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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful udpate dear
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
thanx Faria for your pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part..
Loved Diya's gesture for her friend..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 23:

Mayank Nupur went inside the disco with all. Samrat and Diya instantly went on the floor.

Mayank took Nupur to sit on a chair. Meanwhile, Pranav and Rishabh went to find girls for them.

M: Nupur'. Vo actually..

N: Umm' kya hua Mayank?

M: Tum achhi lag rahi ho

N: Mayank, kitni bar kahoge?

M: Haan? Oh nahi ' vo me soch raha tha ki ' chalo.. dance karne chale?

N: Hmm' chalo.

Diya watched them coming towards dance floor.

D:Excuse me, Sammy, me abhi ayi..

S: Sure Candy, no prob'

He went to Pranav and Rishabh.

S: So found someone?

P: Kaha yaar! You won't believe Samrat ki humare sath kya ho raha he!

S (Laughing in mind) : Kya ho raha he?

R: Can you imagine? Hum ladki ko dance ke liye puchhte he to vo kya jawab deti he?

S: Kya jawab deti he vats?

P: Vo jawab deti he "No bhaiya! I don't want to dance"

Samrat started laughing.

Diya came.

D: Hey guys, what's up?

S: Candy, in dono ka to kuchh nahi hone wala.. Let's go and dance.

Diya smiled. "Ok, Sammy' All the best Pranav and Rishabh"

Pranav and Rishabh made a sad face.

Diya signed Mayank and Nupur who were standing near the floor to come up.

Nupur and Mayank went on the floor. And just then the song which was playing ended.

Diya looked at the DJ and made a sign of thumbs up.

DJ nodded and started to play a bit slow and romantic number.

Ooo'..
Baby, come stand by my side
Come and be my guiding light

Mayank took Nupur's one hand in his hand and put his other hand on her waist. Nupur kept her other hand on Mayank's shoulder.

Ooo' I'll be what you want me to be
I'll give all my love in whole of my life

Nupur looked into Mayank's eyes and started to dance slowly.

Soniyo, o soniyo
Tumhe dekhta hu to sochta hu bas yahi

Mayank removed his hand from Nupur's waist and turned her holding her hand.

Tum jo mera saath do, saare gham bhulake
Jee lu muskuraake zindagi

Nupur kept looking in his eyes as she was turning. After turning her thrice, Mayank pulled her towards him.

Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat, tu bas de de mera saath

Nupur kept her head on Mayank's chest and they both were revolving to the beats of music slowly.

Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat, tu bas de de mera saath

Mayank was feeling so content with Nupur in his arms, that he hugged Nupur tightly.

I get this feeling now, I cannot wait no longer
I know your love will keep me happy
Will keep me stronger

Nupur was feeling shy by now. She turned and tried to go away from Mayank, but Mayank held her hand and pulled her towards him.

I get this feeling now, I cannot live without you
I know your love's the only one so true

As she stopped, Mayank went in front of her, still holding her hand.

Raho me, tanha hu saath le chal yu
Sang tere safar poora karu
Raho me, tanha hu saath le chal yu
Sang tere safar poora karu

Both started moving on the music again.


Kya kahu ae zindagi
Tu hai meri saans, rehna tu paas har ghadi

Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat,

Mayank moved closer to Nupur.

Tu bas de de mera saath,
Tu bas de de mera saath

He slowly kissed Nupur on her forehead. And whispered in her ears, "Love u, jaan."

Nupur smiled and continued dancing.

Tujh ko jo, paaya toh hai yeh lagta kyu
Baho me bas teri mehfooz hoon

She hugged Mayank again, without caring for anyone around them this time.


Tujkh ko jo, paaya to hai ye lagta kyu
Baho me bas teri mehfooz hoon

Mayank smiled happily. They broke hug and started dancing.

Tum bano, saaya mera, zindagi mein aao
Zindagi bitaao bas yahi
Tu dede mera saath thaam le haath
Chahe jo bhi ho baat
Tu bas de de mera saath
Tu bas de de mera saath

Both were dancing and just then Nupur noticed Diya coming towards them.

Baby, come stand by my side
Come and be my guiding light
Ooo' I'll be what you want me to be
I'll give all my love in whole of my life
Baby'. Come and be my guiding light

They smiled at Diya and Diya mischievously smiled back at them.

D: Hey, Nupur, chale ghar?

N: Ghar?

D: Haan, nahi jana he kya? Me aunty ko phone kar ke bol du ki aaj tum mere ghar rukogi?

Nupur is still lost in their dance and can't understand what Diya meant.

N: Kya matlab? Par Diya, me tumhare ghar aa ke kya karugi? Kuchh kaam tha kya?

Diya: Arre, Nupur'

Mayank intervened.

M: Diya, drop her to her home, please.

Diya smiled at Mayank. "Ok, Mayank. Chalo sweety.."

Nupur said bye to Mayank, and left with Diya.

Precap:

NM: Chinmay ka phone aya tha. Kiske sath thi tum beach par?

N: Maa, vo me, Diya aur..

NM: Diya ke naam pe tu kiske sath ghum rahi he? Nupur?

Nupur's eyes filled with tears.

NM: Rone ki jarurat nahi he. Me puchh rahi hu kuchh.



That's it, friends.. Please leave your comments and tell me how was it...

Will update next part in next weekend..


Love,

..Shreyu..

Edited by ..Shreyu.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
shreshhh
love u or ur update jaani
it was very nice and wonderful

loved the dance with this song
it was just fabulous
loved it to the core
keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
shreyu beautiful ff
plz add me to ur PM list

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Posted: 12 years ago
nery nice update. hope nothing will interurupt mayur's story
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updt
loved mayur dance
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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