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Posted: 14 years ago
Ya... Will try to update this Sunday,... Half update is written... :)
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Posted: 14 years ago


Hello friends...

I know, mera murder hone wala he... Because Last update mene kai time pehle di thi... But now, I am updating it again... (So sorry for such a late update... :( :(... I will try to update regularly from now...)

A small Recap:

Mayank and Nupur went to Delhi for project. Mayank confessed everything to her. Then they completed their project, and came back to Mumbai. At Nupur's home, there is a boy that came to see her, Chinmay. Nupur and Mayank decided a plan to get rid of him.

Part 21:

Mayank explains her his plan.
N: Are you sure, ye plan kaam karega?
M: Full too guaranty, jaan.
N: Ok, honey.
M: bye. See you in the evening. Me baki sab ko phone karta hu.
N: Aur me Diya se baat karti hu. Bye.

Nupur disconnected the phone. And went outside.

NM: Arre beta, Diya se phone kiya tumne?

N: Ji nahi maa. Ab thodi der me karugi.

CM: Thik he, to hum log chalte he...

NM: Ji... Me baad me phone karugi. Chinmay aur Nupur ka sham ka program batane...

CM: Ji ji... jaroor.

Chinmay touched Nupur's mom's feet, "Namastey Mummy ji..."

Nupur was shocked hearing this. She controlled her face expressions and bid both of them farewell.

NM: Kitna sanskari ladka he na!

N: By God!!! (Horrible guy I have ever met!)

NM: Chal, beta jaldi se Diya ko phone kar...

N: Ji, maa. Me pehle lunch le lu?

NM: Oh ha! Vo to me bhul hi gayi khushi ki maari... (LOLSS)

N: Koi baat nahi...

Nupur takes lunch and goes in her room.

She calls Diya.

D: Hello Madam...

N: Hi Diya. Kesi ho?

D: First class, dear... Tum batao...

N: Me jara bhi thik nahi hu... Pata he, kya hua?

And Nupur tells her everything about Chinmay, his mother, her mom's planning and Mayank's idea.

D: Wo... wo... itna sab kuchh ho gaya?

N: Hmm...

D: Okay... Lets meet him in the evening. 5 sharp. At Juhu beach. What say?

N: Okay, I am asking Mayank about other friends.

D: Don't worry dear, I am calling up Sammy... Okay?

N: Okay... Thanks...

Nupur disconnected the call and called Mayank immediately. "Busy... Oh God! Vo shayad Rishabh, Pranav aur Sanrat se baat kar raha hoga!"

After 2 minutes, her cell buzzed.

"Mayank?"

N: Hello, Hi, Mayank.

M: Hi, angel. Tumne khana kha liya?

N: Haan... Tumne?

M: Haan. Mene bhi.

N: Ok.. Aur mene Diya se baat ki.

M: Haa, Mene bhi baat kar li Rishabh, Pranav aur Samrat se.

N: Haan... Diya ne kaha ki... sharp 5 baje Juhu beach pahoch jayege sab.

M: Haa jaan... Aur tum bhi. Bas Chinmay 5:30 ko ayega... Alright?

N: Haan... Okay... Ab me mom se baat karti hu us joker ko inform karne ke liye.

M: Ha... Love you... Take care

N: Love you too... Bye.

She went to talk to her mom.

N: Maa, vo Chinmay ji ko phone karke bolna he, ki sham ko Juhu beach pe jana he, 5:30 baje.

NM: Thik he, me phone karti hu.

N: Ji, maa. Aur me kuchh der sone jaa rahi hu. I am very tired.

NM: Okk... Beta.

Nupur went in her room and closed the door behind her. "Pata nahi ye Chinmay ka drama kab khatam hoga? God! Please save me!"

She got ready at 4:30 and went in the kitchen. Her mom was preparing some dish.

NM: Beta, Ye dekh, Me gajar ka halwa bana rahi hu. Ye le ke jaana Chinu ke liye.

N: Chinu?

NM: Haan... Arre, Mera matlab he, Chinmay ke liye...

N: Ji. Me to nikal rahi hu abhi.

NM: Haan, bas ho hi gaya he. Ye le dibba. Usse ye dish bahot pasand he. Esa bolna ki tune khud banaya he.

N: But maa, ye aap ne banaya he. Jooth kyun bolu?

NM: Jitna kaha utna karo. Chalo, ab jao... Chinu pareshan hoga der hogi to!

N: Ji maa... Bye.

NM: Bye.

Nupur left for Juhu beach. On the way, she was really irritated by her mom's CHINU CHAPTER.

She reached Juhu beach and was parking her scooty. Just then, she heard Diya's voice. "Hey"

Nupur turned and found Diya standing there. She was wearing salwar kameej, and that too, Nupur's style of dress.

N: Diya. Hii... Thank God! Tum mil gayi.

D: What happened sweety? You look upset, dear!

N: Ya! I am. But vo sab chhodo. Pehle mujhe ye batao, ki tumne apne jeans or tee shirt ki jagah meri style ka dress kyun pehna he?

D: Part of Mayank's plan... (Diya smirked)

N: Okk.. Mayank ka plan kaam kar jaye to acchha he, Varna mom to kal hi meri shadi us CHINU se karvane ko taiyar he.. BY GOD!!! (Her jaw tight and angry expressions on her face due to Chinmay)

D (Smilingly): Everything will be alright. Ok? Don't worry. Ye lo, sab boys aa gaye.

Mayank came by Nupur's side and held her hand. "Hmm, to Rishabh and Pranav, Both of you wanted to know, that who is love of my life? Right? So, She is none other than Nupur. Sorry, Delhi jaane ke baad tum dono se baat nahi hui. Samrat ko pehle se Diya ne bata diya tha."

P: Ohhkkk... Great yar. You look so sweet together.

R: Yes, truly made for each other...

S: Cograts... Now you are officially a couple. Samrat hugged Mayank and Diya hugged Nupur.

N: Thanks. (A shy smile appeared on her face.)

M: Okay. Chalo, ab celebrations baad me. Abhi ek aur kaam he,

N: Haan. Ye Chinmay ka kuchh karana hoga! Mom ne kabhi mere kehne par itna jaldi Gajar ka halwa nahi banaya. Aur aaj us ke liye khade khade bana diya. Upar se mujhe keh rahe the, ki mene banaya he esa bolna.

M: Gajar ka halwa! Aha... Ye to mujhe bhi pasand he.

N: To kha lo. Mene mana kiya kya? Ye lo.

M: Hmm... Abhi nahi... AUDIENCE ke aane ke baad apne hatho se khilana... Ok?

N: Kya? Matlab?

D: Haan... Great idea Mayank!

M: Okay.. Ab sab plan suno... Ki kya karna he...

Mayank explained everything to them again.

M: Clear?

All: Okk... Clear.

M: Ok, then... Plan start. 5 minute me Chinmay ata hi hoga. Us time pe, Diya aur Samrat, go at that bench. Tum dono vaha bethe hoge. Come on, everyone, take your position.

Diya and Samrat went on that bench.

Rishabh and Pranav sat on one bike on parking area. Mayank and Nupur just stood there. Nupur's tiffin was in her hand.

Just then Chinmay came in an auto. He tried to find Nupur there. But couldn't see her as she was covered by Mayank. Chinmay started to go towards parking area. As he was near Pranav and Rishabh, they both started their dialogues.

P: Arre yaar, ye Nupur ko patane ki mene kitni try ki… Lekin vo pati hi nahi.

R: Haan yaar… Aur ab to pategi bhi nahi…

P: Kya matlab?

R: Arre, usne apne liye ladka already pasand kar liya he.

P: Haa, yaar… Ab to use bahen hi manna padega!

R: I know. Angur khatte hote he.

Chinmay thought that Nupur has selected him as her husband. So he felt happy.

P: Arre, aap CHINMAY ji he na?

C: Ji… (Smiling widely)

R: Hmm… Laga ki aap hi Chinmay ji ho sakte he.

C: Ji, esa kis tarah se laga?

P: Kyunki pure beach pe aap hi cartoon lag rahe he.

C: Ji? (His smile vanished)

R: Ha ha ha….. Chhodo na. Uski bato ka bura mat mano. Ye he Pranav. Aur me hu Rishabh.

C: Ji… Namaste. Aap se mil ke badi hi prasannata hui.

P: Hume nahi hui.

C: Ji? Kya matlab?

R: Arre, aap ne jo bimari batayi… Vo hume nahi hui…

C: Arre, mahoday… mene kaha ki mijhe…

R: Excuse me… Mera phone baj raha he.

He picked up the phone.

R: Yes boss, bolo.

Mayank was there on other end.

M: Stupid. Jaldi se use bench ki aur bhejo. Poori sham parking place me hi khde rahoge tum tino?

R: Okay, okay… Sorry. Bye.

M: Bye.

Rishabh took Chinmay's hand in his hand.

R: Chalo, hum log beach pe ghumte he.

C: Lekin aap log ho kon?

P: Me Paresh Rawal.

R: Aur me Rajpal Yadav.

C: Lekin abhi abhi to aap ne apna naam Pranav or Rishabh bataya.

P: Agar yaad tha, to fir se kyu puchha?

R: To? Ab chalo bhi.

C: Ji… Jesa aap kahe.

Rishabh and Pranav took them near the bench where Samrat was sitting with Diya.

Chinmay heard the couple on the bench talking. He tried to ignore it.

D: Oh God Sammy, I really love you.

S: Mene kaha na, I don't love you.

D: Janti hu. You love that NUPUR. I know it.

After hearing Nupur's name, he stopped there.

S: Bas karo Candy. Bahot ho gaya. Kyun har baat pe Nupur ko bich me lati ho tum?

D: Because vo hamesha se humare bich he.

S: Kya matlab?

D: Matlab? (With fake tears in her eyes) School me bhi vo humare bich ki seat pe bethti thi.

S: What?

D: Phir college me! Har lab me vo hamare bich bethti thi. Pehle tumhara computer. Phir uska. Phir mera.

S: Lekin vo to teachers ka arrangement tha! What can Nupur do in that?

D: Achha? Phir jab hum log tour pe gaye the… To vo bus me hum dono ke bich beth gayi thi! Why?

S: Mene use kaha tha ki mere sath betho!

D: See! Dekha?

S: Kya?

D: Tumhari partiality!

S: CANDY! You are mad!

D: Ab tum Nupur ki vajah se mujhe mad kehte ho! Humm… Jao. Me tumse baat nahi karugi. Jao tum apni NUPUR ke pas.

Samrat's cell buzzed.

S: Hello.

S: Hey Nups… Hi…

Diya immediately looked at Samrat with angry face.

S: Ya babez, sure.

S: Ok, dear, No problem. Ok, sure. See ya. Bye.

D: Kiska phone tha?

S: Ek friend ka.

D: I know, ex-girlfriend ka.

S: Jab pata he, to puchha kyun?

D: Dekhne ke liye, kit um sach bolte ho ya nahi! Kya kya nahi kiya mene tumhare liye? Baal lambe kar rahi hu Nupur ki tarah. Mene western aur short clothes pahenna chhod diya. Ye dekho…

Diya stood up and turned around.. "Bilkul Nupur ki style ka dress bhi pahena he."

S: Fir bhi… Nupur is Nupur. Diya, tum kabhi uske jesi nahi ban sakogi! Got it?

D: Hmph! Ok, fine.

S: Aur ab mujhe kaam he. Nupur ka koi guest he, Chinmay.. Usko dhundhna he.

C: Ji… Me Chinmay hu.

S: Aur me Samrat.

C: Kaha ke Samrat?

S: Kya? Oww… Me Mumbai nagri ka Samrat hu. (He forwards his hands for handshake.)

Chinmay hesitates and starts to give his hand for handshake. But before that, Samrat takes his hand back and joins both his hand.

S: Namaste.

C: Oh… Namaste.

D: Aur me Diya.

C: Ji. Nupur ji ne aap ki bahot tarif kit hi.

D: Haan, jooth bolna uski adat he.

C: Ji?

S: Kuchh nahi. Majak kar rahi he. Chalo na. Hum log Nupur ke pas chalte he.

C: Ji… Chaliye.

Samrat led them all to Mayank and Nupur.

Mayank and Nupur were talking cutely. And Mayank was eating Gajar's halwa by Nupur's hands.

D: Dekh liya apni NUPUR ko?

C: Ji?

D: What? Tumse baat nahi kar rahi hu. Sammy!

S: Leave it, Candy. They love each other.

D: Urghhhh… I hate her.

S: Chinmay ji… Chalo na. Ruk kyun gaye?

C: Ji… Aap log hi jaie. Me ghar jata hu. Mujhe kaam yaad aa gaya. Aap sab ka dhanyawad, ki aap sab ne meri ankhen khol di.

R: Kya? To aap ghar se yaha tak nind me chalk e aye the?

Diya stomped on Rishabh's feet.

R: Ouch.

C: Ji… Shukriya. Phir milenge kabhi…

And Chinmay left from there with sad face.

(Enough for today now… My hands are tired… L )

So, please comment and tell me what you think about this… Will catch you later… Going 4 lunch… Bye. TC.

Love,

Shreyu

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
plzzz continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

You updated this after ages :)
I remembered it!
Nice update :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi shreyu,
kehte he na der aye par durust aye...
it goes apt with ur case
it was an excellant part
loved it............
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
luved the whole scene at the beach....dats sooooo funny
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
RE will read it tonight<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
what an update👏
mindblowing👏
chinmay.😆...........pata nahi ye jocker kaise pasand aa gaya nups ki mom ko😆
i hope mayank ka idea kam kar jaye😃
waiting for next update 😊
thanks for the pm.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was sooooooo nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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