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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
heyy dear
too gud part
hilarious part
i was laughing hats off at armaan n amit
lol
cont soon
n thx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great


thnx 4 the pm


update soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy dear,
awsome part
thanks for PM.


love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
good one loved the work armaan n amit were dng n for that dey were scoled
but very n
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow
it was really good
contd soon
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i loved the part..please add me to your PM list...i'd love to read the rest...tc...Pearl...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really interstin FF! its like chup chup ke or kareena and shahid! cntd asap! and add me 2 ure pm list! =P

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey amazing updates..loved them..continue soon !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2:

It was the third day of Armaan and Amit's stay. Both were washing clothes. Bandya came over with food.

Bandya: Haath doh lo aur khana khalo.

Amit: Haath bhi dhona parega ab, kabse kapre doh rahe hain.

Armaan: Shut up.

Bandya: Chup chaap khana khalo, tere saathi ko dekh, ek baar bhi complain nahin kiya jabse aaya hain. Lekin tu toh bohot kuch kehna chahta hain. Jai saab ko aane thab hee sab kuch nikal dena.

Amit: Kal arahe hain?

Bandya: Haan.

Amit: Thank God. Kal se insaano ka khana milega.

Bandya: Oi zyaada hoshiyaari dikhaayi toh khana bhi nahin milega.

Amit: Ek baath bata? Tu bhi naukar hain, toh tu kyun humhe apne ungliyo pe nachata hain.

Bandya: Mera allowed hain, lekin tera nahin chalega.

Amit: Kyun?

Bandya: Main Mahi mehemsaab ka sabse wafadaar naukar hoon, isliye mujhe ghar ka samajh thei hain.

Amit: Toh hum kaunse bewaffa hain jo humhe kutto ki mauth de rahe hain.

Bandya: Tum log neye ho. Aur kya?

Amit: Kuch nahin. Kal sab kuch dhood ka dhood aur paani ka paani hojayega.

Bandya: Matlab?

Armaan: Kuch nahin. Jao.

Bandya went off. But Riddhima came. Rhea was behind her.

Riddhima: 'Dekho aap logo ke saath bare papa bohot naa insaafi kar rahe hain, I'am sorry.'

Armaan looked at her carefully. Her each and every expression was trying to tell them something. He felt a twinge of pain seeing her use her hands and not her voice.

Amit: Mehemsaab humhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha hain.

Armaan: Shut up Amit. Dekhiye iski batameezi keliye main aapse maafi maangta hoon.

Riddhima looked Rhea.

Riddhima: 'Inhe bata de, ki pehle din mein jo hua uskeliye sorry.'

Rhea looked at Armaan.

Rhea: Yeh kehrahi hain, uss din khet ke vajja se bauji ne aap logo se jo kaha uskeliye sorry, woh hum bas mazaak kar rahe thei.

Armaan looked at Riddhima. Her eyes werent glowing as usual. Instead she had a apologetic expression. She looked at Armaan and put her hands on her ears to show she was sorry.

Armaan: No its OK. Hum sab kuch bhul gaye.

Riddhima smiled. Armaan smiled back.

Rhea: Chal.

Rhea and Riddhima went off. Riddhima looked back to see Armaan staring at her.

The next morning, everyone was waiting for Jai in the hall.

Riddhima: 'Aisa lagta hain, kisi raja ka intezaar kar rahe hain.'

Rhea smiled and then looked away trying to hide her happiness.

Suddenly they heard a car arriving in the parkway. Everyone went outside including Armaan and Amit. Jai got out of the car and smiled. Raj, Ridhima and Rhea went over to him.

Jai: Hi guys.

Raj: Angrez ka angrez rehgaya yeh.

Riddhima laughed.

Rhea: Hi Jai.

Jai: Hi Rhea. Ab andar chale.

They all went in. Jai sat down.

Jai: Armaan kaha hain?

Rhea: Woh aaya hee nahin. Bas kirayedaar ke naukar aaye thei.

Jai: Kya? Lekin Armaan ne toh kaha tha.

Riddhima: 'Haan, lekin woh nahin aaya.'

Jai: Anyway choro. Main paani peekhe aata hoon.

Raj: Tum baito. Haan, woh Bandya kaha hain.

Rhea: Usse Mahi ne chutti dedi.

Raj: Kya?

Riddhima: 'Offo, choro main hee paani leke aati hoon'

She went.

Rhea: Woh paani lekar aarahi hain.

Armaan gave her a filled jug and a glass. She made a come along gesture with her hands. He followed her to the hall. Jai looked at her and then he looked at Armaan. He stood up.

Jai: Armaan?

Armaan: Hi.

Armaan and Jai hugged. Riddhima moved back with uncertainty and put the jug and glass on the table.

Jai: Gharwaale kehrahe thei tu nahin aaya.

Amit: Gharwaale meri baath sunenge, tohi pata chalta.

Jai: Amit! Tum dono. Chachu, yeh dono mere dost hain. Yeh Armaan aur yeh Amit.

Riddhima's mouth made a comical 'O', so did Rhea's and everyone elses apart from Armaan, Amit and Jai.

Jai: Kya hua? Aap sab aise kyun hogaye?

Riddhima: 'Woh bhai, choti si galti hogayi......................humne inhe kireydaar ke naukar samjhe.'

Jai: Kya?

Rhea: Galti se. In logo ne kuch kaha hee nahin.

Amit: Hum logo ne...........well..........MAINE kehne ki koshish ki, lekin koi sunta hee nahin hain.

Jai: Oh my God! This is so embarrassing.

Riddhima: 'If it helps, its embarrassing for us as well.'

Armaan looked at Rhea to translate.

Rhea: Mahi bhi embarrassed hain.

Armaan: Guys, don't worry, mujhe achcha laga.

Amit: Mujhe achcha-Ouch!

Armaan stepped on his foot.

Amit: Bohot laga.

Riddhima called Rhea over.

Riddhima: 'Aap log bina samaan ke kyun aaye, kyunki aisi galat fehmi toh kisi ko bhi hogi?'

Rhea: Yeh poochrahi hain aap log bina samaan ke kyun aaye, kyunki aisi galat fehmi toh kisi ko bhi hogi.

Armaan: Kisi ne humaare suitcases chura liye, aur usme sab kuch thei.

Jai: Oh god!

Amit: Chill dude. Waise bhi sirf char din thei.

Jai: I'am so sorry guys, agar mujhe pata bhi hota yeh sab hone waala tha, toh tum logo ko bulaate hee nahin.

Armaan: Its OK.

Jai: Don't worry. Main police ko inform kardoonga, tumhare passport and all sab kuch mil jayega. Armaan, I'am so sorry, mujhe laga tum yaha aake khaam shuru kar paoge, lekin mera yeh trip aur yeh galat fehmi, pure chaar din barbad hogaye.

Amit: Don't worry, humhe koi jaldi nahin hain. Mahi ko bolna aata hain, bas ek gante mein saamne ajayega.

Jai: Kya?

Armaan: Shut up Amit! Dekh Jai, tu mera sabse achcha dost hain, aur tere liye main itna toh kar hee sakhta hoon.

Riddhima looked at him and he went over to her and smiled.

Armaan: Main jaanta hoon, tumhari awaaz sunne keliye Jai aur tumhare ghar waale bohot bekaraar, infact sirf wohi kyun main bhi bohot bekaraar hoon, kyunki tum jaisi ladki se milne ke baad koi bhi tumhara awaaz sunna chahega. Aur jab thak main tumhare liye kuch karna loon thab thak main yaha se nahin jaounga.

Riddhima looked at him amazed. She couldnt believe that someone believed in her so much. She nodded her head. Armaan smiled and turned around.

Jai: Thanks bro. Indono ko guest rooms mein le jao.

Riddhima: 'Main le chalti hoon. Aap dono aaye.'

They followed her up the stairs when Rhea told them to follow her. Rhea turned to Jai.

Rhea: Sorry Jai.

Jai: Its OK tumhari galti nahin hain. Erm..........tumhare liye main....erm.......payal laaya hoon.

Rhea: Er......tum toh trip pe thei na?

Jai: Haan, woh waqt mil gaya bahar jaane ka.

Rhea: Erm.......thanks.......erm.....main.....

Jai: Tum mere saath chalo.

Jai took her hand, he couldnt help himself after staying away from Rhea for 4 days. Rhea was bewildered by his act and followed him. He went inside his office and locked the door.

Rhea: Erm.........tum......

Jai took out two anklets from his pocket. He bent down to her feet.

Rhea: Main pehensakhti hoon.

Jai turned red at her comment but went and tied it around her ankle. He did the same to her other foot. Rhea bit the inside of her mouth to stop herself from smiling so that it didnt look like she was blushing. Jai stood up.

Rhea: Thanks.

Jai: Yeah. Erm........

Jai hugged Rhea. At first Rhea was taken a back but she put her arms around his neck and rested her head on his chest. Jai put his left arm around her waist and nuzzled his head on her shoulder. He caressed her hair with his other hand.......

I stopped at that because I couldnt be more romantic. It's like writing an essay whenever I write romance.........anyway that was the second part, hope you enjoy it.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow m the 1st one to comment
a very good one dear
i guess armaan makes riddhimaa talk soon
loved it continue soon
Edited by ekts - 15 years ago

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