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Part13

"Mayank I must say mujhe aaj se pehle kabhi itna maja nahi aaya jitna aaj train se travel karne main aa raha hai" said nupur. There was a huge rush of people as soon as train stopped at the station. A boy standing nearby was intentionally again and again was falling over nupur which did not go unnoticed by mayank.

"Bhai sab aap thik se nahi kahde reh sakte" said nupur angrily

"Sorry ji woh actually aaj train main bheed bohot hai aur peeche log dhkel rahe hain ek dusre ko" said the person

"Anyways I'm raj naam toh suna hi hoga" said the boy

"Nahin nahin suna aur aapna naam raj rakhne se aur sharukh ke dialogue bolne se koi srk nahin ban jaata aur please thik se khade raho" said nupur angrily

"Aur naa rahoon toh kya karogi" said raj coming close to nupur but was stopped by mayank

"Actually yeh tumhe kuch nahin karegi but if you don't behave yourself toh main tumhari haadi faasli ek kar doonga" said mayank

"Really and by the way who are you" asked raj

"Mayank sharma yeh joh yahan khadi hai nupur inka husband" said mayank pointing at nupur. The boy's expression changed in fear once he heard the word husband.

"Actually I'm sorry agar mujhe pata hota ki aap inke pati ho toh main" stammered boy

"Aacha agar mayank mera pati nahi hota toh tum mere saath misbehave karte, Tum jaise logon ko toh" said nupur angrily

"Agar aaj ke baad kisi ke saath misbehave karte hue dikhayi diye toh tumhari woh halat karoongi jo JD ke bhai yash ka kiya samjhe" said nupur. The train stopped at next station and mayur got down the train and headed towards the college. In the college the whole gang was waiting for them in the canteen.

"Here they come, aayie aap dono ka hi wait kar rahe they pichle 30 minute se" said samrat

"Woh thoda late ho gaye so first train miss kar di" said nupur

"Di yeh tumhare haath pe chot kaise lagi" asked gunjan

"Oh yeh shayad train main lag gayi ho" said nupur

"Di I'm telling you again please kya train se travel karna jaroori hai , agar aap chahe toh main aur samrat aapko aur jiju ko roj pick kar lenge aap ke ghar se" said gunjan

"Gunjan uski koi jaroorat nahi aur aisi mamooli chot toh humesha lagti rehti hai, aur train main travel karne ka maza hi kuch aur hai tu nahi samjhegi" said nupur while mayank was lost in his own world. He then looked at nupur.

"Nupur chalo main antespetic laga deta hoon" said mayank and took her to locker room. He removed the antespetic from his locker and started applying it on nupur's wound.

"Nupur I'm really sorry tumhe meri wajah se suffer karna pad raha hai" said mayank somewhere he was considering himself responsible for nupur's such condition.

"Mayank shaadi ke waqt jab humne saath phere liye they us waqt humne saath vachan diye they usme se ek vachan yeh bhi tha ki main tumhaare har sukh dukh main tumhara saath doongi aur tumne soch bhi kaise liya ki main khush nahin hoon" said nupur and cupped mayank's face.

"Par nupur.."

"Shhh kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahin hai mayank" said nupur kepping her finger over his lips

"Ab chale Mr. Shrama warna class ke liye late ho jaayenge" said nupur and both left for their class. after all the lectures got over both were walking through the corridor when mayank saw a notice on notice board. He asked nupur to go a head and said he would join them later. He went near the notice board and saw the notice about the campus interview which would take place next month in their college. He saw the last date of registration which was after 2 days.

"Nupur shaadi ke waqt un saath vachn main ek vachan yeh bhi tha ki main tumhe har khusi doonga aur main is vachan ko pura jaroor karunga nupur" said mayank to himself and had small smile on his face. HE went to the placementcell and registered his name for the campus interview. After registering his name he came to canteen where he saw others waiting for him.

"Aare mayank aao jaldi se yeh paratha kha lo warna yeh bhi nahi milega, I must say nupur sach main bohot aacha khaana banati hai" said samrat

"Thanks samrat akhir biwi kiski hai, waise guys I need to leave" said mayank and moved some steps but then turned around and came back.

"Nupur ghar jaaane par mujhe call kar dena and please agar main late ho jaon toh tension mat lena" said mayank and gave a peck on her cheek.

"Thik hai baba aapka hokum sar aankhon par" said nupur. Dia and uday dropped nupur at her new residence.

It was 10 in the night but mayank still had not come nupur had finished making notes and also the dinner and was waiting for mayank to come. Mayank entered the house and saw nupur who fell asleep on the nearby couch. He slowly went near her and removed the hair stand which fell on her face. Nupur got up immediately.

"Mayank tum kab aaye sorry who thodi aank lag gayi thi aacha ek kaam karo jaake fresh ho jao main table arrange kar deti hoon" said nupur and went to arrange the dinner table while mayank went to freshen up. Both had dinner chatting about the whole day. They cleaned the table and finished other works. They were sitting in the balcony chatting abt random things when phone bell rang.

"Maa aap kaisi hai aap aur ka baa rahi hai aap yahan" said nupur

"Nupur beta zara ssas toh lo main bilkul thik hoon aur main next month Mumbai shift ho rahi hoon aacha ek important baat kehne ke liye call kiya tha next week karwa chaut aa raha hai" said mm

"By god maa main toh bhool hi gayi thi aacha hua aapne yaad dila diya" said nupur and both chatted for a while.

"Nupur kya bhool gayi thi tum" asked mayank

"Mayank agle Monday karwa chaut hai aur main bhool gayi is baat ko aacha hua maa ne call karke yaad dila diya warna main toh vrat rakhna hi bhool jaati" said nupur

"Nupur tum koi vrat nahi rakhne waali samjhi" said mayank

"Kyun naa rakhoon" asked nupur keeping both her hand on her waist

"Kyunki tumhari tabiyat abhi thik hui hai. So tum koi vrat nahi rakhogi" said mayank in ordering and caring tone

"Main vrat rakhungi mayank samjhe" said nupur



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awesome part!!!
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Hey Vinaya,
Awesum update.
I really love this SS to the core n miss the regular updates of this SS.
So plzz try to make the next one asap.
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nice part
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