mil hi gaye- sajan ss part-33,page-143

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hi everyone this is a very very short story of sajan basing on the new promo
do tell me whether i should continue or not.according to my present writing condition(i am very slow) it should be completed in 3-4 parts




On Valentines night


Gunjan-"samrat mujhe laga tha ki woh ring tum mere liye laaye the "


Samrat-"par woh toh adhiraj laya tha suhani ke liye "


Gunjan(turns the other side dissapointed)-"ohhh "


Gunjan unknowingly look at the sky only to come across fireworks saying---



I LOVE U CHASHMISH



Gunjan turns around calling samrat and get shocked to see him on his knees


Samrat-"main janta hoon ki tum expect kar rahi thi ki main tumhe woh ring dun.par chashmish tum jitni special ho mere liye utna hi special tumhare liye mere pyaar ka tofha hona chahiye naa"


(he opens a small box which has a beautiful diamond ring with s&g engraved in it )


"Chashmish tum meri zindagi woh kiran ho jisne meri zindagi se dukh aur akelepan ka andhera humesha ke liye mita diya

Tum meri zindagi ka woh ehsaas ho jo mere dil main gam ke liye jagah hi nahi chodta

Tum meri atma ho jiske bagair main zinda toh rahunga maggar ek zinda laash banker

Kya tum mujhe apne zindagi main shamil honeka haq dogi chashmish"


Gunjan could not speak a word.she could not believe that how can she be so lucky to get samrats love.with a smile on her lips and tears in her eyes she just moved her hand forward


Samrat stood up and and slided the ring in her finger

And took her both hands and kissed them


Samrat(with tear in his eyes) '"chashmish mujhse se kabhi mujhse kabhi naraz mat hona .......kabhi mujhse door mat jaana .kyunki chashmish meri duniya tum se hai.tumho toh sab kuch khubsoorat hai aur agar tum nahi toh kuch bhi nahi "


Gunjan couldnt stand any longer she just hugged him by all her strength as if assuring him that comes what may she will be with him forever .


After like a very long time they broke their hug and

Samrat-"tum yahin ruko main bas abhi ata hoon. "

Gunjan-"kahan jaa rahe ho"

Samrat-"bas ek minute is sham ki ek choti si kami ko puri karna chahta hun..bas ek minute"


Samrat leaves


Gunjan- baghwan aaj aapne meri zindagi main sab se badi khushi daal di.ab iske aage kuch bhi ho jaaye mujhe parva nahi thank u so much.main di ko phone karti hun


RINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG


(but nupur doesn't receives her call as mayur r having their private moment and the phone lying in hall)

Di phone kyun nahi utha rahi ..............................main bhi pagal hoon


Aaj valentine day hai aur main un dono ko disturb kar rahi hoon.main diya ko phone lagati hun..


But diyas phone answers and ask the caller to leave the msg in the voice mail.....


Gunjan'diya main janti hun tum mujhe ball main naa dekh kar pareshaan ho jaogi.isliye maine call kiya ki main samrat ke saath hoon...pata hai diya samrat ne sahi mein mujhe propose kiya .maine pichle itne dino se iss pal ka intezaar kar rahi thi .par jab woh pal aya toh mujhe meri aakhon pe yakeen nahi hua .aisa laga ki sab sapne jaisa hai jis se main kabhi jagna nahi chahati...diya main..(suddenly interupted)


A guy(ok i am naming him sohail for now)-tut tutt tutt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(gunjan alerted that she is not alone)


"How sad ki excel college ki student itna accha valentines ball hote hue bhi aaj valentine ke din itniiiiiiiiiii akeli hai."


Gunjan turn around and got scared as she saw the same guy with some other boys who had tried to misbehave with her few days back..........................




[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jx1yq6w_2ik[/YOUTUBE]






part 1 =page1

part 2= page3

part 3=page 6

part 4= page 10

part 5= page 12

part 6= page 15

part 7=page 19

part 8=page 23

part 9= page 26

part 10=page32

part 11=page 35

part 12 = page 39

part 13= page 43(+pm list too)

part 14=page 46

part 15=page 52

part 16= page 56

part 17=page 59

PART 18-= PAGE 63

part 19=page 67

part 20=page 69

promo & title video =page 73

part 21 = page 78

promo video=page 83

part 22 = page 86

part 23=page 91

part 24= page 92

part 25= page 96

part 26-page 100

part 27 -page 104

part 28 - page 108

part 29-page 115

part 30 - page 121
part 31-page 126
part 32- page 135
page 33- page 143



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RapChick101 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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1st to comment.......plz do cont wid it nd btw Iraed ur other ff just now............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sush i love u
n first part theek tha actually rocking that
awwwwwww i lov u
n maate ka vardaan hai aap pe miss lazy bones is baar jaldi update karna
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it ws awesomeeeeeeee dear...
grr888888 starting..
luved it..
pllzzzzzz do cont soon..
n thnxxx for d pm..
Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omgggggggggggggg sush an awesomeeeeeeeeee part dear

plz plz plzzzzzzzz continue soon
eagerly will be waiting for ur update
n thanx for the pm dear
an again an awesome one dear
love
sana
Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sush....!!
wat a startin yaar...!!
luved d way sammy propsed gunjan...!!
it was jus awww....!!
n ya goons...hat all of dem...!!
do cont soon...!!
n keep pmin wid d updts...!!

wid loads of luv
radhika
Edited by kash_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwww....
awesome...!!!
wat a starting yaar...
jus loved it...
thanx for d pm..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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fantastic shush dear loved your update do continue soon and thanks dear for pm i will be waiting for your new update jaldi karana ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely update dear
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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this was just wonderful!! 👏 👏

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