The Way I Loved You - Updt 11/6 Part 9 Pg.16 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing one.. awwww... lovely.. do cont.. thnks for da pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow! pree!
SUKRITI is geting married to RAJ !!!
gosh.. my real name is sukriti na.. so i got rily excited while reeding.. lol ammy will be my saala den...
chalo koi nai adha ghaarwala hi sahi.. lolz!!
rily nyc update....
nd since it wos my nme included i wos ol d mre interested tu reed it..
keep updting!! :D
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hey pree.........awesome update. loved every bit of it. 👏👏👏

good going girl😊😊
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ok people here goes the reply...
@ Snehu: yeah... i think i got a bit late! At what part did you get confused? thnx...
@ Maithz: oye no punishment... meri halat pe daya kar... doc told me not to sit on comp for too long! you'll have too much to YuNa in this ff!
@ bhootni: lol... me loving your new name mumma! deja vu... hmmm... 😉
@ sana: yup... 😉
@ Aish: yup... school's hectic! thnx
@ aky2401: hey... may i know your name... you know we have a cousin whom we call aky... i didn't think it'll confuse anyone... sry... n thnx....
@ borno: thnx darling...
@ kaaya: thnx...
@ sam: thnx...
@ suku: calm down... tht's gayatri's sis not u... thnx...
@ sujsub: thnx...
Part 9 - Together Forever

"Guys ab kya karna hai?" The gang with the couple was seated in the empty hall after all the guests had left.

"Tum logon ko ghar nahi jaana?" Su asked.

"Soch lo' phir jiju bhi chale jayenge!" Naina teased.

"Naina don't call me jiju' tum Raj bulati ho toh better sound karta hai."

"Raj'" Yuvi rolled his eyes. "Bhai ab to flirt karna band karo' aapki engagement ho gayi hai!" Yuvi showed him his hand that had the gold ring Su had made him wear that day.

"Guys antakshari khelein." Farhaan suggested.

"Great idea Farhaan!" Su said.

"Su abhi toh tum hum sabko bhagane waali thi!" Sam said.

"Shut up Sam' So let's make it girls versus boys!"

"Soch lo' haar jaogi!" Raj said.

"Huh' tumhare sapnon me!"

"Fine then'" The boys stood up and went to one side while girls went to one side. "Lekin karna kya hai?"

"Vohi jo karne me hume bada maza aata hai aur Yuvi ko nahi! Singing and Dancing!" Sam said.

"Kya! Dance!" Yuvi looked alarmed looking at Raj and Sid for help.

"Matlab tujhse toh hume koi help milegi nahi!"

"Haan dance! And we are gonna start cause ladies first!"

"That's not fair! Hamesha tumse hi shuruwat kyon? Now onwards we are gonna start!"

"Sid yeh toh parampara hai ke ladies first tum ise badal nahi sakte!"

"Kyun Di! Aap haar gayi?"

"Oh please' toh aisi baat hai! Theek hai hum tum boys par taras khake pehla mouka dehi detein
Hai. So Sid let's start with you."

"Me' okay!" Sid took one end of his odhani and threw it back n his other shoulder and sang.

Aaj kal ki ladkiyan kamal karati hai

kisiko dil mein rakhati hai aur kisipe marati hai'

The girls were getting annoyed with this song. Sid was singing louder and louder and was going towards the girls but Drish knew what to do, she caught Sid by his collar and pulled him towards the girls. Now the girls was holding him and he was trying to get out. All the boys came forward to help him but then Drish stated singing.

yeh ishq ishq chillate hai, oo yeh

yeh gali gali mandaratein hai, oo yeh

Shaadi ki dagar na jaye magar

yeh gore gore se choore'

Then somehow Sid managed to run away.

"Good work, Drish. Ise toh bas yahin sabak milna chahiye." Naina gave a high five to her sister. "Yeh ladke apne aap ko samajhte kya hai?"

"Huh! Mere bina hi shuru ho gaye!" A girl said as she came down the stairs.

"Anjie!" Su went forward and hugged her.

"Guys even we need a new strong player now. Yeh Anjie hume chodne nahi waali." Raj tells his teammates.

"AJ hai na!" Yuvi said.

"Lekin vo hai kahan!"

"Mai leke aata hu." Yuvi goes to look for him and finds him in the lawn talking to Dr. Shashank. He tries to explain him about the situation but he didn't seem interested in the competetion.

"Arey bhai aapke dost ki izzat ka sawal hai!" Yuvi drags him inside.

"Yuvi tum log mujhe faltu me kheench rahe ho!"

"Jaane de Yuvi kis se madat maang raha hai? Yeh mujhase panga nahi lega!" Anjie said winking at him and went away and he started singing.

Khambe jaisi khadi hai ladki hai ya chadi hai

shola hai phooljhadi hai patakhein ki ladi hai

ankhomein gussa hai

labope gali hai

dekho jara dekho yaara khudko samajhati hai kya'

Every guy cheered at AJ's entry!

Hey ma! mein kya karu is ladke ka?

Mai pyaar ki baatein karati hu aur yeh takarar ki?

Yeh ladka haye Allah kaisa hai deewana

kitna mushkil hai dekho isko samajhana

ke dheerein dheerein dil bekarar hota hai

hotein hotein hotein pyaar hata hai'

Anjie tried to flirt with him but no use. He went back to his team leaving her irritated.

"Arey ladke kaise hotein hai yeh hum tumko batatein hai'" Sam said starts dancing with Sid.

Hum dono hai alag alag hum dono hai juda juda

Ek duje se kabhi kabhi hotein hai hum khafa khafa

they both give each other high five.

"Oye apni itni taarifein na kar, kyunki'" Su said.

"Kyunki?" Raj asks.

Kyunki'

Jhoot bolein kawa kaate

Kaale kawe se dariyo

mein mayke chali jaongi tum dekhatein rahiyo'

"Aisi baatein na kiya karo jaan' hum toh mar hi jayenge!" Raj tried to flirt.

"Arey tum log kya jaano pyaar kya hota hai!" Naina said.

"Aisi baat nahi hai!" Yuvi replied.

pyaar mein sau uljhanein hai pyaar mat karana

jeene marane ka koi ikarar mat karana

pyar me yun to kasme aur waadein bhi hotein hai

lekin kasmein waadein jo maane woh baad maein rote hai'

Yuvi sang and Naina hit her head.

"Bas bahut ho gaya!" Suddenly Dr. Shashank who was standing at a corner and looking at them came there. Everyone looked at him thinking that suddenly what happened to him now cause till now even he was enjoying the naach - gaana. "Bahut ho gaya! Kabse main yahan baithke dekh raha hu' maine apni zindagi mein kabhi itna pagalpan nahi dekha!" Every one was now looking at ground. "Tum logon ko sharam aani chahiye, itna maaza kar rahein ho' aur mujhe chodkar!" Hearing that no one knew how to react. "May I join you?"

"Of course sir!" Raj said. "Ab aap agaye hai to hum hi jeetenge! Ab to hamari jeet pakki kyu sir?" Dr. Shashank and Raj went forward looking at each other and smiling. Every one was so curious to know what was going on just when Dr. Shashank began to sing.

gore gore mukhade'

Yuvi come in front of him - be my love'

Dr. Shashank pushed him behind - chand ke tukde'

Yuvi came in front once again - be my love'

Dr. Shashank glared at him - kaali kaali zulfein'

Yuvi shrugged and came forward again - be my love'

Dr. Shashank looked helpless - neeli neeli ankhein'

Yuvi gave a winning smile - be my love'

Dr. Shashank looks at his wife with a flirtatious smile - khwab dikhade raah bhulade hosh udade sabke'

Yuvi went to Su and took her hand bringing her in the middle of the room as Raj kept of glaring at him - chain mitade tan sulgade man me de masti ghol'

Both take the girls to the floor and dance with them - rock n roll soniye dole yeh man tere liye rock n roll soniye kabhi tu bhi toh mere sang dol'

"Naina ab teri baari hai' dikhade in ladkon ko!" Drish patted on her back.

"Haan Naina aaja maidan-e-jung me!" Sam said. She gave him a flirtatious lool as she tied her chunri at her waist and started dancing.

Piche piche aana mere chaal me na aye

Meri baaliya vekhada aayi ve

Mera long gawacha

Nigah marata aayi ve' mera long gawacha'

Every one was 'ghayal' cause of her lataka-jhatakas. She was looking like a Punjabi tikhi mirchi. Yuvi was looking with his mouth full open.

"Ab results ki baari hai. So Mom will decide since she wasn't participating!" Su said everyone agreed.

"I think it was a tie!" She said after a long pause and everyone cheered.

"Doctors aaj Dr. Keerti aapko aapki duties nahi de payengi." Dr. Divya came to them giving them a pleasant surprise. "She's not well."

"What happened Ma'am?"

"Nothing big doctors' just viral fever. She doesn't want to take risks wither present conditions though' she's given me the instructions for you all. You'll keep on continuing your last week's duties this week too." As Dr. Divya said that Naina and Yuvi grinned at each other remembering the fun they had with the kids the previous week.

"Guys aaj sham ko party hai and I want all of you there!" Sid said climbing on the bench in the locker room as everyone entered after the briefing.

"Party kis baat ki? Tere mom dad ne tere liye koi ladki dekh li kya?" Yuvi asked pulling Sid down from the bench.

"Hahaha' it wasn't funny Yuvi." Sid said trying to mock laugh. "Aaj Drish ki birthday party hai." Sid said in a matter of fact way.

"Happy Birthday Drish!" Sam said as he entered the locker room.

"Oye tujhe kaise pata?" Sid asked.

"Mujhe sab pata rehta hai Bhai!" Sam said. "And Drish Naina was right, mera bheja hua locket tumhe sach me bahut suit karta hai." He said indicating towards the small silver heart she was wearing.

"Yeh tumne bheja tha?" Drish asked shocked.

"Haan."

"Toh tum Naina ke vo Delhi vale friend ho jisne Naina ko uske birthday ke liye rok liya tha aur fir sorry bolne ke liye mujhe yeh locket bheja tha?"

"Haan baba!" Sam said as he took out his things from his locker.

"Happy Birthday Drish!" Yuvi said as he came forward to hug her and went to his locker to get his things out. He saw Naina taking her stuff out from her locker. "Happy Birthday Naina." He said lightly.

"Thanks Yuvi, lekin aaj mera birthday nahi hai." Naina said with a straight face trying not to laugh at the expression on Yuvi's face.

"Matlab?" Yuvi asked highly confused because as far as he knew the two girls were twins.

"Let me explain. Mujhe bhi yeh samajhne me bahut problem hue thi." Sam said coming to Yuvi while Sid nodded in agreement. "Drish was born on 13 September raat ko 11:58 pe aur Naina hue thi uske exact char minute baad yaani 14 September ko 12:02 pe. Toh yeh dono apna apna birthday alag alag din celebrate karti hai." Sam told Yuvi whose expression could not be deciphered.

"Happy Birthday Drish!" Gayatri said giving her a neatly wrapped box and hugged her.

"Yeh kya? Matlab tum aaj raat party me nahi aa rahi?" Drish said as she took the gift from her.

"Nahi humare papa nahi manenge."

"Kaise nahi manenge. Mai uncle se baat karunga. Vo nahi manenge toh sidhe Dadi se sifarish kara dunga but you don't worry you'll be coming with us!" Sam said as he side hugged Gayatri who smiled at him and left.

"Why not' Aaji hum dono ki baat zaroor sunengi." Sid said joining his brother.

I hope you guys like it...

Luv,

Pree!

Edited by PreeyaKSharma - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
This part was too good......full of dhamaal and masti......loved it....lolz.....and the antakshari part......its was also funny....lolz......continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
woooowwwwww....preeeee.....*hugs*....i so much lvd dis part.....antakshri was gr8.....lol...yuvi singing...!!!! imao..it must be for sure a besura vala..!!! lol.......do continue soon......so next is bday party yaayyyyyyeee.............all again flirting ....me loving dis.....😉
Edited by flamingo_aries - 15 years ago
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wowowo so cute especially the antakshari waala part.........i JUST loved the WHOLE concept.hehe naina thumaka dance.......wowowywy n then shanky ka involve hona hwiowoo.......wowoy yeyey partyyyy.................hey also naina n gayatri's bday on alag alag days ./........this update wass soo cutee.........waiting for ur next update.......
lux,
Sups.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome dear!!

Caught up with the last two parts.... took me a while to sort out who's who... 😆 so everyone is connected!! does yuvi know that AB is raj's friend?

at last sid remember gayatri. cool... loved the antakshari. how nice for yuvi and naina that dr. keerti is not well.

please update soon.

love,
ash
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey pree, loved everything. the highlights for me was the antakshari session

lol i wonder how Sehban wud sound if he sings *a bathroom singer*😆😆😆
hmmm... Shanky getting flirty

all your songs were apt for the situation. loved the gore gore mukhade between specially the Yuvi Shanky part.

continue the good work 👏👏


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ooo I loved it! lol even I was confused...aren't Naina and Drish twins...lol good one :P

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