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Posted: 14 years ago

NEXT PART 14:

Siddhant looked at each face, astonished, almost falling flat on his bum, caught in the nick of time by his Nikkita bhabhi, who dug her heels into the ground keeping him upright before he straightened up himself.

"Siddhant, are you ok?" Shashank Gupta stepped out from the crowd, Siddhant turned to his father in law, still slightly lost, "dad?" Shashank laughed at his expression, pulling into a hug, as he was released Siddhant was pulled into another hug, this time by his mother-in-law. He pulled back looking amazedly at his friends and family, they all looked back grinning ear to ear, "I – I-" he stammered, Rhiddima giggled and his eyes immediately flew to her, "you knew?" he asked, slightly hurt. She nodded apologetically, sweetly holding her ears; he melted right away, rolling his eyes at his weakness he gave her a hug. The DJ began to play "Fire" from Kites[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=64jx0HSODMs]

As the couple mingled with the guests, greeting them and thanking them. Finally it was just close friends and family, seizing the opportunity Sid grabbed Yuvi in a headlock, punishment for keeping him in the dark, "Saale! You had me running around going crazy trying to plan things for tonight!"

"Ow ow Sid!" Yuvi shouted, as Sid eased up, Yuvi grabbed him back. Their friends and family watched amusedly as the men wrestled playfully, finally they were broken up by Abhi.

"Sid," Yuvi said, an arm circling around his shoulders, "there's another surprise."

"Really?" This was Rhiddima, emerging next to her husband.

"Yup!" Naina said from her seat, "for both of you!"

"Supwise!!!" Ashi's voice had the effect of Red Bull on her parents who perked up even more if possible. Ashi showed up in the arms of the second surprise.

"DI!" Rhiddima cried, the same time Sid bellowed, "AJ!" Anjali and Atul Joshi walked towards them; their niece perched on Atul's shoulders.

As the sisters hugged, Sid got down his angel who passed around earning hugs from her parents and all four sets of uncles and aunties. Shashank and Padma surfaced, insisting the young ones enjoy themselves. The couples stepped onto the dance floor.

Tum Mile: Tum Mile

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbZ-8n6b-xI

Siddhant and Rhiddima danced slowly despite the swift beat of the song. Holding her close, he bent down to her ear, whispering softly, "Happy Anniversary Mrs. Modi." She smiled into his neck, furtively kissing his cheek.

"Can I interrupt?" Abhi appeared next to them with a grin, rolling his eyes again Siddhant let his wife go, stepping away graciously to dance with his bhabi. He was soon interrupted by Abhi again, he wanted his wife back. Instead of making his way back to Rhiddima again however he stepped next to Padma, offering her a hand. She accepted smiling, as the DJ switched tracks, the odd couple danced happily.

Jab Mila Tu: I Hate Luv Storys

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iKPfoHp1s7s&feature=related

The night continued, the DJ playing many soft songs like Pheli Nazar Mein, Kaise Muje, So Right, Koi Aap Sa, and Sadje. The group danced on, switching partners often. Sid danced with everyone, hid daughter, wife, bhabis, sister, Rhiddima too wad wandering around, dancing with Sid's friends, Abhi, Yuvi, Atul, and her papa. They were clearly enjoying themselves.

Surili Akhiyon Wale from Veer [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NvvzQ4syr2Q]

When the DJ played the favorite of the night, everyone went back to their real partners; other couples joined them on the floor. As if they had planned it, all the men, even Shashank, got down on one knee, singing along. Slowly rising, each led their partners in a slow waltz. The group of couples formed circles around the star couple, Siddhant and Rhiddima, who danced lost in each other's eyes. She sang along to the female part, not so slyly conveying her feelings. As the song finished, most of the men dipped their partners low to the ground, Siddhant however lifted Rhiddima up. The crowd applauded as he lowered her down, realizing they were being watched the couple stepped apart.

Sid raised his arms, trying to calm everyone down. He was finally handed a mike, "everyone! Hi, hello. Ok. First of all, Thank you! This was an amazing surprise, and I trust me I was surprised-"

"We know!" Sid's audience interrupted, clapping again.

"Haha yea. BUT, there's some specific people I want to thank for making this amazing night happen. A lot of credit for tonight goes to my friends Naina and Yuvraj, Thank you guys," he said meaningfully nodding towards the couple. The thank you was for more than the party, he knew they had done something else, he just didn't know what it was. He continued, "my brother and bhabi, I now know why they just showed up, um... my in laws," he grinned at Padma, "thanks for having Rhiddima mom!" the crowd tittered, as he continued, "and lastly, Rhiddima." They smiled at each other as he continued, "you make each day better than before; I… I love you." He whispered the last bit, but everyone still heard it, as they'd gone quiet. The silence was sliced through by Nikki, who shouted out, "That won't do!" Sid's eyes flitted to her, "huh?" he asked confused. Nikki exchanged a glance with a grinning Naina. "Sing Sid," Naina said, on cue Yuvi appeared next to Sid holding a guitar.

"What?" Sid asked bewildered.

"Gao," Nikki replied insistently, "Sing." The crowd of onlookers murmured in agreement. Glaring at his bhabis, he grabbed the guitar. Letting out a breath he closed his eyes, thinking. When he opened them, they met Rhiddima's right away, and bore into hers piercingly as he begun strumming.

With Me: sum 41

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g8z-qP34-1Y

I don't want this moment to ever end
Where everything's nothing without you
I'll wait here forever just to, to see you smile
'Cause it's true, I am nothing without you

Through it all, I made my mistakes
I stumble and fall, but I mean these words

I want you to know
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my heart and soul
I'll hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'll bleed my heart out to show
That I won't let go

Yuvi backed him up, banging on drums set up near the DJ, who also enhanced the song in his own way, playing base on his keyboard.


Thoughts read unspoken, forever in doubt
Pieces of memories fall to the ground
I know what I didn't have so, I won't let this go
'Cause it's true, I am nothing without you

All the streets where I walked alone, with nowhere to go
have come to an end

I want you to know
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my heart and soul
I'll hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'll bleed my heart out to show
And I won't let go

In front of your eyes, it falls from the skies
When you don't know what you're looking to find
In front of your eyes, it falls from the skies
When you just never know what you will find (what you will find)

I don't want this moment to ever end
Where everything's nothing without you

I want you to know
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my heart and soul
I'll hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'll bleed my heart out to show
that I won't let go (I want you to know)
With everything I won't let this go, these words are my soul
I'll hold on to this moment you know, 'cause I'll bleed my heart out to show
that I won't let go

As Siddhant finished, the crowd fell silent for a couple seconds, then simultaneously erupted in applause. But he didn't notice any of that; he had eyes only for his wife. Whose eyes were slowly tearing up, he walked towards her concerned, someone grabbed the guitar from him as he took her in his arms, wiping away the tears and laying a kiss on her forehead. She rested her head on his chest, content. He smiled, eyes wandering over the top of her head, meeting up with a set of piercing blue eyes, clouding as they filled with tears.

He gasped sharply as he recognized the face, but before he could make a move, it disappeared. Rhiddima pulled back, the only one to hear the gasp, peering at his ashen face she asked, "What's wrong?"

He looked down, shaking his head, smiling reassuredly he replied, "Nothing, I…justrealizedhowmuchIloveyou!" he grinned, pulling a surprised Rhiddima into a crushing hug. He searched for the blue eyes again, but they had disappeared.

NEXT PART 14 B:

Soon after Shashank and Padma left, taking Ashi with them. As soon as they exited the DJ spoke up, as if he was waiting for that, "This is DJ Sky and I need all the beautiful people on the dance floor because we are going to turn up the heat!" He started the first song, the racy Nakhre from Barsaat

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z-Yaq8SjzJE&feature=related

The couples moved to the floor again, this time dancing more rapidly and closely against each other. They had a blast as the words to the song swirled around them intoxicatingly. The track was followed by many others such as Talli, Twist, Zoobi Doobi, Khwab Deke, Gazab, I hate Love Stories, Kini Soni Lagdi, Uff Teri Ada, Naughty Naughty, and some English ones such as Just Dance, Kiss Me Through the Phone, Hot Mess, Supermassive Black Hole, I Gotta Feelin, Starrstruck, and 1,2,3.

The DJ eventually slowed it down with tracks like Jaan Meri Jarahi Sanam, Adat Ho Chuki, and Gale Lag Jaa. The couples decided to take a break from dancing, opting to finally eat. They got their food, and settled down, in camps of girls vs. boys.

As the girls caught up, drowning in glasses of pink lemonade, the guys perched at the counter, taking turns at teasing Sid, about what, men really and seriously think about one thing ;P

"So Abhi," Atul began, "you're staying with Sid and Rhidzy?"

"Yea..." Abhi replied, and then grimaced theatrically, "arre! You're right! I should've …my poor little brother," he said pinching Sid's cheeks, "he spent all day working so hard." Sid batted away his brother's hands, wondering what they were getting at, then went back to his food. Yuvi spoke seriously, "actually after all this I think Sid should spend the night with us, bechara, he's probably tired. Right Sid?" Sid looked up, three pairs of amused eyes stared at him, he returned their gaze confused; he finally summed up what they were getting at, groaning he replied, "kuch tho sharam karo guys!"

"You don't, why should we?" Atul retorted.

"What does that mean?"

Atul, Abhi, and Yuvi exchanged glances, "you really don't know?"

Sid rolled his eyes, "I'm not going through this again just tell me."

"Nothing." They replied, grinning at him, no one willing to tell him that while he and Rhiddima had been dancing they'd been attracting a lot of attention, leading to their friends forming a circle around them. The guy continued teasing him, until Abhi produced the last surprise of the night; the key to the honeymoon suite of Hotel Palm, conveniently situated over club Cha Cha. Siddhant stared at the key mortified, suddenly flashing back to the first series of meetings with Rhiddima, "NAHI!" he shouted, jumping up with a hand on his cheek. Atul, Abhi, and Yuvi looked up at him bewildered; Sid sat back down after picking up the stool he had knocked down. "First of all," he said, "your forethought absolutely scares me. Secondly, you can keep the key."

"Why?" Yuvi asked, "We thought you would be happy."

Sid shook his head, "look it's my fifth wedding anniversary, and I am in no hurry to celebrate my death anniversary."

They guys laughed, "I'm serious." Sid said, "I don't know how she would react and I'm in no hurry to find out, let me live in peace." He turned to Abhi, "why don't you stay there?"

"Like that wouldn't be obvious?"

"What?" Sid was about to continue when DJ sky interrupted, "Excuse me boys and girls, the lady of the night and her friends have something special for you all!"

ISHQ BARSE THE BOMBAY BOUNCE:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=knJl5Q_h7K0


Attkan mattkan dahi chatakan
Jor pigeonwa phur bhi ja
Aa re aa re ka re ka ga
Chun chun moti kha re kha
Boondhan boondhan barse barse
Dhua dhua huyi ja re ja
Attkan mattkan dahi chataka
Kha re ka ga kha re kha

Thunder erupted in the distance as the song began, the lights simultaneously dimming so that all that was left was three spotlights which focused on Rhiddima, flanked by Anjali and Nikkita on either side. Their hair flew this way and that as they started dancing to the sensuous and seductive music.

The guys watched, taken aback to say the least, their mouths hanging open. As his wife seemed to lead the others in a scintillating* dance Sid's mind wandered, 'someone pinch me,' he thought, 'I must be dreaming.'

As if reading his mind, Sid received two blows from either side courtesy Atul and Abhi, "Respect." They said disapprovingly. "Hypocrites," Sid muttered frowning.

Ishq barse boondhan boondhan
Chade hain champayi champayi rang
Rangi payal ranga aanchal, rangi main poori tere rang
Doli mann ta na na na
Dhinak dhin tan ta na na na
Ke ab toh aaja yaara aaja aaja laagey nahin mann

Ishq barse boondhan boondhan
Chade hain champayi champayi rang
Rangi payal ranga aanchal, rangi main poori tere rang
Doli mann ta na na na
Dhinak dhin tan ta na na na
Ke ab to aaja yaara aaja aaja laagey laagey nahin mann

The men got up from their seats slowly, still taking in the scene, Yuvi spoke up, "where's Naina?" he asked. Their eyes flew over Rhiddima, Nikkita, and Anjali, busy having a fun time, finally landing on Naina who sat near them with a fan in hand, that's why their hair was blowing all over the place despite being indoors!

Hawayein gaati hai sargam, ghataye bole jo mann tan
Boondh bhi paanch najeray dheere dheere chamak chamak cham cham
Dole mann ta na na na
Dhinak dhin ta na na na
Ke ab to aaja yaara aaja aaja laagey laage na yehn mann

Attkan mattkan dahi chatakan
Jor pigeonwa phur bhi ja
Aa re aa re ka re ka ga
Chun chun moti kha re kha
Boondhan boondhan barse barse
Dhua dhua huyi ja re ja
Attkan mattkan dahi chataka
Kha re ka ga kha re kha

The men conversed what to do, questions popping out. "What's wrong?" "What'd they eat?" "What'd they drink?"

They slipped near the girl's deserted drinks, "O Sh*t" Sid said, tasting a drink. "What?"

"It's…"

Abhi grabbed it from him, eyes widening at the taste, Atul and Yuvi followed; "it was supposed to be lemonade…" Yuvi whispered despairingly.

"O Boy."

"O Dear."

"O Man."

They fell silent observing the women again, three minds wandered simultaneously. Sid was imagining just him and Rhiddima alone in a room. Just them. Not a crowd of their friends and colleagues. Abhi's imagination went somewhere along the same line, Atul however was dreaming of Anjali being showered with flowers, twirling delicately in a green field as he stood watching.

Saans chalti resham resham
Aans badti madham madham
Nashe mein ghoom rahi hoon jhoom rahi hoon, main bijli ke sang
Dole mann ta na na na
Dhinak dhin ta na na na
Ke ab to aaja yaara aaja aaja laage na yeh mann

Ishq barse boondhan boondhan
Chade hain champayi champayi rang
Rangi payal ranga aanchal, rangi main poori tere rang
Doli mann ta na na na
Dhinak dhin ta na na na
Ke ab to aaja yaara aaja aaja laage na yeh mann

"Thank god Naina drank water!" Yuvi was the first to break their silence as he sunk into a chair. The remaining three men snapped out of their dreamlands, rushing to control their spouses, managing instead to get swept up into the dance.

Attkan mattkan dahi chata
Jor pigeonwa phur bhi ja
Aa re aa re ka re ka ga
Chun chun moti kha re kha
Boondhan boondhan barse barse
Dhua dhua huyi ja re ja
Attkan mattkan dahi chata
Kha re ka ga kha re kha

Ishq barse boondhan boondhan
Chade hain champayi champayi rang
Rangi payal ranga aanchal, rangi main poori tere rang
Doli mann ta na na na
Dhinak dhin ta na na na
Ke ab to aaja yaara aaja aaja laagey nahin mann
Ishq barse boondhan boondhan
Chade hain champayi champayi rang
Rangi payal ranga aanchal, rangi main poori tere rang
Doli mann ta na na na
Dhinak dhin ta na na na
Ke ab to aaja yaara aaja aaja laage na yeh mann

The women were moving in a circle, sleek and shimmering saris creating a spectacle as they spun around. Their hips moved to the beat, arms waving. Rhiddima was sashaying around Siddhant as he tried to get her to calm down, reluctantly however he joined in, taking her into his arms to placate her. Abhi and Atul soon met similar fates. Moving together until the end of the song.

Attkan mattkan dahi chatakan
Jor pigeonwa phur bhi ja
Aa re aa re ka re ka ga
Chun chun moti kha re kha
Boondhan boondhan barse barse
Dhua dhua huyi ja re ja
Attkan mattkan dahi chataka
Kha re ka ga kha re kha

The men finally managed to control the giddy women, getting them seated on a couch in a secluded corner of the club, away from curious onlookers. Yuvi and Naina had headed off to get to bottom of the drinks goof up.

Anjali, Rhiddima, and Nikkita sat in a row, luscious lips grinning and eyes innocently wide as they looked up at the husbands towering over them. Atul, Siddhant, and Abhimanyu looked down at them, contemplating what to do. Behind them the party winded down, DJ Sky beginning to pack up. They finally decided to take the girls to the suite upstairs.

"See?" Abhi said in the elevator, struggling to keep Nikkita's fists at bay, "wasn't the suite a good idea?"

"O shut up," Sid said irritably as Rhiddima slapped him again, stopping to pinch his nose.

Atul chuckled softly, he was having the easiest time of the three; while Nikki pummeled Abhi with shouts of "Modi main tume mardoongi" and Rhiddima went slap-happy mumbling about batameezes, Anjali rested with arms around his neck, repeating Atul's name with her usual flair. They finally managed to get the innocent belles into the room and tucked into the plush bed meant for Siddhant and Rhiddima. That feat over Abhi, Atul, and Sid collapsed onto the couches and armchairs littering the suite, looking at each other warily; the night had definitely not ended the way any of them planned.

Abhi eyed the bed again, sighing, "waise guys, does Nikki look like someone who left two kids at home?"

Sid and Atul turned to observe the three, "No." Atul replied, "None of them look like mothers…"

Sid smiled, suddenly jubilant, "I love my life." He said out loud, Abhi and Atul guffawed tiredly in reply, already falling asleep.

Sid was just dozing off when he Sid realized that his cherished Blackberry was missing; gauging that it was still at the club he exited the room, making sure not to disturb the sleeping Atul and Abhi.

Precap:

Siddhant finally spoke, "Armaan." He said simply, almost like he had known this would happen. Armaan's voice didn't waver as he replied, "Siddhant."

*scintillating: SRK word lol

TRACKS USED [I'm that passionate about music]

Pheli Nazar Mein- Race

Kaise Muje- Ghajni

So Right- Roadside Romeo

Koi Aap Sa- Koi Aap Sa

Sadje- Khatta Meetha

Talli- Ugli aur Pagli

Twist- Love Aaj Kal

Zoobi Doobi- 3 Idiots

Kwab Deke- Race

GAzab- Aa Dekhen Zara

I hate Love Stories- I Hate Luv Storys

Kini Soni Lagdi- Llomantic

Uff Teri Ada- Karthik Calling Karthik

Naughty Naughty- Cash

Just Dance- Lady Gaga

Kiss Me Through the Phone- Soulja Boy

Hot Mess- Cobra Starship

Supermassive Black Hole- Muse

I Gotta Feelin- Black Eyed Peas

Starrstruck- 3OH!3

1,2,3- Britney Spears

Jaan Meri Jarahi Sanam- Lucky

Adat Ho Chuki- Koi Aap Sa

Gale Lag Jaa- De Dhana Dhan



NEXT PART 15:

Naina and Yuvi watched as the last of the guests moved on out; it hadn't taken much time after the three other couples left for the rest of the party goers to disperse. Now all that remained was Yuvi, Naina, and the cleanup crew. Naina sat at the counter, where Yuvi soon joined her.

"Good going with the drinks," Yuvi complimented his wife.

"Thank you darling," she replied with a sweet smile, "your innocent act was marvelous I must say."

"Thank you!" he replied winking.

Yes, it was them; they had laced the drinks. Nothing bad, just something hard enough to get Rhiddima's tongue wagging. What they hadn't expected was that they would choose to drink so late, or that all three of them would get hit. Or that Armaan wouldn't show up. But it was fun anyway, so what the heck!

Naina frowned, "did you see him?" she asked.

"No. But Sid and Rhiddima are ok, so it doesn't really matter." Yuvi jumped of the barstool, and then helped Naina down, "Now let's get you home."

She grasped his outstretched hand smiling, happy with how things had turned out. She paused in her walking, frowning.

"What happened? Tell me you're not going into labor!" Yuvi said panicking. "I don't even have the bag. Oh my-"

"No duffer, I kicked something…" she searched the floor with her eyes. "What was it?" Yuvi asked.

"I don't know that's what I'm looking for!"

Yuvi groaned, rolling his eyes he got down on all fours, searching for whatever she had kicked.

"Found it!" he emerged from behind some chairs, holding up Siddhant's prized blackberry. "Wait here," he said walking up to Naina again, "I'll go give it to them."

Naina pouted, "He can last the night without it! I wanna go home," she whined. Shaking his head, Yuvraj obliged with him moody wife, planning to call someone to tell them he had the phone.

……………..

Armaan tossed the last of his now meager amount of possessions into his bag. Next to it, his phone hummed again, and again he ignored it. He would be back soon enough why was she getting her distressed jeans in a twist?

He sat on the edge of the bed, head in his hands; "I should've never come back," he said to himself, who else was there? He fell back onto the bed courtesy Hotel Palm, tears filled his eyes again. He felt like a one of those bahus in the saas bahu soaps, 'stop crying you idiot' he tried telling himself. It was futile, the tears kept falling.

He had gone to the party, just like he had told himself he would. He had even moved into this hotel, so he would be sure to go. He had entered through the back, blending in and unseen, observing quietly. He had watched the grand entrance of the Modi's, the stab he'd felt when he saw them was inexplicable. Nikki, his Nikki, his best friend Nikki. She was a Modi, and she was acting like, like, like there was never an Armaan. There had only been a Siddhant and Rhiddima, not an Armaan and Rhiddima. His Nikki, acting like Siddhant, not Armaan, was her best friend.

But he had let that go; after all, he was her…her devar. She'd married Abhimanyu. He was happy for her. Really. And when Dr. Shashank and Padma auntie had shown up, he didn't react; she was their daughter. And as far as he knew, Dr. Shashank never liked him right? He really seemed to like Siddhant.

The biggest shock came when Atul and Anjie showed up. There was nothing, nothing to show that they wished he was there and not Siddhant. That it was his anniversary with Rhiddima, not Siddhant's. No, they just walked up all smiles with Siddhant's daughter on Atul's shoulders. His Atul, his friend, his brother, his champ. Atul. And what had Siddhant called him? AJ? 'Lame. Probably Siddhant's idea.' Armaan thought childishly.

He had thought it couldn't get any worse than realizing Rhiddima had moved on, turns out it could. Way worse, the only way to describe him right now was, betrayed. Memories were hitting him like missiles, Atul, Anjie, Nikki, even his random moments with Abhimanyu, and of course there was Rhiddima. If Rahul and Muskaan had been there, he would've done something, he would seriously have done something.

He screamed into a pillow, as old memories were replaced with the painfully raw ones from a couple hours ago. The thing is, he couldn't really blame them either. A part of him wanted to be petty and call them bad friends, but then reason took over. And he knew that life moves on; they couldn't all put their lives on hold because he had decided to disappear. They had just moved past him, started their lives again. And somehow in the process Siddhant had managed to take his place.

He had been standing near the back of the bar, sipping on a drink as he observed the festivities. Watching the couples dance, each in a world of their own, a world that no longer had a place for him. He'd gotten up to move when Surili had started playing, it froze him in his place. He had stood rooted to his spot as everyone else danced, stood rooted through Siddhant's speech, and stood rooted to the same spot as Siddhant began serenading Rhiddima. She had cried when he finished, even from that distance Armaan could see her tears. Had she ever cried when he sung? Had she ever been so moved? Asking himself this, his eyes started to tear, and then they had met Siddhant's.

It was then that it hit him, hiding behind a pillar at the party in honor of Siddhant and Rhiddima Modi's fifth anniversary, that he couldn't blame Siddhant. He couldn't blame anyone. 'Siddhant was probably a nice guy; undeserving of the string of insults you've been flinging in his direction all night. All these people they love Siddhant. Siddhant isn't the impostor, You Are.'

He'd made his exit then; choosing instead to hit the gym, where his angst and anguish, his hurt, could be put to good use. After that, he decided, he would leave; as soon as possible, leave. He didn't want to meet anyone. No, he was ready to go. Run off. He could do that. Nothing new, 'leave like you always do Armaan.' He taunted himself. "Leave." Lightning struck outside, as if agreeing with him.

……………..

Armaan leaned against the back of the elevator, unable to stop himself from remembering. Each memory hit him like the bullet that had ended it all. The first day of his internship, the basketball court, their fights, their friends…the moments that had made his life. As the lift paused to let on another passenger Armaan turned to face the rear, leaning his forehead against the cool metal.

He didn't notice the young man who had just walked on. No, not until the elevator jarred halfway between floors, fatefully trapping them together with no means of escape. Leaving with only the emergency lights to illuminate their faces.

"Sh*t!" the man cursed, fiddling with the array of buttons on the side, Armaan turned curiously, just in time to see him angrily bang his hand against the buttons. Cursing again as he turned to face his fellow passenger.

The two men finally came face to face, each too shocked to move. Siddhant finally spoke, "Armaan." He said it simply. Calmly. Almost like he had known this would happen, but how could he? Armaan's voice didn't waver as he replied, "Siddhant."

They stared at each other; adversaries in a battle long over, won in the end by fate alone. The same cruel fate which had thrown then in this elevator together, for a time known only to that fate itself, and for a reason, known only to fate itself.

NEXT PART 16:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmaIBlGLVcs

Rhiddima's eyes fluttered open as she felt a gentle breeze brushing against her skin. She took in the room with awe; it wasn't a room at all, more like an open house. Perhaps it was someone's guesthouse? Big bay windows surrounded three sides of the big hall, sheer white curtains ruffled in the wind. There was an ornate curving staircase leading down. She stepped towards it as the song began playing'

shukran allah wallah alham dulillah - (4)

thank you allah, allah be praised

As she reached the bottom, she saw someone hidden between the curtains, they moved towards her slowly. Realizing who it was, she smiled brightly.

Armaan came closer, crooning:


nazron se nazrein mili to

when my eyes met your eyes,


jannat si mehki fizaayein

the atmosphere fragranted like heaven


lab ne jo lab chhoo liya to

when we touched our lips with each other,


aasmaan se barsi duaaien

prayers showered from sky

aisi apni mohabbat

such is our love,


aisi rooh-e-ibaadat

such is the essence of our devotion,


hum pe meherbaan do jahaan

that both the worlds are kind on us

He pulled her close, twirling her around, somehow managing to do a version of the salsa to the slow beat of the song.


shukran allah wallah alham dulillah - (4)

teri baahaon mein yeh jism khil gaya

my body brightened in your arms


teri saanson mein chain mil gaya

i found peace in your breath


kaise rahein ab hum juda

how can i now remain away from you?


tere paas hum itne hue

i came so close to you


tere khawaab apne hue

that your dreams became mine


aise huye ab hum fida

such is the way i fell in love with you



He led her through a series of twists and turns, the very feel of him made her feel liberated. Free. Loved.



aise uski inaayat

such was the kindness of god,


mit gayi har shikaayat

that all my complaints got over


hum pe meherbaan do jahaan

and both the worlds are kind on us

They smiled at each other as the words, wind, and curtains clouded around them; lost in their own world of happiness. He spun her out, only to reel her back in and send her flying out again. She spun around happily, in a circle. Then realized he wasn't there.



shukran allah wallah alham dulillah - (4)


She closed her eyes, falling back; she knew he would be there. And then, as expected, she was caught, she opened her eyes slowly, with a smile, and was met with shock. It wasn't Armaan, but Siddhant. Who helped her stand up and led her through a slow series of steps. A gentle waltz; making her feel safe again. Loved again. She looked into his eyes; she could see his soul from here. His love for her.


tere saaye mein mili har khushi

i found happiness in your shade


teri marzi meri zindagi

your will is my life


le chal tu chaahe jahaan

take me wherever you wish to



haan haan
meri aankhon mein nazar teri hai

there is your sight in my eyes


meri sham-o-seher teri hai

my mornings and evenings are your's


tu jo nahin to main kahan

i am nowhere if you are not there



khil gayi meri kismat

my luck brightened


paa ke teri yeh chaahat

after attaining your love


hum pe meherbaan do jahaan

both the worlds are kind on us


shukran allah wallah alham dulillah - (4)

Suddenly she was pulled from his loving gaze, pulled into a rapid salsa with Armaan. "Sid!" she screamed, each time she turned she searched for his face. She could see it changing, such sad eyes. Why was he leaving? No! "Siddhant! No!" but he didn't respond, he receded even further into the darkness, a faint but sad smile on his face.

She raced after Siddhant, ignoring Armaan's pleas. "Siddhant! No! Don't Go!"

"Rhiddima!"

"Siddhant! Sid! Come back!"

"Rhiddima, wake up!" "Rhidzy! Rhidzy!"

"Siddhant!"

"Rhidzy, shhh, it's ok!"

Rhiddima's eyes flew open, it was just a dream. No, not a dream, a nightmare. She breathed deeply, sitting up slowly. Anjali di and Nikki flanked her on either side; her eyes searched the number of eyes looking down at her. None of them were the ones she was looking for. "Sid?" she arched her neck, trying to see past Abhi and Atul, "where's Sid?" she asked worriedly.

The others looked around, finally realizing she was missing.

"It's ok Rhiddima," Abhi assured her, "he's probably in the bathroom."

She wasn't sated, she needed to see him. "Where is Sid? Sid!" she yelled out, hoping he would answer. Abhi and Atul ran to check the rest of the suite, returning with worried looks. "He's not here," they announced.

Rhiddima scrambled around in the bed, the many layers of sheets twisting around her body as she tried to get out, "Sid Sid Sid." She repeated frantically, "Where are you?"

Anjali and Nikki followed her out, "shhh, it's ok, we'll find him." Anjali took her into her arms, "he's not a kid." Nikki assured her, "he'll be back soon."

''''..

Siddhant and Armaan stood still; in fact time seemed to stand still. After daring to utter each other's names, they were speechless. Their eyes, which moments before had steadily met, not darted nervously around the small space. The lift seemed to grow smaller, into a crevice almost, as they realized that they were stuck. Together. Now they only had two options, sit awkwardly in silence for however long it took for them to be evicted, or try to hold what was bound to be one of the world's most awkward conversations ever.

Of course they attempted the first option first. They retreated into opposite corners, sinking to sit on the floor. Still hesitant to pointedly look at each other, they pretended to observe frivolous things. As Siddhant pretended to intently study an inscription on the switchboard, Armaan focused on his phone, rendered useless in the lift. They both snuck glances at each other, taking in details. After twenty minutes of pin drop silence, the air filled with uneasy tension, Siddhant spoke up again, "What were you doing in my bushes?"

Armaan's head jerked up, surprised that Siddhant had spoken, let alone admitted to have seen him in the bushes! "I-I..."

Siddhant winced, "sorry! I, wow, sorry! Did not mean that the way it sounded-"

"Yes you did, and you're right to ask-"

"No really, I- I should've. I- sorry."

Armaan observed the man, Siddhant's flustered face and innocently wide eyes were filled with regret.

"I'm sorry." Armaan said, "For everything."

Siddhant looked at him confused, "why? I mean, you didn't do anything."

Armaan scoffed, "yes I did. You obviously know about the bushes, I- that was wrong. I'm sorry."

Siddhant smiled at him, a small nervous smile, but a smile none the less. "It's ok." He replied softly, "I forgive you."

The lift fell silent again as they each studied the floor for a few minutes, unsure how to continue.

Once again, Sid spoke up, "I saw you again." They looked up at each other, eyes flitting around to avoid any possible direct contact. "You were at the chai stall, and I got out of my car to talk to you. But I chickened out at the last minute."

"I saw you too," Armaan admitted, "I was getting ready to run, but you diverted'I was planning on personally giving you a membership card." He muttered the last part to himself, but Siddhant still caught it.

"Card? To what?" he wondered out loud.

Armaan's eyes widened, 'shit he'd heard.' "It's' stupid really. You were walking towards me and I wanted to run. But my feet wouldn't move and I was panicking, thinking about what I would say to you and I ' I thought, well, I love Rhiddima." Armaan had started fiddling with his when he'd begun speaking, staring intently at it. Now he looked up to meet Siddhant's eyes; they didn't waver, didn't accuse, so he continued, "a-and you love Rhiddima. We both love Rhiddima. I thought, we should start a club, we could be the sole two members'" Armaan looked down again.

"' of the I Love Rhiddima Club." Siddhant finished for him.

Armaan looked up again, his eyes meeting Siddhant's a smile broke out on their faces. The ridiculous notion of such a club, that they could both think of that, formed a bond. An understanding. The realization that they couldn't change the past, but the future. Yes the present and the present they could.

"Did you change your mind?" Siddhant asked?

Armaan's face scrunched up thoughtfully, "about what?"

"About giving me a membership; it's a pretty exclusive club right? And you decide who gets in'"

Armaan laughed a little, scornfully; he was regrettably starting to like this guy, he had a sense of humor. "I think you of all people get automatic membership," he said, "but'" He reached into his bag, rummaging around until he emerged with a notebook and pen. Tearing out a sheet, he creased it, neatly tearing out a strip. On the paper he drew two large hearts, and inside them wrote: Member: The I Love Rhiddima Club. He tore the strip neatly in two, giving one to Siddhant and keeping one for himself.

Siddhant took out his wallet, securely slipping the "card" behind a family picture he always carried with him. He smiled looking down at the snapshot; it was a fairly recent one. It was taken on the front steps of their home; he was sitting on the top step and had his arms around Rhiddima, who sat between his legs holding Ashi.

Armaan watched Siddhant curiously, what was he smiling at? It seemed to be a picture.

Siddhant looked up at saw Armaan's curious glance. He looked at the picture, hesitant to hand it over. Rethinking however, he held it out, waiting for Armaan to take it.

Armaan looked at him, surprised, then hesitantly took it, sucking in a breath as he saw the picture; a beautiful picture, of a beautiful family. For a minute he couldn't help but think that should be him. She didn't look much different; a little more mature maybe. Different hair, clothes, but the same gorgeous smile, the same twinkling eyes. But the glow around her was different; this was Rhiddima Modi, not his Basket. She was different, yet the same. Somehow he sensed she was more carefree, she didn't have to hide her love for this man, not like I had always been with them. He handed the wallet back, sullen.

"Was she always so fiery?" Siddhant's voice snapped Armaan out of his interlude, "was she what?"

Siddhant furtively checked their surrounds, leaning in, "So' hotheaded'.bossy."

Armaan couldn't help it, the way Siddhant had said it, like he expected Rhiddima to jump out any moment and beat him up, he just had to laugh. He shook his head, "if you mean self righteous, then yes."

Siddhant laughed too, more at the irony of the situation than at Armaan's comment, but he did agree, he nodded in agreement. "She can be self righteous-"

"But if she's wrong," Armaan said.
"She'll admit it."" Siddhant added.

"Reluctantly." Armaan finished with a smile.

The two men stared at each other in astonishment; here they were, already finishing each other's sentences. Wow.

They continued staring, unsure what to make of this new development. Finally, Armaan spoke up, "the first time we met, she beat me at my own game, basketball." He paused, twiddling his thumbs and wondering if he should continue. "I didn't want to admit it, but she did; then I saw her at the hospital and got her back. And she got me back, and I got her back, and-"

"It kept going till you fell in love?" Siddhant guessed.

"Until I fell in love." Armaan corrected, "it took ' a while for her to agree.

"She's stubborn."

"Yea'" both men fell silent again as they thought of the object of their affections.

"We played basketball too," Siddhant started his own story, "but that's not how we met. We' really started off on the wrong foot. It was at the airport, and she'" he trailed off, grimacing at the unsavory memory.

"She?" Armaan probed.

Siddhant cleared his throat, "she accused me of molesting her. Then got me arrested. Then later she accused me of kidnapping her. And got me arrested."

Armaan bit his lip struggling with his urge, giving in, he burst out laughing. He hadn't laughed in what seemed forever, but Siddhant's tale, and his own memory of a night spent in jail courtesy the one and only Rhiddima Gupta was too much. That or he was going crazy, but it was most likely the second one.

Siddhant frowned at him disdainfully; wait till he heard how they got married'


Next Part 17:

Abhi and Atul rushed towards the rendezvous point, aka the receptionist desk. In their rush they couldn't stop in time and crashed into each other.

"Dr. Atul!" For a minute Abhi reverted to Sadu Modi mode, then recovered, "sorry Atul," he said.

"Find anything?" Atul asked. Abhi shook his head, no. "The stupid power had to go out now too! Dam* it!" he kicked the floor.

Atul massaged his forehead, "where could he go? And why would he leave without telling us?"

Abhi leaned against a pillar, eyes closed, "Stupid. Idiot. Moron." He muttered.

Atul sighed, come on, we have to go tell the women."

Abhi groaned, "Stupid power cut! I don't want to walk up 14 flights of stairs!"

Atul froze, eyes suddenly alight, "THE ELEVATOR! ABHI! What if Sid is stuck in there?"

Abhi's eyes met Atul's equally excited, they turned to the harried receptionist, "WHERE'S THE ELEVATOR?!?!?" Abhi screamed.

The y young receptionist was scared by the two over excited men towering over her, eyes wide, she pointed towards the elevators.

Abhi calmed down, "no, we mean it's not working right? Because of the power cut?"

She shook her head, "n-no it's not."

Atul smiled kindly, "well is there a way to know where it stopped? Or if anyone is inside?"

She bit her lip, she liked this man better than the other, he seemed nice…

"Miss?" Abhi asked.

"No Sir, there isn't. We can tell you what floor it's on or between, but not if there's anyone inside."

"Well we need you to get a mechanic here," Abhi said, "because my little brother is stuck in there."

"We think." Atul interjected.

"Where else could he be?" Abhi asked.

Atul nodded agreeing, "Right. Sid's stuck in the elevator!"

"Sid's stuck in the elevator?" A feeble voice questioned from behind, Abhi and Atul winced, she really didn't need to hear that. They turned slowly, in time to see her bottom lip quivering, cueing another bout of sobs. She leaned heavily onto her sister, who along with Nikki led her to a nearby couch. She buried her face into Anjali's shoulder; she didn't know why she was crying so much. But she just could stop. She needed to see Sid now, to make sure he was alright, that he was still here for her. But Sid was gone; he was stuck in an elevator. What if something happened… her mind flew through the possible outcomes. What if he ran out of air? What if the cable was weak and broke? "Sid…" She gasped, "Please come back…"

Anjali and Nikki soothed her, giving each other worried glances, why was she so worked up? What kind of dream had she seen?

Abhi and Atul convinced the receptionist to get the mechanic and then came to sit down with their wives; comforting a miserable Rhiddima.

………………

"So she gets you arrested twice, slaps you silly, accuses you of rape, and you marry her?"

"Well when you put it like that…"

"You're insane!"

"Hey! She got you arrested too."

"That was a misunderstanding."

"As was this…sort of."

"Touch."

They sat next to each other now, side by side. In the last hour they had given up sitting still; choosing instead to move about the elevator, exchanging stories about the one and only Rhiddima Modi nee Gupta.

A strange comfort had formed between the men; they seemed connected by their love for her. At the very least they should've been not talking, but no, here they were telling each other the weirdest oddest things. The things they hadn't told anyone else, because no one else knew Rhiddima like they did. Their feelings, motivation, insecurities, all laid out along with tales of Rhiddima's anger, Rhiddima's love, Armaan's love, Siddhant's love… the elevator seemed to have taken them to a different world.

Here, secluded from the rest of society, it seemed almost acceptable that a woman's past and her present could peacefully sit side by side discussing why they love her. Even the silences as they each mulled over their thoughts were comfortable; they had no reason to be awkward here, away from the rest of the world. And for the time being, Armaan Malik and Siddhant Modi would very much love to forget the rest of the world.

As time dragged on, they grew drowsy, each tired from the day's events. Slowly, as he fell asleep, Siddhant's head slipped onto Armaan's shoulder, and remained there unmoving. Soon after Armaan's own head rested on top of it, as he too fell asleep.

They awoke soon after in that very position as the elevator jarred to life. As the veil of sleep lifted, they got up from the floor, holding onto each other for support. They looked at each other regretfully; after those double doors opened, things would change. No matter how much they wished they didn't have to, they had to walk out. They face the world that was always so full of questions and accusations.

"Good bye Siddhant." Armaan stuck out his hand, a comforting smile on his face. Siddhant clasped it firmly, "It's Sid for friends Armaan."

"So we're friends now?"

"I'd like to think so."

"Then good bye Sid."

"It doesn't have to be goodbye," Siddhant said.

Armaan gave him a knowing look, yes it did; at least for now. Before he could voice his thoughts however, the lift came to a stop. Armaan let go of Siddhant's hand noticing his anxious eyes flying to the door.

Siddhant gave Armaan a last heartrending look as the doors slid open; it was goodbye, for now.

………………

A collective sigh of relief resonated throughout the lobby as the doors slid open and Sid stepped out. Almost immediately Rhiddima was shooting out of her seat nearby, not stopping until she had plowed through Abhi and Atul and burrowed herself into Siddhant's arms. In the comfort and love she had grown to distinguish as her Siddhant.

Siddhant's slightly relieved smile turned into a concerned frown as she clutched at him, her sobs pausing only to choke out his name. He hugged her comfortingly, slightly confused yet touched that she had missed him so much. "It's ok Rhiddi," he whispered into her hair, "I'm here. I'm ok," he laid a kiss on the top of her head reassuringly, she sniffed, slightly nodding.

"Don't leave me." She whispered, sounding slightly pitiful. He looked down at her shocked, she wrapped her arms around him more tightly face buried in his chest, refusing to let go, "please don't leave me."

He shushed her, "never, Rhiddi, what's wrong? What happened?" he probed; he got no answer as she simply nestled further into him, tears still falling as she stood reveling in his aura. Siddhant looked up at the others, who stood watching. His questioning eyes were met with shrugs; they didn't know what happened either.

Abhi, now recovered from the shove courtesy his sister in law, began pelting his brother with questions, the others joined in too. Siddhant stood confounded as to whether he should answer their inquiries or take care of Rhiddima.

"What were you doing in the elevator?"

"We walked up and down fourteen flights of stairs!"

"Why were you up so late?"

"Couldn't you have told someone?"

"We were all so worried!"

"Sid you have to stop acting like a kid-"

"GUYS!" Sid finally interrupted, "SHUT UP!"

Abhi, Atul, Nikki, and Anjali fell silent, Rhiddima giggled slightly into Siddhant's torso. Siddhant rolled his eyes, "you two were already asleep," he said to Abhi and Atul, "and you" he said to Nikki and Anjali, "were passed out from getting dr-"

Nikki's glare stopped him from continuing, but his point was made.

Sid let out a breath forcefully, "anyway," he said, "there's someone you guys should meet."

Siddhant hadn't moved from his spot yet, he was still in front of the open elevator. He turned towards it now, gently since Rhiddima was still wrapped around him.

"Ah…" Sid began to say, but trailed off when he realized the elevator was empty. Sid looked at the small space stunned, had he imagined the whole thing?

"Who'd you want us to meet Sid?" Abhi posed the question on all their minds.

Siddhant turned again slightly to gape at them, "he- he,"

"Sid? Are you ok?" Nikki asked.

"Armaan!" Siddhant exclaimed, "He was here!" The group stilled, but Siddhant continued, "he- he was there! I swear!" I- we were talking!"

Rhiddima lifted her head, looking up concerned. Sid looked at everyone's unconvinced faces, then at the empty lift, "he was…I…"

They all looked at him concerned and unbelieving.

"He-he…" Siddhant stuttered to a stop, frowning, why would he leave like that?

"Never mind," he finally said, "let's just go home."

A moment of silence passed before Nikki disagreed, it was late and raining cats and dogs outside. They should spend the night here. Giving in, Siddhant, Rhiddima, and the others began to trudge up the fourteen flights of stairs; no one wanted to risk the elevator again. Of course, less than halfway up the girls insisted they be carried like the princesses they were.

………………

Hours later, after everyone had fallen asleep again Siddhant sat in the bathroom alone. Perched on the edge of the bathtub he ran his fingers over the small piece of paper in his hand.

It was real, it had happened. And as suddenly as he had appeared, Armaan Malik had disappeared, leaving behind only this.

Sid knew he could show it to the others, as proof. But no. Somehow, this felt too private, for Rhiddima even. This was something just for the two of them, the two sole members of the I Love Rhiddima Club.

He slipped the card back into his wallet, eyes wandering over to the window, which revealed the violent weather outside. 'I hope Armaan's alright.' He thought worriedly, he shouldn't have let him leave in this weather. Wandering closer to the window, he laid a hand on the glass. His eyes searched the bleak vicinity outside as he said the three words he'd forgotten to say to his new friend, "Thank you, Armaan."

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Fate....O So Cruel Fate: The Epilogue Part 1

Epilogue:

Two Years Later

She sat in front of him, she had heard of patients falling for their doctors, and doctors falling for their patients before. But she had never imagined it happening to her. She looked at the man laid out before her; his body held no sign of his past exploits, his face and skin were as pale as a ghost's, and yet she knew that when he opened his eyes, they would have a twinkle of mischief in them, symbolic of the man he had been. She was a resident doctor now, no longer the intern that had first been infatuated with the young man brought to the clinic five years ago. Now it was a mature understanding of him, a special love.

She'd spent hours on the stool in his room listening as he amused her with his antics and stories, cried silently as her told her about his life, what he had loved and lost, and sat there holding his hand on the worst days when he himself couldn't remember his life. Her heart had gone out to the man who had been defeated by love. While the rest of her batch had gone onto bigger hospitals, getting higher paying jobs, she had stayed. Only for him, for this amazing, crazy, loving man.

'''

"Shona?" her eyes slowly fluttered open, a loving smile already emerging on her face. Only one person used that nickname. "How are you Armaan?"

"I'm feeling great! Infact, I kind of feel like going outside, do you think we could?" he looked at her with the excited look of a little boy asking for a toy.

"We'll see, after last time, I don't think chief would warrant that'" she replied, her eyebrow cocked.

"Aww come on Shona! Please???" he pouted.

"I'll go see Armaan." She smiled, shaking her head; she already knew she would be in the chief's office groveling in a while.

"Dr. Sonali? Is now a good time?" the young intern peered in through the door, squinting in an attempt to not see quote 'anything she really didn't want to see.'

"Of course," Sonali replied, getting up, "I'll see you later Armaan."

"Bye Shona!" he said a bright smile on his face, "I love you!"

She returned his smile and walked out easily masking the pain his friendly words gave her, how would she tell a dying man that she loved him so deeply?

"Boyfriend!" the twenty year old intern walked in, the bright smile on her face matching that on his, "how are you today?"

"Now that you're here, never better."

"Ok now we have to do some checkups, it's the fifth tomorrow, and you know what that means."

He sighed, "Minnie is it necessary that you we do it every month?"

"Armaan bhaiya, you know as well as I do that it is, you didn't let me stop, and I won't let you. Dhekna, you'll be alright."

She sat around for a while after his check up was done; it was a small clinic and therefore didn't have many regular patients she had to check up on, she could spare time for her "boyfriend." As he slowly drifted off to sleep again, she got up and left, wiping the tears that inadvertently came every time she saw him, it was more common these days as the tests kept coming back negative, he wasn't getting any better- and he knew it. It broke her heart to see her Dr. Armaan like this, she wanted so badly for him to be the same intern that had taken her under his wing at Sanjeevani. She wanted the man that had been like a brother to her to be his old self again. But it looked like he had never had hope; he hadn't had hope for the last few years. He'd saved her life more than once before and she would do anything to save his, but it just didn't seem to be working, he was defeated.

Shona sat in her office going over Armaan's test results, she looked up as Minnie knocked on the door, her face anxious and worried; Shona slowly shook her head, no. Minnie entered hesitantly, not really wanting to hear the rest.

..''.

Ishq Leta Hai Kaise Imtehan

Ishq Leta Hai Kaise Imtehan

Ishq Mein Jiyoon

Ishq Mein Maroon

Ishq Hi Mera Bhagwan

Hai Rabba

Tu Hi Meri Jaan

Tu Hi Jahan

Tu Hi Meri Manzil

Tere Ishq Mein

Mein Qurban'

Minnie's feet faltered as she headed towards Armaan's room, she could hear strains of a song. His song, he could forget many things but not this. That song was a piece of him, the beat of his heart. How could she tell him this? But she didn't have to, he was awake and alert today, "how long" he simply asked.

"A month, maybe two" she broke down running to him she flung her arms around him, years ago he had cried for her, now here she was, begging him not to go. He was calmly accepting the news, stroking her hair gently as her violent sobs filled the room. After she finally began calming down he lifted her chin up so her eyes would meet his. "Minnie, I want you to promise me some things." She nodded, still unable to speak. "I need you to let me go peacefully, and after I'm-" she cried out again, realizing what he was about to say. "Armaan, you can't go! No, I won't let you!"

"Minnie, listen to me. Please." He continued, as calm as the gentle sea, "after I'm gone I want you to be happy, I want you to find that special guy and hold on tight, don't let him go. And when you find him, make sure it's someone you can talk to, make sure you don't hide anything from him, do you get that? Don't make the same mistake I made'" she nodded, sniffling. "The second thing is tell Rhiddima and Siddhant Modi good bye for me. Tell them I'm sorry for all the trouble I caused, and all the hurt. I didn't mean to do that. Tell them, that each mistake can teach us something, if we're willing. And lastly, tell that Siddhant that in our next life he won't get her that easily, he'll have to fight me to the death because next time Armaan Malik isn't going down this easy."As he finished his very short list, he added a small request, "can you also call Mr. Aluwalia, my lawyer, I need to sort some things out." She lay in his arms for quite a while before she got up and left, he was already dozing off. She set off to do the tasks he had assigned her, if her boyfriend was going down; he was going down as happy as she could make it.

Sonali stood in the doorway, watching him sleep. Somehow this man, who was living and dying for someone else, had become the love of her life. He had become the reason she couldn't wait to get to work, the reason she hated going home. She had never told him, never told him what he was to her. Never told him that when he slept, she watched him wishing he was hers. That he would come home to her. She had never told him that she loved him, and she never would. Because she couldn't let Armaan Malik go with the knowledge that he had let another person down. She knew it haunted him, that he felt like a failure, a coward. That behind that bright smile, those twinkling eyes, he was broken. And although from the outside he looked worn down, inside he was even more so. And because of that Sonali would never tell her first love how she felt. She would never tell him that he meant the world to her.

Sonali to Armaan; Armaan to Rhiddima: Leja Leja- Tere Sang

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Piya O Piya
Piya Piya
Piya ho Piya
Piya a Piya
Leja Leja Tere sang o piya
Leja Leja leja tere sang o piyaa a a a
Leja Leja Tere sang o piya
Leja Leja tere sang o piya

Tere bina mane na mera jiya
Ab kuch jane na
Leja Na
Tere bina mane na mera jiya
Ab kuch jane na

o Ho

Tu mera junnon hai
Tu mera Sukun hai
Yeh janta hai Khuda

Leja Leja Tere sang o piya
Leja Leja tere sang o piya

Jeene Na De Ek Lamha bhi
Yadoon ki tanhaiyaan
Peeche peeche Chalti rahein
Khawabon ki parchiyan

Kiya hai Bharosa
Dena nahi dhokha
Umeed na todnaa

Tu mera junnon hai
Tu mera Sukun hai
Yeh janta hai Khudaa

Leja Leja Tere sang o piya
Leja Menu leja tere sang

[Punjabi Lines]


Bole Bole Kuch bhi bole
Duniya ki parwah nahi
Duja Tujko ehsaas mein
Rab mera duja nahi

Mujh mein rawa hai
Tu mera jahan hai
Daman na ab chodna

Tu mera junnon hai
Tu mera Sukun hai
Yeh janta hai Khudaa

Leja Leja Tere sang o piya
Leja Menu leja tere sang o piya
Leja Leja Tere sang o piya
Tere Sang

''''

Sid helped Rhiddima out of the car, her inflated abdomen preventing her from moving freely. She stood in front of the clinic, observing each detail. So this is where Armaan Malik had chosen to spend his final days. As Sid helped her climb the stairs leading to the main door, apprehension filled her mind. When she'd first gotten the call she had thought coming here was a good idea, it would give all of them a final closure. She remembered Minnie's voice on the phone, "and he says 'tell that Siddhant that in our next life he won't get her that easily, he'll have to fight me to the death', but didi, I think it would be better if he told you that himself." "I think so too Minnie," she had replied, and Sid, the sweetheart he was, hadn't objected for a second. They'd gotten in the car as soon as possible and came to the address given by Minnie.

The doors to the clinic opened and an equally apprehensive Minnie stood at the entrance, her gaze zigzagging between Rhiddima and Siddhant. She took the man in; he stood tall and confident next Rhiddima, supporting her as she waddled up the stairs. Minnie had obviously not been aware of the fact that Rhiddima was pregnant, she now feared it would be like rubbing Armaan's defeat in his face all over again. She smiled tightly, in reply to Rhiddima's whole hearted one; seeing her visibly hurt however, Minnie succumbed to the urge and gave Rhiddima a hug, awkward as it was with her protruding stomach. Turning to Siddhant, she extended a hand out, "I've heard a lot about you." Siddhant returned her shake with a firm one of his own, but chose not to say anything but a simple, "Hello."

As they were ushered into Armaan's room, Rhiddima and Siddhant silently gasped, neither of them had expected this kind of atrophy, and they were stunned into silence. Armaan was asleep and sleeping next to him, hunched over from a chair was a young woman, a doctor. Her hand was encased in his and they both slumbered. Not wanting to wake them up, Rhiddima and Siddhant walked back out, and Minnie led them to the small cafeteria. Over cups of steaming chai, she told them about everything that had happened in the past few years.

Armaan had found her again and sponsored her through medical school; she was unaware of his condition till she began as an intern here two years ago. Three years ago, both Billy and Ahanya had died in a car accident, not far from here. Armaan had inherited all of their wealth, and she'd just been told that she would inherit half of his assets after he passed, the other half being donated to various foundations.

"He has this dying thing all sorted out," Minnie said sadly, "he knows what he wants, how he wants it, he's been writing it all down, just in case he forgets the next day." Siddhant and Rhiddima looked down at their coffee mugs then each other, what do you say to that? "He's been having more and more good days," Minnie continued, "but Dr. Sonali is still saying there isn't any word and chief says the same. You remember chief right Rhiddima didi?"

Rhiddima looked up questioningly, "chief?"

"Yea-"

Minnie was interrupted by the chief himself, "Rhiddima. How are you?"

Rhiddima turned at the familiar voice, scoffing in surprise, "Rahul?" Getting up she gave him a hug, and introduced Siddhant, who was sized the second time in two hours, this time by the chief, Rahul Gerewal. Deciding that if Armaan can't hate him, he couldn't either, Rahul pulled up a chair. After filling them in on the rest of the case he asked, "So what are your plans? How long are you staying?"

Rhiddima and Siddhant exchanged glances before she replied, "we didn't really plan that' Just got in the car and came."

Rahul nodded, "why don't you come stay with us? She's bored sitting around alone anyway'"

Rhiddima's eyes jerked to his face, astonished. Us? She? Rahul winked with a small smile, "He helped her convince me," he said.

For a moment Rhiddima's eyes danced with excitement, and then realizing why she was meeting Rahul, she lowered her gaze sadly. Suddenly she felt guilty; she looked up to see Siddhant closing his eyes reassuringly. She swallowed, giving him a small smile; what would she do without him?

After a while the group got up again, proceeding to Armaan's room. One by one they filed in. He looked up taken aback at the unexpected guests. Recovering quickly however he asked in typical Armaan fashion, "Wha! Poora Sanjeevani Panchgani main kya karahehain?"

Everyone smiled at his jab, Rhiddima hesitantly walked towards his bed. "It's ok Basket, I'm dying, not dead. Tum mere paas asakti hoon." She let out a sob at his words, her eyes automatically brimming with tears and Sid automatically moving to try and help. Pushing him away she wiped her tears, an annoyed look replacing the sad one. Crossing her arms, she plopped down on the now empty stool next to him, continuing to stare. He smiled at the familiar look that had made his days, he looked past her to Sid, "why are you guys here?"

"We wanted to be with you Armaan." For the first time since he'd arrived, Sid spoke more than two words. "I wanted to be there for my friend." He smiled reassuringly, walking to the other side of the bed. Armaan scoffed disdainfully, looking to Rahul he said, "Would you look at that? This chap here stole my girl, and he's just arrived with a friendship day card!" he grinned up at Siddhant who reciprocated with a smirk of his own. The two men had somehow come to share an easy bond, maybe it was because they were the sole two members of the 'I Love Rhiddima Club.'

A few days later Siddhant and Rhiddima were still there, catching up on each other's lives with Armaan. One morning he woke up and he didn't know anyone, his illness had taken over and he looked at everyone as if they were strangers. He recoiled from everyone, seeming not to trust anyone. Everyone was outside his room in the hall, wondering what to do; finally Sonali marched in, having had enough, "Armaan Malik, you listen here; we have been babying you and coddling you so better damn well remember something. Cause we sure as hell are not going to give up until you are you again!" she screamed. Then collapsed onto the stool crying, surprisingly Armaan didn't resist as she held his hand. One by one everyone entered the room. Suddenly Armaan was Armaan again, and he smiled reassuringly at everyone in the room. Sonali still holding his hand on one side, on the other was Rhiddima, holding his other hand, Sid standing protectively behind her, Rahul and Minnie standing at his feet.

The heart monitor began beeping erratically as he took his final gasps of air; Rhiddima still clutching his hand leaned back onto Sid for support, crying, tears ran down Sid's face too as he held onto his wife. Sonali was inconsolable grasping his hand for life; Minnie and Rahul stood speechless at the foot of the bed, silently weeping. Armaan didn't have any last words, he was always a man of action, he simply smiled. It was a valiant, tender smile that stayed on his face even as his last breath slowly gave way and they were all left to shed tears in his memory.


R.I.P: this dude

Introducing: hello sweetness!!!

And this prettiness:

EPILOGUE PART 2:

Winds stirred the curtains as a sleeping body awoke. Lazily stretching his limbs the young man flipped around in bed, revealing his toned abs and chiseled face. His eyes blinked open slowly as he yawned, falling on the nearby clock; the dark gray orbs widened as he read the time. He leapt out of bed, thinking, 'aaj tho main gaya!' In less than ten minutes he had showered and was bounding down the stairs; diving into the bright yellow sports car courtesy his parents, he rushed to work.

"Where is Dr. Armaan?" Chocolate brown eyes raked inquisitively over the five interns lined up in front of her. Looking down the interns exchanged glances with each other; once again the generally undisputed leader of their gang was late!

"Where is Dr. Armaan?" the question was repeated, this time more forcefully. The man in question suddenly appeared, skidding to a stop next to the other interns, who stood facing the senior doctor.

"Oh!" She exclaimed, "Thank you Dr. Armaan! You have graced us with your presence! We all waiting for you, because that is, of course, the only thing we have to do here at Sanjeevani."

"Di- I mean Maam, I'm-"

"No Excuses Dr. Armaan" Dr. Ashita interrupted. As punishment you will have night duty and rectal exams, am I clear?"

He looked down sullenly, "Yes maam."

"Good." She turned to the other interns, assigning them their duties and heading off to complete her own. Giving Armaan a pat on the back, Mayank whispered, "Sorry dude," before walking off hand in hand with his girlfriend and partner for the day Nupur, Maan and Geet threw him sympathetic looks before walking off together. Only Shilpa snickered quietly at his misfortune, in return he threw her a murderous look. In reply she shrugged, walking off; he glared after her, muttering "'chudail," through his clenched teeth.

"He didn't!" A familiar voice came from behind him, it continued gasping, and "He did! You know," the voice said sagely, "the last person I called chudail was you mother, and you obviously know how that ended up!"

Armaan turned to face his father, standing behind him, "yea." He replied. "But you and mom are different." He turned to look after Shilpa, "I HATE her! Thinks she's some big shot doctor, walking in with I'm too good for you attitude and'" he continued mumbling about her as he headed to general ward.

Siddhant Modi leaned onto the nurses' station counter, watching his son fondly, mischief stirring in his mind. A devious yet wily grin emerged on his face, his son wasn't letting down on family traditions, everyone knew Modi men had once wanted to kill their wives!

''.


As he headed to the general ward, Armaan changed direction, turning he stormed towards the private offices, bursting through the one with a door that read 'Rhiddima Modi.' Gray eyes that matched his gazed up at him, her eyebrow rising inquisitively at her son. He stepped in front of her desk, she watched on curiously as he pointedly took off his lab coat, stethoscope, ID card, and pager, setting them on the table in front of her, signifying that technically, he wasn't a doctor anymore. Arms folded he slumped into a chair in front of her.

"Mom why didn't you wake me up?" he whined.

Rhiddima burst out laughing at his antics, he was twenty two, but like his father, half the time acted five. The arrival of Armaan Modi barely three days after the demise of Armaan Malik had his father so emotionally and physically exhausted, that in a state of semi deliria Siddhant had ended up naming his only son after the only male name that had been running through his head at the moment- Armaan. And somewhere in Siddhant's fatigued mind it made sense, because he still believed that Armaan the baby wouldn't exist without Armaan the man, in a way it was poetic justice'kind of. It made sense when he thought of it, and it had seemed to make sense when he explained it to Rhiddima.

"Mom it's not funny, ok?" He said with an adorable frown on his face. Rhiddima sobered up, her laughter dying down, "you were sleeping." She said.

"Well obviously that's why I need you to wake me up!"He snapped angrily, "phirse uss Shilpa ki saamne-"

"Armaan." Rhiddima interrupted his rant before he started, "I'm pretty sure you're supposed to be on duty right now, so go be a doctor. And Armaan, you're twenty two, I think you can handle getting up by yourself, you're a big boy."

"But MOM!"

"No buts! Go."

She watched endearingly as he pouted, angrily stuffed on his lab coat and grabbing everything else, stalked out of her cabin, still grumbling. On the way, Armaan passed his dad, who guffawed at the expression on his son's face. Siddhant walked into Rhiddima's cabin, carefully shutting the door and turning to face her, "he got to chudailllll" he squealed like a teenage girl, doing a little jig.

"Siddhant you're acting twelve." She said.

"You're just worried you're going to loooooose." He said, grinning, "Remember now, vacation in Mauritius for two weeks, no less, can be more, but no less."

"Sid-" She said warily as he approached her.

"You agreed." He interrupted; he gave her a quick peck and pranced out. "Batameez!" she whispered at his receding back. He stuck him head back in, "I heard that Mrs. Chudail Batameez Modi."

"SID!"

"Bye!"

TEN MONTHS LATER

Armaan walked up and down the hospital corridors, checking for his parents, where had they gone? He finally found him sister, drinking coffee with her fianc, Yuvraj Dev, and their cousin Niti, "Di! Where are mom and dad?"

Ashi set her mug down, looking him up and down, he looked plain frantic! "Well'mom headed home a couple minutes ago looking mad, therefore reasonably, dad should be heading home with her or after her apologizing profusely for something or another. Basically you should try the house."

"Thanks." he said as he rolled his eyes, stalking out, she couldn't have just said the house first thing.

Ashi and Niti burst out giggling at his receding back, Yuvi shook his head, it had taken him long enough.

''.

Armaan stood respectfully in front of his parents, looking nervously at both of them, "Mom," he began, "Dad. I have something to tell you. Well ask you."

Siddhant leaned back in his seat, his curious but calm exterior covering up his real feelings. Inside he was jumping up and down shouting "MAURITIUS HERE I COME!"

Beside him Rhiddima sighed silently, already calculating when they could take their vacation without conflicting with any major cases. And Armaan would be staying alone for two weeks; she should get a house sitter'

Armaan cleared his throat again, making certain he had full attention from his parents. "I'umm' we' Shilpa. I-"

Siddhant rolled his eyes impatiently, "just say it, son." Rhiddima nodded in agreement.

"ShilpaandIloveeachotherandwewouldliketogetmarried! Oh, and couldyoutalktohermomandmeandad?" He finished anxiously

Rhiddima and Siddhant exchanged glances, unable to hold it in any longer Siddhant jumped up and gave Armaan a bear hug, yelling, "MAURITIUS HERE I COME BABY!!!!!!! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!" he pulled back, still holding onto an amazingly confused Armaan, "and just in time too! This is when the water is perfectly clear and the coconuts are ideal!"

"Wha'"

Rhiddima explained, "Your father and I made a bet. He said that you would fall in love with Shilpa, and I said he couldn't be sure. So we bet on it, and his consolation prize is a trip to Mauritius. Congratulations by the way."

"You knew?"

"It was obvious beta." She replied, Siddhant was still busy dancing excitedly, but managed to calm down enough to join the conversation.

"You see, your mother got me arrested um... two? Yes two times, or was it three?" He said, "Not to mention beat me up any chance she got. We hated each other. And if you ask your Uncle and Aunt, both sets, they'll tell you they hated each other too!" he laughed suddenly, turning to Rhiddima he asked, "you remember our fifth anniversary? When you all got drunk? Bhabhi spent the whole elevator ride telling bhai she would kill him haha!"

Armaan stared at his parents, feeling aghast. Everything just going too fast for him to grasp. They knew? Arrested? Fights? And wait did dad just say mom got drunk? "What?"

Rhiddima glared at her husband, "Nothing. So anyway, you want us to talk to the Malhotras? No problem beta!" She gave her son a hug, "I'm proud of you."

"Thanks'"

Siddhant gave Armaan another hug, "Way to keep Modi tradition son!"

Armaan stared after them open mouthed as they headed to the kitchen, his father's arm already snaking around his mother's shoulders. They were one unpredictable couple. And then he realized what had just happened. HE WAS GETTING MARRIED!

'..

Siddhant and Rhiddima grimaced together as a shout erupted from the living room, followed by a loud thud. Yup, it had just hit him what he had asked for. They smiled at each other fondly, her head rested on his shoulder as they watched the sun set from their kitchen window. They would go check to make sure he hadn't hurt himself, but not now' in a while. For now it was current Mr. and Mrs. Modi time.

'''

"Mrs. Malhotra! How are you?" Rhiddima headed determinedly towards the woman who was slightly older than her.

"Mrs. Modi! I am fine, thank you so much for inviting my husband and me." The woman replied with a smile.

Rhiddima gave her a sweet smile, it couldn't hurt to talk up the mother, 'baap tho bilkul gabbar ki tarah khada hai' she thought before replying, "It was our pleasure. Siddhant is around here somewhere I do believe."

"No, no it's alright; he must be busy with all these preparations going on."

"O please, this has all been ready since last night; I don't know where he keeps on disappearing to'"

Her eyes scanned the room again, passing over, and then returning to fall on the side door directly across from her. The Malhotra's thankfully had their backs to that door; otherwise they would have surely seen Siddhant and Armaan Modi crouched beside it, peeking around the corner to observe her conversation.

"Mrs. Modi-" Mrs. Malhotra continued.

"Please call me Rhiddima," Rhiddima replied distractedly,

"Yes, Rhiddima, you can call me Anita, you have two children right? Armaan and'"

"Ashita, yes, two. But sometimes I feel like I have three," smiling amiably she returned her attention back to the Malhotra's again, Anita smiled back at her tightly; she had a gabbar of a husband, poor thing. Behind them, Armaan and Siddhant still crouched, now seemingly bickering.

"I'll be right back," Rhiddima said to the Malhotra's, Anitah smiled, Mr. Malhotra's grave face didn't change.

''....


"What are you doing?"

Siddhant and Armaan froze, their eyes widened as they realized they had been caught; looking down like meek children they straightened up. Siddhant dared to look up first, he had no choice, Armaan was already trying to hide behind him. "Rhi-Rhi-Rhiddima, we'"

She cocked her eyebrow questioningly, "we?"

Armaan rolled his eyes at his stuttering father, pushing him out of the way, Armaan asked the question running in both their minds, "what did the Malhotras say?!"

"Nothing. We barely talked."

"MOM!"

Rhiddima shook her head, and then slipped out the door, shutting it gently. "Look I refuse to just march up and ask for their daughter's hand!"

"Why?" Armaan whined.

Rhiddima's eyes turned to slits, "humph! You know what! Just do it yourself!" With a stomp of her feet she turned and walked off.

"Great." Siddhant said, "thank you," glaring at his son before he set off after her, "Rhiddima!"

'''

Siddhant cleared his throat before reaching for the microphone; he grinned at the score of eyes focused on him. "HELLO!" he shouted out.

"HEYYYYYY," a sea of voices, both young and old screamed in reply.

"Are we having fun?!?"

"YESSSSSSSSSSS," the crowd smiled at him gleefully.

"Good," he grinned back, "as you all know, this is a really exciting week for us." The crowd roared in reply. "It's Armaan's birthday!" the room erupted in applause.

"And, the interns have all taken their exams'" the room was filled with sighs of relief. "So, Let's Celebrate!"

The room was filled with cries of excitement; the Modi's were known for throwing fun, exciting parties, it was practically a rule that everyone had to have fun. The dance floor was constantly covered with groups of friends, both and young and old, the tables littering the hall were filled with friends and family who sat enjoying each other's company. Siddhant, Atul, Yuvraj and Abhimanyu had each shown up early, along with Rhiddima, Anjali, Naina, and Nikkita. They were soon joined by Ashi, Geet, Niti, and Nupur, all escorted by Niti and Nupur's older brother Aarvind who, taking after his dad, Abhi, was the universal older brother. Now it was time for the younger guys to make their entrance, Armaan had left earlier without one. Sid and Abhi appeared next to their respective wives, "where are the boys?" Sid asked, "they should've been here ages ago!"

"They wanted to be fashionably late I guess Uncle," Nupur thought out loud. Siddhant grinned at his favorite niece, "Well they must be the hottest things on the market!"

Rhiddima, already enveloped in the crook of his arm, laughed softly. Ashi rolled her eyes, "Bro probably lost his keys again," she said.

"Or they got lost and refused to ask for directions," Geet said adding her input.

"God, this is just embarrassing, it's a party for Armaan and the interns, where are half of them?" Abhi groaned.

As if in answer to his question, the double doors to the hall swung open, to revealing a dashing Armaan, dressed to kill in a light yellow shirt covered with a black sports jacket. It sounded like it would make him look like a bumblebee, but this was Armaan Modi, he could do anything. That and he really liked the color yellow'

Behind him emerged Maan, seeing him looking just as dashing in his signature black and black mix, his mother Anjali awed. Behind Maan came Mayank and Yuvi, as usual wrestling with each other. Noticing the open door they stood up, Mayank straightening his red button up shirt and Yuvi fixing his almost identical dark blue one. Mayank's mother Naina doted on her son and nephew, and always ended up shopping for both of them.

The guys sauntered over, Armaan's eyes scanning the room for Shilpa, Mayank winking slyly at Nupur, and Maan smiling sweetly at a grinning Geet. Yuvi, who refused to let his guard down till he was officially married, went over to Siddhant and Rhiddima first, seeing this Ashi giggled. The group conversed for a while but soon separated, everyone had their own agendas.

'''.

The partygoers stopped moving as suddenly the lights cut off, visible in the room was only a spotlight, shining on a seemingly petrified Shilpa who shot constant glances to her parent's faces. Her father did not look happy. That did not deter the man of the hour however, Armaan strode confidently towards her, signaling the DJ and he held out his hand to her.

She looked at it hesitantly, taking another glance around before moving to clasp it. He smiled reassuringly at her, giving it a gentle squeeze as he pulled her towards him. His parents weren't going to do it, no problem, 'he would do it Armaan style,' he thought as he winked with devilish charm.

Tum Jo Mile: [Thank you VIDYA for the awesome VM 😛

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aY4LQTggGng

The hall erupted with applause as the song ended, and Armaan and Shilpa stood alone in the center of the dance floor, eyes refusing to part. Siddhant and Rhiddima's eyes flew from the couple to Shilpa's parents, then back to them again. Holding each other closer they rushed towards the young couple. And just in time too, Mr. Malhotra had just taken a deep breath, there was barely a second left before the screaming started when Siddhant yelled, "I CAN EXPLAIN!"

By God, I know you wish you knew the rest of that story. But that it just that, another story, not this one. In this one, you are now free to assume everyone lived happily ever after and Siddhant and Rhiddima aka Siddhima grew old together. Because Fate can be Cruel, but it's not inhumane, only humans are. We always have the ability to choose our paths, it's just sometimes we don't see it. Fate just gives us our options, it's up to us to choose them. Now, ending on a happy not, take this really pretty song they ruined in DMG and imagine our beautiful couple to it.

Bheegi Si, Bhaagi Si:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kh6F_bm9bEE

For clarification, [Sheena 15 was too much, poor Nikki would be nonexistent]

THE KIDS:

Siddhima: Ashi Armaan

AN: Arvind Nupur Niti

YuNa: Geet Mayank

AA: Maan





FOR AR FANS:

Please read the note before this post before bashing.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1352602/siddhima-ar-ff-fate-o-s-c-fate-completed?pn=13

Edited by malluangel - 14 years ago
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so i like read half of your *** must say its not that badly written but NEXT TIME YOU *** SAY ITS AN AR FF MAKE SURE IT *** ACTUALLY HAS AR! seriously i feel like giving you a tight slap, dont give a shit about it having sadma or wateva but really pissed that you would do something liked that, its like hey come read this, it has AR but it only shows SR's scenes and completely butchers AR's LOVE and then on top of that ARMAAN IS KILLED OFF!😡 it's like rubbing it in AR fans faces,In the future if your gonna write this kind of FF make sure it only says sidma FF not AR cause you can actually offend/ Mislead someone (like me). good bye and good ridence.🤬
Viewbie's Note: Inappropriate language and bashing.
Edited by SuhanaSafar - 14 years ago
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superb ff...i loved the tamil poem so much KissesKissesKisses




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Originally posted by: malluangel

i havent updated in about two weeks, i have an explanation...

my teachers hate me. and im horrible at time management

and i was having writers block.

and all the armaan sid scenes in real life dmg were sending me through emotional turmoil!!!!!!!

anyway, i finally updated, i hope u guys didnt expect this [below] to happen...

also: thank you guys sooo much for all the comments, you have no idea what it does to me. i cud cry, really. and it keeps me writing. thank youuu


NEXT PART 8:

Siddhant:

'What are you doing?!?!?!

STOP! Stop this instant. Turn around and pretend you didn't see him. Turn around right now. Siddhant Modi, what the hell do you think you are doing? Sid you are dead, you are committing suicide. What are you going to do? What are you going to say? Turn around and pretend not to notice him.

Armaan:

RUN!

Get up and run. This moment.

Stupid legs, why aren't they working?

Armaan he's gonna kill you. Why the hell did you come back? He's gonna kill you. You're gonna die.

Well it's better than dying alone'

You are alone.

Great then! You can die alone.

Siddhant:

There's still time. Stop feet stop!

By the way, what are you going to say to him?

"Hi my name is Siddhant Modi, I married Rhiddima Gupta. Yea, that Rhiddima Gupta, the one you supposedly loved more than your very own life. Yup, I married her. What? Oh yes! I did know about you, I'm just the idiot that thought you were gone for good. My married life? O it was fine! Until I saw you creeping out of our bushes this morning. Yup' don'tcha love life?

Armaan:

Up and atem'! Right now, come on, let's move. You're not talking to him. Once a coward always a coward. Let's go, come on! GET UP! UP YOU IDIOT UP!!! What would you say, huh? Hi, I'm Armaan, I love Rhiddima. Now you love Rhiddima. We should be friends. The I Love Rhiddima Club. Yay! We could be so happy together huh Sid?



how ridiculous wud i be to say that thats some of the best that ive ever writeen 😆


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Posted: 14 years ago
kayso surprisingly n shockingly I just found this when I was uhhh admiring😛

so WOW!!! u wrote this n u never told me about it😡 ok maybe we iddn't knw each other bck then...no wait yes we did🤔 oh yeah we definitely did and yet you never told me about it😡😛

okay all i gotta say is LOVED it <333
you made m feel bad for Armaan <---see i'm using his name😲😆
kayso yeah u made me feel bad for him and I really hate you for that 😳😆
LOVE LOVE LOVEDDD SR in this FF...always wanted to see them just like this 😳
oh n one more thing the epilogue ya I can't imagine SR as oldies with him as their son so i'm just gonna ignore that entire part😛 or just the part with SR as oldies you know I was trying so hard to imagine Wahi n Jenny in tht avatar
ya so basically I LOVED it <3333

oh and another thing...this the first FF I have read which seemed like a musical more than a FF😛
I wuuuvvv you my jiggary pooh muahzz 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

kayso surprisingly n shockingly I just found this when I was uhhh admiring😛


so WOW!!! u wrote this n u never told me about it😡 ok maybe we iddn't knw each other bck then...no wait yes we did🤔 oh yeah we definitely did and yet you never told me about it😡😛

okay all i gotta say is LOVED it <333
you made m feel bad for Armaan <---see i'm using his name😲😆
kayso yeah u made me feel bad for him and I really hate you for that 😳😆
LOVE LOVE LOVEDDD SR in this FF...always wanted to see them just like this 😳
oh n one more thing the epilogue ya I can't imagine SR as oldies with him as their son so i'm just gonna ignore that entire part😛 or just the part with SR as oldies you know I was trying so hard to imagine Wahi n Jenny in tht avatar
ya so basically I LOVED it <3333

oh and another thing...this the first FF I have read which seemed like a musical more than a FF😛
I wuuuvvv you my jiggary pooh muahzz 🤗



*still not believing you never ever read this before*
OMFG! I SHOULD MAKE BHOOT A MUSICAL!!!!! *excited*

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Inspired by the timeless Bollywood tale "Raja Hindustani", this story unfolds in the snowy embrace of Manali, a free-spirited taxi driver and a...

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