dil dosti pyar - Page 5

heyy dear

reaaly funny and innovative richa great going...

i know , i m very bad in writting english. so a big sorry , i promise that next time i will improve it. i had corrected my mistake of 5th part . thanks for ur comments.

but ur a great writer ... i guess ur just lazy about editing ... like me :)

Loved parts 5 & 6!!! Can't wait to read the next part! 😃 Loved the precap!

hi people here is the next part.
and mihrii for you i had started writing in english.
hope u all like it

Part7
At malhotra house
Nikki and armaan planning that how ammy can impress ridhima.
Nikki: u need to change ur self.
Ammy: what ! and why.
Nikki( after thinking a lot): u have to become a good boy in front of ridhima as a girl like her like decent guys , u know .
Ammy: I didn't get it .
Nikki:(frustratingly): u will not even get it. Ridhima is a simple girl and she will obviously prefer a simple guy. So from now onwards u need to be simple.
Ammy: (confused): ok………. As u say.
Nikki: good boy. Now its time for make over.
Ammy: god please save me .
After the make over nikki makes ammy stand in front of mirror.
Ammy(shocked): what is this. I look like an idiot with this simple shirt and pant, oily combed hairs, yak…………….
Nikki: (strickly) u want ridhima or not.
Ammy: ok as u say, but what to do now.
Nikki:(keeping har arm on his shoulder ) just follow me.
Both leave for college . in college. No one islooking at ammy as it use to happen every time. suddenly he strikes with atul.
Atul: oh…….. sorry yaar.
Atul was leaving the place after saying this. Suddenly something goes to his ears.
Ammy: champ.
Atul: hi ammy( he looked for ammmy here and there but was not able to find him) where are you.
Ammy( angrily and in a loud tone) I am standing infront of you.
Atul( after looking):Aah………………….. what happened to you.
Suddenly anjali and rhidhima arrived there. and anjali recognized him.
Anjali: ammy, what happened to you.
Ammy didn't know what to say. Then he reminds nikkiis word and to make him good in front of them he started as.
Ammy: ( in a filmy style)what, what happened to me .
Anjali: why did u changed ur style.
Ammy: because, now I have understood that clothes doesn't matter.its what u are from inside .right na(he asked ridhima ,while looking in her eye)
Rids:(after few seconds) ya, it doesn't matter what u are wearing. A good decision( she passed him a smile and sits on the chair.
Ammy: she smiled at me.
Atul: this is nikki's idea na.
Armaan still smiling.
Nikki and abhi scene.
Abhi reached the rehearsal hall .where
abhi saw nikki dancing alone on mar jawan(contempery style
abhi liked her and found it beautifull and gracefull.
Abhi after watching clapped for her.nikki find abhi there.
Abhi: you dance really well.
Nikki( with a strange look): is I am day dreaming mr sadu is appreciating me.
Abhi:(with his attitude) if someone have talent ,I always praise it.
Nikki:good, nice quality. Practice after college timing hai ok.
Abhi: till that time I am basket ball ground. Call me.
Nikki: hello, is I am your slave .
Abhi: I mean phone.
Nikki:but I don't have your number.
Abhi gave her his number where AN have a deep eyelock. Abhi leaves after wards.
Nikki:attitude .
AR SCENE
Ammy talking to himself in corridorsand ridhima coming from front.
Ammy: I know , she must be finding me a stupid. This nikki na.
Ammy stikes with ridhima and all file in her hand falls .ammy find that it was ridhima.
Ammy: oh …… I am 0 sorry. I didn't mean to……..
Rids: its ok
Ammy help her.
Rids: are you ok.
Ammy: ya, why did you ask this .
Rids: nothing just like that.
Ammy: I know because of my new look na.
Rids: no . it was just that I found u a little worried.
Ammy: no u found me stupid na.
Rids: its not like that(smiling). Infact I like ur speech in the morning.
Ammy: mean you like simplicity.
Rids: yes, I like simplicity and honesty even more. I don't like fakeness.i think what ever u are be that only.
Ammy started thinking over what she find that he was too being fake to rids.
Rids: I should go home bye take care.


AN SCENE
NIKKI goes to basket ball to call abhi as her phone was not working.nikki found abhi there and watch him playing and found that he play really well. Suddenly abhi saw her.
Abhi: u would have called me I myself would come there .
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Nikki: we are doing a dance play so first of all the story.its a story of a girl and a boy who met in the college and then fall in love suddenly some misunderstanding is created between them .
Abhi: then
Nikki: its enough for today.
Abhi: ok
Nikki: what ok. Who will practice dancing.
Abhi: lets start.
Nikki: we will practice acting later on .ok , now start.
Nikki played the music and said :with this music we introduce them ok. now start 1 2 3 go.as the music played abhi started dancing. And he was doing well. When they completed their performance. It was time for the couple dancing. nikki played the music and found that abhi was not at all able to do it.
Nikki( shouted at abhi): whats your problem, why you are not doing it properly .huh.
Abhi( in little anger): I don't know couple dancing.
Nikki: shit, then how will u do it. ( pause) ok I will teach you first the basics of it, but its very late now. We will start it tomorrow( she takes a pause and think something) but , at one cost.
Abhi: what
Nikki:you hav to teach me basket ball.
Abhi: what
Nikki: don't you have any other word to show that you are shocked, with your mouth opened huh.
Abhi: but why me, armaan can also do that.
Nikki: do you agree or not.
Abhi: do I have anyother option.
Nikki(smilingly): good. Will you droop me.(before abhi could reply ) aah lets go.

Nice nice...Armaan going Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi way lol

hope u all are enjoying my FF. here is the 8th part

please tell me if i had done some mistake in writing so that i can improve it.