FOUL IN LOVE-sk (last part)pg 111 - Page 81

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Posted: 15 years ago
idiot sujal. now cant wait to know what kashish do.
cont.soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
argh sujal ko toh mein maar dalongi
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Posted: 15 years ago
inn dono ke life main kuch thik nahin chal sakta kya???
Sujal aapna frustration Spoony & Kashish par utaar raha hai
thats not fair
nice update
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
are ye kya ho raha hai
pls dont do this again
pls do somethg
pls cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
how typical...men will be men....great going neelu......i was wondering itne din se tht where is the story going....but m so glad now tht u just didnt stop the story on kashish getting back to sujal.....wo bolte hai na....rishte banana easy hai...but nibhana utna hi mushkil....aur ye kaam ka pressure family pe nikalna to ek age old ritual hai....yaha bhi varun ki wajaise....thoda help karde sujal ko...bt sujal was r8...wo to kaam chor hai na....muft ki rotiya todni hai...whn sujal was gone...tbhi bhi he didnt pay attention to office work and piled up everything....n even 2day he cnt help....sujal ne hi use sar chada rakha hai....he is bearing the whole burder of running the family...aur ab to family bhi badi ho gyi....hehe...
par ab to zyada ho gya....kuch zyada hi bol diya sujal ne....lets c wht next...continue soon...tc...luv yaa...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 44


Its very late when he finally finishes his work & comes back home.


Kashish opens the door for him.


Door kholke chali jaati hai without a word.


She is clearly giving him cold shoulders & is angry with him.


s-emm..i had my food in the office.


She doesn't reply.


He follows her to the bedroom.


s-emm..spoony so gai?


k-hmm


s-wo..uske lie..kal chocolate le aunga.


Kashish doesn't reply again.


She takes his pillow aur room se bahar chali jaati hai.


He follows her with surprise, he doesn't whats going on.


She places his pillow on the couch in the hall.


s-ye?


k-tumhe mere saath sone ki koi zarurat nahi hai !


k goes into her room saying this.


S quietly lays down on the couch thinking he would speak to her in the morning.


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Kashish goes to the room & locks it, tears are rolling down her cheeks as his words have really hurt her.


She realizes that she forgot to put water for him as he has a habit of getting thirsty in the night.


She takes the jug & goes down to the hall to but the jug beside sujal.


Sujal was laying there with his arm covering his eyes.


Kashish assumed that he was asleep.


She puts the jug beside, all the while looking at him.


She is feeling really bad making him sleep so uncomfortably in the couch but what he said had hurt her a lot.


She sits beside him & looks at his love.


k-i love you !


kisses him gently on his cheek, as she always did before going to bed.


She gets up & turns to go when he holds her hand.


She is surprised to see him awake.


He makes him sit as he sits up.


s-i..i..am sorry..i I acted madly today ! you can punish me..more ! but..just keep saying that you love me..and I will be fine ! I am really sorry !


looks down as tears roll down her cheeks remembering his words.


He takes her hand in his.


s-you know..work..its just taking toll on me..its getting real hectic. I am sorry..i shouldn't have acted the way, I did.


He wriggles his head to her lap.


s-kashish, I didn't mean anything that I said..gusse mein kuch bhi bol gaya..jaanti ho naa kuch bhi bol deta hoon main..


k-hmm


s-you & spoony are very precious to me. If my heart beats for you then spoony is my lifeline. I really regret my words. But, I love you.


He gets up & embraces her resting his head on her shoulder.


s-you understand me naa.


k-hmm, but you try & understand spoony. Wo bachchi hai abhi. Usko samajh mein nahi aata hai, usko tumhe samajhna padega.


He looks down.


s-i was really mean to her. Is she still angry on me?


k-she will be fine. Usko mana lena. She just wants your time. Uske saath 15 minute kheloge she will be happy. She just wants your attention, that's it.


s-did she stay anything after that?


k-haan.'mein kabiiiiiiiii dadiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeee she bath nehi kalungi !!!!!!!!!!!! zindegi mein nehiiiiiiiiiiii bash !' [she imitates spoony]


s laughs at this.


s-hindi mein kaha?


k-haan, hindi filmon se sikha hai.


s-hmm, she is really upset.


K-nahi baba, uski zindagi mein bath nahi karungi wali zindagi 5 mein khatam ho jayegi. Kal aaram se pyaar se godh mein zara khelna bhool jayegi wo sab.


He pulls her closes to himself.


s-tum nahi hoti to mera kya hota !


k-pata nahi !


s-i love you.


She puts her arms around his shoulder.


k- I love you too.


They seal their happy life with each other with a deep & long lasting kiss.


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THE END


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Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG u finished this ff !!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this ff very much😭😭
😭the last update was amazing.
thnx for the pm
Edited by bd670816 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awe u finished this fic!!!!
its realy an awesome fic of urs which having all the emotions of two people who are in love with each other but then also destiny play its game wit them
luv the last part very much
pls cont so soon wit ur next fic.
abhi se hi mis kar rahi hoon tumahri fics ko
pls come up wit sumthg new so soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely fic neelu bad tat u finished it so fast
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG...why did you end the FF so soon. I was hoping to read...ki sujal Spoony ko kaise manata hai. 😍
But....as a writer you have the right to decide when you want to end the story.
Many THANKS for sharing this beautiful story...and sending PM's for
every update. I will miss them now.😔
Please consider writing a new story. I would love to read it.
You have potrayed most beautiful the love story of two people who first fall in love only to loose it and find it again...sharing it for the rest of their life.👏👏👏👏
Enjoyed reading it every step of the way

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