mil hi gaye- sajan ss part-33,page-143 - Page 25

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

79.8k

Users

96

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

samratrocks thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
nice...actually wonderful sushu!! luved da update.......really enjoyed reading it..keep updating dear!! am eagerly waiting for da next part
sushups thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago

ok

guys bahut ho gaya sochna ab padhne ki baari aayi hai

i will just say some of urs questions will be answered and plzz this time it is a very long update because i wont be able to update the next for some days so plzz bear with me

so this is for u dolly,sana and finnie

enjoy

and do reply😃



Scene shifts:

Suhani and nupur near samrat-"kya baat hai samrat...bhai tum theek toh ho"

Samrat just replies-"chashmish yahin kahin hai"

Suhani and nupur r shocked to here this

Nupur-"samrat yeh tum kya keh rahe ho?"


Samrat-"nupur meri baat ka yakeen karo main sach keh raha hun,maine aaj use puri tarah se mehsoos kiya hai.mera dil galat nahi ho sakta"


Mayank(angrily as he had enough)-"Bas samrat bahut ho gaya .please aisi baatein karna band kardo.kyun aisi baatein karte ho jo kabhi ho nahi sakti .aaj tak tumhe yeh lagta raha hai ki gunjan mari nahi....mari nahi toh kaha gayi samrat.aur aaj tumhe lagta hai ki woh yahi nainital mein hai.......aggar woh yahan hai toh tumhare samne kyun nahi aayi.woh toh tumse bahut pyaar karti thi naa toh tumse dur kyun reh rahi hai.bolo samrat hai koi iska jawab......hum yaha karan ki shaadi ke liye aaye hai,plzz unlogo ke saamne aisa kuch bhi mat karna "

Samrat-"mera vishwaas galat nahi hai mayank...yeh main jaanta hoon.aur main tumse waada karta ho ki main chashmish ki talaash mein yahan wahan nahi bhatkunga use dhoond ne ki koshish bhi nahi karunga,agar maine sache dil se apni chashmish se pyaar kiya hai toh upar wala khud meri mulaqat us se karva dega.....abse mein tum logo ko chashmish ke bare mein tab hi baat karunga jab woh mere saamne aayegi.(saying so he leaves) "


Nupur-"mayank tumne aisa kyun kiya???....tumhe dikhayi nahi deta ki pehli baar samrat apne ird gird banaye hue duniya se bahar aakar normal behave karne ki koshish kar raha tha aur tumne..tumhe zara bhi uski parvah nahi???"


Mayank-"parvah hai is liye aisa kiya nupur ,kyunki samrat apni expectations bahut badha raha hai nupur .jagti aakho se sapne dekh raha hai...lekin nupur jab jagti aakhon se dekhe gaye sapne tutte hain toh sab bikhar jaata hai......pichli bar gunjan ke saath dekhe gaye sapne jab tute the toh kya hua tha samrat ka yeh toh humsab ko patah hai naa............"


Nupur and suhani realize why mayank did this

Mayank(with tear in his eyes)-"hum pehle hi gunjan ko kho chuke hain ...........ab main samrat ko nahi kho naa chahta......"

And he walks away


*****************************************************************

Scene shifts


Sonias room


There r picures of arnav and Sonia all over the walls of her room





Sonia just falls down on her bed exhausted


She looks the pictures on the wall and signs

Girl 1-"didi bahut thak gayi ho..."

Sonia-"haan bahut zyaada,mom dad bhi nahi hai naa "

Girl 2 '"waise di jijs kab aayenge"

Sonia-"patah nahi"

Girl 3-"hayee dayiya maine toh bhul hi jayi arnav jijaji ka toh phone aaya tha"

Sonia-"chutki yeh tu mujhe ab bata rahi hai.(girl 3 is chutki their garderners daughter but always stays with the three girls and is very close to them )"


Sonia-"chal batah woh kab aayenge"

Chutki-"maaf karna jiji aunhone aane ka time toh nahi bataya"

Girl1 & 2-"phir kya bataya"

Chutki-"yahi ki chaand nikal ne se pehle aake pahunch jayenge"

Sonia-"ab main iska kya matlab nikalu"

Girl 1-"hayee didi jijs kitne romantic hain"

Sonia-"kya khak romantic hain.hamesha mujhe pareshaan karte rehte hain.ab yeh kya naya theory nikala hai ....ab chand ke aane ka time thodi naa har din ek saa hota hai."

Girl 2-"didi tum phikar mat karo woh time par pahunch jayenge"

Sonia-"khair main tum dono ko batana bhul gayi aaj girish uncle aaye(jeweller) the hum teeno ke chain aur locket polish kar diya hai.yeh loh tum dono ka

Its a chain with "S" locket(three of them wear the same kind of locket only size differs)

Girl 1 and girl 2-"thanks di"

Sonia-"ab chalo lunch kar lete hain,chutki outhouse mein khana"

Chutki-"woh shyaam laal ne pahuncha diya hai."


Scene shifts to outhouse:



All r to have their lunch

Karan-"chalo ab khana aa gaya hai"

Uday-"mujhe joro ki bhook lagi hai"

Karan-"par tumne toh kuch hi der pehle pizzas aur cold drinks liye the naa."

Suhani putting hand on karan shoulder-"rehne doh karan yeh aisa hi hai"

Mayank not talking to anyone but silently watching samrat who had just arrived and had taken a seat

Karan-"thanks shyaam lal ab tum jaao hum khud serve kar lenge"

Shyaamlaal-"thik hai bhaiya"

Karan-"waise sab logo ko batah dun evening ko sab ready ho jaana."

Benji(engrossed in serving himself)-"kyun"

Diya hits him hard on his shoulder

Benji-"aahhhhhhhh mara kyun"

Diya glares

Benji-"oh sorry mere mind se slip kar gaya tha ki aaj tumhari sagai hai"

Karan-"acha hai ek maar se yaad bhi aa gaya,thanks diya"

Diya-"u r welcome"

Samrat-"sorry karan main nahi aa sakta"

Mayank just looks on

Karan-"kyun samrat"

Samrat-"dekho mujhe galat mat soch naa par tum toh jante ho mujhe aise bhid jagah jaana accha nahi lagta upar se aaj puri journey ke baad main bahut thak gaya hun,i hope u understand"

Karan-"koi baat nahi dost main tumhe force nahi karunga..lekin agar ho sake toh aa jana............aur haan sirf aaj ke liye hi i will understand.iske baad kheench kheench kar leke jaaunga"

Samrat half smiles-"thik hai"

Everybody starts eating

Samrat jaise hi pehla nivala leta hai toh kuch der ke liye ruk jaata hai

Phir aage pade hue bowl jisme gajar ka halwa hai use utha kar apne plate mein serve karta hai.aur use cakhta hai

After eating it a content ,charming smile (which was lost in this 5 months)appears on his face

He serves himself more

Suhani-"nupur bhai ko dekho "

Nupur busy eating '"kyun kya hua suhani"

Suhani-"bhai halwa kha raha hai"

Nupur instantly stops eating and watches samrat

Nupur '"samrat itne chav se halwa kha raha hai yakeen nahi hota"

Diya who has also noticed the change-"pichle 5 mahine se samrat ne gajar ke halwe ko chua bhi nahi tha aur aaj itne maze se ,kitna muskura ke kha raha hai"

Everyone finish their meal and proceed to take a little rest

Just before that samrat speaks up-"karan jab sham ko jaao toh meri tarf se us insaan ko thanks kehna jisne aaj ka khana banaya hai."


**********************************************************************

Nearly in the evening samrat strolling inside the outhouse

He stopped outside a room which was half open ....when he fully opened it he saw it was full of musical instrument

Samrat sees shyamlaal passing by and calls him-"are shyaamlaal yeh itna bada music room .."

Shyaamlaal-"are bhaiya yahan hamri teeno didi riyaas karti hai.sangeet ka bahut shauk hai unko aur kaise naa ho badi memsaab bhi toh sangeet kar hai.asal main yeh badi memsaab ka hi riyaas karne ka karma hai par teeno didi bhi kabhi kabhi yahi aa jati hai.bade ghar mein bhi didi ke kamre mein aise hi kuch cheeje hai"

Samrat-"accha"

Shyaam laal leaves

Samrat notices a guitar nearby and goes near it

Scene shifts

One of the girl near the back door of outhouse where there is a small room(which is a boutique office)

She opens the room and takes out some papers and a book of designs and slides it in a cover and seals it and comes out of the house


Girl 1-"ramu kaka yeh parcel shyamlaal ko London courier karne de dena"

Ramu kaka-"bitiya yeh kaam toh baad mein bhi toh ho sakta tha naa "

Girl 1-"nahi kaka agar aaj yeh designs courier nahi kiya naa toh adyaasha pagal ho jaayegi aur assignment complete naa hone ke wajah se shaadi main delay aayegi ....aur agar shaadi main rukavat hui toh........... "

Ramu kaka- "...toh karan baba pagal ho jayenge"

Girl 1-"bilkul sahi"

Ramu kaka-"main abhi deke aaya bitiya"

Girl 1 smiles as he leaves .she was just about to make a move when she stops in her tracks after hearing someone playins a guitar

Samrat is playing the guitar with mjht tune(same as in morena promo)

Girl 1 looks around and about to enter the outhouse when chutki stops her

Chutki-"jiji aap yahan kya kar rahi ho"

Girl 1-"woh ......main"

Chutki '"rehne do ab chalo warna phir se Sonia jiji se dant padegi"

And she drag her to the house

Sonia arrives all dressed



Sonia-"are tum dono abhi tak tayaar nahi hue"

Girl 1 & girl 2-"sorry di woh mom dad ke saath baat karne mein busy ho gaye"

Sonia-"accha thik hai jaldi se tayyar ho jaao"

Sanas dress




Sarahs dress




Sonia all the time looking outside the window

Girls-"hayee.............yaad piya ki aane lagi hayee bhigi bhigi raaton mein"

Sonia glares

The girls giggle

Sonia-"main niche jaa rahi hun jaldi aajana"


And Sonia leaves

Downstairs everyone is happy

Some r playing music while some r dancing

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dGZ1kZUx07Y[/YOUTUBE]

Aaja aaja hai aaja aaja, Aaja aaja hai aaja aaja-u can see there is a lot of rush and many girls moving here and there
Aaja aaja mera ranjhna ve aaja aaja, Aaja aaja mera ranjhna ve aaja aaja-finally they all start dancing
Sonia-Aaja dil jaaniya ve aaja
all-Aaja aaja mera ranjhna ve aaja aaja

Sana-Tere des sajjan, aayi teri dulhan
Dholi le aayi, dekh tere aangan
Zara daaman mere aanchal se baandna



Now reveals Sana:




Sana & Sonia
-Aaja aaja mera ranjhna ve aaja aaja, Aaja aaja mera ranjhna ve aaja aaja

Sonia- Tere jo vaade reh gaye aade
Main ab unhe nibaungi yun hum dum
Sana- Saat samandar lang diye maine
Tujhko badane hai chaar kadam
Saathiya, saathiya hath de, ab mera saath de
Sonia-Dekh raahon mein teri na jaaye ja
Sonia & Sara-Aaja aaja mera ranjhna ve aaja aaja, Aaja aaja mera ranjhna ve aaja aaja

as the drum plays Sarah enters
Aaja aaja ve aaja aaja, Aaja aaja ve aaja aaja and (top view shown)as she does a ghomar

And then u can see Sarah:







Ooo ..

Sarah telling Sana- Deewane ki ban ke deewani
Sana-Kya jaane maine bhi kya paaya
Ishq ne aisa haal kiya mera
Sarah-Dard zubaan tak bhi na aaya
Sarah-Jaaniya, jaaniya dekh lu, kar tujhe ru ba ru
Sarah(three sister have a group hug)-
Paa jaoon mohabbat ke do jahan
Sarah,Sana,Sonia -Aaja aaja mera ranjhna ve aaja aaja, Aaja aaja mera ranjhna ve aaja aaja

Sonia-Tere des sajjan, aayi teri dulhan
Sarah-Dholi le aayi, dekh tere aangan
Sana-Zara daaman mere aanchal se baandna
Sarah,Sana,Sonia -Aaja aaja mere ranjhna ve aaja aaja, Aaja aaja mere ranjhna ve aaja aaja

after some time sonias husband arnav arrives and signals sarah and sana not to tell Sonia about his arrival

And Sonia just looks out of the big window to see if moon has made its appearance

Sonia-Jaane kahan ye chaand chupa hai
Koi le aaye uss ko jaa kar
Hosh gaye mere, jaan ja rahi hai
Ab nahi hota hai aur sabar
Sarah-Aayega,aayega chaand bhi ab tere saath hi
(sana and sarah suddenly push Sonia and she bangs with her husband)-Tera rasta takey sajna
as the speed of music increases all join to dance

Aaja ..enters the gang with karan with his shagun

Sarah- Aaaaa........................

All of them dance-Aaja aaja mere ranjhna ve aaja aaja, Aaja aaja mere ranjhna ve aaja aaja - 4 times

#################################################

ab batao kaisa laga yeh twist😆


kaha tha naa sana jisa dikhta hai waisa hota nahi hai😉

Edited by sushups - 14 years ago
-Jyotika- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee ud dear...
yesssss.. i knew it... sana is nt gunji... i srsly knew it..... mujhe lag gaya tha... bt i didn't say... 😉 😆 😆
anyways.... mindblowinggggg ud dear....
thnkk godd gunji is nt karan's fiance..
luved it to d core...
pllzzzzzzz cont soon..
n thnx for d pm....

love
jyotika
Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago
Miracle_sweet thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
Wow for once I'm actually glad my prediction is slightly wrong cause that means than gunjan isn't karand fiance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But did she lose her memory???????
Plz update sooon will be waiting!!!!
Mira
ramramramram thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
So Sarah is our Gunjan and great twist. loved the update thanks for pm.
lucario thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
Very nice update.....i m also happy tht sana is not gunji but whr is she....and sam's confidence about gunjan's presence is remarkable...continue soon
meens1981 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
awww i thjot as much sarah will be gunjan....lovely update.... 😉
KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. brilliant. loved it. continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
No_Comments thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
OMG.....
Great twist......
Lekin Please Gunjan Ko jaldi milla do Samrat se....
I cant wait.....
And This was a long part....
AWESOME!!!!!! 😳 👏

Please cont soon and PM me... 😛
368758 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
Great update.Continue when you can.But soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul ¡ 7 months ago

Parth,Adnan and Ketaki version I dedicate this to my friend Sydell who wants the Parth,Adnan,Ketaki version of the movie Hum dil de chuke sanam...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 ¡ 10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1019 page no 29

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington ¡ 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 ¡ 3 years ago

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse ¡ 10 months ago

[NOCOPY] P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".