Bhavana's Gallery of Stories-New OS-Pg 18

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Bhavs dear

no chapals & sandals for you

It was a lovely OS

Outstanding ...mindblowing .....Loved it

I loved the ending

do write more

Luv
Nidzy~

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

hey bhavana..cute OS..

mayank loved nupur but he was willing to let her go for rohit..bcuz he know she loved him..

armaan was sad at the way mayank was sacrificing his love..n thats why he thought of something..

he told nupur the truth..n lied to mayank that rohit ran away..so he got married to nupur instead..

mayank felt really guilty but he had to do it..he tried explaining it to her..but was shocked when he found out she knew!..n then she even confessed..n he couldn't thank armaan enough!..

thats a sweet ending..but their banter still continues!..cute..

thnx 4 d pm pebo

do write more

-aish

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#133

its awesome..!!!
loved it..😊

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ramramramram

@ramramramram

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#134

Hey bhavana, Pebo told me about your wonderful OS,

And i must say your a amazing writer,

I was so into the story the moment you stated it

Keep writing more great OS's

And do PM me if you do

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kulsumd

@kulsumd

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

nyc1 dear...
Pm me wen u update new os..

Kulsum

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Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

Haha WOW thats was Choooooo Chweeettt Gud one
I knew from the very first that Mayu was eing fooled around haye bechara !!
U knw u write more stories on MayUr and KaSh (AR for ME)...ie KaYur :D !!!
Love
Vaishu

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#137

Hey read the last OS....I liked it, m not a gr8 mayur fan..but u caught me with ur beautiful writing.
My fav was the last part...that was simply adorable!:D

reminded me of the movie Jab We Met😊
continue writing!!
n do pm me the next:)