mil hi gaye- sajan ss part-33,page-143 - Page 23

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Maisha007 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar its a cool updateee...thanks for the pm but plzzz sajan ko jaldse jald mila do na...
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Posted: 15 years ago

ok everyone bahut logon ne bahut kuch soch liya😆

ab main sirf itna kahungi just wait and watch😉

ok this is a short ud😳

i guess next update main kuch logo ke kuch sawaal ke jawaab mil jaayenge😃


part 10



Girl1 in thoughts as she proceed to the mandir-patah nahi aaj dil mein ek ajeeb si hulchal ho rahi hai.....ab kyu ho rahi hai yeh mere bhi samajh nahi aa raha .



scene shifts:


suddenly

Karan-"guys hum pahunch gaye"

Everybody look outside the window

The house is huge with larger lawn and the outhouse is also big

Uday-"yeh koi mahal jaisa lag raha hai r u sure hum sahi jagah aaye hain"

Karan-"hum sahi jagah hai"

Benji-"tabhi main sochu ki sare logo ka rehne ka intezam ghar par kaise kiya hai"

Suhani-"ab chalo bahar hi rehna hai kya"

Nupur-"par karan hum jaaye kahan?"

Karan '"aao mere saath"

They enter the house were all preparations has just started as its early in the morning

We see a girl finishes her pooja and then turns around

Its


Sonia






karan-"hi didi."

Sonia-"are tum log aa gaye......kaise ho karan"

Karan-"good.........actually thoda sa nervous hun aur excited bhi"

Sonia-"shakal se hi patah chal raha hai"

Karan-"waise soniya di yeh sab mere dost hai"

Gang-fold their hands "namaste"

Benji(in low voice)-"haaye she is really beautiful"

Diya hears this and kicks his leg

Benji-"ouuuuch!!!!"

Everyone has attention on benji now

Sonia-"kya hua??? aap thik toh hain"

Benji-"nahi main thik hun bas thoda pair mud gaya tha"

Sonia-"waise aap logo ko aane main takleef toh nahi hui naa??"

Karan-"are nahi didi hum sab ko koi takleef nahi hui,kya mom aur dad pahunch gaye hai"

Sonia-"tumhare aur humare mom dad sham ko pahunch jaayenge ....unka kal raat phon aaya tha"

Karan-"accha..(then looking here and there)"

Sonia notices this and suppresses a smile

Sonia-"kya baat hai karan yaha wahan kaha dekh rahe ho"

Karan-"ku...kuch nahi didi"

Sonia-"haan haan bahut acchi tarah se jaanti hun tere is kuch nahi ko waise jise tu dhond raha hai woh ghar par nahi hai................naina devi ke mandir gayi hai"

Karan(blushes)-"ohh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Sonia-"accha tum sab ka saaman ramlaal ne outhouse pahuncha diya hai,ab wahan jaa kar thoda aaram kar lo phir sham ko sagayi mein milenge aur agar kissi cheez ki zarurat ho toh be jhijak bolna."

Sonia-"raamlal in sab ko outhouse le jaao"

Gang-"bye didi"

Sonia-"byee"



All of them were leaving the place and samrat was last to leave

The three girls entered the house from the other door and just passed samrat(samrat was facing their back)

Samrat stopped in his tracks and turned around to see no one there .he got desperate .if his heart was right then he just felt her presence

Suhani-"bhai chalo"

And suhani dragged samrat outside


Sonia-"maharaniya aap log gaye"

Three Girls-"ji"

Sonia-"itni der kaha reh gaye" ........(was about to shout more when)

Girl 1 gave Prasad to Sonia and after that brought up the packet

Sonia-"yeh kya hai"

All girls together-"apki fav Bun tik(Indian burger)"

Sonia-"tum teeno naa kabhi mujhe ghussa hone hi nahi deti ho.....aayinda se der mat karna"

Girls-"theek hai"

Sonia-"ab jaldi andar jaao ,bahut saara kaam pada hai.aaj sagai hai aur ......karan bhi aa chukka hai"

Girl 3-"karan bhaiya bhi aa chuke hain.......hum log abhi unse milne jaayenge"

Sonia-"bilkul nahi sagai se pehle tum teeno main se koi nahi jaayega ab ander jaao"


Scene shifts:


Suhani and nupur near samrat-"kya baat hai samrat...bhai tum theek toh ho"

Samrat just replies-"chashmish yahin kahin hai"

Suhani and nupur r shocked to here this

Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
awsomee...loved it a lot...
keep it up dear...
continueeee soonn...
waiting for it eagerly dear....
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow sush...!!
grt part...!!
luved wen dia kicked her leg 2ards benji...!!
n he says ouch...!!
n so gunji is also here...!!
hope so...!!
cont super duper soon...!!

luv ya
radz
Edited by kash_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

ok now im dam sure sana hi gunjan hai not me ur ss sana 😆😆😆

ok ok mazak bahut ho gaya anyways nice update
plzz continue soon
n thax for the pm
love
sana.😳
Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeee ud dear....
luved it to d core....
pllzzzzzzzz cont soon...
waiting eagerly for sajan meet..
n thnxx for d pm....
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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful dear...magar ye toh bahut nainsaafi hai sarkar.....ahem mauke pe break mar diya 😆 ...pls continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee...!!!
god..aur wait...plzzzzzzzzzzzz i beg of u..jaldi sajan ko mila do naa..!!!
n loved sammy said...'chashmish yahin kahin hai' hayeeeeeeeeeee..!!!
dil ko sukun mil gaya..!!!
cont soon..
thanx for d pm..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome yaar............
loved dia benji scene................😆😆😆
do continue soon...................😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!
After this update I think my prediction might be right!!!!!!!!!!
Plz plz plz continue soooooooon
Mira

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