n smrat didnt come yet gunjan skip the lunch also....at last at 4 30 he came down...n went to kitchen n find a servent...
se:sab g mein ap k lea khana laga don?
s:nahn...woh...
se:maem sab ney bhe kuch nahn khaya sab g.........
s:what???.....acha as he turned fin his angel.....just then servent went away from there...
gunjan moved towards smrat but she feling dizzy n she fell down but..how could she fell when smrat iz here..he caught her by her wiast
s:chsmish tum tekh ho?
g:han...she stand up but still not feling gud n again fall on smrat.he lift her in his arm n move towards room he lay down her....n then came again in kitchen...where gunjan stoped him but he didnt stoped...after sometime...smrat came bring a plate having roti n salan...a glass of water placed it on table n sit near gunjan.....looking towards plate not even dare to look at gunjan as he is responsible for her conditin.....
s:tum ney khana kuin nahn khaya?
g:tum ne nahN KHAYA TO MEIN KASEY KHATE?
S:........
g:i am soory she placed hand on smrats hand n just a drop of tear fell on her hand she made him to see in his eyes n saw his eyes full of water
s:sory chashmish aenda kamazkam mere lea aese mat karna mein is kabil nahn agar tmhey kuch ho jata...he trembled he cant imagine that.....promise me ab tum kbhe nahn aesa karo ge mein naraz bhe hon ga to bhe........she had tears
g:tm promise karo k tum bhe khao gey??////
s:promise
g:promise....n she wiped his tear n he wipes her....gunjan placed her head on his chest....
s:chalo pheley khana kha lo....
he made her sit in his lap n give him a bite which gunjan made him to eat..n then smrat gave him n they fed each other lovingly............
it was 5 30
gunjan smrat sitting on sofa.smrat buzy in reading business magzine..gunjan was lying placing head in smrat s lap....
g:smrat
s:.....hmmm
g:mere baat suno
s:.....han bolo...still buzy in mag
gunjan got up n snatched the mag...
s:chashmish parhney do na itna interesting article hai.....
g:v.funnyy mr.smrat shergill.she glared him.....
smrat smiled.........really....
g:shut up....mjhe shoping pe jana hai abhe........
s:abhe.???????//
g:han abhe matlb abhe.........
s:ok my princess ap ready ho jao dn chaltey hain.....
g:ok will be back in 10 min
s:acha magzine to dete jao.......
g:never....
s:plz chasmish....
g:ok.....kya yaad karo gey mrs.gunjan smrat shergill ney dya tha...she smiled n moved to change
s:ya sure.....my princess....
after 10 mins.gunjan was ready standing infront of samrat.
g:chalein.....
s:han aik shart pe.....
g:kya?? he came closer....
s:mere morning wish....
g:ab to sham ho gae....kal.....
s:hmmm par ....doble.....
g:hmmm.........
s:chasmish itna kuin soch rahe ho??
g:acha socho ge....
s:nahn........ pehley promise....phr shoping....warna mein magzine parhney laga hn.....
g:tum ne black mail karna band karo n thats not fair...
he huged from back everythng is fair in love n war meri jaan........
she gave her an angry look
g:acha teekh hai.....
s:so chalein.....
g:han.........
n they went on shoping.they buy different things for every1 n themselves...they buy things for each other clothes.jewllary..etc....n after 2 hours come back....it was 8 o clk...n they hurridley moved to room as they had to go at ar home..smrat n gunjan changed their clothes n got redy with lots of cherkhani........there screams like that...
smrat choro na...dair ho rahe hai...chasmish yeh tekh lage ga ya yeh.........and after 30 mins they got ready...gunjan wearing a red sari n smrat wearing red shirt with black coat...n looking like prince n princess...they reached ar at 9 oclk....
at ar home...
a:hi looking amzing like tomorow..
s:hi same u looking mindblowing....
r:thanks... ao andar
G:YEH ap dono k lye
r:iske kya zarorat the?
s:apno ko to gift dete hain so yeh ap jasey pyare apno k lea hai
a:hey thanks bro
smrat n arman huged.they settled on sofas...ar home was simple decorated but looking extremly good having different ar pics..
g:bhabhe ap ka ghar bht acha hai....
r:thanks.....first she served a pinapple juice then they have a dinner it was delious...after dinner they were sitting n having a chat...
r:tum logo ney yahan k pani puri khae hai?
g:ohhhhhhh.....abhe khany chaltey hain smrat please.....
a:is tym...
r:par tea......
g:bad mein plz.......she caught ar hands n bring them out where smrat standing there gunjan come back n also pulled...
g:smrat chalo na...
s:chal to rahey hain chashmish
g:agar wo khatam ho gae to tmhey choro ge nahn.....
s:to tmhey chorne ko keh kon raha hai...
gunjan make a funy face n hit him on shoulder
s:ouch....chasmish...
g:okkk sorry sorry he creased his shoulder....they reached at destination...
they were sitting...
a:hey aik game khelien..
s:kya?
r;hmm...arman...jo sb sey zyada khae ga wo apni 3 wishes harne waley sey purey kara sakta...
s:interesting ...what u say chasmish?
g:why not...lets see how win....
they started eating like helll.ridhma first stop after eating 4 plates...then arman after 8 n left sajan...smrat first thought to win then by seeing gunjan s condition it seems that she really wants to win that n her condition was not allowing her to eat her but still at last smrat thought as he also couldnt eat anymore so he stoped after 9 plate n gunjan thanked to god as now she was not able to eat more...
a n r:congrats gunjan..
g:thankss.......
s:ab kush itney kha k....
g:han bohat par uff pait phata ja raha hai....
they all laughed...
a:chalein ghar..
s:i thnk hmey wapis chalna chaye its too late now....
r:as u wish...
g:thanks for everything...ap khana bohat acha bnate ho...
s:han waqae mein...
r:thanks...
a:see u
s;ya see u bye
they bid goodbyes n went to eachothers home...sajan reached home..
g:smrat mjsey to chala bhe nahn ja raha.she was steadily moivng
s:to mein kis lea hon...he lift her
g:thanks
s:anytym my princess they reached in their room...smrat lyed her on bed n moved to put our coat...
g:smrat...
s:han..he turned
g:idhar ao....
smrat went to her n sat near her n uska hath pakrta hai
s:yes my princess...
g:aik baat sach sach batao ge?
s:pheley kbhe jhot bola hai kya?
g:tum ney mjhe jataney ke lea hare ho na....
s:...chashmish tm jeto ya mein baat to aik he hai na.....
g:nahn..pehley batao...
s:han g apk kushi sey barh kar mere lea kuch nahn hai....
gunjan hugged him
g:i love u smrat
s:i love u too meri jaan...
g:chalo hum aik kam kartey aik wish tm meri pori karna aik mein tumhare..aur aik adhe adhe...
smrat smiled at her childish behaviour
s:apka hukam sar ankon par..
g:i thnk we should get a sleep
s:right but first go n change
g:ohhh nooooooo
s:ohh yessss....they both changed n slept....after wishing good night...............................................................................................................
pecape:masti in minali..............[/B][B]
Edited by meerrii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Wow wow so long update loved it loveee da update it was so cuteee loved every part n scenes especially all sajan scenes dey r so januable loved it to core aww sajan love each other so much wen Sammy didn't eat gunji also didn't eat aww n den der promise n all aww loved it n den der shopping n den pani puri scene loved it aww Sammy let gunji win awesome continue soon n who is Misti now can't wait
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fantastic update......sajan were soooooooo cute.....cont soon
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tht was soooo awesome part i just love sajan.

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