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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Muaaaaaaahhhh Gugs !!!

*** Sheepish ****

ummm .... sorrryyyy !!! 😛 Woh kya hai na, mujhse raha nahi gaya !! Kya zhakkkas OS tha yaar !!

Waise maine meri yeh reaction tujhe bahot pehle batadi thi...but kya karu jitni baar padha hai, and i have read it couple of times for your info 😊, utni baar yahi reaction aayi hai....

The siggy at the start was itself minddddddblowiiiiiiiiiiiinnnggggg !!! 👏 👏 👏

Naina finally compelled him to take her to Point 1857...

And he is feeling awkward by her desire to say there.. ** Uffff yaaaarrrr Yeh kabbbb sudhregaaaaa????? ....Whewwwww ****

The screaming scene was written beautifulllyyyyyyyyy and the photos add to it !

And then Naina repenting and the way Raj brought her on " PATRI" ( I mean on the right track 😆 😆) was superrrbbb !!! 👏👏 👏

But what i liked the mosssssssssssssssssst was the confession part !!! 👏 👏 jusssttttt amazing !! 👏 👏

Oh ! God ! Hum log kitneeeee alag alag style se unka confession karwa sakte hai yaar !!

Kaaaash inmein se ek bhi sadiyal DJs ne use kiya hota...

And as he confessed he was worried for Naina didnt respond immediately...

Captain Saab !!! Aapne confess karne mein itna time liya, ab thoda toh wait karo ! 😛

And finally Naina confessed and I loved Raj's reply 😉 😆

And finally, a beautiful UD sealed with captain shekhawat's relief that he finally did his FINAL CONFESSION !!!

Amazingggg OS gugs !!! Now what should I say about your writing skills??? Just that I would love you writing more and more and moreeeeeeeeeee 😃

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Most beautiful!!! 👏👏

kash yeh confession LRL mein bhi hua hota....par yeh kami aaj puri hogayi. I could imagine thw whole scene while reading it.😍😳

Superb!!!👏

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Rani

@rajeev_myfriend

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

guglu ur OS is just awesum its is beautifully so sweet so real when i was reading it i was feeling that i am watching those memorable episodes again but ur os is much much sweeter and better than that dj's lrl they r very bad they made it a mess

thanks for os as well as the pm

love u dear guglu

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Oh God deba its so romantic i love it yaar well written.

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pinkorblack

@pinkorblack

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

oh god so beautifully written!!!!
and so romantic too , lovd ur use of the pictures it made the os more lively and beautifully imaginable......
waiting fr more os frm u......soon

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strawberrychip

@strawberrychip

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

beautiful!!! i'm speachless.....

i wish you were the writer of lrl....

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

HIII HOW R U ?
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME
FANTASTIC
BEAUTIFUL UD DEAR
EMOTIONAL
ROMANTIC
MUJE TOH RONA AA GAYA
AAKIRKAR LAGA JAISE KI SACHME
RAJ NE NAINA PROPOSE KAR DIYA
I FEEL SO RELIEVED
TOUCHED BY THIS PART
THANX DEAR
LOVE U FOR THIS
PLZ UD SOON

LOVE
DEEPA