FF is closed! - Page 79

Originally posted by: Alini-mayur

lovely part...

continue soon....

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey aruuuuu

awsummmmmmm partt

jana!! i love them M is opening up finally

and the fact they speak soo much with their eyes is just mersmerizing!!

thank u for writing such a wonderful story

cont soon!
-sanam-

nice updts
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey Aranya,

For Part 12:

That was soooooooooo beautiful man, I loved the update. It was mainly revolving around Nupur, would love to read about M and what did he think about the dance, about the tension later on, why did he hold her hand, was it just like that or was there a specific reason behind it and what he felt when she didn't share her secret and how did he feel when they hugged, i miss the brown parts, please if possible do bring the other side of the story as well.

I loved so many things about the update especially how silence spoke so much than mere words and the tension, restlessness of MN was so aptly described, i felt tensed myself man. I loved the way you described how he held her hand and later on the way they hugged, I love that new title hugger, awwww man that was so beautiful, even more wonderful was the way you described what N felt and how she wished to be able to see that glorious smile. Eh at last they won as they deserved to man!

The last bit where they openly talked and like N didn't have to squeeze the information out of him was sooooooo well said. The emotional turmoil of N was very well described yet again.

Keep it up Aranya.👏

Originally posted by: Senny

Part 13.

I can't even tell you how much this part touched me, I won't bug you with too many details but I have seen such incidents very closely and I am proud of the way you described it all and made N victorious in the end. Fighting and especially in childhood with such problems is really hard, most probably as we are young and at such a tender age, a lot of comfort, proper nurturing and a lot of love and care is required or else the consequences could be really dreadful.😭

Very well done and I am so glad to see the brown parts back and focus on M's feelings as well as N's, a like it when you keep it balanced like this, it makes the characters and story much more closer to us.

It was so sweet of M to come and hope he takes good care of her and no more troubling her now hehe.😆

Bravo man, I am so proud of you Aranya, keep it up!⭐️

Originally posted by: gopi06

nice updts
thanks for the pm

Aru...Paaru...🤗

Originally posted by: -Jess-

Aru...Paaru...🤗

Thanks for giving us double updates... you didn't update last week.... I missed you loads.... glad you came up with two amazing updates....

he he... Nupur is so hopelessly in love... and Mayank is falling for her too...only he's not aware of it yet... awww... the hug.....😍

poor Nupur...fell sick.... but I was all happy to see Mayank bunk the classes to go meet her....how shweet... he just had to see her....desperately... another sign that he's is falling in love....

AMazing update Aru... you always bring out the inner feelings of the characters while describing the smallest scenes.... felt very bad learning about Nupur's past... I'm sure Mayank will help her now.... and in the process he will get more involved in her....😉

lovely lovely lovely update....

how's your exam and studies APP? Take care....

wonderful update dear

thanks 4 the double treat cont soon n thanks 4 pm me

Originally posted by: Rafa.LunaPotter

Aww Senny di..*husg hugs hugs*

I should say...u write even better than me!

Really..this comment is like taking me to the skies yet again!

YOu liked it soo much...man! Di..I am just Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy about it!

Umm about the hug...I wanted to add in Mayank's part as well..but then thought otherwise, will add it on..as some rememberence..when he misses Nupur..the second update was going to be his POV all the time..so I wanted something contrast to it!

MN in my story so far are being practical Di..nad tahts something I would always wanna keep up...no matter what happens!....I felt their tension too when I read them again!😳

Glad you liked it di

*hugs*

~A

Aww hugsssssss 🤗

No I am impressed at the way you write, its wonderful.😃 I loved the update. Oh i see and i would love to read about those parts ahead. The idea of having two updates with contrasting point of views is amazing too, its just that in that moment i just wanted to be a part of his story as well, which I was but only from Nupur's angle.

Hehe 😆 you also did, i thought this only happens with the readers and not the writers hehe.

Keep it up Aranya!👏