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Saadia

@Rozain

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#151

Hiiiiiiiiiiiii

that was so cute part
i really like
awesome update

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#152

[quote=Tapoor]

Bhaboon

lovely os

mind blowing

u r extremely talented

pls do write more

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thanx a lot Tapu di!😳

[quote=myownarea]

That was too good Bhavna :)
just too good:)

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aww! thanx Divya di!😃

[quote=Nirjhor105]

just beautiful

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thanx!😊

[quote=LOVEBARBIE]
awesome yaar
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thanx!😊

[quote=kweetrockstar]

oh wow
that was so awesome n amazing
i totally loved it
thanks pebo for the pm
i loved reading this one

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thanx buddy!😃

hey bhavana

it was a mind blowing os thanx!😊

loved the way mayank being fool😆😆😆

and the dialge " bole to mamu bana dya "was awesum blossom hehe😆

and the endiing sentences

of mayu as sadu wah kiya bt hai👏

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thanx a lot Sehrish!😃

Edited by bhavana92 - 15 years ago

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Mrina's PM ID

@Mrina-PMs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#153

Fantabulous!!!!

Loved it!!!!

Do write more!!!

Thanks for the PM Pebo...

Love

Mina

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wind453

@wind453

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#154

fabulous

it was awesome bhavana

loved it to the core

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#155

[quote=ridhima1_gunjan]
wowwwwwwwww

awsomee loved it a lottt

keep it up!!!!!!
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thanx a lot Aastha!😃

[quote=Rozain]
Hiiiiiiiiiiiii

that was so cute part
i really like
awesome update
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thank u Rozi!😳

[quote=mina18_secret]
Fantabulous!!!!

Loved it!!!!

Do write more!!!

Thanks for the PM Pebo...

Love

Mina

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aww! thanx a lot Mina!😳

[quote=wind453]
fabulous

it was awesome bhavana

loved it to the core

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thanx Vinu!😃

Edited by bhavana92 - 15 years ago

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437810

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Posted: 15 years ago

#156

ohh man!!!
Bhavna that was awesummm!!!!!
i srsly luvvvvvd this OS!!!!
it was juss soooo beautifully written!!!
gr8 wurk!!!
thanx 4 d pm... :)

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palak

@pluks

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#157

omg!! it was too gud dear :) :)

mayur were so cute nd mayank got fooled lols!!

it was indeed a "crazy marriage" :P :D!!

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#158

bhavna ....... it was brilliant ................i loved the OS .........very well written ............ do write more when you get time .........coz you really are an amazing writer.............