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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#201

hey shreyu!!
awesoem job..
i didnt find any mistake so no criticism =D
i was very happy wid the part =)
HiNaL

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Rabi

@rose.mn

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#202

awesum update shryu i just loved it
i loved Suhaani interruption n nupur's anger.......
Mayank was not able to help Nupur.......N nupur was feeling lonely......
i really enjoyed reading it.......amazing part i must say
n last bit...falling session was lovely
do cont soon
love you........🤗

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simi

@searchoffriends

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#203

hey hii

this update was like too too good ,

i soo loved reading the part, first nupur ready to say sorry to mayank , but all thanks to suhaani , nupur in soo much anger hehe , soo loved reading about that ,

then again mayank tried helping her , again vo suhani beech mein ,

but loved reading about nupur insecurity and jeolousy hehe too good

and bechaara mayank usse kuch samajh nahi aaya that why nupur behaving like this with him hehe

and then finally the best part ,hyee how romantic , both falling down together , and they getting soo close , soo cute really want to read it ahead

please try and update with this soon

till then take care and thanks for the pm

lots of love

simi

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

awesome update

but this suhani urrgh..

anyways try to continue soon

n thanx for the pm dear

love

sana😊

Thanks Sana. Sure I will try my best.

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: pebolovesmayur
update ke pehle reserve😆

mujhe pata hai

anyway u gonna rock

Thanks Pebo... Love you.

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: nikki028
vry sweet updates............bt Suhaani....😡.....aate hi Mayur ke beech kabaab mein haddi ban gayi.....

nywz plzz continue soon

Thanks Nikki 😊

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: achoose
woow..super cute...

Thanks dear 😊

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
fantastic......
superb.........
awesome.........
mindblowing......

just hate that suhani.........

waiting for more of mayur

Thank you, thank you, sooo much.. Mahima.

Sure, you will get them soon.

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: bhavana92
res

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oh nooo....is baar bhi main top 5 mein nahi...😆
hmmm....Nupur darling! lagta hai kuch jal raha hai, in fact bahut kuch!😉
😉bechara Mayank! pehle Nupz ka gussa hardam naak par rehta hai aur Suhaani bhi aa gayi ghaav par namak daalne![hope i'm right with that saying....whatever!😆]
hope ki Suhaani ki yeh interference MayUr ke pyaar ko aur badhaye 😛, indirectly hi sahi!
Nupz gotta learn some patience too.......nahi toh Mayank ko use apne dil ki baat kehna 'mushkil hi nahi, namumkin ho jaayega!'😃
wonderful update shreyu!continue soon....

Hey, Bhavi.. Koi bat nahi. Top 10 me to ho na.

Ha, uska dil jal raha he.

I will surely update soon, dear..

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: mayurarti
Shreyu

Fantastic update dear

Loved it loved it loved it...............

Wow Nupur getting jealous

Aur yeh Suhaani mayank ke peeche kyu padi hai

Aww the fall was so sweet

do cont soon dear

luv
Nidzy~

Hey, Nidzy...

Thanks dear...

I Surely will cont soon

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