Ek Towel ki Aatmakatha....Priya's shot(RN) - Page 3

Originally posted by: rajeev_myfriend

dear mainne rn ka contest main toh part to nahin lia aur na he is ff ko read kiya

this is an awesum ff i really loved thorugh urs at leasr r n se confess toh kiya warna serial main hum sab taraste he rahe gaye the ke kab karega humare raj aapne n se aapne pyaar ka confession hey...thanxxx rani...!!! main toh isi koshish me hamesha rahti hun ke RN ka confession hamesha karwati rahun...😛

bt its so sweet aur haan yudi huda sab ka plan was also awesum khas aasa kuch woh loh serial main bhi karte taki serial aase dukhi end toh na hota us serial ki writer main nahi thi na...isiliye yeh asb ho gaya...agar main hoti...toh aisa thode na hone deti...RN ka kuch na kuch toh karti hi na...😆

anyways thanks for commenting on my ff pleasure...😃

love u

rani

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Okay....firstly thnx Mana for posting it here....warna main aalsi phir se jaake Priya ka shot dhundne me barso laga deti....hehe. Mana...hamesha sab se aage rahti hai meri khinchai karne ke liye...aur sath dene ke liye toh tum hoti hi ho...😆

Now cuming to the shot.....mujhe samajhna chahiye tha.....ye nautanki wali mast shot apni Priya ji ki hi ho sakti hai....😆😆....even I agree with Mana .....Billu for RN's kid's name....is very very unique....😆😆....and present me Raj-Naina ki jo convo thi.....specially Naina ki baatein....it was soooooooo funny!!!🤣 mera dimag kharab tha un dino...viral infection hua tha...!!! in fact first kuch para graph padh kar shiro ne bhi yehi comments kiya tha...par thank god tum sab is OS ke end tak toh gaye...😆 us tym jo bhi dimag me ghush raha tha voh type karti gayi...aur natija kuch yun nikla..!!! in fact yeh thoda aur lengthy tha...apr shiro ne use edit kiya hai...kyoun ke limited words dalne the na...isiliye..😆

And flashbak me.....hehe....I loved the line when she said...."Phirse class shuru kar di"....😆😆 ab raj bhi toh us ka teacher hi hai...toh kabhi kabhi ghush jata hai apne chach me...😆

Lekin iss baar show stealer kaun tha batau?? The show stealer of the fic award goes to...."Apne Adam ka TOWEL"....😆😆😆 ha ha ha...😆 haan yeh towel hi hai...jis ne puri kahani sunayi hai...toh towel ko hi award milna chahiye na...😆

Uski dukh bhari atmakatha sun kar bahut touchy feel hua....😆😆 itna touchy ki...tum hass rahi ho...aur main sar peet rahi hun...😆

Gr8 work Priya!!! Just like our LIONESS!!!😉😉 imagine...SHERNI dance karr rahi hai...tumhari tarif ke baad...😆

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

First of all..a hugeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee thanks to Mana for posting it here. ab yeh line Mana ke liye thi toh main is line par kya bolun...😆

Mai kuch samajh nahi paa rahi hun ki mai kya likhun. Isko padhte padhte meri hasi rukne ka naam nahi le rahi thi.😆 aur tu na hasste hue achhi lagti hai...isiliye aur hass...!!! lekin sirf mere samne...varna dushre tujhe pagal samjhenge na...😆

Aur upar se "Towel ki (dukhbhari) atmakatha par Mana ki khikhilati hui analysis".😆 he he he...ab tu us ki baat mat kar...kabhi kabhi lagta hai ke voh A ONE pagal hai...😆

Aur to aur RN ke bete ka naam "BILLU"😆 haan...Rajveer ka beta... Balveer...aur nickname...Billu...😆 !!! mujhe lagta hai sayad yehi wajah thi jis ki wajah se kuch logon o yeh fic achhi nahi lagi...😉

Aur Naina ke dost... kya dhansu idea tha yaar. Aur Rajveer sir bhi dimag lagane ke bajaye Naina ko khinchkar le aaye aur fir khud nahane chale gaye. Aur jab kidnappers aur kuch nahi sirf unke kapde lekar chale gaye toh bhi unke dimag ki batti nahi jali.😆 maine sare MENTOS chupa liye the yaar...toh batti kaise jalti...us ke baad current bhi toh chala gaya tha...😆

Yaar... Mana ka analysis itna mast tha ki meri samajh me nahi aa raha ki mai kya likhun. Ufff...pet dard ho gaya hai haste haste.😆 Doc hai na voh...har chiz ko bariki se dekh kar comments karti hai...😆

Priya... meri hasi rukne de. Agar mai tere iss fic ko padhkar apni hasi control kar paayi toh hi aage aur kuch comment karungi... warna tujhe isi se kaam chalana padega.😆😆😆 chalana nahi pada...bal ke main tujhe THANX kahna chahti thi...par kahungi nahi...!!! ek pal ke liye laga tha ke main akeli hun...par achank tum sab aa kar khade hue mere paas...!!! aur tab mujhe pata chala ki main kitni lucky hun...tum sab ke sath jo hun...😃

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

" EK TOWEL KI AATMAKATHA " Title se hi ye Priya ka ficton lagta hai..😆 par naam-karan Mana ne kiya hai...😆

Mana u have done a brilliant job..Title bhi tumne kaafi funny rakha hai.😆😆 voh toh meri BAND bajane ke liye hamesha taiyar rahti hai...😆

I think Priya tumhari supari nahin degi coz usse bhi yeh accha laga hoga.. anhi diya supari...vaise bhi aaj kal supari kafi mahenge ho gaye hain...😆

Fiction was really too funny..I just cudn't stop laughing after reading dis..🤣 mujhe khud bada ajeeb lag raha tha...jab maine is fiction ko likha tha tab...😆

Raj ke towel ke dard ko Priya hi samajh sakti hai..😆😆 tumhe kaise pata...😆

Raj Naina ko apne room mein le to aaya but usko nahane ki kya sujhi?? actually is point ko bhi maine mention kiya tha...par words jyada ho rahe the toh Shiro ne use edit kar k post kiya tha...😃

Kidnappers mast aadmi the churaya bhi to Raj ke kapde..😉😆😆 n usko aur Naina ko shower ke niche khada karke bhaag gaye.. ab kidnapper the koun yeh toh tum janti ho na...toh kaam bhi ulta hi karenge na...😆

Yeh plan definetely Naina ke friends ka hai.

Proposing scene mast tha..RN ke bacche ka naam kaafi hatke hai yaar..Hamesha unke bacche ka naam Naveen hi hota hai but Billu 👏 aisa naam tum hi soch sakti ho.. Rajveer ka beta Balveer...aka Billu...comic OS tha isiliye aisa naam rakha...varna aisa naam main thode hi na rakhti...😆

This part was too funny

"Tumhe aur kuch bhi nahin mila Raj, tum ne mujh se apni bete ki naak saaf ki. Cheeeee!!! Ab toh tum apne bete k 1 no aur 2 no k baad bhi use mijhi se poocha karte ho. Kahan main hamesha tumhare sarir se jud kar tumhare DEO ki smell kiya karti thi aur kaha yeh bachha jis ki wajah se aaj mujh se DABUR LAAL TEL smell aati hai. Yeh bachha bhi bilkul apne maa k gunde dost par gaya hai...jab dekho mujh par apne gande pairon se dance karta rahta hai.

Aaj toh dil se bas yahi dua nikalti hai ki......

"MAIN TOH EK TOWEL HUN

TU MUJHSE PYAR NA KAR

AGAR PYAR HO JAYE TOH

IS PYAR KA IZHAAR NA KAR"

Priya u have done a brilliant job👏👏👏..U made me laugh so much😛 thanqqqq...dear...

Congratulations for winning👏👏 thanqqqq...par is award ke sath jo reward mila na...voh main nahi bhul sakti...!!! matlab achanak is baat ka ehsaash hua ke mujh se tum sab kitna pyar karte ho...jis ke liye main kabhi THANX nahi kahungi...par haan...dil me hamesha aap sab ke liye dher sara pyar hamesha rahega...

Bye

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Thanks a lot Mana for posting this over here...!!!! Aur kya chunkar title rakha hai...!!! 👏👏 haan chun chun kar kaam bhi toh karti hai na voh hamesha...!!! 😆

Priya sweety....congrats for the well deserved award.....!!!! 👍🏼 thanqqqqqqqqqq😃

First time padhte hi mujhe pata chal jaana chahiye tha ke itni hilarious story sirf aur sirf teri ho sakti hai...!!!! Daba kahti hai na mujhe...'comedy of error'😃

You started it so well ke main actually me samajh baithi ke yeh sab naina Raj se keh rahi hai....Yeh toh strike hi nahi hua ke yeh Naina ki nahi, Raj ke towel ki feelings hai...!!!! Hum ladkiyan kya kum thi ke ab towels bhi Raj ke deewane banne lage...????😆 aur first para padh ke Shiro ko laga tha ke mera dimag kharab ho gaya hai...pata nahi kya ulti sulti batain likhi hai maine....😆

Raj telling Naina to remind him to ask the guys why they wanted to kill Naina was tooo funny...!!!!😆 ab naina aise irritating sawal puchegi toh raj ka jawab bhi toh yehi hoga na...😆

The use of the phrase ' Adam ka beta '....aisa kuch tu hi likh sakti hai...!!! 😉😉😉 jo bhi dimag me us tym ghush raha tha sab try kar diya tha...😆

Woh ladke kya le gaye...Raj ke kapde...!!!!😆😆 aur koi mehengi chiz wash room me tha nahi na...😆

Tum ne kitna logical reason diya hai Raj se woh choti window ka lock na khulne ka....!!!!😳😳 maine ankhon ke samne sare scene imagine karte hue likhe the na...😆

Naina ka lamba chauda dialouge mast tha...aur Surpanakha...!!!😆😆😆 ha ha ha...😆

Dimag k naam par sirf ek khali maidan hai jis par roz subah sham 50-60 fauji bass left right karte rahte hain

Aise aise dialouges kahan se aate hai tere dimag me....???? 😆😆 bachpan me gir gayi thi...aur sar par baht chot laga tha...tabhi se aise ho gayi hun...😆

End me Towel ji ka dialouge bahot hi funny tha...!!!! ab us ka dard tumhe funny lagta hai...??? ghor kalyug...aaj kal logon ko dushron ke feelings ki parwah hi nahi hai...😆

I had a blast reading it again....!!!! Superb, Priya...!!!! thanqqqqqq😃

Tu aise hi funny si stories likhti reh...!!!! ab tera ashrivaad sath hai toh...yeh toh aaghaz hai...😆

Originally posted by: preet09

Hi Priya 😊 Hiii Preet...

First of all thanks to mana..usne yeh post kiya varn tum to pata nahi kitni der laga deti..and then a big thanks to u for writing it, It was.......let me think for a proper word.............awesome 👏 ⭐️ thanqqqq...par sach kahun...toh main is OS ko kabhi post karti hi nahi...!!! yeh toh Mana ne kar diya...kyoun ke us din main bahhhhhhht upset thi...aur voh mujhe hassana chahti thi...
I just loved it, bechare towel ki aatam katha par yar, yeh towel to bahut lucky hai na, usne RN ka confession jo dekha 😉 😉 😆 aur maine bhi toh use LIVE telicast karwaya...😆

par bechare towel par itne zulm kyun kiye tumne.......bahut taras aata hai us par. Naina ki jaan ko kahtre ki baat sun kafi teezi se bhage....vese kaise na bhagte agar na bhagte to tum unke piche doggies na chood deti, are OS jo kharab ho jata ...aur nahi toh kya...fic meri hai toh main kuch bhi kar sakti hun na...😆

wah yaar.kya scene tha, pehle raj ka naina ko gussa hona phir kamre me logon ka aana aur unhe washroom me band karna aur wo bhi shower ke niche and then washroom bahar se lock kar dena.......aise idea na sirf tumhe hi aa sakte hain....really u r too good. ha ha ha...dimag us tym me thik se kaam nahi karr raha tha...upar se lunch tym tha aur ise likhne ke chakkar me main lunch bhi nahi kar pa rahi thi...!!! isiliye jaldi jaldi me jo kuch bhi dimag me aaya use likh diya...😆

raj aur naina ka confession sabse hatke tha, naina rote rote confess akrti hai aur raj kiss kar ke.....siddhe siddhe I LOVE U nahin bol hua unse........but the scene was fabulous and vese bhi agar wo siddhe confess kar dete to raj-naina kaise hote...thanks tot heir friends, agar wo yeh plan na banate to aaj yeh confession dekhne ko na milta arre vaah...sab kuch naina ke frnds aur mujhe kuch nahi...!!! maine bhi toh apne kharche se un ko Mentos khilayi thi...tabhi toh un ke dimag ki batti jali na...😆

Par priya, billu naam na ali aur pooja ke bete ka to mein soch sakti hun par raj-naina ke bete ka koi aur naam hi soch leti hai... comic shot tha isiliye yeh naam likh diya...varna main yeh naam thode hi na likhti...😛

On the whole, it was an mindblowing story, totally loved it. thanqqqq

Now, write more OS, kyunki UD to tum bahut der se karti ho, OS se humhe itni wait to nahin akrni padegi na... ab khinchai karna bandh karo yaar...
take care
Luv Preet 🤗

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Originally posted by: fanatic 21

totally mindblowing.....👏

luved d innovativeness here.....😊👏👏

never imagined dat dis scene can be even portrayed like dis...amazing👏👏👏

luved it totally and njoyed it as well.....👏👏
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Originally posted by: sweety_ursh

😛wow yaar i really like it main to fida ho gayi 😃its too gud yaar n you are the best kahan se lati ho itne lash topics yaar???????👏 👏