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mabel thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow!!!!!....luvd both de parts...def worth de wait....
plz cont soon...
n thnx 4 de pm
_Divya_ thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

very nice FF buddy........👏👏👏

2 updates in one go....not bad yaar😉😉😉
cant wait 4 d next part 😛😛😛😛

cont soon.......n plz PM me 😃😃😃

thnx 4 d PM this time 🤗

...Noorya... thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!
hw could i miss such MINDBLOWING FF!😲😃
just read all the parts and just LOVEDDDDDD each n every word of it
the way u describe SidMa's love after 5 years n Armaan's pain👏👏👏...i dont have words to describe it
cant wait for the next part and plzzzzzzzz add me to ur pm list😳
God Bless,
Noorya
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update.....
loved all the 3 couples....
precap cant wait pls update it soon...



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Posted: 15 years ago

Loved the update😃 Cant wait to see what happens next😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
@kiran255
thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!
aapka intezaar khatam hua!

@rkmnsg
waiting....

@nikita_88
still waiting....🥱 haha jk hope both of u liked the old post and the new post!

@ AbhiNikiLuver

My name is Aishwarya, now you can submit the form with just that name....😉
haha just kidding😆 and i'm honored that you liked it soo much!!!
soooo thank you, and hey did you know that dhoom translates into boom? and dhoom 2 is one of my fav movies ever, at one point i had the whole movie memorized😕 just thought id tell you lol i read ur comment and i was like dhoom!

@mabel
thank youuuuu lol and no prob

@Iqbal Neha1
gratzi [im pretty sure that means thank you

@supercool3
thanks and here ya go!

@divi4u
thank you thank you!😛
well it was one update... my if was screwing with me... so i decided i would fool the system lol
ur wait is over lol look it took me less than a month!

@Noorya...
o wow! thanks for the mindblowing comment!
and ive buddied u or i will and i will add you to the pm list

@lazzz
thank you and thanks for the heart!😃

@Angelic_J
thank youuuuuuuuuu
wait n watch lol well read....
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Posted: 15 years ago

I am positive that this time i will actually get to send out the pms before naina gets to this! atleast i hope so...

anyway be proud guys cuz its been a little more than a week and im already updating! and guess what, even though this part is kinda short and just "armaan" rambling, i have the idea for the next part in mind therefore hopefully it will be up soon too! im guesstimating that theres only a few more parts, like 2 and then the epilogues....

NEXT PART 15:

Naina and Yuvi watched as the last of the guests moved on out; it hadn't taken much time after the three other couples left for the rest of the party goers to disperse. Now all that remained was Yuvi, Naina, and the cleanup crew. Naina sat at the counter, where Yuvi soon joined her.

"Good going with the drinks," Yuvi complimented his wife.

"Thank you darling," she replied with a sweet smile, "your innocent act was marvelous I must say."

"Thank you!" he replied winking.

Yes, it was them; they had laced the drinks. Nothing bad, just something hard enough to get Rhiddima's tongue wagging. What they hadn't expected was that they would choose to drink so late, or that all three of them would get hit. Or that Armaan wouldn't show up. But it was fun anyway, so what the heck!

Naina frowned, "did you see him?" she asked.

"No. But Sid and Rhiddima are ok, so it doesn't really matter." Yuvi jumped of the barstool, and then helped Naina down, "Now let's get you home."

She grasped his outstretched hand smiling, happy with how things had turned out. She paused in her walking, frowning.

"What happened? Tell me you're not going into labor!" Yuvi said panicking. "I don't even have the bag. Oh my-"

"No duffer, I kicked something…" she searched the floor with her eyes. "What was it?" Yuvi asked.

"I don't know that's what I'm looking for!"

Yuvi groaned, rolling his eyes he got down on all fours, searching for whatever she had kicked.

"Found it!" he emerged from behind some chairs, holding up Siddhant's prized blackberry. "Wait here," he said walking up to Naina again, "I'll go give it to them."

Naina pouted, "He can last the night without it! I wanna go home," she whined. Shaking his head, Yuvraj obliged with him moody wife, planning to call someone to tell them he had the phone.

……………..

Armaan tossed the last of his now meager amount of possessions into his bag. Next to it, his phone hummed again, and again he ignored it. He would be back soon enough why was she getting her distressed jeans in a twist?

He sat on the edge of the bed, head in his hands; "I should've never come back," he said to himself, who else was there? He fell back onto the bed courtesy Hotel Palm, tears filled his eyes again. He felt like a one of those bahus in the saas bahu soaps, 'stop crying you idiot' he tried telling himself. It was futile, the tears kept falling.

He had gone to the party, just like he had told himself he would. He had even moved into this hotel, so he would be sure to go. He had entered through the back, blending in and unseen, observing quietly. He had watched the grand entrance of the Modi's, the stab he'd felt when he saw them was inexplicable. Nikki, his Nikki, his best friend Nikki. She was a Modi, and she was acting like, like, like there was never an Armaan. There had only been a Siddhant and Rhiddima, not an Armaan and Rhiddima. His Nikki, acting like Siddhant, not Armaan, was her best friend.

But he had let that go; after all, he was her…her devar. She'd married Abhimanyu. He was happy for her. Really. And when Dr. Shashank and Padma auntie had shown up, he didn't react; she was their daughter. And as far as he knew, Dr. Shashank never liked him right? He really seemed to like Siddhant.

The biggest shock came when Atul and Anjie showed up. There was nothing, nothing to show that they wished he was there and not Siddhant. That it was his anniversary with Rhiddima, not Siddhant's. No, they just walked up all smiles with Siddhant's daughter on Atul's shoulders. His Atul, his friend, his brother, his champ. Atul. And what had Siddhant called him? AJ? 'Lame. Probably Siddhant's idea.' Armaan thought childishly.

He had thought it couldn't get any worse than realizing Rhiddima had moved on, turns out it could. Way worse, the only way to describe him right now was, betrayed. Memories were hitting him like missiles, Atul, Anjie, Nikki, even his random moments with Abhimanyu, and of course there was Rhiddima. If Rahul and Muskaan had been there, he would've done something, he would seriously have done something.

He screamed into a pillow, as old memories were replaced with the painfully raw ones from a couple hours ago. The thing is, he couldn't really blame them either. A part of him wanted to be petty and call them bad friends, but then reason took over. And he knew that life moves on; they couldn't all put their lives on hold because he had decided to disappear. They had just moved past him, started their lives again. And somehow in the process Siddhant had managed to take his place.

He had been standing near the back of the bar, sipping on a drink as he observed the festivities. Watching the couples dance, each in a world of their own, a world that no longer had a place for him. He'd gotten up to move when Surili had started playing, it froze him in his place. He had stood rooted to his spot as everyone else danced, stood rooted through Siddhant's speech, and stood rooted to the same spot as Siddhant began serenading Rhiddima. She had cried when he finished, even from that distance Armaan could see her tears. Had she ever cried when he sung? Had she ever been so moved? Asking himself this, his eyes started to tear, and then they had met Siddhant's.

It was then that it hit him, hiding behind a pillar at the party in honor of Siddhant and Rhiddima Modi's fifth anniversary, that he couldn't blame Siddhant. He couldn't blame anyone. 'Siddhant was probably a nice guy; undeserving of the string of insults you've been flinging in his direction all night. All these people they love Siddhant. Siddhant isn't the impostor, You Are.'

He'd made his exit then; choosing instead to hit the gym, where his angst and anguish, his hurt, could be put to good use. After that, he decided, he would leave; as soon as possible, leave. He didn't want to meet anyone. No, he was ready to go. Run off. He could do that. Nothing new, 'leave like you always do Armaan.' He taunted himself. "Leave." Lightning struck outside, as if agreeing with him.

……………..

Armaan leaned against the back of the elevator, unable to stop himself from remembering. Each memory hit him like the bullet that had ended it all. The first day of his internship, the basketball court, their fights, their friends…the moments that had made his life. As the lift paused to let on another passenger Armaan turned to face the rear, leaning his forehead against the cool metal.

He didn't notice the young man who had just walked on. No, not until the elevator jarred halfway between floors, fatefully trapping them together with no means of escape. Leaving with only the emergency lights to illuminate their faces.

"Sh*t!" the man cursed, fiddling with the array of buttons on the side, Armaan turned curiously, just in time to see him angrily bang his hand against the buttons. Cursing again as he turned to face his fellow passenger.

The two men finally came face to face, each too shocked to move. Siddhant finally spoke, "Armaan." He said it simply. Calmly. Almost like he had known this would happen, but how could he? Armaan's voice didn't waver as he replied, "Siddhant."

They stared at each other; adversaries in a battle long over, won in the end by fate alone. The same cruel fate which had thrown then in this elevator together, for a time known only to that fate itself, and for a reason, known only to fate itself.


Hope you liked it!

...Noorya... thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

ok so im the first one to comment😳

thanks a lot for the pm...was waitin for it like ages😆😆...
oo ya u should know im a very impatient person...
so when i like a FF i want to read a part every day😆😆...
but u can ignore this😉
comin to the part...
it was really great yaar!...i just love hw u describe
ur characters feelins n thoughts in this part Armaan...
the way he talks to himself or wheneve
he sees somethin and thought comes to his mind
i just love that coz that keeps us close to charaters
n make them more realistic..so hatts off!
that even reminds me the saga of Twilight😛
maybe ur inspired by this but i just wanna
say that ur doin a fab job👍🏼
and gosh the ending!!!!
cant wait to read the part yaar it looks sooo interestin...
and r userious its endin soon??
only 2parts are left befor the epilogues😲😲
i sooo want to read more yaar😕....
but i guess every good things come to an end😉
and hopefully u'll start a new one soon😛...
anyways keep rockin and plzzzzzzzz
update the next part soon😆
and sorry for the long comment😳
God Bless,
Noorya
Edited by ...Noorya... - 15 years ago
..Naina.. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowow aish...that was quick. ill read and come back :)

Edit: WOW. well first off, darn i read the update after i checked the pm .....you were too quick this time...or should i say i was too slow?hehe but that was an awesome awesome update! poor armaan... do feel for the guy...but it was awesomely written and i cannot waaait for the epilogues...like you have no idea :)

~Nainaaa
Edited by naina.patel - 15 years ago
malluangel thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: naina.patel

wowow aish...that was quick. ill read and come back :)


OMYGOD!
we are amazingly in sync. just thought id say... like WOW

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