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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh!!!!!!...............vry small bt nice one
thanks fr d PM
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hates Diya

Hop she dosent harms Mayur a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update hun....do continue soon....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyyy daksha
Nice updates
Thank god adhoraj won't interfare in b/w mayur
But I doubt dia will do
Plzzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank you guys for nice comments......
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Scene: Party Venue

Samrat Gunjan enter……then Mayank Nupur and Anjali……

Party hall is full of guests……Dia and Adhiraj enter too……..

In the party Gunjan and Nupur are talking……..

N: Shaadi hui aur bhool gayi apni Di ko……ek baar bhi aayi mujhse milne…….

G: Gussa mat ho…….inko time hi nahin milta office se…..aur papaji ki tabiyat bhi kharaab rehti hai…….issliye

N: accha theek hai theek hai……aur bata tera honeymoon kaisa tha…..(pushing Gunjan's shoulder with hers)

G: Kaisa tha ka kya matlab hota hai……jaisa hota hai waisa tha…….

N: Oo….ho…toh…. (giving her a naughty smile)

G: Tum bohot shaitaan ho..... mujhe toh batati nahin ho junior Mayank kab aayega….

Nupur's smile suddenly transformed to silence……her face which was shining with her big smile became dull…..no movement of her eyes…..she downed her lashes and started seeing elsewhere…..

N: Mujhe Mayank bula raha hai…..main abhi aati hoon…..

Gunjan couldn't understand why her smile vanished and her face became dull……she wanted to enquire about it to Nupur and went behind her……

But Samrat came and holded Gunjan's hand and pulled her towards himself…….

S: Kahaan….bacchon ki tarah party mein bhaag rahi ho…..hum yahaan hain…. (opening wide his eyes naughtily)

Nupur went where Mayank was and stood beside him…….Nupur's smile was not on her face……Mayank looked at her face but she turned it……

M: Kya hua…… (trying to look at her face)

N: Kuch nahin…..

M: Kuch nahin toh phir chehra murjha kyun raha hai…..

N: Party kab khatam hogi ?

M: Maine jo poocha uska jawaab do pehle…….

N: Maine kaha na kuch nahin……

Then the music turned softer and a romantic song started…….

Samrat took Gunjan to the dance floor……

He winds his hand around Gunjan's waist and pulled her closer……. Gunjan placed her hand over Samrat's shoulder and they both started dancing slowly……

Dia who was standing on the other side......was burning with jealousy...drinking..... when a guy asked her for dance and she agreed.......

Adhiraj was also dancing...... he knew Mr. William because he also dealt with him once.......

Everyone was dancing.......

Mr. William came and asked Mayank.....

W: Please come on the dance floor Mr. Sharma......

Mayank looked at Nupur and forwarded his hand and Nupur places her hand in Mayanks.......she didn't wanted to dance but she went......

Mayank was looking into Nupur's eyes but she was not.....she was tensed and wanted to leave the dance floor when Mayank pulled her more closer......Nupur's both hand went round the Mayank's neck.......

M: Pareshaan na hona iss safar mein......raahein bantti rahengi......hum tumhaare saath hain.....zindagi muskurati rahegi....... ab bataaogi kya hua.......

Nupur smiled and waded her thoughts.......

N: kuch nahin......tum humaare saath ho to zindagi zaroor muskuraati rahegi.....

And shine of Nupur's eyes returned back.......

Everyone was dancing........

Gunjan's head was resting on Samrat's chest.......and both were dancing very softly.......

Then the round came of exchange of partners.........

Nupur went to Adhiraj.......Gunjan came to Mayank and Dia to Samrat........

As Dia came....... Samrat ignored her......he was just holding her for formality......whereas Dia wanted to get more closer to him.........

As Gunjan came to Mayank......

M: aur saali sahiba......kya haal chaal hain.......

G: mere to theek hain.....par Di pareshaan lag rahi thi......

M: Kyun kya hua......

G: maine bas junior Mayank ki baat ki.....aur wo pareshaan ho kar wahaan se chali gayin......

Mayank understood that why Nupur was depressed.....but he didn't wanted to tell anything to Gunjan......He smiled.....

M: Tumhein toh pata hai.....tumhaari Di pareshaan bohot jaldi ho jaati hai......meri usse bahar ghumaane ki baat hui thi par kaam ki wajah se ja nahin paaye issliye thodi naaraaz hai......aur kuch nahin......

Gunjan couldn't get the explanation......she understood that something is wrong for sure.......but she remained quiet.......

When Nupur came to Adhiraj.........

Adhiraj kept looking at Nupur.......

N: arre Adhiraj......bohot dinon baad.......

A: Arre wo bas aise hi......aur bataao sab kaise hain......Mayank aur.......

He wanted to know about the child......

N: aur Anjali.......my Angel.......

A: Nice name......kahaan hai wo.....

N: wo wahaan..... (pointing towards the lady who was holding her......)

Dia was trying to get closer to Samrat but he shook her hand and left........

He knew that what kind of girl Dia was.......and she will not get away of her habits........

After the dance came to an end.......

Nupur came with Adhiraj to Mayank.......

Adhiraj forwarded his hand to shake hands........and Mayank shakes hand with him......

M: Aur kaise ho Adhiraj......

A: Bas sab badhiya...... aur tum bataao..........

In the meanwhile Nupur bought Anjali......

Adhiraj caressed her cheeks.......

A: Bohot sweet hai.....bilkul tum par gayi hai Nupur......wohi smile......

And when they were talking they saw a crowd gathered around a corner........all of them moved there......

Dia was crying.....her hand was over her cheeks.... and Samrat's eyes were red in anger......he was looking ferocious......Gunjan was consoling Samrat........tears were rolling down from her eyes too.....

Adhiraj and Mayank made the crowd to vanish away...... none of them knew what happened in the mean while........everyone left the party hall.....only Mayank Nupur Gunjan Samrat Adhiraj and Dia were there in the party hall.......

Nupur went to Gunjan and asked her what happened......Tears were rolling down from her eyes.....Nupur wiped them off.....

N: Kya hua Gunjan.......

Mayank gave Samrat a glass of water to drink........Samrat drank that and still his eyes were red and he was looking at Dia......

Gunjan told Nupur that when the dance ended........ Dia came to Samrat and Gunjan..... Samrat was holding her hand and she shook away her hand.......

Dia was drunk.....

D: Mujhe chod kar tum isska haath pakde khade ho.......bohot pasand hai na tumhein......

Samart and Gunjan were looking at her........

D: Abhi bataati hoon......isski aur isske khaandaan ki sachaayi tumhein....... ye jo hai na Gunjan isski behen ka rape hua tha........

Hearing this from Gunjan's mouth tears rolled down from Nupur's eyes......

D: aur ye ladki bhi pata nahin kaisi kaisi........

Before she could speak up anything else......Samrat slapped her face.......

And the crowd gathered and then all of them came......

Hearing this from Gunjan's mouth...... Adhiraj couldn't control his anger and he too slapped Dia.......

A: Mujhe tumse ye ummeed nahin thi Dia........ iss baare mein koi aur sun leta toh...... ek ladki ho kar ek ladki ki izzat ka tumhein bilkul khayaal nahin........

He holded Dia's hand and dragged her out of the party hall.......Dia was crying crying and crying.......

After Dia went...... Nupur sat on the floor lifelessly........ Samrat too was standing with the support of a pillar........

Gunjan and Mayank were not able to understand in which direction to go.......then Mayank mouthed to Gunjan to go to Samrat.......

Mayank went to Nupur and puts his hand over Nupur's shoulder......He sat down on the floor..... took Anjali from her hands and made her sit on the floor.......Nupur hugged Mayank and started crying........

N: sab.....sab meri wajah se hota hai.......meri Gunjan ki zindagi bhi meri wajah se.......

And she started crying more and hugged Mayank more tightly........

Mayank was caressing her hairs......his eyes also became moist.......

Gunjan went to Samrat having tears in her eyes......Samrat was standing like a corpse....... Gunjan puts her hand over his shoulder......tears are rolling down from her eyes.......

G: Wo.....wo.....Di ke saath jo hua....wo ek bura haadsa tha.......please iss baare mein aap kisi aur ko mat bataayiega.......please......

And amount of tears coming from her eyes increased.......

Samrat looked at her......wiped off her tears.......and said......

S: Tumhein kya lagta hai.....main kisi ko bataaunga.......aur kyun bataaunga.....

Gunjan looked up into Samrat's eyes......

S: Mujhe tum par poora vishwaas hai...... aur Nupur par bhi......mujhe kisi se koi shikaayat nahin hai........

Hearing the words from Samrat's mouth Gunjan felt a heavenly relief.....she was very happy and she hugged Samrat......very closely.....for the first time she said "I LOVE YOU Samrat"

Samrat too responded to the hug and said "I LOVE YOU too"

Mayank looked that Samrat and Gunjan are hugging each other......he broke the hug and pointed towards Samrat and Gunjan......Nupur looked at them and smiled.......They both stood up......tears were still coming out of Nupur's eyes........

Mayank looked at her and Nupur replied "Khushi ke aansoon hain"

Hey thats it for now guys........ I hope you liked it.......then please do comment...please I am waiting for them......
Posted: 15 years ago
for i moment i thought everything would be bad again
but then all's well that ends well
amazing part! continue soon
Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
It was a lovely update MAYUr and SAJAN too cute
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Posted: 15 years ago
All Izz well

phew read your chapter 3 times
and I cud never believe Dia was such a Meanie :(
*lekha not likey her*

Btw tu ne Adhiraj ko accha dikhaya :)
not like a bandar atleast

*lekha Likey *

Kya thappad maara hai *wah wah*

thank u soo much for an awesome chapter

lekhu
(lekha)
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Posted: 15 years ago
huh! u scared me 4 a minute Daksha!😲 thank god, Mayur & Sajan trust each other too much 2 be affected by others words....

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