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Hey Aranya,
For Part 12:
That was soooooooooo beautiful man, I loved the update. It was mainly revolving around Nupur, would love to read about M and what did he think about the dance, about the tension later on, why did he hold her hand, was it just like that or was there a specific reason behind it and what he felt when she didn't share her secret and how did he feel when they hugged, i miss the brown parts, please if possible do bring the other side of the story as well.
I loved so many things about the update especially how silence spoke so much than mere words and the tension, restlessness of MN was so aptly described, i felt tensed myself man. I loved the way you described how he held her hand and later on the way they hugged, I love that new title hugger, awwww man that was so beautiful, even more wonderful was the way you described what N felt and how she wished to be able to see that glorious smile. Eh at last they won as they deserved to man!
The last bit where they openly talked and like N didn't have to squeeze the information out of him was sooooooo well said. The emotional turmoil of N was very well described yet again.
Keep it up Aranya.👏
For Part 12:
That was soooooooooo beautiful man, I loved the update. It was mainly revolving around Nupur, would love to read about M and what did he think about the dance, about the tension later on, why did he hold her hand, was it just like that or was there a specific reason behind it and what he felt when she didn't share her secret and how did he feel when they hugged, i miss the brown parts, please if possible do bring the other side of the story as well.
I loved so many things about the update especially how silence spoke so much than mere words and the tension, restlessness of MN was so aptly described, i felt tensed myself man. I loved the way you described how he held her hand and later on the way they hugged, I love that new title hugger, awwww man that was so beautiful, even more wonderful was the way you described what N felt and how she wished to be able to see that glorious smile. Eh at last they won as they deserved to man!
The last bit where they openly talked and like N didn't have to squeeze the information out of him was sooooooo well said. The emotional turmoil of N was very well described yet again.
Keep it up Aranya.👏
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
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