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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
hey richa....it was really nice.........
please do update soon and thanks for the pm...

Sheena

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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
woww Richu loved the first part 🤗 cute innocent Niki, love it , looking forward to AN's first meeting 😍 It wont be a cool 'takraar' but something worth watching for sure 😃- keep it up sweety ^^
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
nice part richa!!!

hope u update sooooon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Hey nice richa
Loved this total college atmosphere.
U very well potray the friendship of Ammy Nik.Loved their conversation like Buddy.
But sometimes i don't understand ur words dear.I m good at both Hindi n English.
Thanx for pm dear.See what happen next.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Richa sweety!!! 😃 Totally loved the first part!! 👏 👏 Niki is so funny making up excuses for Armaan! 😆 😆 I really can't wait till Abhi and Niki meet!! Awesome part sweety!! Looking forward to the next part!! 🤗 If you can please do PM me!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
thank u for all ur comments and i will pay attention on my words.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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2nd part

At principal office

Sir: ek college ki topper hai, toh dusra college captain. Lekin discipline mein dono zero.tumhare juniors tumse kya sikhenge.

Ammmy: sir aap kya hamesha discipline fa daNKA BAJATE RAHTE HO.

Nikki kiks him.

Niki :sorry sir.

Sir:make sure it wont repeat again. ok I m still very proud of u and hare Is armaans troffy for best player.

Both :thanku SIR.

SIR: by the way mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi about ABHIMANYU MODI.
.

AMMY: sir woh kaun hai.

Suddenly phone rings and principal ask them to leave from there.

At malhotras residence.

Ammy and nikki: mom we won.

Juhi( with a simple tone): congratulations.

Nikki:what happen mom r u ok.

Juhi:ya I m fine , how was the match .

Ammy :awesome like always, mom bahu t bhukh lagi hai .

Juhi:freash ho jao mein dinner lagati hoon.

On dinning table

Juhi( hesitatingly) :armaan, tumhare daD KA PHONE THA .

Armaan( stoped eating):toh……….. kya kaha mr malik ne.

Juhi:ur parents r getting divorce.

Lisening to this there was complete silence .

Ammy( little akwad) : I m done………. , ex cuse me.

After ammy leaved.

Juhi:mujhe nahi batana chahiye tha.

Nikki : mom I handle it.

AT TERRACE, AMMY WITH TEARS IN HIS EYE , NIKKI JUST COME AN D STAND BESIDE HIM.

Nikki saying anything just took out her phone and started texting a message. Message on Arrmaan's phone .

From nikki

"Sometime when the heart gives out a pensive cry,
A flueting ,caring look from loving friend
Could take all the sadness away."

is I m ur that friend.

Armaan immediately huged nikki.

Nikki: bol , what ever frustratation, just vomit it out.

Ammy: pichle 5 saalon se my parent r separated from each other. They don't even talk to each other. Because of which I don't talk to them. Monthly pocket money bhejh dete hai.
( a long pause) do they really care for me.

NIKKI:u know ammy , I don't know about other but for me and my family u r very special. Ur one of the most important person of my life.and I know I m too.

Ammy: no, u r the most important one.

Nikki:(with smile) I know. Unless u get ur miss perfect.

Both laughed

Nikki: but that dosen't mean han ki mein bet bhul gayi.

Ammy(wiping his tears): what bet.

Nikki: bet, ki agar tum match ke liye late ho gaye toh tum class attend karoge.

Ammy: kya.

Nikki: ha.

Ammy : that's not fair.

The scene was watched by juhi and she smiled and the buddies keep on fighting.

Next morning in college

Atul, nikki and anjali struggling to bring armaan in the class.

All: ammy class mein chal.


Ammy( shoutingly) : nahi……….. meri image ka kya hoga .

suddenly ammy run back and strike with a beautifull girl(ridhima). Ammy carefully holded her and safed her from falling.

While she was in his arms, ammy was totally losted in her. And in background was asmani rang ho…………….
AFTER SOMETIME
Ammy: gorgeous

Rids : excuse me

Ammy: yes mam

Rids: mujhe chodoge

Ammy: dil toh nahi kar raha

Rids: what

Ammy make her stand. Ridhima leave from there and saying hi to nikki anjali and atul ,seats on her place.

Ammy: u know her

Anjali: ammy ,she is my sis ridhima

Ammy: what ur sis

Suddenly teacher( Ms rupa) entered the class.and the whole class got settled. Ammy with nikki, anjali with atul and rids alone.

Ammy: nikki

Nikki: shhhhh. Mam class mein hai baad mein baat karange .

Suddenly principal entered the class.

Everyone: good morning sir .

Sir :good morning. I hav an anoucement to make, a new student is joining the college.

Everyone got shocked.

Sir: I know, what u all r thinking. In the mid of year. Actually due to personal reason who abhi tak join nahi kar paye. I hope u all will cooperate with him. So class welcome ur new batchmate ABHIMANYU MODI.

ABHI ENTERED THE CLASS AND EACH EYE WAS ON HIM.especially girls

ABHI: hi to all I m abhimanyu.

Nikki a bit got impressed by his looks and said woh which paid ammys attention on him.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
beautiful part sweety 😍 armaan and Ridz scene was cute, finally Abhi is there, cant wait for the next part, keep it up dear *hugz*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
it's good richa...👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Its nice Richa.Ammy Nikki share a special bond.
Like Ammy n Ridz first meet.Finally Abhi make his fist appearance.
Wait for next.Thanks for pm.

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