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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Richa, update is very nice and cute, as usual.. Entire 'spot light falling' scene was very descriptive.. Loved the way Abhi conveyed her care and fear for Nikki and the way he held her. It was so cute..
College Drama scene and dialogues are very well written.. enjoyed reading Rahul- Anjali nok johk.. Reminds me of KKHH.. One of my most fav movie.. Good selection of songs.. I particularly love 'Hulchul huwi zara shor hua.. Beautiful song..

Awesome update.. Waiting for more.. Continue soon dear 😃


Edited by namy_an - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

woaah richi rich u bak 😃 🤗

welcome welcome dear..
hope ur fine shine..
now to update..
woaah totally cool yar..
i mean the spotlite scene waz really nice, him helping her reminded me of diwali scene..
awesome..
they conveyd all ther love care fear need through ther eyes.. n i just lov this about AN!
truely amazing part.. love it..
n the story ur writing on anjali n raool *ma accnt 😉😆* iz so difficlt task gal..
i mean to explain hoe the met, first fight then soft corner , fake attitude, open enemies but in reality care 4 eachothr, help eachothr, know eachothr wery well, nok jhok.. its really too cool.. really wana c how ur gona proceed wid the scene.. n then how they wil come to the stage when they finally understand they lov eacothr n then confession.😃
wow . i agen sey its realyy diff to write yaar but ur goin great..👏
ur ff so entertaining..⭐️⭐️
n watever mitzi sed i completely agrree wid that..😃
toatally supercool update..
love it to the core..⭐️
keep it up dear..
n once agen welcome bak😃
tak cr...alwaz!
regardz
-cherry😳
Edited by cherry_an - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
n ya thanx 4 providing vidz..😃
totally cool!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_an

woaah richi rich u bak 😃 🤗

welcome welcome dear..
hope ur fine shine..
now to update..
woaah totally cool yar..
i mean the spotlite scene waz really nice, him helping her reminded me of diwali scene..
awesome..
they conveyd all ther love care fear need through ther eyes.. n i just lov this about AN!
truely amazing part.. love it..
n the story ur writing on anjali n raool *ma accnt 😉😆* iz so difficlt task gal..
i mean to explain hoe the met, first fight then soft corner , fake attitude, open enemies but in reality care 4 eachothr, help eachothr, know eachothr wery well, nok jhok.. its really too cool.. really wana c how ur gona proceed wid the scene.. n then how they wil come to the stage when they finally understand they lov eacothr n then confession.😃
wow . i agen sey its realyy diff to write yaar but ur goin great..👏
ur ff so entertaining..⭐️⭐️
n watever mitzi sed i completely agrree wid that..😃
toatally supercool update..
love it to the core..⭐️
keep it up dear..

i loved ur comment cherry . and thank u sooo much for this .
and thank u to all who liked it .
now i will try to complete next ASAP
n once agen welcome bak😃
tak cr...alwaz!
regardz
-cherry😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Richaa...waiting for ur update. :(
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ANrucha

Richaa...waiting for ur update. :(


Yup, me too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ppl well i m back and i know who all liked this ff will be ready with thier chappal and jootas for me but what can i say i m ready for that and i m really sorry there is an explanation but let it be . but the think is i m working on the next part and will update it sooon ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Richa :)))
Waiting for next update.. :P

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