One Less Lonely Girl (AR) Part5 Page11 - Page 3

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In this FF, I'll be writing everyone's dialogues normally, but what Riddhima says is going to be written but she's going telling them through sign language.

Part 1:

Jai: Hi Armaan.

Armaan: Hi. Kaisa hain tu?

Jai: Fine. You?

Armaan: Fine. Bol kaise phone kiya.

Jai: Yaar, mujhe tujhse ek favour chahiye thi.

Armaan: Bolna.

Jai: Meri behen hain Mahi. Woh.................................bezubaan hain.

Armaan: I'am really sorry.

Jai: Dekh tu aaj India ka sabse doctor hain, tu kya kuch din mere behen ke liye nikal sakhta hain. I just want to know if she can get better or not.

Armaan: Haan, kyun nahin?

Jai: Thanks, fees ki fikar mat kar tujhe dedoonga.

Armaan: Fees nahin yaar, tere liye free mein karoonga, aur waise bhi main iss khaam ko personally karna chahta hoon.

Jai: Really?

Armaan: Yeah.

Jai: Thanks a lot yaar. Main usse waha Mumbai leke aaon ya tu yaha aayega Amritsar.

Armaan: Nahin main waha aaonga. Actually baath yeh hain maine kabhi Amritsar nahin dekha. Yeh khwaish bhi puri hojayegi.

Jai: Yeah sure. Kal aana aur Rajdeep Saran ka ghar poochna koi bhi le aayega.

Armaan: Yeah OK. Rajdeep Saran. See you tomorrow.

Jai put the phone down. He went down to the hall where Rajdeep, Rhea and Riddhima were sitting.

Jai: Chacha achchi khabar hain.

Riddhima: 'Ek aur bandhar paiso keliye haath maangraha hain'

Jai: Nope. Maine tere liye doctor dhoondha hain, woh India ka sabse naami doctor hain.

Riddhima: 'Agar itna naami hota toh mujhe bhi pata hota woh'

Rhea: Kaun hain?

Jai: Armaan Malik.

Raj: Iske baare main kabhi nahin suna.

Rhea: Maine sunnah hain lekin kabhi dekha nahin.

Jai: Well, kal dopeher ko woh yaha araha hain, toh sab usse dekhlena.

Raj: Usne kehdiya ki woh Mahi se shaadi karna chahta hain?

Jai, Riddhima and Rhea laughed.

Jai: Chacha woh shaadi keliye nahin, ilaaj karne araha hain.

Raj: Toh pehle bata diya hota. Teek hain.

Suddenly Sadhna came.

Sadhna: Jai beta, tere liye yeh fax aaya hain, tere office mein tha.

Jai took the piece of paper and read it.

Jai: Yeh toh kal hain.

Riddhima: 'Kya hua bhaiya?'

Jai: Kuch nahin.

Raj: Bata beta kya hua?

Jai: Kal mujhe ek important trip par nikal na hain, char din keliye, aur maine Armaan ko yaha aane keliye KAL.

Sadhna: Armaan?

Jai: Mahi ka doctor.

Sadhna: Toh tu fikar kyun karta hum sab yaha sambhalenge. Don't worry.

Jai: Par teek nahin lagta, doctor ko ghar bulaaya, aur bulaane waala khud ghar pe nahin hain.

Rhea: Jai, dont worry hum haina.

Jai: Are you sure?

Rhea: Yeah, aur waise bhi kal toh sirf theen neye insaan aane waale hain, doh naukar jo kirayedaar bhejne waala hain, aur woh.

Jai looked at Rhea and gave a small smile then quickly looked at Raj.

Jai: Teek hain, main pack karke aata hoon.

Sadhna: Teek hain beta.

Jai went upstairs to his room. Riddhima looked hopelessly at Rhea.

Riddhima: 'You people are trying to hard.'

Rhea: Tera bhai tujhse bohot pyaar karta hain, isliye tere liye woh kuch bhi karega.

In the afternoon after Jai had left everyone was inside, while Riddhima, Rhea and Bandya were outside.
Armaan on the other hand had got to Amritsar with Amit. They came by train, because Armaan's car was broken. When they got there they started walking about and stopped at a chai stall and sat down with their luggage. Armaan engaged himself into conversation with the chai stall man.

Armaan: Bhai saab, aap humhe Rajdeep Saran ka ghar batasakhte hain.

CSM: Yaha se dhur nahin hain, bas seedha jaaye, ek bara sa safed ghar dikhega wohi unka ghar hain.

Armaan: Shukriya, paise kitne hue.

CSM: Rs.50

Armaan: Ab hum chalte hain.

Amit: Rukna, ab ghar kaunsa hain jaante hain toh thodi ghum firke jaate haina.

Armaan: Teek hain.

They both went over to this park where kids were playing and started playing with them. Half an hour later, they went back to the chai stall and saw there luggage was gone.

Amit: Oh god!

Armaan: Bhai saab aapne humari bags dekhe.

CSM: Nahin main toh customers ke saath busy tha.

Armaan: Anyway thanks.

Amit and Armaan went on the road.

Amit: Busy tha! Is that all he can say? Humara samaan pata nahin nahin kis ne liya hoga.

Armaan: Itna toh pata hoga tujhe ki kisi ne chori ki hain.

Amit: Hum ab kya kare?

Armaan: Jai ke ghar chalke, police ko report kardenge.

Amit: Chal.

They both went to Jai's house in the told direction. They got there, and no one was there apart from two girls sitting on a swing and talking. Riddhima saw them.

Riddhima: 'Yeh woh kireyadaar ke waha se aaye honge, woh neye naukar, kuch karte hain'

Rhea: Kya?

Riddhima signed Rhea something and they both smiled mischieviously. Rhea put a scarf around her face to cover her full face apart from her eyes. Then they went to the boys. Armaan looked at Riddhima and his insides churned like mad. He took a deep breath and took control of his feelings. Rhea started talking but it looked like Riddhima was talking because she was moving her mouth and Rhea's was hidden.

Rhea: Tum dono kireyadaar ke waha se aaye ho?

Amit: Jee na-

Rhea: Achcha teek hain. Pehle khaam main doongi. Main iss ghar ki bari beti hoon.

Armaan: Magar hum-

Rhea: Agar shikayed hain toh apne apne maalik se karo, usne hee tumhe yaha bheja hain.

Armaan: Dekhiye aap galat-

Rhea: Galat! Tum ho kaun mujhe galat kehne waale? Dekho nakhre apne maalik ke ghar dikhaana yaha tum humare hukum ke neeche thab thak jab thak tumhara maalik Jai ko nahin mana tha.

Armaan: Haan, hum Jai ke-

Rhea: Sharam nahin aati tumhe, apne neye maalik ko naam se pukar thei hue?

Amit: Ji humari baath toh-

Rhea: Yaha ke naukar baatein kam karte hain aur khaam zyaada. Chalo, aaj ka pehla khaam. Yeh kheti (garden greens) haina inhe khaat ke pekhdo aur haan agar ek bhi rehgayi toh pure Amritsar ke khet katwaoungi.

Amit: Hum naukar-

Rhea: Naukar humare hain, toh humari baath suni paregi.

Armaan: Teek hain, sunenge lekin bare saab Jai ka kaha hain.

Rhea: Aap ko isse kya?

Armaan: Humhe unse milna hain.

Rhea: Toh char din keliye rukiye, kyunki Jai trip pe gaya hain.

Armaan: Teek hain. Chal Amit.

Armaan and Amit turned around to the garden. It was filled with home grown vegetables.

Amit: Agar khaatna hee hain toh inhe bana thei kyun hain?

Armaan: Naukaro se khaam karwaane keliye. I can't believe Jai ne yeh sab karwaaya, I mean woh seva karta hain, seva karwaata nahin hain.

Amit: Hum andar jhaake bata dete ki hum Jai ke dost hain, koi kirayedaar ka naukar nahin.

Armaan: Ruk, Jai trip par hain char din baad arraha hain, matlab yeh ho sakhta hain ki shyaad maine galat sunna aur char din pehle aagaya, ya usne dates ki garbar kardi, kyunki woh khud yaha hota agar usse yeh pata hain ki main yaha hoon.

Amit: Toh ab kya kare?

Armaan: Ab wapas ghar toh nahin jasakhte, mere bag mere paise, phone, aur tickets thei. Toh I guess humhe yeh sab char din keliye karna parega.

Amit: Lekin inhe jhaake bata ki tu naukar nahin Armaan hain.

Armaan: Vishwas kaun karega. Humare paas kuch nahin, na paise, na passport, na kapre, aur aise koi bhikari hee ata hain. Rehne de. Bewajja uss ladki ko daat sunni paregi.

Amit: Daat hee toh sunegi, koi sazza nahin.

Armaan: Chorna khet khaat.

Thye both started cutting with the shears they got. Riddhima and Rhea started laughing at their state.

Rhea: Mahi tujhse bari shaitan iss ghar mein nahin hain. Bauji ki khet ko kaat rahe hain bechare. Agar Bauji ne dekh liye toh un dono ki khair nahin.

Riddhima: 'Indono ke maalik ne bhai ko bohot sataya ab inki baari hain'

2 hours later when Armaan and Amit had finished cutting, Raj came out. He saw them with shears and all his vegetables on one side.

Raj: Arre! Mere khet!

Armaan and Amit turned around with confused looks on their faces. Raj was turning redder and redder as he went towards them.

Raj: Yeh tum logo ne kya kiya! Ho kaun jo iss thara se humari khet kaatdiya.

Armaan: Dekhiye, hum jab andar aaye, toh doh ladkiyan thi, unhone humse kaha yeh khet khaatne keliye.

Raj: Oh toh kisi ne aake kehdiya aur tum log karloge.

Armaan: Unhone kaha woh iss ghar maalik ke kuch thei isliye humhe order diya aur humne karli.

Raj: Ho kaun tum dono?

Amit: Main Amit aur yeh-

Armaan: Hum naukar hain neye aaj ke.

Raj: Kirayedaar ke waha se aaye ho?

Amit: Na-

Armaan: Haan, hum wohi se aaye hain.

Raj: Andar aao.

Armaan: Haan.

Raj went inside and Armaan and Amit followed him. Raj sat on a sofa.

Raj: Bandya, iss ghar ke saari ladkiyon ko aur saari aurtoh ko yaha bulao.

Bandya went off and came back 10 minutes later with 6 girls and 2 elderly women. Riddhima and Rhea saw Armaan and Amit and knew there was trouble.

Raj: Batao inme se kisne tum khet khaatne keliye kaha.

Armaan and Amit looked at them carefully. Armaan and Amit's eyes went on Riddhima who looked down. And before Armaan could stop him Amit said out loud.

Amit: Iss ladki ne! Ye waali yaha.

Everyone in the house broke out with laughters. Raj put up a hand and everyone went silent. He stood up and went to Amit and Armaan.

Raj: Iss ladki ne kaha. Iss ladki ne tumse khaam karne keliye kaha.

Amit: Haan.

Raj: Tumhe bezubaan logo ki basha samajh mein aati hain.

Amit: Nahin.

Raj: Toh phir iss ladki ne tumse baath kaise ki?

Amit: Moo se aur kaise.

Raj: Moo se! Yaha humari beizati karne bheja hain tumhe yaha kisi ne.

Armaan: Nahin bilkul nahin.

Raj: Toh phir kisne kaha khet khaatne keliye.

Amit: Iss ladki ne kaha tha.

Bandya: Arre tum dono ab thak nahin samjhe, ki yeh bol nahin sakhti.

Armaan: Kya!

Raj: Yeh sach keh raha hain, Mahi..................................bezubaan hain.

Armaan: I'am really sorry..........mujhe pata nahin......tha-

Amit: Nahin par sach mein yeh boli. Humare saamne isne humse kaha khet khaatne keliye.

Armaan: Amit shut up.

Raj: Nahin rehne doh. Aaj maaf kar dete hain, koi galti hogayi hogi. Bandya inhe apne kamre thak le chalo, aur neye kapre dedena, inke kapre barbad hogaye.

Amit: Dekhiye hum-

Bandya: Chalo.

Bandya pushed them forward. They both went into a room. It had two single beds with a little table in between.

Bandya: Kapre almaali mein hain, aur agar raat ko tand lagegi toh aur chadar maang lena.

Armaan: Thanks.

Bandya: Happy Diwali.

Amit: What!

Armaan: Mera matlab shukriya.

Bandya: Haan, wohi mention not.

Bandya went out of the room. Armaan sat on of the beds but Amit went and lay down.

Amit: I cant handle this place.

Armaan: Bas thodi din keliye phir naukaro ka khaam khatam aur humara khaam shuru.

Amit: Yeah I know, par Jai ne bewajja humhe ilaaj karne keliye bulaya hain, woh ladki ghungi nahin natak kar rahi hain, par abhi thak iss ghar mein kisi ko nahin pata.

Armaan: Yaar aisa bhi toh hosakhta humne teek thara se ladki nahin dekhi.

Amit: Mujhe uska chehra fully yaad hain. Uske mamle mein mujhe koi garbar ho hee nahin sakhti.

Armaan: Anyway main kapre badal ke aata hoon.

Armaan got changed and they both went outside where Bandya and Rhea were talking.

Bandya: Mahi tujhe aisa bilkul nahin karna chahiye tha, woh ladke pata nahin ab kya karenge.

Riddhima: 'Woh ladke ab kuch kar bhi nahin sakhte'

Bandya: Kya?

Rhea: Yeh kehrahi hain, woh ladke kuch nahin karsakhte.

Amit and Armaan both went over to them.

Amit: Oi shani, mujhe pata hain tu ghungi nahin hain, itna natak karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hain.

Rhea: Oi, tum kehna kya chahtey, yaha khaam karne aaye ho, khaam karo, aise ghar ke logo par ilzaam nahin laga sakhte.

Amit: Yeh ghungi nahin hain.

Rhea: Shut up! OK. Aur 'ghungi' kehne ki zaroorat nahin hain. Iss ghar mein bauji ne mana ki hain.

Amit: Whatever?

Rhea: Khaam karo.

Rhea and Riddhima went off.

Hi, thanks everyone for their comments and sorry for my mistakes in this. I was thinking of updating tomorrow but guess what..........the interview guy had to delay the meeting for 2 hours and there was a internet cafe near the place........(lucky or what!) I might update again about in 5 days or so...............

loved it
so armaan is in amritsar lol this is gonna be interesting update soon nd thanx for d pm

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the part was very nice it wil be gud to see armaan doing work in ridzs house n ridzs expression wen she wil know armaan is a doctor continue soon n thanxsssssssss for the pm

Hey there

Thanks for the PM & the update...

nice part..

poor guys...i feel sry 4 them...direct doctor se naukar ka kaam karwaliya unse....tcl tck,,,very bad girls

Loved it
keep it up
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