Mayur SS Part 23pg 98 - Page 37

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Posted: 15 years ago
here's the next part

Part 12

Mayank and nupur reached the place where there new house was located. Nupur opened the door and was abt to enter the house when dia stopped both of them from entering the house. She went inside and brought pooja thali. She did arti of both and then asked nupur to kick the kalash filled with rice with her right leg.

"Dia yeh sab kya hai" asked nupur

"Gruha pravesh after all yeh tumhara aapna ghar hai" said dia. After the gruha pravesh both mayank and nupur entered the house.

"So you two need some help" asked dia

"Dia it's ok hum sambhal lenge any ways you need to go home else you would be late for your yoga classes" said mayank

"God how can I forget abt it. Ok guys I need to go right now bye" said dia and took her bag and went from there in hurry. Both mayank and nupur then started arranging the stuff and furniture.

"Mayank us pick o thoda upar laga do" said nupur and mayank moved the frame little up.

"Ab thik hai naa" asked mayank

"NAhi mayank thoda neeche lo" said nupur and mayank moved the frame little down

"haan bus mayank ab who frame bilkul thik hai" said nupur. Mayank then took another pic and started fixing it in the centre.

"Mayank yeh photo wahan nahi lagegi woh jagah kisi aur photo ke liye reserved hai" said nupur

"Nupur is pic main kya problem hai aachi toh lag rahi hai" said mayank

"Mayank maine kaha naa us jagah koi bhi photo nahi lagegi matlab nahi lagegi samjhe aura b neeche utro" said nupur and climbed up on the stool with a frame in her hand. She fixed the frame in the centre.

"Ab yeh bilkul perfect lag raha hai" said nupur. It was the pic of nupur , mayank and mm which they had taken when they were in banglore

"Nupur yeh pic tumne ise frame kab karvaya" asked mayank confused.

"By god mayank woh sab chodo aur batao naa kaise lag raha hai yeh ab" said nupur

"Perfect bilkul tumhari tarah" said mayank and picked her up in his arms.

"Mayank kya kar rahe ho neeche utaro mujhe" said nupur. Mayank made her sit on the sofa.

"Tum ab yahan baitho main hum dono ke liye coffee le aata hoon" Said mayank

"Nahin mayank aaj main hum dono ke liye coffee bana laati hoon mana yeh world ki best coffee nahi hogi" said nupur and got up from sofa and went to kitchen to prepare coffee.

"Yeh lo meri haaton ki ban garma garam coffee" said nupur and gave cup of coffee to mayank and she too sat besides him.

"Mayank hum yahan rehne to aagaye hai par college toh yahan se bohot door hai hum roj travel kaise karenge" said nupur

"Nupur agar tumhe yaad naa ho toh tumhe bata doon ki government ne train naam ki ek facility available karvaiye hai aur Mumbai ke locals se travel karne ka maza hi alag hota hai" said mayank.

"Waise yeh batao coffee kaisi bani hai" asked nupur

"hmmmmmmmmmmm" said mayank sipping the coffee.

"Mayank mujhe pata hai yeh world ki best coffee nahi hai par tum bata toh sakte ho naa" said nupur

"Nupur mere liye toh yehi world ki best nahi bestest coffee hai" said mayank and they both chatted for a while. Just then the door bell rang. Nupur got up and opened the door and saw a little boy standing at the door.

"Hello Didi aap yahan naye aaye ho" asked the boy.

"Haan hum yahan nay hai ab tum batao tumhara naam kya hai" asked nupur

"Rishi , aur aapka naam kya hai, aur who jo sadu se ek bhaiyya jo andar baithe hai woh kaun hai" said rishi. Mayank came to the door hearing the word sadu while nupur was trying to control he laughter

"Inka naam nupur hai aur is sadu se dikhne waale bhaaiya ka naam mayank hai" said Mayank

"Ok didi main aapse baad main milta hoon bye" said the rishi and ran away.

"Mayank tum bhi naa aur waise usne galat kya kaha tum sadu hi toh ho" said nupur

"Aacha toh main sadu hoon" said mayank frustrated

"Haan tum sadu ho mere asdu mayank jis se main pyaar karti hoon" said nupur pulling his cheek. Both mayank and nupur then started arranging the stuff in kitchen and bedroom.

"Mayank ek kaam karte hain kyun naa aaj saare gang ko ghar pe dinner ke liye invite kare" asked nupur

"Not a bad idea nupur actually main khud bhi yehi soch raha tha. Ok I will call them" said mayank and made call to others

Nupur and mayank together prepared the dinner. In the evening all of the gang member entered the house and were mesmerized to see the way room was arranged and decorated.

"Wow guys Ghar toh bada hi cool lag raha hai" said samrat

"Thanks samrat chalo dinner kar lete hai fir baatein kar lenge" said nupur and every one took their seats and started having the dinner. After dinner the chatted for while and then left from there.

Next day.

"Nupur jaldi karo hum late ho rahe hai aur humari train bhi miss ho jaayegi" said mayank

"Aa rahi hoon mayank bus do minute ruko toh sahi" said nupur and came out running from the kitchen.

"Chale" said nupur and both locked the house and took auto to railway station.

"Gosh nupu jaldi chalo local bus chutne waali hai" said mayank and both started running. Local had started for it's departure Mayank somehow managed to get inside the local but nupur was unable to get in while train was speeding up.

"Nupur mera haat pakdo" said mayank letting his hand out. Nupur somehow managed to hold mayanks hand and mayank pulled nupur inside the train.

"By god mayank yeh Mumbai ki locals aur yeh bheed" said nupur

hope u liked it

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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update vinu i am glad u added the local train part as wel..........loved the way mayur arranged their home ....... awesome update loved it lots ..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
such a sweet update..loved the MN flavour in it..sweet n simple!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey...
wonderful update..😊
mayur are so sweet...continue soon

Divya.. ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update Vinu.....completely Mayurish ....loved the SADU wala part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey vinaya
awesum update
but plz donot put any misery ion the story now
i ust love the way the story is going
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update
Liked the way all the thgs went smooth
That small boy was really cute
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update..!!
Loved the DDLJ touch in the end..! :-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
cute part
train scene was nice 😊

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