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Posted: 15 years ago
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3rd part.

Ammy: what wow,he is just a simple one.


Nikki: that's what I m saying . simple and smart.



Sir: so , I leave.

Ms rupa: so abhimanyu sit.


Abhi sits next to rids which again made ammy mad on him.


Ms rupa: so class meine apko ek case syudy ke liye diya tha.apne padha


Class: no mam.



Mam: good. Then be ready for punishment. If anyone gave the answer then might u all be speared .


Ammy: toh , koi tension nahi . nikki hai na( said giving 5 to atul an da smile to rids).


Mam: nikki , pura case explain karo .

Nikki : yes mam, well in this case the client is suffering from diebeties and had met with an accident in which his left leg got injured. Now as being sugar patient , it is difficult to treat him.

Mam: now , whats the solution.

Nikki: mam , its ovious that his leg need to be amputated( cut) as healing is difficult in his case.

Nikki was about to continue suddenly someone from back said: firstly we will provide antibiotic therapy to the patient and will check wheather it fasts the healing or not.

Nikki turned aside and found that it was abhi. Everyone else also looked at him. Which made abhi a bit confused

Mam: ok , finally someone other than nikki.so abhimanyu what do u think.

Abhi( stand): well, after therapy result it would be clear that wheather healing is possible or not.

Nikki got a bit jealous and immediately answered: mam , but its a long process will consume a lot of time.it might be risky
BR]Mam: got a point.

Abhi: mam, but we try , might it will save his leg.

Mam: good point.
N
ikki: saving leg is more, or saving life.[BR
]Abhi : do u even know how it feels to be amputated.

Nikki:atleast he would be alive.

Abhi: a life more worst than life.
The fight continued

Mam: will u both shut up.sit down and lets proceed to next.

Abhi and niki shared a stuned look with each other as wanted to kill each other .boyh sat in an angry way. Which was seen by all.
Nikki: samajhta kya khud ko, stupid.
Abhi: such a weird girl, no manners.
Rids and ammy try to make them cool.
After the class

Abhi and niki striked with each other on the door. And nikki's book just fall down . both gave each other a deadly look. Suddenly abhi picked the book and while giving it to nikki said: jab handle karni nahi aati toh carry mat karo.
Saying abhi was just about to pass but was stoped by nikki
Nikki:hello excuse me , shakal toh achi hai nahi,baat karni bhi nahi aati kya.
Abhi: tumhare bare mein mera yahi khayal hai.
Nikki:(making her face) hooooooo….., how day u say like that.
Abhi: muhh se
Nikki: jo hamesha bas marta hai,………. Brush karke aaya karo
Abhi got very angry
Abhi: god, u r impossible. Its worthless talking to u.
Abhi then just left and behind hem rids
Nikki:toh tumse baat hi kaun karna chahta hai………. U …..u… stupid , idiot , bevakufh, baatmiss aur…. Aur..
Ammy :aur who gaya ab hum chale, pehle toh baada aacha laga tha
Nikki:(angerly): aacha , my foot, I m not gana leave him.
At cafeteria
Rids and abhi were sitting there
Abhi: who pagal hai kya.
Rids: nahi, par class ki topper zarur hai.
Abhi: topper hai toh kyat oh jo chahegi who kahegi. Stupid.
Rids: who achhi hai,bas thora bachpana hai
Abhi(loudly):thoda. Bilkul bachi hai aur pagal bhi aur yeh anjali unke saath kyun hai
Rids: bhai, who saab dost hai
Abhi gave her a sturn look.
Rids:ok sorry. No bhai. Just chill now
After a silence
Abhi: aaj itne time baad college mein ane juniors ke saath bhedhna. It was weird( there was apain in his eyes). But it all was my fault.
Rids: it was not. It was just an unfourtunate incidence. Come on it is just for 5 months.
Abhi: ya
Just then the buddies gang arrived. Anjali thinking of introducing abhi to everyone said lets sit with rids listening this ammy was really excited. But seing abhi ,nikki refused. Eceryone other than niki join them
Abhi: kya hua woh pagal kahan hai
Ammy(got angry): listen woh nikki hai , my BB. SO WACTH IT OUT
Abhi: toh usko samjha dena
Ammy got angry.just then ridhima said : plz now u don't start.
Abhi:(making face): bye everyone.
Abhi was just leaving na dagain he striked with nikki who was carrying coffe in her hand. And coffe was on abhi's face and shirt. And nikki started laughing and after that found that it was abhi.
Abhi:ouch…… (he looked at the person) u .
Nikki: ya me.
Abhi: oh shut up.why did u did this
nikki : meine janmuch ke nahi kiya. Galti ho gayi
abhi : oh really, I know it was intentionally.
Their voices raised and everyone in caf was looking at them and alltha other(4-ammy, rids, atul , anjali) said: oh no .
Nikki: intentionally………. (nikki throwed the remaining coffe on abhi and said) now that's intentionally.
Abhi (shoutingly):Aaaah…………… I m not gana leave u
Nikki: pehle pakad ke to dikhao.
Abhi started chasing each other. Just then the 4 tried to control them.
Abhi: leave mein, aaj ise zabak sikhake hi rahonga.
Nikki( conrtolled by armaan) : agar ma ka dhudh piya hai toh haath toh laga ke dhikha .
Abhi(in more anger): u r dead today.
Suddenly his phone ranged and it was DR SIR on it and he immediately went to attend his call.
Niki: dekha daar gaya.
Everyone laughed.
After sometime in basketball ground
Armaan arrived ther and saw abhi practicing there. Which set the floor for their fight as it was ammy ttime for practice.
Ammy (coolly) : dude, its my time.
Abhi: what
Ammy(angrly) : listen very carefully, its my time, mein daily isi time par karta hoon alright.pehle hi tum nikki se panga le chuke ho ,mujhse mut lena. Warna
Abhi: (in his usual sadu tone):warna, kya karo ge
Just at the moment , when ammy tooked a step towards abhi principal ARRIVED .
Sir: hey u both, well ammy , abhi is a good basketball player. U should take him in the team and I want daily practice. Ok.
Both (looking at each other angrly) :yes sir.
Sir: abhi will u just come with me for a talk.
Abhi and sir wnt away and ammy started practicing.
Sir: dr modi.
Abhi:sir plz , no dr.
Sir: I m sorry.dr sir ka phone aaya tha aur unhone kaha hai ki aap ciricular activity mein bhi part lenge.
Abhi( making face): as he say.

Edited by richasharma0991 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 4
AT MALHOTRAS RESIDENCE
NIKKI AT HER BED

NIKKI:(remembering about her fight)today was yhe worst day of my life I met that idiot. God use maaza chakhane mein meri help karo. Good night.
Ammy at his bed

Ammy: (remembering about rids and asmani in back ground today I met her.lov u god . good night.
At rids and abhi home
Abhi: (sadly)pata nahi yeh punishment kab khatam hogi.( suddenly reminds nikki) oh god kya pagal hai who. Bechara jo use jehlega. Good night.
Rids: god give power to abhi bhai . and aaj who ammy how flirty he was.
Next day in college
Both abhi and rids were wearing same colour red. They were already in the cclasss when budies gang arrived. Nikki saw abhi and turned her face and sit, while ammy was stearing rids and sit.
In the class both abhi and nikki were dying to give answer better than each other.suddenly ammy said nikki: from today red is my fav colour
Nikki: why.
Ammy pointed his finger to rids but as abhi was in front nikki thought that it was abhi.
Nikki( shoutingly): what
Everyone in class was looking at her only
Mam: nikki.. what happen
Nikki: n… no…. no mam nothing.
Mam then sit.
Nikki: ammy yu pagal toh nahi hao gaya( slowly)
Ammy : ha….. uske liye
Ammy: should I ask for a date.
Nikki(shoutingly): what……….
Mam: nikki…… if one more time u will be out of the class
Nikki(sadly) : yes mam.
Ammy( with no change in reaction): nikki copy pen de
He write a message for rids and gave it to nikki to hand over to har and nikki thinks that it wsa for abhi. And by this she was just about to cry
Nikki( raising her hand) : mam , can I leave the class.
Mam: r u not well,
Nikki: no mam, par kis aur ki tabyat zaarur kharab ho gayi hai.
Nikki in a very sadly leaved the class and everone was surprised by this behavior of her
Nikki outside in caf
Nikki:(to herself)how could this happen……… ammy toh normal hai who toh ladhkiyon ko like karta phir…………… kahin who girls se bore toh nahi hao gaya.( keeping her hand on her haed) oh…. God. Yeh kya ho gaya.(changing her tone)yeh sab supreme court ki wajha se hua hai wrna mera ammy toh normal tha.
After a deep thinking
Nikki: pyar toh kisi se bhi ho saakta hai na . jaise , mujhe hai apne teddy se. ( angrily) par who abhi manyu . nikki its ok apne friend ke liye yeh bhi.
Nikki saw abhi and immediately she ran to him with awhite rose in her hand.
Nikki:abhimanyu
Abhi(turning): tum……….. ab kya girana hai
Nikki( very sweetly gave him the rose): I m sorry .
Abhi(stranglily) : tum dikh toh ho na.
Nikki: ya , who tumse khuch kehna tha.
Abhi : kya
Nikki( hasitatinly in one go): ammy tumhe like karta hai aur tumhare saath date pe jana chahta hai. Plz na mat kehna .
Abhi( shockingly) : what………. Tum pagal ho. Aur tumne kya mujhe …. Mujhe………….. who( lowering his hand) samjha hai.
Nikki: nahi…. Dekho , ammy waisa nahi hai , who toh bas tumhe like karta hai.
Abhi: toh( raising his eye)
Nikki: dekho usne tumhare liye letter bhi bheja hai.
With opening the letter she came to knew that it was for rids
Nikki( with a big smile): that means ammy is normal.
Abhi: normal…….. what normal.
Nikki realizing the situation she immediately change her tone
Nikki: tum kisi se pyar se baat nahi kar sakte hamesha saade hue rehte ho, aah………… kal se soch rahi thi ki tumhe kya name do, got it MS SADU.
ABHI: KYA
Nikki: kya, kya.. kya laga rakha hai
Abhi: are bade ajibh ho yaar tum, kabhi pyar se baat karte ho toh kabhi.
Nikki: zaada confuse maat ho. Mazaak tha, april fool.
Abhi: jan mein april fool.
Niki(making face): haa………. Kyunki fool ko kabhi bhi fool banaya ja sakta hai , bluddyfool
Abhi : kya
And again both were in big fight.
Nikki in ground with ammy told ammy the whole incident.
Ammy: nikki ,( shoutingly) tu pagal hai.
Nikki: sorry, but I will make u for this
Ammy( angrily) : aacha kaise
Nikki: rids ko tere liye pata kar.
Both th friends join the hand and decided to follow rids today.
In parking
Ammy and nikki found rids waiting for some one at that moment abhi arrived there in his car . rids sit in the car and went with abhi.
BB( AMMY AND NIKKI) started following them. The car stoped and both went inside a house. BB recognized that it was anjali's house.
Ammy: yeh abhi inke ghar mein kya kar raha hai .
Nikki : pata karna padega .
Ammy : kaise.
Nikki( in a filmy tone): jab ghee sidhi ungali se na nikle toh ungali tedhi karni padhti hai.
Both :hmmmmm.
In the house
Knock
Abhi: I get it.
Abhi opens the door and finds nikki there.
Abhi: tum
Nikki: haan mein.
Abhi (rudely): tum yahan kya kar rahi ho.
Nikki: relax sadu, anjali se milne aayi thi.
Abhi(annoyingly): sadu……… huh. Anje ghar pe nahi hai , aur late aayegi. So u can leave.
Nikki: coffe, ek cup coffe
Abhi: coffe…..
Nikki: haan mujhe coffe pini hai
Abhi: coffe , khatam ho gayi.
Niki: toh tea, I'll hav tea
Abhi: tum kitni besharam ho .
Nikki:who toh mein hoon, chalo kisi ko tea banana ke liye bolo kyunki mujhe tumpe trust nahi hai. Are , mere latttest dhushman ho tum
Abhi( at last shouted): koi, is ladki ko chai dedo, plz.
Rids come out
Rids: what happen bhai.
Nikki: bhai matlab, brother( in a funny tone),bondhu. I m done
Abhi: done, with what.
Nikki: with mr sadu, bye , tc , SD .
OUTSIDE
NIKKI: buddy , who uska bhai hai.
Ammy: kya
Nikki: haan




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Posted: 15 years ago
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OK GUYS NEXT PART BE UPDATED ON .
ENJOY AND IF LIKE IT COMMENT.
Edited by richasharma0991 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Richa!!! 😃 Awesome updates sweety!! Really enjoyed the part where Niki thought the letter was for Abhi! 🤣 and Abhi and Niki parts were 😆 😆 😆 Thank you soo much!! Really enjoyed reading all the parts! Can't wait for the next part!! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really enjoyable Richa...nice work! I just loooove AN in fight mode!
Keep it up and update sooonnnn!!!! *hugs*
Achha btw, just one teeny tiny lil point...you sometimes write in SMS lingo dear, it's hard to understand...could you write the full words please?
But overall, I read all the parts and they're great! And you know the best part? You update so sooonnn!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey nice part richa.
Loved Abhi Nikki first meeting.Very well.
How Nikki misunderstood Ammy's letter its awesome.
So there something fishy about Abhi.Hummm

Wait for next.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yes richa , the last part was d best sply nikki both when she gets sad in the class, proposes to abhi on amis behalf n the way she drops into his house brilliant!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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THANKS FOR UR COMMENTS . WILL BE ABLE TO UPLOAD NEXT PART IN APRIL ONLY . BUT HERE ARE 2 PROMOS
PROMO OF PART 5:
NIKKI REMINDING ABHI'S WORDING,
(:ABHI: I DONT BELIEVE THIS NIKKI, KI M TUM COLLEGE MEIN YEH HUMOUR SPREAD KARDO GI KI MEIN EK FAILURE HUAN.)
NIKKI: MEINE KUCH JAN MUCH KAR NAHI KIYA GOD AB MR SADU KO KAISE SORRY KAHUAN.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PROMO OF PART 6TH
MR RUPA: ABHIMANYU TUMHE COLLEGE KE PLAY MEIN PART LENA HAOG.
ABHI: MAM MENE KABHI DANCE NAHI KIYA.
MS RUPA: DONT WORRY TUMHE TUMHARI PARTNER SIKHA DEGI.
ABHI: WOH KAUN HAI.
MAM: NIKITA
ABHI: WHAT.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey just read the promo 2 gd LOL dw we all can wait till April and is it ight if u add me 2 ur pm list thanks

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