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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

wonderful update.

first,I loved the title Ek Towel ki Aatmakatha... it's too good , funny no hilarious title but loved it.

and then the way start it , it's too good.I was 🤣.

ek towle ne aaapne kaha ni kine aache bola....

sach mein...🤣.

raj ne naina ko le aaya aapne room but lo iye toh khud naha ne chala gaya,

and those kidnappers kia churaya , raj ke kapre, 🤣,then dono ko showers ke niche khara karke chale gaye,🤣

lov ed their conversation ,specially naina's talking style.

loved the way, raj proposed naina, too good.

the their son's name it's different.

tumhara iye os parke mein toh aaj bahut khush hogayi,

aaj bhaut din baad itni hassi, and love u for that.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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sanchari mookherjee

@saanch_69

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

😆

That was hilarious at its best....I just don't know how to describe it the way am feeling after reading this Towel ki Aatmakatha 😆 😆

I was a bit confused in the start but the way I was led thru the scene was just mind blowing 😉

The line which I liked the most was

Rajveer ne mushkurate hue kaha:- Jab ek ladka ek ladki k honton par kiss karta hai toh batao is ka kya matlab hota hai???

Naina:- Dekha!!! Aap ne yahan par bhi apna class suru kar diya, mere itni sari baton k baad bhi aap mujh se sirf sawal hi pooch rahe hain. Saaf saaf nahin kah sakte hain ki aap bhi mujh se pyar karte hain!!!

I can't stop myself from laughing imagining their faces, it was too good.

Congrats Priya 😃 😃

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

ohh god...so this ws from u Priya...yeah yeah ofcourse yaar...towel ki aatmakatha aur kaun likh sakta hai other than our sweet priya...hehehehe....
but i liked towel's aatmakatha..!!!
very romantic story n v v sweet.....
pls do write some more.....🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

I think Manali ne jo kiya hai Priya k liye vo koi aur to kar hi nahi sakta hai. Maine ye Fc me padha hi tha aur ab aaram se yahan comment bhi kar sakti hoon.

I think comedy likhne me Priya ko Award mila sahi mila kyounki is se jyada funny stories koi likh hi nahi sakta hai. Mujhe jab maine padha tha is ko tabhi lag gaya tha ki ye karamaat bus Priya hi kar sakti hai. Badhiya tha tabhi to award mila. Jis ko takleef thi us ne hi aaj tak kaun sa theer maar diya hai?

Sahi me, Raj aur Naina itne buddhu hain ki keh hi nahi paate hain humesha ki ek doosre se kitna pyaar karte hain. Apni feelings ko express karna sab se jyaada jaroori hota hai na pyaar me. Chalo jab ye log kuch nahi karenge to kisi na kisi ko kuch to karna hi padega, accha hi hua ki baaki k group ne planning kar di.

Tittle mast tha yaar, ek towel ki aatma katha. Sahi me bada hi atayachaar hua hai us towel pe jo pehle Raj k jism se lipti rehti thi par ab Billu ki naak pochne aur doosre kaamo me use hoti hai. Bad luck of it na. Kya beetati hogi us par?

Ye Raj bhi na sach me humesha Naina ko bekaar me daata hai sahi kaha Naina ne. Us ka Raj se naraj hona bhi sahi tha. Par is narajgi se ek fayda hua na ki us ko jo nahi kehna tha, i mean Naina ko us ne gusse me keh diya. Raj ne bhi Naina k liye apna pyaar accept kar k pehli baar koi bada kaam kiya.

Superb work dear. 👏 👏 👏

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Ek Towel ki Aatmakatha....yeh title sooja kaise...but it is perfect... 😉😆

The whole story is very funny😆😆...what an idea...i could have never imagined that this scene could be potrayed in such a way...but this is true creativity.

Sab logo ne milke Raj aur naina ko achaa fasaya. Raj did not doubt that this was all a trap. Aur finally naina ko hi pehle apna love confess karna pada....varna Raj toh kabhi kuch nahi kehta.

Too good....enjoyed it completely.🤣

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

fantastic job priya

ye autobiography srk ki ab se jyada hit hogi

thnx mana fr posting it

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Awesome n soooo lovely fic yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏... u know when i read this os inthe fc...i guessed it was your fic...n its the only fic i guessed....n believe me i loved this os sooooooo much

Ek towel ki atma kadha....i loved this title...perfectly suited to this fic ...thanks to mana for giving such a beautiful title

ab aate hain kahani ke pass....bechari towel ka kitna dhukh bhari kahani hain ... is towel ka bhi kya phooti kismat hain yaar.....pehle to sirf raj ki deo smell aati thi usse...aur ab dabur lal tel ki....n utna hi nahin ..billu to us par dance bhi kartha hain....poor towel...kitna kuch sehna padhraha hain usse

capain saab when heard that nainas life is in danger....to bhaga ladies hostel ki taraf...n naina ko apna room main lekar aaya....naina ne bhi utna stupid question nahin poocha....that wo log kaun hain jo usse marna chahthe hain ...n wo bhi kyun...ab doubt to aayega na...aur wo bechari apni doubt clear karana chahthi thi .....but raj to gussa hogaya us par...ab naina to muh banyegi na

raj to gusa wash room main to fresh up n uske room main gusgaye do log...n after that mast scene...naina n raj ko shower ke niche khadha kardiya...n wash room ko lock bhi kardi....chalo finally raj ne sharam ko ghatar main dal diya....n he tried to open the lock....but khamyab nahin hopaya....n waha pe bhi naina ko orders de raha tha...chalo ..kholo....are pyar se nahin samjha saktha ....chalo raj ka chillana ki wajah se ek accha kam hogya..naina sidha giri raj ke upar.....wow kya mast scene tha....i am imagining all this...n its a lovly scene...are jo ladkhi se wo pyar kartha hain wo uspe giri n donon bhige hue hain...phir bhi captain saab daantna nahin bhula naina ko n wo bechari rona shuru kardi........aur rote rote she said that she loves raj....n finally rajveer sir ko ye baat ehsaas hua ki kuch dinon baadh naina usko chodkhe hamesha ke liye chalijayegi...

nainas dialogue is so funny....dimag ke naam pe khali maidan hain..roz subah shaam fauji lefr right left karte hain...n raj ki confession..jab ek ladkha ladhki ki hont pe kiss karte to batayo is ka matlab kya hain.... confession bhi ek question paper ki tarah hain....aur ye sab apne saamne hote dekhke bechari towel kya feel kar rahi hain main samaj sakthi hun....upar se she already knows about the plan ..par kuch nahin karsakthi ..too bad raj naina milgayi to towel ke bare main sochna hi bhulgaya

ali ..yudi.alekh ,pooja,huda ka plan sucess hogaya...n raj n naina confessed their love ...agar ye log ye mast plan nahin banthe to pata nahin ye duffers donon kab ek dusre se kehpaayenge about their true feelings

Billu...tumhe aur koi naam nahin mila raj aur naina ke bete ko rakhne ka

the last lines by the towel r simply awesome

priya loved the whole os a lottttttttttttttttt n itna sweet n cute story ke liye meri taraf se 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

ab Mana se kuch nahi kahungi is SHOT k bare me...aur na hi supari dungi is naam k liye...!!! kyoun ki voh pahle se hi bata chuki hai ki voh is ka haq rakhti hai...!!! aur sach bhi hai...meri khinchai tum sabb nahi karoge toh aur koun karga...!!! main bichari abla naari...tum sabb k samne aur kya bolun.... 😆

is fic ko maine last year OCTOBER ko likha tha...!!! shiro ne mujhe jo tym diya tha usi tym k ander mujhe yeh likhna pada...matlab sirf 2 hours me...!!! main pahle se hi is contest me participate karna nahi chahti thi...par ek din raat ko Shiropa ne mujhe 11 baje tak torture kiya...aur finally main maan gayi...!!! yeh contest october me hona tha...!!!😆

ab aate hain is SHOT par...!!! limited words hone ki wajah se main kuch scenes achhe se describe nahi karr payi thi achhi tarah se. aur main na hi is shot ko yahan post karnewali thi...par yeh toh Mana thi...jo meri koi bhi baat nahi sunn ti aur us ne yeh kaarnama kar dikhaya...!!!

isiliye raj kyoun nahane chala gaya...yeh thik se nahi likh payi...!!! aur rahi baat BILLU ki...toh...!!! agar main romantic shot likhti toh naina se beti paida karwati( of course...ek fic me us ka writer hi god hota hai toh voh kuch bhi paida karwa sakta hai)...aur us ka naam RAINA rakhti...aur agar emotional shot likhti toh...beta paida karwati aur us ka naam naveen rakhti...!!! par yeh toh kisi aur ki AATMAKATHA thi...isilye maine Raj k bete ka naam BILLU rakh diya...!!! matlab BILLU us ka pet name hai yaar....us ka pura naam toh hai BALVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT...son of RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

ok...ok...ab baht ho chuki nautanki...!!! apr seriously guys...yeh awrd mujhe aap sab ki wajah se mila hai...23 mems ne LIKE button press kiye the...!!! aur yahan par bhi sayad mujhe 21 hi mile hain...!!! isiliye sara credit toh SHIROPA aur aap sab ko jata hai...!!! main toh ek TUCHH PRAANI hun....!!!!😆

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt guys....!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Yeh aap sab k liye spl...{Mana,candyfloss,pinkorblack,urbi, afreen, namita, nisha, yogitha, dazzy(nisha), guglu, shiropa, kads, neelu,sumi, dhara, lipi, aarti, janu, frnnz of frnz,preet, vertika, Rakhi,suhana, rani, preeti, saanch, sur)

mere sare IF k DOST...andhere me mere sath rahne wale GHOST

Veg ande k TOAST....bujhe hue lamps k POST..........

Love u d MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOST..........🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

bye n tc

Priya😃

@ mana...frndship means the understanding of hearts sharing and respecting of feelings n helping each other. i m so glad u r d frnd for me. luv u n miss u...🤗

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi freinds....I'm here with another wonderful, amazing, HILARIOUS and Superrrrbbb creation by a verrryyyyy talented writer (First !!! 😉 ) and one of my sweetest friend Priya. 😃

Few things happened that had hurt her a lot...I dont want to go into that again and repeat them, but knowing her, though she is back with BANG, I know somewhere, these things can't be forgotten that easily....

And so I hope this small gesture of mine will further help to wipe away that portion of her memory 😆 😆 😆

And You my friends, by commenting and pressing " Like" button,will aid me in my efforts!Ab akeli doctor kya karsakti hai yaar !

Aur yeh kahaani ko yeh NAAM maine diya hai....so iska CREDIT sirf mujhe jaata hai, Priya ko nahi!

Thanxxxx a lot Mana...!!! actually apne rule k mutabik main tujhe THANX nahi kahti...!!! par jis din tune yeh post kiya tha na...us din main baht hi jyada upset thi...!!! phir tujh se baat hui...aur tune achanak...yeh karnama kar diya...!!! n finally main hass padi...apne is bewakufi ko is tarah se yahan dekh kar...!!! aur upar se tera name selection...ha ha ha...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 love u yaar...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi Priya !😕 hiiiieeeee...par tune yeh confused ka pose kyoun diya hai😆

Yeh consused sa expression issliye...bcoz I just HOPE I've not spoilt your plans of posting this OS yourself... nahi yaar...main is ek OS k liye itna kuch sun chuki thi ki main ise kabhi is tarh se post karne k bare me soch bhi nahi sakti thi...

Aur agar kar bhi diya toh kya !!!😛 Mujhe haqq hai !! 😉 😆 😆 😆 haan...haan...tujhe toh baht kuch haq hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab batati hoon mujhe teri ONESHOT kaise lagi???? voh toh main janti hi hun...tune mujhe pahle batay tha...😆 😆 😆

You know something, i read it almost 6th time today...

Aur aaj bhi main utna hi hass rahi thi....🤣 hadh hai...maine kitna sad OS likha hai...aur tujhe hassi aa rahi hai...!!! is OS k liye main kitna royi thi tujhe pata hai...??? khair point ki baat yeh hai ki...main khud bhi hass rahi thi...jab tum sab ka comments padha toh...mujhe laga ki yeh OS itna bhi bura nahi tha...!!! n thanxxx a lot...tum ne mera yeh shot 6th tym padha...aur upar se comments bhi karr rahi ho...!!! is ka matlab tumhara dimag thik thak hi hoga...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

It was Aweeeeeeeeeeeeesoooooooooooooooooomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃 Thanxxxxxxx bolun....??? naaaaaaaaa

" EK TOWEL KI AATMAKATHA " 😆 😆 😆 ha ha ha...😆 😆 😆

I just hope yeh title dekhkar tum mere naam ki supari na dedo !! wellllll main de hi deti...par abhi tak hamare supari k paid me sirf flowers hi hain...abhi tak supari hue nahi hain...!!! warna jarur de deti...ha ha ha...!!! par sach toh yeh hai ki yeh naam baht suit karta hai mere fic par...!!!😆 😆 😆 But I guess...I'd already told you ! Same B'day waalo mein Gr8 telepathy connection hota hai 😉 Toh main usse madad keliye bulaungi...😛 aur phir I'm damn sure...tum mujhe maarna chodkar kisi aur cheez mein busy hojaogi ! 😛 I mean...usse dekhne mein! 😛 le sirf dekhne me...??? arre mera dimag kya kharab ho gaya hai...!!! mujhe aur bhi baht kuch karna hai...??? oye...ulti sidhi baat mat soch...😆 😆 😆...!!! mujhe us se kuch sawal jawab karne hain...ha ha ha😆 😆 😆

It was Signature priya style !! completely !!! kya karenn...hum apna khali dimag sath le kar hi chalte hain...😆 😆 😆

Ohkies....toh mere hasne ki shuruvaat intro se hi hui... because of the line...

par kabhi kah nahin paye.wajah koi jaruri bhi nahin hai.. ab main kya karun...serial me bhi toh yehi kiya tha na...😆 😆 😆

Aur phir shuru hui REAL Nautanki...!! ha ha ha...😆 😆 😆

mujhe toh laga, Pri ne comedy chodke tragedy kyun likha??? 😲 achha ullu banaya na maine...😆 😆 😆

Parr...as you know, main tujhe bahot achchese jaanti hoon...toh main samajh gayi, ki yeh iceberg ka tip hai...asli cheez to andar chupi hui hogi ! 😆 ha ha ha...sahi kaha tune...!!! mere paas teen OS k ideas the...!!! ek thoda romantic...dushra...tragedy wid romantic aur 3rd yeh...!!! aur maine 3rd ko choose kiya tha...

Jab poori story padhne ke baad phirse story ka woh first para padha na...believe me, woh aur bhi hilarious lag raha tha !! 😆 maine jan bujh kar voh sab se pahle likha tha...atki tum sab ko lage ki Priya ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai...!!! aur jab last me pahuncho...toh tum sab ko lage ki is k paas toh dimag hi nahi hai...!!! vaise first us para se maine achha ullu banaya hai na tum sab ko...😆 😆 😆

Aur BILLU padhke toh main sure thi, kuch toh kya , bahot badiiii gadbad hai! 😆 is OS me tha hi kya...??? suru se gadbad hi toh chal raha tha...😆

haan....par maine uss phone call se guess kar liya tha ki Naina ke frenz ka hi koi plan hoga...aur dekha??? main sahi thi! 😃

** patting my back with pride ** is ka jawab bhi tu pahle se de hi chuki hai ki 'tu mujhe achhe se janti hai'...😆

Phir wahi hua jo hona chahiye....mera matlab Captain saab daude apne Naina Ah' Singh ko bachane aur kheench ke le aaye apne room mein... yeh toh un ka fav job hai...

Yeh Naina bhi na, sawaal pooch pooch ke bande ko irritate kar deti hai! serial me bhi toh yeho hua tha...😆

Par yeh kya? Raj NAina ko company dene ke bajaye nahane chala gaya??? 😲 Yeh kya baat hui yaar?? actually us compt k liye limited words the...isiliye edit karna pada...par maine us scene ko thoda alag se likha tha...

Khair...par jaise ki santh mahatma keh gaye, jo hota hai achche keliye hota hai!! 😛 santh mahatma ka naam toh bata...

Ab do pyaar karne waale ek kamre mein ho, toh bijli ka kya kaam?? 😛 haan...bekar me bijli ka bill badhega aur kuch nahi...!!! vaise bhi hamare desh me kitni shortage hai bijli ki😆

Issliye God( ??? 😉 ) ne bhi sahi time par batti gul kardi ! unhe bhi bill ki padi thi...😆

Waah Waah !! Aise kidnappers aur goons par toh logon ki dua ki barsat hogi !! isiliye toh akashar mre hi fics me aise log hote hain😆

Kitna punya ka kaam kar gaye !! RN ko bandh kardiya bathroom mein ek saath !! 😛 Aur chori kiya bhi toh kya? 😛 kya...😆

Dekh tu yeh mat soch ki mera dimaag ganda hai...maine usse punya ka kaam issliye kaha , kyunki main jaanti hoon, RN koi 'PAAP' nahi karenge ! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 ha ha ha...tu nahi sudhregi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Bechaare Rajveer Sir, bheegi NAina ko dekhne ka chance toh mila, par kismat ne unse uspar 'Flat' hone ka sukh cheen liya ! 😆 pahle bhi baht baar dekha hai yaar...par kuch karne aur kahne ka mauka hi nahi mila tha...!!! isiliye maine mauke par chauka maar diya...!!!

Kyunki khud bhi toh Towel mein the....Aur agar kuch gadbad hojati toh....NAina toh chakkar aakar 'Flat' honi hi thi...

Issliye..... nahi yaar...mere rahte raj k sath kuch galat ho hi sakta...😆

Then, bhale hi unke 'Strategic' dimaag nein solution dhoondh nikala, par uspar amal karna namumkin ho raha tha! agar mumkin ho jata toh naina ka kya hota...

Phir, as usual rescue karne aayi unki apni Protege...Cadet NAina Ah' Singh ! voh toh hamesha hi taiyar rahti hai...!!! raj ne bulaya nahi ki voh hazir hai...😆

Par Rajveer Sir ko uski kadr ho toh na? yeh toh hai...😆

Bechari itni koshish kar rahi hai kholne ki aur yaha Wash room ke damp aur cool atmosphere mein, Rajveer Sir ka temperature high ho raha hai...!! aur nahi toh kya...??? koi aa jata aur dekh leta toh dono kya karte...😆

Phir hona kya tha??? MADAM phisli aur apne ADAM par giri! 😆 😆 😆 ha ha ha

Her confession was cute !! thanx...of course naina ki taraf se...😃

Aur Captain saab ko bhi ehsaas ho gaya ki agar unhone kuch nahi kaha , toh woh apne pyaar ko kho denge... is ka matlab cap sir k paas dimag hai...

PAr you know, Raj kitni bhi badi 'TUBE LIGHT ' kyun na ho, par he is th BEShT!!!😃 😃 😃 koi shaqqqq😃 😃 😃

Kya tareeka tha confess karne ka! Naina madam bhi chaunk gayi !! aur tu...??? tera kya reaction tha...😉

I loved this part... thanxxxx a lot...RN ki taraf se...😆

Rajveer ne mushkurate hue kaha:- Jab ek ladka ek ladki k honton par kiss karta hai toh batao is ka kya matlab hota hai???

Naina:- Dekha!!! Aap ne yahan par bhi apna class suru kar diya, mere itni sari baton k baad bhi aap mujh se sirf sawal hi pooch rahe hain. Saaf saaf nahin kah sakte hain ki aap bhi mujh se pyar karte hain!!!

Ab ek teacher se dil lagane ki sazaa toh usse zindagi bhar bhugatni hogi naa? 😉 haan...aur voh khushi khushi bhugtne k liye bhi taiyar hai...

Aur PRi, iske baad mujhse mat pooch...aur expect mat kar ki main kuch likh paungi.... kyoun...tujhe rona aa raha tha kya...

Jab bhi likhna start karti hoon toh hassi rukne ka naam nahi leti...😆 😆 😆 phir thik hai...!!! ek doc ko hamesha hasste rahna chahiye...patient par achha asar padta hai...😆 😆 😆

I mean...it was just...just FAB !!! Awesome !! tooooo toooo goood !!

Aur bhi kuch kehne ki zaroorat hai kya?? haan...!!! ab... 'kya'... yeh mat puch...main bhul gayi...😆 dhanyavaad...shukriya...karam...meherbani😃

Ek baat bata, tu khati kya hai? KAise aise ideas aate hai tumhare dimaag mein?? 😆 😆 voh sab kuch sec hai...tujhe kabhi furshat me batayungi...😆 😆

Par yeh kya?? Tujhe koi aur naam nahi mila??

RN ke bete ka naam BILLUUUUUU !!! positively soch na...

Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Naam kuch...kuch nahi bahooooot atapata hai yaar.. main sach kahti hun yaar...maine us k bare me soch kar bilkul nahi likha tha...!!! maine toh yeh socha tha ki 'rajveer' ka beta...'balveer'...so Billu rakh diya...!!! actually yeh thoda comic tha...toh isiliye maine aisa likha tha...par sach me main raj k bete ka naam yeh thode hi na rakhungi...

Wah bhaai wah....RN toh bade hi soch samajh kar ghar chalate hai! tabhi 3 saal woh ek hi towel sambhaal kar rakha hai! 😆 😆 😆 shaadi k baad...sab ka dimag line par aa jata hai...😆 😆 😆

The lines in the end were ....funny! 😆 😆 😆 😆 ha ha ha...

Toh yeh tha ' Towel ki (dukhbhari) aatmakatha ' par meri khilkhilaati analysis... sahi kaha...😆 😆 😆

Hope aap bore nahi huye ho, aur agar hobhi gayi, toh you DESERVE that...samjhi? main aur bore...??? naaaaaaa

mere aankho se aansu ( haasi ke kyun ho na) nikaalne ki sazaa toh tujhe milegi hi!! hee haa haa hawww 😈 saza...???yaar...tujhe pata hai...mujhe likhte waqt itni hassi nahi aayi thi...jitna tere is cmt ko rply karte hua aaya 😆

Loads of laughter and luv,

Your very own friend 😉 ,

mana 😃

Love u too Mana...🤗

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