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Posted: 15 years ago
ye varun sirf for the sake of talking is telling wo zyada experienced hai but us idiot ko privacy ka matlab hi nahi jaanta..................nice part..................cont soon.................glad that sujal and kashish are married..................
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 41


It had been quite a while that kashish had been waiting for sujal.


She is wondering what is taking him so long, jab ki usne spoony ko bhi sula dia, Priya se baatein bhi karli room mein bhi aa gai.


She decides to change, she is removing her jewellery in front of the dressing table.


She sees the reflection of sujal in the mirror.


He enters the room a bit tipsy.


She turns & frowns at him & he grins foolishly looking at her.


k-you are drunk !


s-and, you are beautiful ! [removing her pallu & snuggling her shoulder]


k-ghar mein do bachche hain, & what do you do, you just get druuuuuuuunk !


s-maine nahi pii !


k-oh really ! [kamar mein haath rakhke]


s-varun just kept filling my half empty glass


k-you are disgusting !


she turns to go but sujal grabs her from behing wrapping his arms around her waist & starts nibbling her shoulder causing he too close her eyes & curl her lips automatically]


s-did I say you look gorgeous in a sari


she smiles at the compliment & turns towards him.


k-really?


His arms are tightly wrapping her tiny waist & moving over her smooth skin of her curvaceous waist.


His ace is moving towards her & his lips are cutting the distance between both their lips.


s-[whispers] you only said I am drunk, & drunk people don't lie.


He presses her body to hers in a deep hungry smooch.


His hands reach her waist & remove her nicely tugged sari, her hands reach his buttons & unbutton them & he removes his shirt as he does'nt find any need to have them on.


As the smooch gets more passionate they fall on the bed & switch off the lights.


Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
very romantic part dear....................thought kashish will teach him a lesson for getting drunk................cont soon.......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
awsome updates
too good
superb
mindblowing
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part dear
expecting a romantic part in the next update
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
very romantic part dear.loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 42


Its been a month sujal & kashish are living in their small sweet family.


The work load of sujal has increased tremendously for sujal as he cldnt concentrate on his work fo few months , now he has to take care of everything.


So, because of that sujal & kashish had to postpone their honeymoon.


Its Sunday evening & sujal is still busy with his work on the laptop.


K comes to him happily.


k-sujal !


s-hmm


k-pata hai hum sab ne aaj saath mein movie jaane ka plan banaya hai, tum main, priya aur varun.


s-main nahi aa sakta


k-kyun?????? Sab saath jayenge naa, mazza karenge naa, movie phir dinner. Ghumna phirna ho jayega.


s-kama hai mujhe office ka, I don't understand ye how can varun think about mauj masti usko koi kaam nahi hai ! nahi hai to karle ! uski kaamchori ki wajah se buri haalat ho rahi hai !


k-sujal aise mat kaho, apna dimaag thanda rakho.


s-kaise thanda rakhun ! zara kama to mujhe karna padta hai naa, baaki logon ko to bass mauj masti ki padi hai !


he resumes working on his laptop, k chup ho jaati hai & hse doesn't bring up the topic again.


++++++++++++++++++++++++


Sujal ke office ka kaam din-din badta jaa raha hai, aur saath mein uska gussa aur irritation bhi.


He comes home from office in the evening.


Spoony runs towards him seeing her 'daddieee'


Sp-daddieeeeeeeeeeeeeee !


Sujal spoony ko godh mein uthata hai, but puts her down after a minute.


s-go & play ! daddy is tired !


sp-you know, I am noth well !


he frowns in concern & checks her forehead for fever. But fever nahi hai.


Sp-my throath is aching.


s-does your mother know?


He doesn't wait for spoony's answer & starts calling for kashish.


s-KASHISHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!! KASHISHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!


she comes down.


k-haaaaaaaaan ! arre tum aa gaye ! [smiles at her husband who had just arrived]


s-spoony ki tabiyat kharab hai, tumhe pata hai?


k-haan , pata hai.


s-to tumne medicine bhi nahi di usko !


k-kyun nahi di ! wo khaaye tab naa !


s-tum ek bachchi ko medicine bhi nahi khila sakti !


k-tumhi kyun nahi khila dete !


k brings the medicine.


s-spoony, come have the medicine. You will feel better.


Sp-no I needh no medhicine !


s-its good for you, open your mouth


sp-nooooooooo its bitter.


s-have it spoony !


sp-nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!!!


she runs from there. She goes upstairs.


Sujal runs behind her.


s-hey stop !


spoony bhaage jaa rahi hai, kahin chup gai hai wo. Aur sujal bag raha hai uske peeche.


He is getting more irritated pura din kaam karo aur phir ghar aake apni 4 saal ki beti ke peeche bhaago.


s-spoooooooonyyyyyyyyyy !!!!!!!! spoonyyyyyyyyy !!!!!! come here !!!!!!!! right nowwwwwww !!!!!!!


he finds her atlast, bhaagte bhagte she had reached a dead end near a wall.


s-gocha !


sujal goes near her too feed the medicine, par spoony sujal ke paairon ke beech se bhaagke nikal jaati hai.


s-heyyyyyy !!!!!


she is giggling at this game.


Bhaagte bhaagte spoony reaches the corridor. Saamne kashish hai aur peeche sujal.


s-kashishhhh !!!!!!! hold her !


kashish holds spoony.


Sujal bhaagke jaake spoony ke mooh mein medicine daal deta hai which spoony spits on sujal's face that very second.


s-SPOOOOOOONYYYYY !!!!!


sujal holds spoony's chin aur usko medicine nigalwa deta hai zabardasti.


Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Part 43


Its late evening & sujal has decided to shut himself in his room & finish his work.


So, he had locked himself in his room with his laptop.


Bass kaam karne baitha hi tha ki there is a knock at his door.


He ignores the knock .


s-kashih se kaha to tha not to disturb me, phir kyun aa gai.


Sujal ignores the knocks.


'daddieeeeeeee, daddieeeeee open the door !'


Sujal gets up & opens the door hearing her daughter.


s-what do you want?


Spoony ke haath mein ek bada sa bat hai.


Sp-daddiiiieeeeeee ! I am practicing cricketh you know, but my ball is losth, iths in this room. I wanna search ith.


s-ok, do it fast !


s lets her in aur kaam karne lagta hai.


Its been 15 minutes spoony had been searching & sujal had been working on his laptop with full concentration.


Spoony is tired of searching, she comes & sits on sujal's leg but sujal is so engrossed in his work that he doesn't even realize.


Sp-whath are you doing, daddieee?


He almost jumps hearing her & realizes she is sitting on his lap.


s-work !


sp-can I play a game on your lapthop?


s-no I am working. Did you find your ball?


Sp-no still searching, I am resthing.


s-search it fast !


spoony jaake poore room mein ball dhundne lagti hai, aur sujal apne kaam mein jutt jaata hai.


After much searching spoony finally finds her ball.


Spoony happily strike the ball hard with her bat.


Ball zorrrrrrrr se jaake sujal ke laptop pe lagta hai , braking the laptop screen into pieces.


Spoony freezes seeing this.


Sujal's anger reaches the highest point seeing all his work getting lost with his laptop.


s-BL******** HELL !!!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU MADDDDDDDD !!!!!!!!! YOU SENSELESS MANNERLESS GIRL !!!!!!!! GET OUT OF HERE !!!!!!!!!!!


spoony starts crying & runs out of the room.


Sp-mummaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Sujal decides that he cannot find peace in his home, its better to go to the office & work.


He starts going to his office but on the way kashish stops him.


k-sujal !


he is still angry.


k-tumne spoony ko aise kyun daanta? Tumhe usse aise baat nahi karni chahie thi ! did you call her bl*****?


s-usne jo kiya wo sahi hai? She broke my laptop & ruined my work.


k-jaan-bujkar nahi kiya usne !


s-kashish just stop it, don't defend her khud to uski thik se parwarish nahi kar paayi, she is a mannerless girl !


k-kya kaha? Main uski parwarish nahi kar paayi? Huh? To tum hi karlo naa abb, tumhe roka kisne hai. Subah se raat tak main uska khayal rakhti hoon, tum kya karte ho?


s-tumhari inn muft ki aaiyaashiyon ke lie paise kamake laata hoon !


k-achcha ! aaiyaashiyaan? Thik hai hum dono tumhe itne hi bure lag rahe hai naa, to wapas chale jayenge hum, khush naa !


s-haan chali jao jahan jaana hai ! kam se kam mujhe shaanti to milegi !


sujal walks out of the house


Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Idiot Sujal...............
Why he is taking his frustration out on Spoony & Kashish?
He is again ruining his life.....................
Please knock some sense into him................
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Posted: 15 years ago
whats wrong with this idiot sujal??????????????doesnt he know about the basic rule called to keep personal and professional matters apart????????????uska kaam ka irritation and gussa kyun uss choti bachchi par nikal raha hai??????????not done sujal......................now whats kashish gonna do?????????????cont soon dear.................

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