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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#381

Beautiful part but unka confession karao naki difference badhao

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#382

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#383

shreya ye kya kiya
alag kardiya
luv story shuru hone se phele khatam
nahi ya nahi ho sakta
luved it

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#384

Yaar Shreyu.. tu kitni achchi hai... ab jaldi se inka gussa theek karade.. aur haan mere paas ek idea hai... sirf Mayu ko pata chal jaaye is Nupz hi Basket hain aur phir uski taang kheechega, tab bahut mazaa aayega

Ab agla part jaldi se update kar... Nice update..👏👏👏👏👏

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#385

hehe hope you sleep well girl.

I loveddddddd how you added the song and the contrasting scenes and emotions of MN in between, all in all they were very well portrayed, Great job, Keep it up!

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Shamsa aka Sam

@Shamsaaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#386

Sherya me very sad i was happy that u update it but get shocked while reading it.................

felt so sad for Nups and this suhani is really irrittianing yaaar ..................why she is creating pro between MayUr..............!!!!

Do Con Sooooon

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#387

omg what happened??
everything was going soo good and now its the exact opposite!!
nice part tho
continue soon

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#388

oyye!!
what a part yaar..
yu start out with romance.. nd end with anger!!
=P
lol.. its okay..
i dun mind... as long as they get together..
=P
anyways
gud job!
cont soon
HiNaL