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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u sooo much Faru and Ria...

Will update this today...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey friends!!

I am back. Updating this FF after a veryyy long time. Hope you haven't forgotten the story line. 😆


Part 22:

Nupur, Mayank and gang decide to celebrate their success.

M: Yesss!!! We did it. Thanks friends. We couldn't have achieved this without your support.

S: Dude! Its ok. After all dost hote hi is liye hote he na!

Mayank smiles with his cute dimple smile. "Hmm.. So to hai.."

R: Hey, so this calls for a party! Guys…

P: Haan…. PARTYYY..

S: Yes, Mayank! Ek treat to banti hai, yar.

M: Sure guys! Jese tum log kaho! Kaha jana hai?

P & R: Hey, aaj disco chale please???

Diya looks at her dress. "Guys! I will need to change! So allow me and Nups to go for that."

They all decide to get together after one hour at Mayank's place.

Diya and Nupur leaves to Diya's home, and guys go to Mayank's place directly.

As they reach Diya's place, Nupur sits in drawing room.

N: Diya, tum change kar lo. Me thodi der DMG dekh leti hu. Just repeat telecast ho raha hoga!

D: Madam, tum bhi change kar rahi ho, ok?

N: Haan? Don't joke Diya! Me extra dress nahi layi hu.

D: Chill, Nups! Tumhe isi liye change karna keh rahi hu ki tumhari dress nahi chalegi disco me!

N: No! Esa nahi hota yaar!

D: Don't be such a child, Nups! Please..

Diya explains Nupur for about 15 minutes and finally Nupur agrees to look at Nupur's clothes.

Diya shows her one black dress, which Nupur rejected instantly. Then Diya held a stunning pink dress, which Nupur considered for a minute and then rejects. Then Diya keeps showing all her dresses to Nupur and finally Nupur liked one dress. It was a sleeveless purple dress, up to her knees.

Nupur came out of washroom wearing it and she told Diya that she was feeling very uncomfortable in it. Diya assured her that she was looking just fabulous.

Diya helped Nupur with hairstyle. Nupur's hair were open and a few strands were coming on her face. She watched herself in full size mirror. She got a bot confidence after watching herself. Then Diya got ready in 5 minutes. She was wearing black part dress and was looking as usual hot. They left for Mayank's house in Diya's car.

D: Nups! Aaj to Mayank ka murder hi hone wala hai!

N: Kya matlab?

D: Tumhe ese jo dekhega!

N: Diya, me already itni nervous hu yaar!

D: Of ho! Don't be so nervous, sweety! Come on! Mayank ka ghar aane hi wala hai. Now smile.

Nupur gives a nervous smile, and Diya stops car near the gate.

Diya calls Samrat.

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Samrat, Mayank, Pranav and Rishabh were talking to Mayank's mom dad.

S: Hey, Diya ka phone. Lagta hai ki Nupur aur Diya aa gaye.

Mayank's mom: Beta, un dono ko bolo ki andar aye! Thodi der baad jana tum sab!

S: Ji aunty!

Samrat receives the call.

S: Hey candy! Tum dono jaldi se andar aa jao! Thodi der baad jayege!

Diya is alerted by that. She knew that Nupur will be embarrassed if they will go inside. She will feel shy.

D: Umm! No, Samy! Actually, I was thinking ki hum sidhe disco me hi milte he. Varna bahot late ho jayega! U know na, mujhe taiyar hone me jyada time lagta he, to der ho gayi!

S: Oh! Ok, Candy! No problem. Hum log nikalte he. Tum log jaldi pahocho. Thik he?

M: Kya hua, Sam?

S: Arre, Diya ko jante ho na? Madam ko taiyar hone me bahot time lag gaya, to vo log sidhe jane ki baat kar rahe he, aunty!

MM: Koi baat nahi beta! Its ok.

S: Aunty, me aap ki aur se Diya ko daant lunga, thik he na?

MM smilingly: Haan, beta, thik he! Par meri bahu ko mat dantna.

Samrat smiles.

S: Of course aunty!

Boys leave and start for disco. They all reach disco at around 8 PM.

Mayank parks his bike and waits for Nupur. Diya and Nupur stepped outside the car and Diya immediatedly drags Samrat and others at one side. Mayank looks at Nupur and then keeps staring at her. A few strands of her hair were coming in her eyes. Nupur kept straightening it. Mayank stepped towards her. Nupur looked at him and then shyly looked downwards.

Mayank came near her and forwarded his hand towards her. She surprisingly looked at him.

Mayank took a strand of her hair and pushed her behind her ears. Nupur blushed hard.

Diya and Samrat coughed.

Nupur and Mayank came out of their thoughts.

Mayank signed Nupur to go to them. Nupur nodded and they started to go towards the entrance.

Mayank slowly whispered in Nupur's ear. "Achhi lag rahi ho, Nupur."

Nupur blushed even harder. "Thanks."

Diya and Samrat led them both inside the disco. Pranav and Rishabh also followed them.

Promo: Mayur dance on a romantic song

Hey, friends!!! Tell me how it is.. Hope you like it. And Faru, I am waiting for your comment specially. 😊


Love,

$hrey@

Anamika.5 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey, I just updated. See the update. Its above your comment, dear.
Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally you updated..
thank you..
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

finally you updated..

thank you..
cont soon...


Sure dear 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shreshhh
U updated
awww thank u so much jani- u r the best
hehehehe as i forgot the original story i've to read this ff again
and after reading i felt to read more and thanx a lot for updating this part

itwas fantabulous as usual
hayeee maaynk was starring at nupur. he was mesmerized by Nupur's beauty...:D
hahahaha gang was teasing them- poor mayur..:D
very nice part
loved it
Do cont

Anamika.5 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

Shreshhh
U updated
awww thank u so much jani- u r the best
hehehehe as i forgot the original story i've to read this ff again
and after reading i felt to read more and thanx a lot for updating this part

itwas fantabulous as usual
hayeee maaynk was starring at nupur. he was mesmerized by Nupur's beauty...:D
hahahaha gang was teasing them- poor mayur..:D
very nice part
loved it
Do cont


Thanks Faruuu

I was waiting for ur comment. So hadn't signed off yet.

I am happy you liked it 😊😊

Will update next week now.. This one and Ek Duje ke Vaste, too.. So revise it in next week till Friday 😆😆

Now will sign off and go to sleep
😊

Love,
Shresh,,,
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
Do cont and pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updt
loved gang teasing session
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely upate.

loved gang teasing season ... loved it.

waiting for mayur dance.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

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