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Posted: 15 years ago

nice update

that was very emotional one loved it do continue soon thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
u made me cry...kal gunji ka death scene dekha tha...ye update padh kar baar baar sirf yahi khyaal aa raha tha...ki mjht me agar gunji...marr gayyii hoti to...🤢
n dis song...it brought all d feelings..really heart wrenching...sab ki halat...specially sam....mai ti imagine karke hi..😭
awesome awesome..awesome....dat means my gunji is alive..!!!
OMG...DAT GAL...JISSE KARAN KI SHAADI HONE WAALI HAI WO GUNJAN HAI...!!!!!!
awwwww sweetie...!!!!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
so gunji is bck..!!!
really loved it..!!!
cont soon..
thanx for d pm..!!!
Edited by charmee_sammy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesoomeeeeeeee i knew it....ur twist wud b beautiful but ur description abt d loss was fab sish....way to go dearšŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago
this was so not fair how could u make me cry sooo much
the way u described gunji leaving n sammy oh god i could'nt help but cry n this new twist ... god jaan its tooooooooooooooo amazing n tell me i am just guessing
karan ki shaadi gunji se ho rahi hai na???
was just a guess nothing else
pls pls pls pls jaldi update kar mmm addicted to this on e
n thanks 4 such a long update lov u
jaan
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome upodate dear!! I'm just waiting to read what will happen next!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey sush...!!
grt part...!!
s song was 2 perfect for d situation...!!
entry of karan kapoor aka aamir...!!
wow...!!
do updt soon...!!

luv ya
radhika
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Posted: 15 years ago
LUVED IT................AWESOME !!! sushi, itne creative writing skills kahan se paida kiye yaar??
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Posted: 15 years ago

hello everyone



ab dil ko tasali hai ki koi mujhe maarna nahi chata sorry couldnt respond personally to everyones post.thoda net problem.and sorry to all of them jinko galati se mera pm nahi mila ,i am very sorry.i could only manage to write this much hope u will like it.will be waiting for ur replies.


part-8



With a new hope the gang started their journey to Nainital


In train(3-tier)


Everyone take their berth while samrat takes the lower side berth.benji takes the upper side berth


Uday '"waise hum train se kyun jaa rahe hai.....flight se kyun nahi?"


Diya-"woh is liye dodo ki hum sab ko acchi tarah se baat karne kaa mauka milega"


Karan-"aur hum wahan unke ghar ke guest/outhouse me rahenge ,aur unke liye sab kuch itni jaldi manage karna aasan nahi rahega so.............."


Nupur-"are wah abhi se unke liye itna kuch.......... par us unke ka kuch naam toh hoga"

Karan-"i am so sorry bhabi......main aap sab ko toh kuch nahi bataya"


Suhani-"aur hum sab bhi issi baat ka intezaar kar rahe the"

Diya-"we need the whole biodata"


Karan-"accha baba thik hai...................actually uska naam Sana hai


sana nainital ki rehne wali hai.aur london mein kaam karti hai.nainital mein uske mom dad aur do behne rehte hai


Sana apne dono behene Sonia aur Sarah se bahut zyaada pyaar karti hai.humari mulakat London mein do mahine pehle hui thi .actually suhani tum toh janti ho naa mom sirf adyasha ke boutique se hi apne kapde laati hai....us din main mom ke birthday ke liye boutique se gift kharidne gaya tha.adyaasha se discuss karna chahta tha designs ke bare mein ,par unfortunate kaho ya fortunate adyaasha india aayi hui thi fashion week ke liye.receptionist ne mujhe sana se milne ko kaha kyunki us waqt adyasha boutique ki puri zimmedari sana nibha rahi thi.jaan kar hairani hui ki woh sirf ek mahine se wahan intern ke roop se kaam kar rahi thi.aur apne kaam aur responsible behaviour ke wajah se adhyasha ki favourit ban gayi thi(karan smiles remembering that day)guys jab mein sana se mila patah nahi kuch ajeeb sa laga .ek anjaani si khushi mehsoos hui.uski woh pyaari si smile uski simplicity................aur phir usne meri puri madat ki.mom ke liye mujhe baar baar sana se milne ka mauka mila...aur dheere dheere humari bahut acchi dosti ho gayi "


"Sonia di ki London mein medical conference thi(she is a doctor) isliye woh Sarah ke sath sana ke yaha rehne aa gayi.sana ne mujhe unse milwaya.un dono ke bare mein sana se bahut suna tha .aur jab mila tab patah chala ki sana uss se itna pyaar kyun pyaar karti hai.both r complete sweethearts.unhone hi pehle jaan liya ki main sana ko pasand karne laga tha ,aur mujhse bulvane ke liye un dono ne bahut acchi tarah mujhe phasaya"



Flashback-



Sonia-"karan tumhe sana kaisi lagti hai"

Karan(almost choking himself as he was drinking water)-"kya kaha aapne"

Sarah-"vahi jo aapne suna"

Sonia-"karan ghabra kyun rahe ho hum toh aise hi puch rahe the"

Karan-"meri dost hai toh achi hi lage gi"

Sarah-"DOST!!...accha hai....ab dost hain toh apni dost ke pasand naa pasand ke bare mein toh kuch pata hoga naa aapko"

Karan-"haan .....par kyun ???"

Sonia-"woh kya hai naa hume tumhari thodi si madat chahiye thi "

Karan-"kaisi madat ????"

Sarah-"mom dad ko lagta hai di ki shaadi kara deni chahiye.aur hume dikat ho rahi hai,ladka select karne ke liye"

Karan starts coughing

Sarah-"are paani pi lijiye"

Sarah-"ab thik hai"

Karan just nods his head

Sarah-"haa toh main kya keh rahi thi.........haan hum abhi groom hunting pe nikle hain.ab soch rahe hai ki London main aa kar kahi sana di ka taste badal gaya hoga.toh shayad tumhe pata hoga"

Sonia-"infact humne toh ladkon ki photos bhi laye hai"

Karan-"Sonia di aap sana ki shaadi abhi kyu karana chahti hai....i mean uska career hai.....uski umar hi kya hai"

Sonia-"mujhe patah hai karan......sana toh raazi hai"

Karan-"kya"

Sarah-"par aapko itne paseene kyun chut rahe hai"

Karan-"nahi toh"

Sarah '"waise di woh Singapore wala ladka hai naa woh di ke liye bilkul thik rahega"

Karan-(now getting desperate)"aap aisa mat ki jiye"

Sarah-"par kyun"

Karan-"woh main"

Sonia-"tum kya??.......tumhare liye toh woh sirf dost hai naa"

Karan(unknowingly in desperation)-"lekin main us se pyaar bhi toh karta hun"

Sarah now looking towards Sonia-"i told u ...I told u "

Karan shocked-"matlab yeh sab"

Sarah and Sonia together-"natak tha "

Sonia-"toh thik hai .aapki mom se baat kar lete hain ...shadi ke bare mein"

Karan-"pehle sana se toh puchlo"

Sarah pinching his cheeks-"how sweet ......hume di ka jawab pata hai par propose toh aapko hi karna hai"



Back to present



Karan-"phir maine sana ko propose kiya aur usne haan bhi kardi. is tarah meri chori pakdi gayi.is baat ko lekar dono ko jab bhi mauka milta hai mujhe chidhane lagte hain."

Diya-"that was so sweet yaar"

Suhanis watching samrat smiling a little bit hearing karans story

Suhani in mind-lagta hai nainital jaane ka descision thik tha .karan was right he just need to be brought out.

Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update.loved it. loved the flashback and conversation between karan,sonia,sarah.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Don't tell me sana is Gunjan anyways great update and thanks for pm

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