Siddhima-AR FF: Fate, O.S.C.Fate [Completed] - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago

very nice yaar

thnx 4 PM write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg you are doing such fab job with
i love the way u get back the old characters
its amazing
loving it
great job
plz continue and update fast :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update!

Nice to have his Abhi and Niki back at least in this FF. Loved how Sid forgot the anniversary and then started fretting about it, so much like him.

Can't wait to see what happens in the club.

BTW You can call me Niki its fine 😆

Nice VM as well, would have been an interesting FF.
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Posted: 15 years ago
i luvd it...but y do u hav such a cliffhanger???...i m waitin 4 de next part even more anxiously...
n u brought abhi n nikki back...luv u more 4 dat...
keep writin sweetheart...i luv readin ur ff...
thnk u sooooo much 4 de pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey amazing.....lovely ff..... start a new thread na...please
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG...i love this story...every part just gets better and better...you not only are a great describer which allows me to imagine the setting and scene, but the dialogues you write are perfect for each character...i cant wait for the next part...plz keep up the great work...👏👏👏👏

also plz add me to the pm list...thanks😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
yooooooooooooooooooo. its been forever since you've updatedddd. 😭

we're all looking forward to seeing what happens nextt 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey.....
I am loving your ff......

Why dont AN have kids????

Can you say they have kids, but they left em @ home or sumthing??

Atleast I have some shanti knowing they have kids......lol....

please add me to the pm list and update sooooooooooooooooon!


sheena
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Posted: 15 years ago
@divi4u thanks for reading and the updates coming soon!

@kiran255 thank youuuuuuuuuuuuu i miss the old characters so much lol and if i have a reasonable reason to bring them back why shouldnt i lol

@nikita_88 isnt sid the adorablest lol, cant wait till it happens in the show... hes gonna have the best anniversary lol...
n niki, thanks for liking the vm :P im too lazy to write the ff on it lol... im gonna make another one soon..or try...err..

@mabel well if i didnt leave a cliff hanger people wouldnt come back to read more! i think... idk....update comin up, and no prob will pm u soon

@mayuri.vet a new thread? haha dont think i have enough pages for that... if ur having trouble though, i have the index on first page... that i somewhat update :P

@ arp04srocks oohhh! new reader! yay im excited lol. ill be sure to pm you and thanks so much on the compliments, i do try...

@naina.patel naina yaar. what can i do? so lazy... and im still not really ok with what i have written but i have a feeling it aint gettin no betta, so here lol i tried... i did.

@AbhiNikiLuver haha ok, they can have kids... i will work it in somehow... i actually thought of that, then forgot [kind of absetminded] but now that u reminded me... well discuss kids... atleast, ill try my best...


yes naina i did just steal ur reply technique :P😆
Edited by malluangel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
You guys have no idea what i went through to post this!
TORTURE I TELL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i mean i went through the whole process twice. copied, pasted, edited, chagned fonts, color, everything. and IF betrays me, something about server something....
sigh... i wanna cry!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭

On another note, i have therefore decided to post this part in two parts, A and B
because i realized, maybe it's the length, u know, 8 pages in word!

so here... i updated! i kno i kno, i'm the worst updater in history. lets get past that now 😃
[you know i should probably stop begging you guys not to pelt me with rocks like i did when i started this ff... not that u pelted me with rocks...]

before i post that part, lets ramble about how far our fav couple has come...
Not only are they living together, She does my house my rules thing too!
i love it!
ok im done... decided to keep it short😉 [be proud!] 😛



Recap:

"SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Yuvi, Naina, JP, Jiggy, Su, and even Raj, along with a bunch of other friends stood inside, beaming and laughing at Siddhant's astounded face and Rhiddima's excited one.

NEXT PART 14:

Siddhant looked at each face, astonished, almost falling flat on his bum, caught in the nick of time by his Nikkita bhabhi, who dug her heels into the ground keeping him upright before he straightened up himself.

"Siddhant, are you ok?" Shashank Gupta stepped out from the crowd, Siddhant turned to his father in law, still slightly lost, "dad?" Shashank laughed at his expression, pulling into a hug, as he was released Siddhant was pulled into another hug, this time by his mother-in-law. He pulled back looking amazedly at his friends and family, they all looked back grinning ear to ear, "I – I-" he stammered, Rhiddima giggled and his eyes immediately flew to her, "you knew?" he asked, slightly hurt. She nodded apologetically, sweetly holding her ears; he melted right away, rolling his eyes at his weakness he gave her a hug. The DJ began to play "Fire" from Kites[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=64jx0HSODMs]

As the couple mingled with the guests, greeting them and thanking them. Finally it was just close friends and family, seizing the opportunity Sid grabbed Yuvi in a headlock, punishment for keeping him in the dark, "Saale! You had me running around going crazy trying to plan things for tonight!"

"Ow ow Sid!" Yuvi shouted, as Sid eased up, Yuvi grabbed him back. Their friends and family watched amusedly as the men wrestled playfully, finally they were broken up by Abhi.

"Sid," Yuvi said, an arm circling around his shoulders, "there's another surprise."

"Really?" This was Rhiddima, emerging next to her husband.

"Yup!" Naina said from her seat, "for both of you!"

"Supwise!!!" Ashi's voice had the effect of Red Bull on her parents who perked up even more if possible. Ashi showed up in the arms of the second surprise.

"DI!" Rhiddima cried, the same time Sid bellowed, "AJ!" Anjali and Atul Joshi walked towards them; their niece perched on Atul's shoulders.

As the sisters hugged, Sid got down his angel who passed around earning hugs from her parents and all four sets of uncles and aunties. Shashank and Padma surfaced, insisting the young ones enjoy themselves. The couples stepped onto the dance floor.

Tum Mile: Tum Mile

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbZ-8n6b-xI

Siddhant and Rhiddima danced slowly despite the swift beat of the song. Holding her close, he bent down to her ear, whispering softly, "Happy Anniversary Mrs. Modi." She smiled into his neck, furtively kissing his cheek.

"Can I interrupt?" Abhi appeared next to them with a grin, rolling his eyes again Siddhant let his wife go, stepping away graciously to dance with his bhabi. He was soon interrupted by Abhi again, he wanted his wife back. Instead of making his way back to Rhiddima again however he stepped next to Padma, offering her a hand. She accepted smiling, as the DJ switched tracks, the odd couple danced happily.

Jab Mila Tu: I Hate Luv Storys

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iKPfoHp1s7s&feature=related

The night continued, the DJ playing many soft songs like Pheli Nazar Mein, Kaise Muje, So Right, Koi Aap Sa, and Sadje. The group danced on, switching partners often. Sid danced with everyone, hid daughter, wife, bhabis, sister, Rhiddima too wad wandering around, dancing with Sid's friends, Abhi, Yuvi, Atul, and her papa. They were clearly enjoying themselves.

Surili Akhiyon Wale from Veer [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NvvzQ4syr2Q]

When the DJ played the favorite of the night, everyone went back to their real partners; other couples joined them on the floor. As if they had planned it, all the men, even Shashank, got down on one knee, singing along. Slowly rising, each led their partners in a slow waltz. The group of couples formed circles around the star couple, Siddhant and Rhiddima, who danced lost in each other's eyes. She sang along to the female part, not so slyly conveying her feelings. As the song finished, most of the men dipped their partners low to the ground, Siddhant however lifted Rhiddima up. The crowd applauded as he lowered her down, realizing they were being watched the couple stepped apart.

Sid raised his arms, trying to calm everyone down. He was finally handed a mike, "everyone! Hi, hello. Ok. First of all, Thank you! This was an amazing surprise, and I trust me I was surprised-"

"We know!" Sid's audience interrupted, clapping again.

"Haha yea. BUT, there's some specific people I want to thank for making this amazing night happen. A lot of credit for tonight goes to my friends Naina and Yuvraj, Thank you guys," he said meaningfully nodding towards the couple. The thank you was for more than the party, he knew they had done something else, he just didn't know what it was. He continued, "my brother and bhabi, I now know why they just showed up, um... my in laws," he grinned at Padma, "thanks for having Rhiddima mom!" the crowd tittered, as he continued, "and lastly, Rhiddima." They smiled at each other as he continued, "you make each day better than before; I… I love you." He whispered the last bit, but everyone still heard it, as they'd gone quiet. The silence was sliced through by Nikki, who shouted out, "That won't do!" Sid's eyes flitted to her, "huh?" he asked confused. Nikki exchanged a glance with a grinning Naina. "Sing Sid," Naina said, on cue Yuvi appeared next to Sid holding a guitar.

"What?" Sid asked bewildered.

"Gao," Nikki replied insistently, "Sing." The crowd of onlookers murmured in agreement. Glaring at his bhabis, he grabbed the guitar. Letting out a breath he closed his eyes, thinking. When he opened them, they met Rhiddima's right away, and bore into hers piercingly as he begun strumming.

With Me: sum 41

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g8z-qP34-1Y

I don't want this moment to ever end
Where everything's nothing without you
I'll wait here forever just to, to see you smile
'Cause it's true, I am nothing without you

Through it all, I made my mistakes
I stumble and fall, but I mean these words

I want you to know
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my heart and soul
I'll hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'll bleed my heart out to show
That I won't let go

Yuvi backed him up, banging on drums set up near the DJ, who also enhanced the song in his own way, playing base on his keyboard.


Thoughts read unspoken, forever in doubt
Pieces of memories fall to the ground
I know what I didn't have so, I won't let this go
'Cause it's true, I am nothing without you

All the streets where I walked alone, with nowhere to go
have come to an end

I want you to know
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my heart and soul
I'll hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'll bleed my heart out to show
And I won't let go

In front of your eyes, it falls from the skies
When you don't know what you're looking to find
In front of your eyes, it falls from the skies
When you just never know what you will find (what you will find)

I don't want this moment to ever end
Where everything's nothing without you

I want you to know
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my heart and soul
I'll hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'll bleed my heart out to show
that I won't let go (I want you to know)
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my soul
I'll hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'll bleed my heart out to show
that I won't let go

As Siddhant finished, the crowd fell silent for a couple seconds, then simultaneously erupted in applause. But he didn't notice any of that; he had eyes only for his wife. Whose eyes were slowly tearing up, he walked towards her concerned, someone grabbed the guitar from him as he took her in his arms, wiping away the tears and laying a kiss on her forehead. She rested her head on his chest, content. He smiled, eyes wandering over the top of her head, meeting up with a set of piercing blue eyes, clouding as they filled with tears.

He gasped sharply as he recognized the face, but before he could make a move, it disappeared. Rhiddima pulled back, the only one to hear the gasp, peering at his ashen face she asked, "What's wrong?"

He looked down, shaking his head, smiling reassuredly he replied, "Nothing, I…justrealizedhowmuchIloveyou!" he grinned, pulling a surprised Rhiddima into a crushing hug. He searched for the blue eyes again, but they had disappeared.


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