RN ONE SHOT GALLERY update page 17 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
i loved both ur one-shots!! very well written...the pics n everything..very beautiful!! pls pm me wen yu write ur next one shot!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Fewwwwwwwwww....kya shot tha yaar...???👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

just mindblowing n awesome yaar...too gud👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

kitni khubshurti k sath tune likha hai ki main kuch aur kah bhi nahi pa rahi hun...!!! kaash yeh confeesion aise hi aur yun hi LRL me bhi hua hota...!!! RN k bich confession nahi ho paya tha...aur us serial ki yeh sab se badi kami thi...!!! lekin aaj tera yeh one shot padh kar laga ki...voh kami puri ho gayi...!!! tune itne achhe se us scene ko describe kiya tha...each n every moments ko jaise tune describe kiya tha na...mujhe laga...jaise main khud yeh scene apne ankhon k samne dekh rahi hun...Just AWESOME yaar....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

raj ka confession...ek damm natural tarike se tune likha tha...koi banabat nahi...ek dam simple...par just perfect...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

den Naina...wowwwww....kya scene tha yaar....😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Guglu...u r such a sweet-heart...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
This was beautiful😳...Loved it..!!!.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
amazing superb n what to say i think mere pass enough words nahi hain.
First to say that u both a wonderful job by opening this OS Gallery. I think it's a brilliant idea.
Coming to ur first Valentines story that's fantastic, mind blowing.
Really sweet.The way u (preet) wrote it n developed it is clearly awesome.
Raj ko kabhi bhi Naina se koi shikayat nahi thi aur aage bhi nahi hogi. He really loves her a lot n thank god this time he got sucessful in sharing his emotions to Naina.
Shalini n her mind, i think she always thinks about naughty ideas n her ideas work on every one.
Huda ko to kabhi bhi chain nahi hai,each time he tries to be more n more close to Naina not knowing that she is only Raj's.
But Shalini again did a wonderful job n this time Raj asked Naina about the dance.
All the pics u use to show us the real scene behind were brilliant. Finally they confessed that they love each other.
again superb dear.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
I think on this second OS i should give my opinion in pure Hindi.

Aadbhut, akalpaniya evam sunder. 👏 👏 👏
Itna khoobsurat tha ye waala OS ki mujhe laga ki mai kisi dreamland ki sair kar rahi hoon jahan har taraf pyaar hi pyaar bhara hua hai bus Raj n Naina ka pyaar.
Sab kuch itna well written tha ki jitne bhi tareef karo kam hai. That is called a pur romantic update.
Manana padega ki Capatin Shekhawat ki training ka bahut positive effect hua hai Cadet Singh par, jis tarah se Raj asli baat nikalwa leta hai bilkul us tarah se Naina bhi sab baatein nikalwa leti hai na.
Raj to kuch kehta hi nahi is baar bhi agar Naina us k peeche nahi padi hoti. Aur ab us ko samajh me aaya na ki Naina kyoun peeche padi hai us k, kyounki vo bhi Raj se utna hi pyaar karti hai.
I am again happy with this type of confession, truly magical.

Hope 2 see an OS soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

OMG...wat an amazing OS....!!!! Loved it...!!!!! Waise Naina baaton ko kitna ghumati hai...!!!😆😆

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Thanks a lot Dhara...Naina hai hi waisi...ab mai kya karun...!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: golu_1677

this was just awesome.



Thanks a lot...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome update. too good .
loved the way u described the way their feeling. it's awesome.
loved the way u showed raj proposed naina. loved it.



Thanks a lot Rakhi... M glad you liked it... Raj had to propose to Naina...😉 There was no other way out...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Guglu Hi Suhana...

How r u?? M fine dear...what abt you...???

This was just brilliant👏👏👏..I wish it happened in LRL too but anyways we can live up the moment through your fiction..It was wonderful.. Even I wished for the same...that's why I wrote this one shot...

I cud really imagine it..The pictures were just perfect.. Thanks a lot...

Raj confessed his feelings to Naina..He was stammering but yet he tried to convey all his love in his confession.. Stammering in front of Naina is raj's birth Right...😆😆😆

Naina too was so happy to hear this n she too confessed her love to Raj..
Both of them were lost in their paradize of love...😃 Yes...what more could they do after the confession...
Bye
Bye and thanks for commenting suhana...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Muaaaaaaahhhh Gugs !!!

*** Sheepish **** Why sheepish...?😕
ummm .... sorrryyyy !!! 😛 Woh kya hai na, mujhse raha nahi gaya !! Kya zhakkkas OS tha yaar !! Its okay dear... Mai teri bhavnayon ko samajh sakti hun... Thanks a lot...
Waise maine meri yeh reaction tujhe bahot pehle batadi thi...but kya karu jitni baar padha hai, and i have read it couple of times for your info 😊, utni baar yahi reaction aayi hai....arey bas bas...itni tarif mat kar meri... aur tere patience ki daad deni padegi... itni baar padha kaise tune iss bakwas ko...???
The siggy at the start was itself minddddddblowiiiiiiiiiiiinnnggggg !!! 👏 👏 👏 Thanks a lot...
Naina finally compelled him to take her to Point 1857...
And he is feeling awkward by her desire to say there.. ** Uffff yaaaarrrr Yeh kabbbb sudhregaaaaa????? ....Whewwwww **** Humari OS aur fics khatam ho jayengi fir bhi nahi sudhrega...😉
The screaming scene was written beautifulllyyyyyyyyy and the photos add to it !Thanks a lot yaar...
And then Naina repenting and the way Raj brought her on " PATRI" ( I mean on the right track 😆 😆) was superrrbbb !!! 👏👏 👏 Thanks again... lagta hai ye pura reply thanks kehte kehte nikal jayega...
But what i liked the mosssssssssssssssssst was the confession part !!! 👏 👏 jusssttttt amazing !! 👏 👏 thanks again...(dekha...)
Oh ! God ! Hum log kitneeeee alag alag style se unka confession karwa sakte hai yaar !! Point to be noted...LRL ke creatives humko hona chaiye tha...
Kaaaash inmein se ek bhi sadiyal DJs ne use kiya hota... Bilkul sahi...
And as he confessed he was worried for Naina didnt respond immediately...
Captain Saab !!! Aapne confess karne mein itna time liya, ab thoda toh wait karo ! 😛 hahaha...kitna sahi kaha mana...😆
And finally Naina confessed and I loved Raj's reply 😉 😆 Kuch jyada hi nahi ho raha...? Tujhe ye pasand hai wo pasand hai...to fir kya pasand nahi hai???
And finally, a beautiful UD sealed with captain shekhawat's relief that he finally did his FINAL CONFESSION !!! Ha ha ha...ab Captain Shekhawat ke bina update thodi na complete hone wali thi...😉
Amazingggg OS gugs !!! Now what should I say about your writing skills??? Just that I would love you writing more and more and moreeeeeeeeeee 😃 Bassssssssssss ...bas kar... mai itna achha bhi nahi likhti... mai koshish karungi kuch aur likhne ka... Thanks for such a wonderful comment mana... I loved replying to it...

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